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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: Tentative Steps
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: none
Skills Used: Detection; Novice (2/250 exp, 7 knowledges), Medicine; Novice 10/250 exp, 23 knowledges), Research; Novice (1/250 exp, 0 knowledges)

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Knowledge:

Skill Knowledges

Animal Husbandry; felines: Catnip, or catmint is particularly appealing to cats, who love to roll in its leaves. Under the influence of catnip, cats will often act as though they are drunk, something that many cat owners find amusing to watch.
Medicine; Herbal Remedy: an herbal tea or tisane is a beverage that is made from plants, seeds, flowers, roots or fruits of all plants except for actual tea leaves; the herbs used in the herbal teas that are used as medicine have medicinal value to those who drink them
Medicine; Herbal Remedy: how to make herbal teas
Medicine; Herbal Remedy: herbal infusions are similar to herbal teas in the way they are consumed, but they are stronger than normal teas because they use more herbs, and are steeped for longer amounts of time
Medicine; Herbal Remedy: how to make herbal infusions
Medicine; Herb: uses of catnip/catmint

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Possibly slight (5) for volunteering at the Order of Adunih clinic
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: Visions & Volcanoes
City/Area: Faldrass/Haven
Notes/Warnings:


Requested Rewards:
Vega
Skills Used:
Storytelling (Expert)
Discipline (Master)
Obnoxiousness (GM / Tier 3) (I was told to add this :D )

Knowledge: None requested

Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion - This was a fairly public meeting between the three in Haven
Kura
Skills Used:
Politics - Grandmaster
Rhetoric - Novice

Knowledge: None requested

Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown:
Reviewer's Discretion - Reviewer's Discretion - This was a fairly public meeting between the three in Haven
Elisabeth
Skills Used:
Leadership - Competent
Psychology - Expert
Discipline - Expert
Detection - Master
Persuasion - Expert
Storytelling - Novice
Politics - Novice
Intelligence - Competent
Investigation - Expert
Writing - Novice

Knowledge:
Discipline - Don't freak out when Kura comes a callin'
Intelligence - Learning information from a first-hand source is insightful
Intelligence - The Albarech is a good source of information
Leadership - Sometimes one is forced into a leadership position
Persuasion - Even a logical argument can be ignored
Politics - Keeping straight whom you've told what to
Politics - The intricacies of the Scalvoris Council
Psychology - Focusing on the positive is best practice
Writing - It's challenging keeping up with note-taking when another is talking

Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion - This was a fairly public meeting between the three in Haven
Collaboration: Yes

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Seira Shiryu
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: Tentative Steps Part 2
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: In this thread, Seira found five nekosani; an adult female and four kittens. While rescuing one of the kittens, she bonded to the mother. The bond takes a full cycle to fully form. As the bond settles, the side effects may include severe headaches, dizziness, affected vision, etc. The headaches and blurred vision that Seirs experiences in this thread are a result of the bond she has. At the current time, Seira is unaware that she has bonded to the mother Nekosani. Here is the info on Nekosani. Per the mod note in the info, bonding to a Nekosani needs PSF approval if the bond takes less than a full cycle to form, but approval isn't needed to bond to a Nekosani as long as the bond forms over the course of a cycle.
Skills Used: Detection; Novice (2/250 exp, 7 knowledges), Discipline; Unskilled (0/250 exp, 9 knowledges), Endurance; Novice (1/250 exp, 4 knowledges), Medicine; Novice 10/250 exp, 23 knowledges), Research; Novice (1/250 exp, 0 knowledges)

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Knowledge:
Skill Knowledges

Cooking; Ingredient: young stinging nettle leaves are eaten as a cooked vegetable
Cosmetology: if you simmer a handful of young stinging nettles for two breaks in a quart of water, then strain, and bottle the liquid, you'll have a potion that will make hair soft and glossy when used regularly as a scalp conditioner.
Field Craft: stinging nettle leaves have hair like structures that sting and also produce itching, redness and swelling
Medicine; Herb: uses for Ginger
Medicine; Herb: ginger can be used to treat children, but since it is so spicy it must be diluted for them; it can be flavored with lemon or honey to achieve this and to improve the flavor
Medicine; Herb: uses for Stinging Nettle
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: A severe headache
Renown: none
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: A Shimmer in the Sand
City/Area: Scalvoris/Faldrass
Notes/Warnings: I requested fewer knowledges on purpose.
Skills Used: GM Research (250x/121k), Master Meditation (155x/71k), Master Detection (151x/68k), Competent Writing (30x/33k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Meditation: Using the sound and smell of the ocean to meditate
Detection: A shimmer in the sand
Detection: A plant growing in the sand
Detection: A light breeze that touches your skin
Writing: Taking notes about your observations

Loot: Orange sand, Rubrum Berries & 2 Ignis Clam shells.
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: Guest
City/Area: Etzos, North Woods
Notes/Warnings: None
Skills Used: Defiance: Expert; Meditation, detection, maths, discipline: novice; intimidation, endurance: competent

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
-Detection: Sizing up an unexpected guest
-Discipline: Patience
-Intelligence: Know who the elements take an interest in
-Intimidation: Showing your colors
-Meditation: Focus on your senses
-Meditation: Perceive the world around you

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: Up to reviewer
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No usage of expert level defiance

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: Guest II
City/Area: Etzos, North Woods
Notes/Warnings: Live burial. Rokas being a bastard as always
Skills Used: Defiance, strength: expert; intimidation, endurance, unarmed combat: competent; negotiation: novice; persuasion: unskilled

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
-Defiance - Guardian: Responds to incoming attacks
-Defiance - Dancing: Dragging someone underground
-Endurance: Taking a knife to the thigh
-Strength: Breaking ribs
-Strength: Pinning someone to the floor
-Strength: Pitting your strength against someone else's

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: Wounded thigh
Renown: Up to reviewer
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes, defiance

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Natalia Gregorios
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: Nels of Glass
City/Area: Egilrun
Notes/Warnings: Nope!
Woe
Skills Used:
Novice: Socialization.
Competent: Deception, Detection,
Expert: Politics, Empathy, Persuasion, Seduction.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Lethroda: Webspinning: Is a way of keeping tabs on various people.
Lethroda: Webspinning: Can be used to get a sense of what a person is feeling or their general surroundings.
Lethroda: Webspinning: Can spin only so many into your web, and empower it with Empathy.
Politics: Governance: Council politics is probably superior to Monarchy.
Politics: Governance: Blind Loyalty and miseducation can lead to an unruly populace.
Politics: Governance: An informed, represented populace is more likely to go along with it's government's decisions.
Politics: Revolution: Class divisions and poor quality of education can render a populace susceptible to being led into revolution.
Socialization: Spending the early night talking to a stranger.
Socialization: Buying a drink for a new acquaintance.
Socialization: Contact: Natalia Gregorios: Not an Element
Socialization: Making smalltalk isn't always unpleasant or dull.

Loot: Spun Natalia Gregorios into his Web (Lethroda: Webspinning)
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown:
Reviewer's Discretion
Natalia
Skills Used:
Socialization - Novice
Politics - Novice
Detection - Novice
Seduction - Novice
Deception - Novice
Appraisal - Novice
Discipline - Novice
Psychology - Novice
Intelligence - Novice


Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Appraisal - Noting the quality of someone else's clothing
Appraisal - The quality of paper can correlate with properties, such as being treated
Discipline - Holding back information, even if you want to reveal it.
Discipline - Sometimes curiosity won't allow itself to be contained
Discipline - Being concise is a form of self-discipline
Discipline - Focusing on the target of your attention, blocking distractions
Discipline - Attempting to remain quiet in a library
Detection - Noting the age of a map based on appearance
Detection - Noting the color of one's eyes
Intelligence - Woe Morandi - Elements - Land Division
Politics - Politics is a form of theater


Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown:
Reviewer's Discretion
Collaboration: Yes

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: The Visitor
City/Area: Melrath
Notes/Warnings: flirting
Skills Used: Cooking (None), Discipline (Novice), Detection (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Detection: Observing details of a group at a distant.
Detection: Paying attention to peoples motives for a visit.
Detection: Sensing when someone wants to be alone with you.
Discipline: Not lecturing your brother when it won't help
Discipline: Not panicing when unexpected visitors arrive.
Cooking: Making a stew with what you have in the almost bare cupboard.
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: ?
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Seira Shiryu
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: Winter Wonderland
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: In this thread, Seira found five nekosani; an adult female and four kittens. While rescuing one of the kittens, she bonded to the mother. The bond takes a full cycle to fully form. As the bond settles, the side effects may include severe headaches, dizziness, affected vision, etc. The headaches and blurred vision that Seira experiences in this thread are a result of the bond she has. At the current time, Seira is unaware that she has bonded to the mother Nekosani. Here is the info on Nekosani. Per the mod note in the info, bonding to a Nekosani needs PSF approval if the bond takes less than a full cycle to form, but approval isn't needed to bond to a Nekosani as long as the bond forms over the course of a cycle.
Skills Used: Dancing; Novice (10/250 exp, 16 knowledges), Detection; Novice (2/250 exp, 7 knowledges), Endurance; Novice (1/250 exp, 4 knowledges)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Skill Knowledges

Dancing: ice skating can be another form of dancing
Dancing: ice dancing is a beautiful thing to watch
Dancing: one must know how to ice skate before one can dance on the ice
Dancing: dancing on the ice requires very good balance
Endurance: the pain of a migraine
Strength: ice dancing requires strong ankles
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: A migraine caused by the bond she has with her Nekosani bondmate settling/developing.
Renown: none
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: Seri's Song
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: 1) In this thread, Seira found five nekosani; an adult female and four kittens. While rescuing one of the kittens, she bonded to the mother. The bond takes a full cycle to fully form. As the bond settles, the side effects may include severe headaches, dizziness, affected vision, etc. The headaches and blurred vision that Seira experiences in this thread are a result of the bond she has. At the current time, Seira is unaware that she has bonded to the mother Nekosani. Here is the info on Nekosani. Per the mod note in the info, bonding to a Nekosani needs PSF approval if the bond takes less than a full cycle to form, but approval isn't needed to bond to a Nekosani as long as the bond forms over the course of a cycle. 2) Seira's singing skill experience does not match her knowledges because exp that had been for the Performance skill when it existed was put into her singing skill. Her CS.
Skills Used: Musical Instrument; Percussion; Hang Drum; Competent (26/250 exp, 11 knowledges), Singing; Expert (51/100 (FT skill), 19 knowledges), Writing; Unskilled (0/250 exp, 4 knowledges)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Skill Knowledges

Singing: practicing the words to memorize a new song
Singing: working out a melody for a song you are creating by humming
Singing: Seri's Song
Writing: notes don't have to look pretty if you're the only one who has to read them
Writing: writing down your thoughts helps you to organize them when creating a song
Writing: x 1
Loot: a song she wrote for her sister
Injuries/Overstepping: A headache caused by the bond she has with her Nekosani settling/developing that lingers, and brief dizziness that faded quickly.
Renown: none
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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