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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: Do All Leaders Get Hand Cramps?
City/Area: Haven Settlement, Faldrass
Notes/Warnings: None, Balthazar is writing letters and bad poetry because his guard wouldn't help him. I'm not claiming the full number of knowledges for this.
Skills Used: Leadership (Expert), Persuasion (Competent), Psychology (Competent), Logistics (Competent), Politics (Competent), Rhetoric (Untrained), Business Management (Untrained)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Leadership - Not all leading is done from the frontlines
Logistics - Outsourcing seeds to get a farm running
Business Management - Trying to establish partnerships
Psychology - Interpreting meaning behind a gift
Loot: If applicable.
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Mutations

  • Once Paradigm Is Removed: He glows faintly, his skin is warm and sometimes hot to the touch, and when he gets angry sparks literally fly off him. He's a the middle of a field of static electricity so every once in a while when you touch him, you get shocked. Fire leans towards Balthazar and droplets of water seem magnetically attracted to him. He has a series of cracks on his right pectoral that glow of soft emerald. His eyes and the cracks reaching down to his cheeks glow a dark blue. The etheric cracks spiderwebbing up his arms glow orange.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks in Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: Bare Necessities and Hobbies
City/Area: Haven, Faldrass
Notes/Warnings: Balth and the crew constructs a new house, a little guard barracks, and an even smaller workshop using supplies gained by selling his old home in Scalvoris Town. I'm not claiming the maximum knowledge for this.
Skills Used: Strength (Expert), Endurance (Expert), Persuasion (Competent), Psychology (Competent), Logistics (Competent), Politics (Competent), Construction (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Construction - Easier with proper tools, not a warhammer
Construction - Building onto a frame is sturdy
Construction - Basic hammering nail safety
Construction - Wood beams can split if you are not careful
Strength - Lifting heavy wood beams
Loot: New house on Faldrass, goodbye old Scalvoris Town house. Old Scalv Town House was tier 5, so the new house is made with tier 5 guidelines.
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Mutations

  • Once Paradigm Is Removed: He glows faintly, his skin is warm and sometimes hot to the touch, and when he gets angry sparks literally fly off him. He's a the middle of a field of static electricity so every once in a while when you touch him, you get shocked. Fire leans towards Balthazar and droplets of water seem magnetically attracted to him. He has a series of cracks on his right pectoral that glow of soft emerald. His eyes and the cracks reaching down to his cheeks glow a dark blue. The etheric cracks spiderwebbing up his arms glow orange.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks in Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: Sliding Through
City/Area: Rharne, Stormlands
Notes/Warnings:
Skills Used: Fieldcraft (exp), Cooking (comp), Trapmaking (nov), Animal Handling (comp), Discipline (nov), Endurance (nov)

Requested Rewards:
Trapmaking: a trap needs bait
Trapmaking: a trap needs a trigger
Trapmaking: deadfall traps
Trapmaking: pit traps
Trapmaking: basic snares
Fieldcraft: snowshoes make it easier to get around in deep snow


Loot: N/a
Injuries/Overstepping: N/a
Renown: Doubt it, but Reviewer's discretion
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Balthazar Black
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: One Bad Day
City/Area: Haven, Faldrass
Notes/Warnings: This is a reaction to the storm that hits suddenly on the 30th of Ashan. I'm not claiming full knowledge for it.
Skills Used: Discipline (Expert), Meditation (Expert), Endurance (Expert), Strength (Expert), Leadership (Expert), Psychology (Competent), Logistics (Competent), Persuasion (Competent),

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Leadership - Opposing viewpoints can reveal your shortcomings
Persuasion - Appealing to the general confusion
Politics (Governance) - Support the people first, yourself second
Strength - Cutting down trees

Loot: If applicable.
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Mutations

  • Once Paradigm Is Removed: He glows faintly, his skin is warm and sometimes hot to the touch, and when he gets angry sparks literally fly off him. He's a the middle of a field of static electricity so every once in a while when you touch him, you get shocked. Fire leans towards Balthazar and droplets of water seem magnetically attracted to him. He has a series of cracks on his right pectoral that glow of soft emerald. His eyes and the cracks reaching down to his cheeks glow a dark blue. The etheric cracks spiderwebbing up his arms glow orange.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks in Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: Three and a Half Flame Troopers
City/Area: Haven, Faldrass
Notes/Warnings: None. Balth and Flame Troopers searching the settlement in a storm to ensure everyone is inside and safe. This is a reaction to the storm that hits on the 30th and the sudden peace that follows.
Skills Used: Discipline (Expert), Meditation (Expert), Endurance (Expert), Strength (Expert), Leadership (Expert), Detection (Expert), Psychology (Competent), Logistics (Competent), Persuasion (Competent), Running (Untrained), Tactics (Expert)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Endurance - Pelted by large hailstones
Leadership - A commanding presence helps in dire times
Logistics - Planning for a minimal but effective rescue party
Detection - Hearing a call for help amidst a raging storm
Psychology - Opposing views can be brought together by a common goal
Psychology - Higher volume can shake people from their confusion.

Loot: If applicable.
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Mutations

  • Once Paradigm Is Removed: He glows faintly, his skin is warm and sometimes hot to the touch, and when he gets angry sparks literally fly off him. He's a the middle of a field of static electricity so every once in a while when you touch him, you get shocked. Fire leans towards Balthazar and droplets of water seem magnetically attracted to him. He has a series of cracks on his right pectoral that glow of soft emerald. His eyes and the cracks reaching down to his cheeks glow a dark blue. The etheric cracks spiderwebbing up his arms glow orange.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks in Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: Make Yourself Useful Or Leave
City/Area: Haven, Faldrass
Notes/Warnings: Trouble popped in for a modbomb so I'm going to put this as a collab, if it doesn't count lemme know. Point are points I'm not picky... most of the time. I'm not claiming the full amount of knowledges if it is treated as a collab, I'm claiming two many and snip the bottom two if it is treated as a solo.
Skills Used: Alchemy (Expert), Leadership (Expert), Persuasion (Competent), Psychology (Competent), Logistics (Competent), Politics (Competent), Negotiation (Untrained)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Logistics - Planning to set up a research station
Logistics - Planning to set up a clam farm
Leadership - Telling people what you need, clearly
Psychology - People enjoy the feeling of control
Psychology - It's harder to read the facial expressions of an owl
Negotiation - Stating non-negotiable parts of the deal
Negotiation - Clear terms help make good deals
Negotiation - Be willing to change your terms

Loot: If applicable.
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: I think so, yeah.
Magic Experience?: No
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Mutations

  • Once Paradigm Is Removed: He glows faintly, his skin is warm and sometimes hot to the touch, and when he gets angry sparks literally fly off him. He's a the middle of a field of static electricity so every once in a while when you touch him, you get shocked. Fire leans towards Balthazar and droplets of water seem magnetically attracted to him. He has a series of cracks on his right pectoral that glow of soft emerald. His eyes and the cracks reaching down to his cheeks glow a dark blue. The etheric cracks spiderwebbing up his arms glow orange.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks in Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: The Curious Matter of Baby Trees

City/Area: Faldrass/Haven
Notes/Warnings:Nothing but baby trees here…oh, and a potato.
Skills Used:
Research – Expert
Investigation – Expert
Leadership – Competent
Logistics – Competent
Gardening – Novice
Detection – Master
Discipline – Expert

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Leadership – Leadership requires the ability to communicate your ideas effectively.
Gardening – ‘Nuts’ are required to grow baby phoenix wood trees
Gardening – ‘Nuts’ that have gone bad will float
Gardening – Plant naturally occurring material with seeds for best chance to grow
Logistics – Rain barrel system will ease fresh water needs for settlement
Research – Referencing the Baron Books for location and resource identification

Loot: Many ‘nuts’ for growing baby rainbow trees/assorted sizes of Faldrass potatoes
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Renown:5 (minor leadership role for Haven, helping manage resources for the settlement)
Collaboration:No
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: ~~ Vole Dancing ~~
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings:

Vega

Skills Used:
Hunting (Master)
Detection (Master)
Fieldcraft (GM)
Psychology (Expert)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Hunting: The motivation of people you're hunting will determine their choices.
Hunting: Spotting differences in depth of footfall
Hunting: Match the height of your prey
Hunting: Observe tracks from a distance first.
Hunting: Work out what people from tracks
Psychology: Individuals process psychological trauma in different ways



Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion.
Wealth Points: Nope
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Serenity & Serendipity
City/Area: Haven/Faldrass
Notes/Warnings: Both Balthazar/Elisabeth requesting less knowledges on purpose
Balthazar
Skills Used:
Leadership (Expert)
Discipline (Expert)
Strength (Expert)
Endurance (Expert)
Persuasion (Competent)
Logistics (Competent)
Psychology (Competent)
Stealth (Competent)
Etiquette (Untrained)
Woodworking (Untrained)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Stealth - Sudden movements will startle animals
Etiquette - Keeping the right people informed
Logistics - Planning a logging operation
Logistics - Planning to make a library
Woodworking - Phoenix Wood is colorful
Woodworking - Phoenix wood is resistant to fire


Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Renown: 5 (Leadership roles/scouting resources for the settlement)
Elisabeth
Skills Used:
Leadership - Competent
Discipline - Expert
Endurance - Expert
Logistics - Competent
Psychology - Expert
Defiance - Competent
Etiquette - Competent
Gardening - Novice
Meditation - Competent
Investigation - Expert
Research - Expert
Dectection - Master

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Meditation - Breathing exercises can enhance meditation techniques
Leadership - Reassuring others of their abilities is sometimes necessary
Discipline - Resisting the urge to comfort another
Logistics - Replace trees that are cut down with baby trees
Logistics - Overhunting a bird population would be bad
Investigation - Using the tools you have available to answer a question
Psychology - Physical triggers can remind one of tramua
Research - Knowing what resources to use to find specific information
Gardening - Plants propgrate differently
Detection - Noting something moving between the trees


Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Renown: 5 (Leadership roles/scouting resources for the settlement)

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: Defiance for Elisabeth (Minor use of competent technique - 5xp maybe?)

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

Review Request


Thread Name: Stress for Silver Linings
City/Area: Havardr, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Part 3 of a 7 thread series.
Skills Used: Medicine (Expert), Discipline (Competent), Leadership (Untrained), Storytelling (Competent), Detection (Expert), Persuasion (Untrained)

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge
Politics
Tio Silver is No Longer the Devout of Scalvoris (Cylus 721)

Medicine
Consult Divine Afflictions with Religious Experts
The Signs & Dangers of Lisirra's Curse

Storytelling
The Devil is in the Details
The Story of Linca, Stand Against Darkness

Investigation
Ask Locals To Come Forth With Any Information

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes. Yeva is the only healer to fight through a hail storm in order to come to Havardr and diagnoses its chief with a curse. She spends the rest of the evening reaching out to anyone in the village that she can. I think she's gonna get noticed.
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: No
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