Review Request 2.2.0

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Wald Lowca
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Re: Review Request 2.2.0

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Thread Name: (prison) Rat Catcher
City/Area: Viden Prison
Notes/Warnings: Disturbing use of a rat. do not eat while reading
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Hunting: Hunting an illusion
Hunting: Using hands to catch prey
Hunting: Hunting a rat
Hunting: watching darting movements
Trap making: Staying still for a trap
Trap making: Using iron as a gravity weight

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Last edited by Wald Lowca on Sun Apr 07, 2019 5:13 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 81
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Re: Review Request 2.2.0

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Thread Name: Salt and Wroth
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned thread.
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Alistair
Knowledge:
Necromancy: Marrows

Loot: +6 Imedyte-Welled Marrows
Injuries/Overstepping: Nu
Renown: Nu
Wealth Points: Nu

Collaboration: Ya
Magic Experience?: Yes, for Necromancy. Alistair animated his first marrows.
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Re: Review Request 2.2.0

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Thread Name: People Like Us
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned thread.
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Alistair
Knowledge:
N/A

Loot: Nu
Injuries/Overstepping: Nu
Renown: Nu
Wealth Points: Nu

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: Nu
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 38
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Re: Review Request 2.2.0

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Thread Name: Life Has Little Luster
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned thread. This one was abandoned by me, but Sor'an has been gone for a bit so...
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Alistair
Knowledge:
N/A

Loot: Nu
Injuries/Overstepping: Nu
Renown: Nu
Wealth Points: Nu

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: Nu
Reviewed by Strange
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Re: Review Request 2.2.0

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Thread Name: From Overgrowth to Ash
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: Another abandoned thread. This one was a pretty big seasonal event, but I suck.
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Alistair
Knowledge:
N/A

Kaelrik
Knowledge:
Leadership: Assessing a Battlefield for Opportunities
Leadership: Rallying men into battle
Leadership: Leading a Charge into Battle
Leadership: Understanding key roles of soldiers in battle
Blades: Using a sword to deflect blows from various angles
Defiance Technique: Wall of Fire
Defiance Technique: Controlling the Explosive Quality of Fire
Defiance Technique: Creating a Wave of Flame
Defiance Technique: Caressing a blade with Fire
Unarmed Combat: Incorporating Fireballs into Fist Strikes
Tactics: Using ferocity and bloodlust to demoralize enemies
Tactics: Identifying weak points in an enemy line of defense

Dosan
Knowledge:
Becoming{Echo}: Using the blood bat's hemovision
Becoming{Echo}: Hemovision helps in counting guards
Stealth: Using the forest to conceal your presence
Stealth: One bit your here, next your gone
Investigation: Assessing how many guard are around
Tactics: In a fight, strike decisively and do not hesitate
Detection: Realizing that was not a normal roar
Blades{Dao Sword}: Placement of Stabs are key

Loot: Nu
Injuries/Overstepping: Nu
Renown: +20 for saving the Dragoons and staving off the Yari and Creepborne, who would've otherwise destroyed the King's military
Wealth Points: Nu

Collaboration: Ya
Magic Experience?: Yes, for Kaelrik, for Defiance; and yes for Dosan, for Becoming. No for Alistair.
word count: 236
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Re: Review Request 2.2.0

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Thread Name: A Little Advice
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: This is basically finished, I think, but Ivy went on hiatus.
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Alistair
Knowledge:
Etiquette: Properly addressing a Rynmere Noble
Politics: Allying with fellow nationals overseas

Rynmere: The King Might Be Dead
Rynmere: Undergoing a plague
Ivy Gawyne: A fellow Grand Noble
Ivy Gawyne: Her Past
Ivy Gawyne: An Ally

Loot: Nu
Injuries/Overstepping: Nu
Renown: +5 for being seen speaking to another Rynmere Noble in Fortress
Wealth Points: Nu

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: Nu
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 91
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Re: Review Request 2.2.0

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Thread Name: memory: the hunt
City/Area: Eastern Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: Violence.
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Knowledge:

Kaelrik

Hunting: Tracking prey through grasslands
Hunting: Tracking prey by following movements in grasslands
Shortbow: Firing from a standing position
Shortbow: Firing from a kneeling position
Tactics: Using the environment to one’s advantage
Tactics: Coordinating assaults with a single ally
Endurance: Remaining conscious while under the effects of a weak neurotoxin
Endurance: Maneuvering while in pain
Defiance Technique: Guiding Arrows using the Wind
Defiance Technique: Using the Wind to make arrows impact harder
Eastern Gauthrel: Home to more Grassland type beasts
Korik: My Twin Brother

Korik

Axes: Side swings, more speed less power
Axes: Advantage of a two handed grip
Unarmed Combat: Pushing with your weight
Hunting: Taking down prey with a partner
Hunting: Flanking isn’t always safe
Hunting: Tall grass provides stealth
Stealth: Hiding in tall grass
Stealth: Moving slowly to prevent chainmail noise.
Shields: Bracing for a hit
Shields: Deflecting hits
Eastern Gauthrel: Home to many beasts

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: As you see fit.
Renown: None.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic Experience?: No.
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 189
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Re: Review Request 2.2.0

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Thread Name: On a leash, a student I
City/Area: Jungle in the far south-east of the Hotlands/Athart
Notes/Warnings: Continuation of sorts of In a cage, a bird II
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Using your talons to climb more easily
Flying: The higher you fly the thinner the air gets
Flying: Folding your wings to drop altitude quickly
Field Craft: Making fire using a firestone
Field Craft: How to arrange firewood to not suffocate the flame
Rhetoric: Using Enumeration to make a list of arguments more forceful

Non-skill Knowledge:
Praxes (Flavor NPC)
Praxes: Was hired by Pharan’s future mentor Jaene
Praxes: Is a hunter/tracker
Praxes: Is a decent guy

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 139
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Re: Review Request 2.2.0

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Thread Name: Fool's Hunt
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: no
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Strength: Hauling a carcass
Unarmed Combat (Taekwondo): Spinning kick
Hunting: Stick with the pack
Hunting: Thinning a herd
Flying: Diving attacks

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: up to u
Wealth Points: Wealth threads are completed Requesting 1 wp for this
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: (No)
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 66
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Re: Review Request 2.2.0

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Thread Name: I. Grazia
City/Area: Quacia, The Gleam, Woodstock Hall
Notes/Warnings: use of an IRL book, attributed at the end.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Research: note-taking direct quotes for later reference
Research: write legibly when taking notes
Writing: Careful notes increase accuracy
Writing: Structuring notes for re-reading
Politics: Deception is an art for nobility.
Politics: Power reveals a person's inner character.

Non-Skill:
Clement: The test of a person's character is how they perform in office.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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