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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6


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Thread Name: The Tale of Doby Mick
City/Area: Zynyx Market
Notes/Warnings: Nothing.
Skills Used:

Novice: Socialization, meditation, discipline.
Competent: Storytelling, Leadership, Defiance.
Expert: Seafaring.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Defiance: Dancing with fire, making a bonfire flare up theatrically.
Discipline: Getting a handle on your magic.
Leadership: Attracting an old salt to your side with a tale of daring.
Leadership: Gathering followers at a local watering hole.
Meditation: Calming down can make it easier to control magic.
Storytelling: The Tale of Doby Mick, the black beast that wrecked Rorom's ship.

Loot: The help of an old sailor.
Injuries/Overstepping: no
Renown: Yes please. He told a rousing tale of his own deeds at a watering hole in front of several people. Probably small to medium for the performance.
Wealth Points: nah
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: Yes Defiance

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Tristan Venora
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Thread Name: Roses in Winter
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Ayla is a Personal NPC and has Novice Gardening. The golden watering can is Tristan’s signature item. The thread is a bit under 1.500 words long, but I couldn’t figure out how to make it longer without adding an unnecessary amount of fluff. I wrote about a consequence that I was given for this thread.
Skills Used: Master Gardening (151x/39k), Expert Detection (77x/35k), Expert Discipline (76x/25k), Competent Teaching (26x/11k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: Noticing that your daughter is not impressed
Gardening: How to grow plants in an unheated greenhouse in winter
Gardening: Greenhouses can be heated with a wood burning stove
Gardening: Planting bulbs
Gardening: Repotting roses
Gardening: Too much water can be harmful

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Rorom
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6


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Thread Name: Just a Scratch
City/Area: Eureka Rharne
Notes/Warnings: wound treatment
Skills Used:

Faith: Medicine: T2
Socialization: GM

Rorom: Endurance Competent
Socialization: Novice
Storytelling: Competent
Fieldcraft: Novice
Navigation: Competent

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Faith: none requested
Rorom:
Fieldcraft: Finding one's way in the brush.
Fieldcraft: Telltale signs of a campfire after dusk.
Fieldcraft: Avoiding sharp brambles and poison ivy.
Fieldcraft: Noting the signs of the passage of people.
Socialization: Showing your hands to prove you mean no harm.
Leadership: Bringing along a friend/ally for safety.
Navigation: Biqaj have a special sense that leads them to find the way.
Endurance: Hiking into the wilderness while wounded.

Loot: Faith gets a trade agreement for Eureka with Rorom.
Injuries/Overstepping: Rorom's wound is treated successfully
Renown: Yes please. If you see something award worthy.
Wealth Points: nah
Collaboration: yes
Magic Experience?: no

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Tristan Venora
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Thread Name: A Little Potion
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Zi’da 721 Wealth Thread. Tristan is using his Alchemy capstone “Special Effects” in order to make his potions sparkle. Ayla and Shannon are Personal NPCs.
Skills Used: GM Alchemy (250x/90k), GM Etiquette (250x/90k), Master Socialization (151x/133k), Expert Detection (77x/37k), Expert Medicine (76x/33k), 0 Stealth

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Alchemy: A potion that boosts your immune system
Alchemy: Making potions sparkle
Etiquette: Don’t do business in the hallway!
Medicine: Hygiene is important
Medicine: Alcohol is bad for children
Stealth: Walking on your tiptoes

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Kisaik Glory
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Thread Name: The Founding of Shellknight Lodge
City/Area: Faldrass, Hopetoun Hole
Notes/Warnings: Kisaik initiated into the Song-Forged
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Kisaik
Woodworking: x5
Meditation: x2
Alchemy: Using alchemy in home improvement.
Alchemy: Mixing a fire-resistant, fire-warded coat of paint.
Alchemy: Applying fire-resistant paint to an already fire-resistant wooden roof panel.
Skillplay
Woodworking: Novice
Meditation: Competent
Alchemy: Master
Etiquette: Expert
Socialization: Competent
Endurance: Competent
Vega
Engineering x 3
Woodworking x 3
Skillplay
Woodworking (GM)
Engineering (Expert)
Fieldcraft (GM)
Endurance (GM)
Loot: A fire resistant roof for Shellknight Lodge. Kisaik is now Song-Forged
Injuries/Overstepping: Headache for Vega.
Renown: Vega initiated Kisaik into a faction of the Song Forged. So maybe some
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: Nope


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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Feeding the Hungry
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: none
Skills Used: Cooking: Novice (25/250 exp, 4 knowledges), Detection: Competent (26/250 exp, 11 knowledges), Logistics: Unskilled (0/250 exp, 3 knowledges)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Skill Knowledges

Cooking: x 5
Logistics: x 1
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Possibly slight (5) or small (10) for volunteering at the soup kitchen. She was recognized by some (unnamed random flavor NPCs) that she helped when she helped rescue survivors during the Dust Quarter collapse last cycle.
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Thread Name: Out of Time, Part 3
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Calendar event. I will likely continue this story, and I will apply for Miss Berensen and Elijah as Personal NPCs in that case. I asked Pegasus if I’d be allowed to use Professor Fridson. She also said that the passengers would be taken to Beacon. Arjori is an Order of the Adunih NPC. I still haven’t decided on a name for Doran’s dead lover, so he remains nameless for the time being.
Skills Used: GM Investigation (250x/77k), GM Detection (250x/117k), GM Discipline (250x/90k), Master Medicine (151x/106k), Expert Socialization (76x/99k), Expert Leadership (76x/45k), Competent Caregiving (26x/27k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: Noticing that someone is frustrated
Investigation: Civil registries can be helpful sources of information
Investigation: Sometimes, ruling out certain possibilities is the best you can do
Investigation: Sometimes, just asking around can be helpful
Investigation: Consulting a native can be helpful
Socialization: Getting to know your new guest

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Yes, please!
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Ring of Immunity
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Rorom
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6


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Thread Name: Maiden Voyage of the Onyx Cascade
City/Area: Zynyx, Rharne.
Notes/Warnings: Nothing
Skills Used:

Detection: Novice
Discipline: Novice
Endurance: Competent
Strength: Competent
Hunting: Master
Fieldcraft: Competent
Navigation: Competent
Seafaring: Expert
Leadership: Competent

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Hunting: Smoking the best cuts of fish.
Hunting: Bringing up large nets of fish with a lever and pulley.
Hunting: Preserving fish for long-term storage.
Hunting: Throwing the smaller fish back to repopulate the ocean.
Hunting: Preserving the health and ecology of local fishing schools can improve life for all fishermen.
Leadership: Naming a ship according to the customs of the majority of the crew is a sure way to earn their confidence.

Loot: New schooner (through tier), purchased a season's supply of White Diamond for 5 wp.
Injuries/Overstepping: nope
Renown: Slight or small for acquiring a ship and bringing one's crew onto it, and christening a ship with a small ceremony.
Wealth Points: nah
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6


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Thread Name: The Wolf, The Dog, And The Pup
City/Area: Havardr
Notes/Warnings: monstrous sea battle, some gore and references to chum.
Skills Used:

Rorom:
Novice: Detection, Discipline, Athletics, Socialization.
Competent: Combat: polearms, Endurance, Strength, Swimming, Leadership, Storytelling, Defiance.
Expert: Seafaring.
Master: Hunting

Darius: Athletics (Expert), Etiquette (Master), Hunting (Novice), Investigation (Competent), Leadership (Grandmaster), Navigation (Competent), Seafaring (Expert), Socialisation (Expert), Strength (Competent), Tactics (Master)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Rorom:
Combat: Polearms: Using a javelin to toss at a distance.
Combat: Polearms: Driving a spear into a sea wolf's brain.
Defiance: Caress: Caressing a weapon with water helps it move through the water with all the ease of gliding through air.
Hunting: Setting up chum buckets to attract large aquatic predators.
Hunting: A large whale-like predator has its brainbox behind the melon.
Hunting: Harpoons catch onto a large animal and take effort to remove.
Hunting: Cables attach to harpoons ensure that the quarry is kept on a leash.
Hunting: Sea Wolf: A large aquatic predator that is cunning and vicious when cornered.
Hunting: Natural disasters can disrupt an aquatic animal's natural behavior.
Hunting: Sea wolves are usually found in groups.
Hunting: Sea wolves have a rich hide that is a prize to hunters and fishermen.
Leadership: Arranging a hunting party.
Leadership: Leading a hunt.

Darius:

Hunting: Using chum as bait for a large catch.
Hunting: Large prey can capsize smaller boats.
Hunting: Wounded prey may try to fight back.
Investigation: What's all this then?
Leadership: Motivate your followers with a rousing speech.
Negotiation: Offering your services to those in need.
Seafaring: How to gybe.
Seafaring: How to tack.
Seafaring: When someone falls overboard, alert the crew.
Seafaring: When someone falls overboard, stop the ship if possible.
Storytelling: Finding new material in real life experiences.
Tactics: Luring the enemy into a trap.
Tactics: Adapting to an ever-changing situation.

Loot: Rorom gets a carcass of a Sea Wolf. Darius gets 14 wp from Rorom's ledger (I've already deducted)
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Probably medium, for winning a sea battle with a monster that was harassing the locals.
Wealth Points: Rorom lost some to pay Darius and Jundland.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: Yes, Rorom used a competent technique of Defiance.
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Thread Name: Revenge of the Slap Master
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Nope!
Zemos
Skills Used:
Novice: Endurance, Strength, Athletics, Detection.
Competent: Combat: Unarmed, Discipline, Meditation

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Athletics: x3
Endurance: x 3
Strength: x 3
Combat: Unarmed x2

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Collaboration: Yes
Elisabeth
Skills Used:
Combat-Unarmed: Expert
Athletics: Expert
Strength: Expert
Endurance: Master
Detection: Master
Socialization: Grandmaster
Discipline: Master
Tactics: Expert

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Athletics: x 2
Endurance: x 2
Strength: x 2
Combat: Unarmed x3
Tactics: x 2

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Collaboration: Yes
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