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Doran Cooney
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Thread Name: A Birthday Surprise!
City/Area: Rynmere, Andaris
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: Noticing a Door Is Unlocked
Detection: Discerning the Differences Between Regional Seasonal Heat
Detection: Searching for Familiar Landmarks
Detection: Recognizing Unfamiliar Voices
Endurance: Focusing Thoughts Inward to Avoid Thinking About the Heat
Stealth: Entering a Home Without Making Unnecessary Noise

Loot: -32 GN for an elaborately engraved, seven opal inlaid silver ring
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Noth
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Thread Name - Symbols of Death
City - Etzos
Notes/Warnings - N/A
Rewards:

Nauta
Knowledge -
Intelligence: Of someone within a community is easy to obtain
Interrogation: Use an innocent source
Hunting: Just follow a mark
Business management: Point out obstacles for better conditions
Deception: Use the obvious for support
Alchemy: Never give out the recipe
Alchemy: Qualities of containers to improve effectiveness of contents
Alchemy: Habits of alchemists can become their signatures

Loot -
+200 Gn from Noth

Noth
Alchemy - Capable of Creating Bombs
Alchemy - Useful for Acquiring Otherwise Difficult Equipment
Alchemy - Surprisingly Complex With Formulas
Business Management - Try to Get Cheap Prices

Loot -
- 200 GN
+10 Skull Grenades


Renown - N/A
Collaboration - Yes
Magic - No
word count: 116
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Credit to Pegasus


As a note: Noth is a Grandmaster in Intimidation. That means that he's at least as scary as the Count from Sesame Street. Beware.

"The tyrant confuses those he can't convince, corrupts those he can't confuse, and crushes those he can't corrupt." - Anonymous
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Hart
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Thread Name: Replacement Duke.
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere.
Notes/Warnings: None.
Requested Rewards:
Tristan
Skill Knowledge:
Alchemy: Might allow you to make an anti-seasickness potion
Disguise: Changing your hair color so that people don't recognize you immediately
Investigation: If you don't know where somebody lives, have somebody look for them
Politics: Starting a rebellion when you only have a couple of mercenaries is a bad idea
Politics: Can drive you insane
Politics: If you take a leave of absence, make sure to have a replacement
Politics: If you don't know what to do, ask somebody for advice
Politics: Criticizing the king can be dangerous
Politics: Trade sanctions might force the king to reconsider
Politics: People want to kill the king all the time

Other Knowledge:
Hart: Replacement Duke
Hart: Probably magical

Loot: The halo from the labyrinth. Also, Tristan's half of the echo scrolls (paid for with his point bank points).

Injuries/Overstepping: None.

Renown: Tristan requested renown for this thread, for giving an expensive gift (the echo scroll) and for making Hart temporarily duke. I would suggest 10-15 renown, but ultimately will leave it up to the reviewer.

Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.
Hart
Skill Knowledge:
Discipline: Only having one glass of wine
Gambling: What's the point of having money, if not to spend it
Investigation: Brothels are an excellent source of information
Investigation: Asking the right questions
Politics: Surround yourself with good advisors
Politics: Consider the effects of your actions
Politics: Might makes right?
Politics: Seek peaceful solutions
Politics: Prohibiting trade as a sanction
Politics (Rynmere): Oakleigh has a trade deal with Andaris

Other Knowledge:
Ayla Venora: Is growing too fast
Ayla Venora: Faith is not her mother
Faith: Is still alive
Faith: Lives in Scalvoris
Faith: Has a husband and children
Immortals: Held a world-wide competition in Vhalar 717
Tristan Venora: Asked Hart to be duke of Oakleigh for Ymiden 718
Tristan Venora: Was in the immortal's competition, representing Ilaren, in Vhalar 717
Vivian Warrick: Was in the immortal's competition, representing Ilaren, in Vhalar 717
Vivian Warrick: Was a companion of Zvezdana Venora
Zvezdana Venora: Tristan's cousin

Loot: The letter from Tristan and Hart's half of the echo scrolls.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.
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Amaris
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Thread Name: First Blooms of Spring
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Amaris - 8 + 4 = 12
Skill
  1. Animal Husbandry: handling large numbers of animals
  2. Animal Husbandry: signs of affection from cats
  3. Animal Husbandry: some animals need time to warm up to people
  4. Animal Husbandry: picking up on traits in animals
  5. Animal Training: keeping a large group of animals in line
  6. Animal Training: cats tend to take care of themselves
  7. Animal Training: corralling cats
  8. Animal Training: giving the animal time to get used to someone
  9. Gardening: pressing flowers to preserve them
  10. Socialization: continuing conversation
  11. Socialization: repaying one gift with another
  12. Psychology: being in the company of others can be good for you
Non-Skill
  1. Rynata: lives on her ship
  2. Rynata: might have a rat problem
  3. Rynata: does odd jobs
  4. Culture: 1st of Ashan
Rynata
Skill
Detection: Spotting objects in the snow
Detection: Listening for movement behind a door
Detection: Determining the temperament of an animal
Socialization: A friendly chat
Socialization: Asking about someone's occupation
Socialization: Exchanging gifts
Animal Husbandry: Playing with a cat
Animal Husbandry: Picking up a small animal
Animal Husbandry: Knowing what a cat eats
Animal Husbandry: Allowing an animal to get used to one's presence
Ettiquette: Knock before you enter
Etiquette: Thank people for their hospitality

Non skill
Location: Almund, The Glass Tree
Amaris: Councilor of Natural Affairs
Amaris: Works with Faith
Culture: Scalvoris, 1st of Ashan
Oriand: Amaris' and now Rynata's cat

Loot: 1 cat for Rynata
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: 5 - for Rynata technically officially meeting the Councilor of Natural Affairs
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
word count: 270
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Ko Ko
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Thread Name: Hateful Accusations
City/Area: Scalvoris Proper, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: N/a
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Add/remove as you see fit. :D
Skill-
Disguise: Using a hood to hide Aukari hair
Etiquette: Paying handsomely for safe passage
Negotiation: Begging for your life
Medicine: Water doesn't help with breathing
Running: Getting away from a madman
Seduction: Delivering a kiss goodbye

Non Skill-
Location: Scalvoris Proper
Scalvoris Proper: Not as posh as I thought

Loot:
- 5GN for safe passage
- Medium Leather Pleated Bag (contains remainder of the waterskin, a hair brush, a tooth brush, tooth paste, and 5 more GN)
Injuries/Overstepping: N/a
Renown: You decide
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Alistair
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Review Requests 2.1.5

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Thread Name: Qualify
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Magic nerdiness

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Transmutation: Quality: The lightness of a feather
Transmutation: Qualities as 'fundamental, intrinsic principles'
Transmutation: Qualities can conflict with one another
Transmutation: Brilliance
Transmutation: Brilliance can be re-cast in flashes with the same base ether
Research: Theorizing on the fundamentals of a craft

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes - for Transmutation
word count: 76
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Kasoria
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Thread Name: I. Go For The Flow
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Blades (Karambit): Targeting Arteries
Blades (Karambit): Chaining Strikes Together
Blades (Karambit): Use BOTH Sides of the Blade
Blades (Karambit): Thumb Ring Keeps the Blade Secure in Hand
Medicine: Basic Outlay of Major Human Arteries
Tactics: Don't Just Strike Once, But As Often As You Can


Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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Jonathan Burr
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Thread Name: I'm Rubber, You're Glue
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Duel with a Defier

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Transmutation: Absorption
Transmutation: Absorb and reflect
Transmutation: You can use a spell your enemy has cast against him
Aberration: Flaying a mage yields much more ether.
Intelligence: Thinking on your feet
Intelligence: Concocting and testing a theory

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes - for Transmutation and Abb
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Jonathan Burr
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Thread Name: Like a Raven's Eye
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings:

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Transmutation: Qualities: Quality of Ice's Chill
Transmutation: Qualities: Quality of Steel's Strength
Transmutation: Quality: Quality of Feather's Weightlessness
Transmutation: Quality: Quality of Leather's Flexibility
Transmutation: Distracted easily by the natural qualities of things
Transmutation: Using your ether to learn the world around you

Loot: A Good Quality Bullwhip, -40GN
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes - for Transmutation
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Doran Cooney
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Thread Name: Bruised Blossoms
City/Area: Rynmere, Andaris
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Doran-
Unarmed Combat: Anticipating Attacks - Tackles
Unarmed Combat: Sidestep
Unarmed Combat: Roundhouse Knee
Unarmed Combat: Use the Environment to You Advantage
Unarmed Combat: Rear Tackle
Unarmed Combat: Two Handed Hammer Strike
Unarmed Combat: Use the Opponent’s Momentum Against Them
Strength: Using Your Leg Muscles to Add Speed to Your Sprint
Strength: Keeping Your Arms Up Even Under Pressure
Strength: Holding You Hand Out for a Prolonged Period of Time
Stealth: Attack from Behind

Sinna-
TBA

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Maybe?
Collaboration: es
Magic EXP: No
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