Review Requests 2.2.5

[Kisaik]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Putting Down Roots
City/Area: Hopetoun Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Not really, very wholesome
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Kisaik

Endurance x 3
Gardening x 3
Meditation x 3

Skillplay

Gardening (Expert)
Meditation: Competent
Etiquette: Expert
Endurance: Novice

Vega

Dance x3
Sing x 3
Gardening x3

Skillplay

Dance: (Expert)
Singing (Expert)
Gardenin (Novice)

Loot: a Big Phoenix tree planted for Hope's Point, for Kisaik, a scarf enchanted with optimism.
Injuries/Overstepping: Ataja (Kisaik's Diri of Growth) has spent her potential for this season. Kisaik has to take a three-day nap.
Renown: 10 Growing a tree near Hopetoun with miraculous powers in less than a few trials ought to get some people chatting.
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: yes
Magic Experience?: no

[Oram Mednix]

Request withdrawn

[Gennadiya Lyosha]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Looking Below the Surface
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Genna is exploring a new ability Approval here
Skills Used: Medicine (GM), Detection (Competent), Research (Competent), Caregiving (Competent)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Detection: Using Healer's Sight to identify how many people around her.
Detection: Watching for visual signs of a heart attack
Detection: Healer's Sight Ability allows her to see all the body at once, or focus on specific areas.
Detection: Healer's sight ability allows comparison between different patients
Medicine: The way blood flows between a healthy person and a someone having a heart attack.
Medicine: Old bone injuries can still be seen years later.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: mental tired for practicing
Renown: ?
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience?: No

[Woe]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Sophist Guile
City/Area: Scalvoristown the Glass Temple
Notes/Warnings: References to a prostitute, not much really though. He's rearranging his personality. If heavy psychological themes bug you, maybe don't look?
Requested Rewards:

Woe

Knowledge:

Discipline: x 2
Empathy: Embroidery: Reordering and contextualizing your own emotional threads, very carefully.
Empathy: Hem: Hemming and knotting in the changes, to fortify them.
Empathy: Knotting the changes just loosely enough so the tension doesn't snap them entirely.
Empathy: Embroidery: Reordering the personality in tandem with Lovalus' boon of Sophist Guile.

Loot/Losses: A repaired tangle, he loses one maybe two corruptions (WIll psf). A personality adjustment, as described in the thread.
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's discretion.
Renown: Perhaps yes?

Skillplay

Novice: Nothing Used.
Competent: Deception, Detection.
Expert: Empathy, Discipline, Meditation.
Master: Nothing used.
GM: Psychology

Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: none
Magic Experience?: Yes used expert Empathy techniques pretty extensively.

[Balthazar Black]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Low Flying Clouds
City/Area: Scalvoris, Faldrass, Haven
Notes/Warnings: This is one of a few threads I'm doing to show Balthazar meeting and bonding with his legendary mount. I wasn't sure how to format the thrown knowledge for the axes and bludgeons skill so if the way I did it doesn't work let me know. I believe the Flame Troopers are already aware of Grabthar's Hammer.
Skills Used: Axes and Bludgeons (Untrained), Tactic (Expert), Leadership (Master), Animal Husbandry (Novice), Psychology (Expert), Discipline (Expert), Meditation (Expert)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Axes and Bludgeons (Thrown) - Overhand war hammer throw
Axes and Bludgeons (Thrown) - Overhead two hand lob
Axes and Bludgeons - A hammer requires powerful swings
Axes and Bludgeons (Two-Hand Focus) - Overhead swings are stronger with two hands
Animal Husbandry - Wind Walkers eat leaves from trees.

Loot: None? Technically Sumo is already in his inventory from the approval.
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

[Shl'Drei]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Worlds Away II
City/Area: Scalvoris/ Scalv town
Notes/Warnings:-
Skills Used: Appraisal (N), Socialization (N), Linguistics (N), Logistics (N)

Knowledges Requested:

• Lissie: Distracted Librarian
• Linguistics: Ancient Tongue
• Appraisal x2
• Socialization x2

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

[Rokas]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Flame
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: This was written with the intent of being used as a level-up thread for Defiance. Though not exactly a huge display of power, Rokas does try to subdue a burgeoning forest fire. Meant to be an attempt at solving the issue through conversation rather than brute magical force, so the main focus is on deeper understanding (or rather, that's the idea). Hope that's alright.
Skills Used:
Defiance, intimidation(?): Comp; meditation, detection: Novice
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
-Defiance: Yelling at an element does not make it cooperate
-Defiance: Understanding fire
-Defiance - Coaxing: Putting fire at ease
-Defiance - Dancing: Encircling gusts of wind
-Detection: Trace the trajectory of a falling item
-Meditation: Focus on the essence of fire

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: Up to reviewer
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes, defiance

[Zunylanih]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Star is (Re)Born
City/Area: Desnind
Notes/Warnings: Language, mature themes, references to adult activities (fade to black, sex is implied). Violence toward the end.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Zunylanih

Demon's Kiss: Has a stronger effect when you have an audience.
Seduction: Not everyone, in fact, 'wants to fuck'.
Seduction: Don't seduce spouses, unless you're keen on a beating.
Seduction: Catch their eye, with your own eyes.
Seduction: Little gestures here or there to pique their interest.
Seduction: The direct approach.

Skills Used

Seduction: Novice
Endurance: Competent
Acting: Competent
Disguise: Competent.
Deception: Novice.
Unarmed Combat: Novice.
Sesser abilities: Favored.

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Wealth Points:
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

[Doran]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Sword Fighting for Beginners, Part 2
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Doran trains a few settlers in Hopetoun. Vega gave me permission to use her practice swords. The settlers are Flavor NPCs, so they make mistakes on a regular basis (hopefully enough).
Skills Used: GM Blades (257x/62k), Expert Teaching (79x/74k), Master Detection (151x/67k), Expert Tactics (76x/44k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Blades: How to execute a strike
Blades: How to execute a slice
Blades: Defending the head
Blades: Defending the torso
Blades: Defending the legs
Teaching: When teaching combat, use practice weapons

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: 5 - 10, for teaching the settlers of Hopetoun.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

[Ashling]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Requiem

City/Area: Melrath

Notes/Warnings: Ritual sacrifice, but not detailed

Requested Rewards:

Ashling

Request

Skills Used: Competent Discipline, Competent Endurance, Master of Medicine, Competent Psychology

Knowledge:

Endurance x3
Psychology x3

Loot: n/a

Injuries/Overstepping: n/a

Renown: n/a

Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: no

Magic Experience?: n/a