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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: Furry Friends
City/Area: Scalvoris (Academy)
Notes/Warnings: none
Skills Used: Socialization (N), Animal Training (N), Animal Husbandry (N), Research (N)
Requested Rewards
  • Harold Drumpf: Zoology Professor
  • x5 Animal Training
Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: It's.. Something
City/Area: Scalvoris (Darbyton)
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned
Skills Used: Socialization (N), Animal Training (N), Animal Husbandry (N), Navigation (N), Rhetoric (N), Psychology (UT)
Requested Rewards
  • Psychology: Learning to forgive yourself
  • Eliza: An Artist
  • Eliza: Mortal Born of Ymiden
  • Darwin: Followed Eliza from Immortals Tongue
Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name:Troubles
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: N/A
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Skills Used
Socialization (Novice)
Running (UT)
Rhetoric (Novice)
Animal Husbandry (N)
Hunting (UT)
Endurance (Novice)
Acrobatics (Novice)
Detection (Novice)
Deception (Novice)
Psychology (UT)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Hunting: Keeping your eyes on the target while chasing
Endurance: Trying to keep up with a bolting wolf
Socialization: Saying your feelings out loud sometimes helps take the weight off
Animal Husbandry: Carefully calming a stressed animal
Animal Training: Identifying stress in Wolves
Psychology: Understanding that regrets can only be healthy when not held forever
Psychology: Seek out comfort in others
Acrobatics: Weaving through a crowd

Non-skill Knowledge
Elisabeth: Lived in Viden
Elisabeth: A good listener

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
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Skills Used
Socialization (Competent)
Acrobatics (Competent)
Detection (Master)
Psychology (Expert)
Etiquette (Competent)
Discipline (Expert)
Navigation (Novice)
Animal Husbandry (Novice)
Teaching (Untrained)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Navigation - Navigating the streets of Scalvoris Town in dark Cylus
Detection - Catching movement out of the corner of your eye
Detection - Noting an animal calming down
Animal Husbandry - Trying to comfort a cowering animal
Animal Husbandry - Comforting a wolf with a game of fetch
Animal Husbandry - Informing others when you have no animal skills is a good thing
Psychology - Using negative emotions for positive purposes
Psychology - Emotions can be overpowering when tied to guilt
Psychology - The need to stay close to those you care about
Teaching - Instructing another on how to acknowledge emotion, and then set aside.
Etiquette - Offering to listen to someone's concerns
Socialization - Reassuring someone that their runaway wolf was no bother

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Collaboration: Yes

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: Furry Friends II
City/Area: Scalvoris (Academy)
Notes/Warnings: Cursin'
Skills Used: Socialization (N), (N), Navigation (N), Seduction (UT), Psychology (UT), Design (UT), Investigation (N), Detection (C)
Requested Rewards
  • Etiquette: Considering posture in the presence of others
  • Psychology: Sympathizing vs Empathizing
  • Socialization: Ice breaking
  • Design: Organizing the interior of ones room
  • Seduction: Being half naked helps with your appeal
  • Lyah Parka: Classmate and Friend
Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: Rain On Me
City/Area: Haven/Faldrass
Notes/Warnings: Asking for less knowledges on purpose

Skills Used:
Leadership - Competent
Detection - Master
Discipline - Expert
Strength - Expert
Logistics - Competent

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Leadership - Leadership isn't always about giving instructions
Strength - Lift from the knees
Strength - Carrying heavy barrels
Logistics - Best placement for barrels in settlement
Detection - Looking for faults in collection system after introducing water

Loot: 12 functioning rain barrels for the settlement!
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown:
Reviewer's Discretion

Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: Getting to the Point
City/Area: Rharne, Stormlands
Notes/Warnings: Plain old skill thread
Skills Used: Fishing (comp), Detection (comp), Polearms (comp), Ranged (nov)
Requested Rewards:
Polearms & Staves (1H): basic one-handed blocks
Polearms & Staves (1H): spinning a spear in one hand
Polearms & Staves (1H): fighting one-handed requires more movement than fighting two-handed
Ranged (shortbow): nocking the arrow
Ranged (shortbow): aim higher for more distance
Ranged (shortbow): consistancy of draw helps accuracy of shot

Loot: N/a
Injuries/Overstepping: N/a
Renown: Doubt it, but Reviewer's discretion
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: the next level of hone
City/Area: scalvoris town
Notes/Warnings: Roshi is Goku's magic mentor. Since this has been brought up before he is on Goku's character sheet on the second page.
Skills Used:
hone (novice)
discipline (novice)
meditation (novice)
endurance (competent)
strength (competent)

Requested Rewards:
Hone: (Dismissal) can be used to reclaim ether from a placed rune
Hone: (Dismissal) Reclaimed ether is based on how much ether is left remaining in the rune
Hone: (Dismissal) Useful for removing runes so that new ones can be placed to fit the situation
Hone: (Dismissal) Should not be harmful if used in moderation
Discipline: Setting small goals to help achieve a broader goal
Meditation: Clearing the mind to remember a forgotten question

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: overstepping if you feel he went too far despite Roshi's guidance.
Renown: none
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: I would like Goku to level up to competent Hone from this thread
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: Resource Management 101 - Gardening
City/Area: Haven/Faldrass
Notes/Warnings:
Baby Phoenix Trees reviewed here
Rubrum Berry Plants reviewed here
Potatoes reviewed here
Munny Farm approval here

Skills Used:
Gardening: Novice
Dectection: Master
Ettiquette: Competent
Leadership: Competent
Logicistics: Competent

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Leadership - Working on a plan together with others promotes teamwork
Logistics - Creating a schedule for potato planting and harvesting
Gardening - Seedlings need constant heat
Gardening - Rubrum plant runners will create new plants
Gardening - Same variety of plants in settlement and wild will produce at same time
Gardening - Potatoes need to 'sprout' first before you can plant

Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown:
Reviewer's Discretion

Collaboration: no

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Claimed for review.
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: trouble with a seductress
City/Area: scalvoris town
Notes/Warnings: sex is alluded to and I put a mature tag. I decided to cut out all the graphic stuff and submit this in the normal queue, I hope this is okay... I also used an antagonist that I submitted and linked in the thread. Sorry if I did something wrong, it's my first time trying out the antagonist system.
Skills Used:
Strength Competent
Flying Novice
Endurance Competent
Discipline Novice
Detection Novice

Requested Rewards:
strength x4
Endurance x1
Flying x1

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: general soreness
Renown: small for inadvertently doing it with the boss's wife
Wealth Points: this is intended to be Goku's wealth thread for Ashan 721
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: not applicable
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Claimed for review.
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: A barchan dune never bites, so it should be seif
City/Area: Egilrun
Notes/Warnings: None.
Skills Used: Detection, Discipline, Endurance, Field Craft(all expert); Intelligence, Tactics (both Competent); Mount: Land (Novice).

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:

[Intelligence] People can forget infrequently used codes.
[Mount:Land] Gauge whether a mount is sufficiently rested before riding it more.
[Psychology] The desires one projects onto others may reveal one’s own motivations.
[Socialization] People use flattery to ingratiate themselves.
[Tactics] A spur-of-the-moment change can achieve surprise.
[Tactics] Use challenge-and-password to safeguard against infiltration.

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: -
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience?: No.

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