Review Request 2.2.3

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Yeva
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Review Request


Thread Name: Reunited
City/Area: Athart
Notes/Warnings: Yeva goes to re-examine a former patient, gives a pelvic exam and offers guidance for a birthing plan, and afterwards is unexpectedly reunited with Azrael, her best friend (it's complicated, let's be honest) who went missing for a few seasons during a Avriel plague. This is an old placeholder and wealth thread from last year I wanted to wrap up.
Skills Used: Medicine (Expert), Surgery (Novice), Socialization (Novice), Detection (Novice)
Requested Rewards:
Medicine
How to Give a Pelvic Exam
Calculating Pregnancy Progress & Expected Due Date
Talk Through Uncomfortable Procedures & Offer Reassurance
Surgery
Using a Birth Plan to Prepare for a Delivery
The Different Types of Births
Detection
The Physical Changes of Pregnancy Over Time

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes - for giving medical treatment to Larkin Trevender's friend. Larkin Trevender is a well known/wealthy NPC in Athart.
Wealth Points: This is my Saun 719 wealth thread.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Jasper
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

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Thread Name: (Name with link included)New In town
City/Area: (Where is this taken place in?) Raelia
Notes/Warnings: (Any Notes or warnings? Violence?) Abandoned
Skills Used: Mount: Novice, Meditation (Competent) Strength (Novice), Detection (None)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Mount x2
Meditation x2
Strength x2
Detection x2
Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: No
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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Jasper
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

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Thread Name: Well That’s a Big Punishment
City/Area: Raelia
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned
Skills Used: Strength (novice), Discipline (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Discipline x3
Strength x2
Socialization x3
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: Yes
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

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Thread Name: Doors That Open
City/Area: Scalvoris Town, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Waiting in bank lines. PDA... in bank lines.
Laures
Skills Used: Etiquette (Unranked), Cosmetology (5 Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Etiquette x5
Cosmetology x3
Carver
Skills Used: Discipline (Unranked), Etiquette (Unranked), Deception (30 Competent)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Deception x1
Etiquette x2
Discipline x5
Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: if applicable
Wealth Points: n/a
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Jewels and Fools
City/Area: Scalvoris Town, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Violence. Implied Murder. Scalvoris Bounty Thread.
Laures
Skills Used: Combat (Blades) (Novice), Combat (Unarmed) (Novice), Stealth (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Combat (Blades): x4
Stealth: x4

Loot: +1 Grave-Gold Jewelry Set [Circlet] (Approved in DM by Pegasus for the Bounty #1 Reward of "Gift of 1 x set of Jewelry.")
Carver
Skills Used: Trap-Making (Unranked), Stealth (Novice), Combat Unarmed (Novice), Detection (Novice), Tactics (Novice), Deception (Comp).

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Trap-Making x3
Stealth x2
Combat (Unarmed) x2
Tactics x2

Loot: +1 Grave-Gold Jewelry Set [Collar] (Approved in DM by Pegasus for the Bounty #1 Reward of "Gift of 1 x set of Jewelry.")
Injuries/Overstepping: If Applicable.
Renown: If Applicable.
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

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Thread Name: Hello Horse
City/Area: Scalvoris Town, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: The horse (Bette) is an informal NPC exchange from the PC, Hart (agreed by Hart/Eihr's player) - but it also takes one slot of an average mount for Tier 5.
Laures
Skills Used: Cooking (Novice), Animal Husbandry (Unranked), Socialization (Unranked), Etiquette (Unranked).

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Cooking x5
Animal Husbandry x3

Loot: +1 Chestnut Mare Horse (Bette)
Carver
Skills Used: Etiquette (Unranked), Deception (Competent), Persuasion (Unranked), Animal Husbandry (Unranked).

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Etiquette x2
Deception x2
Persuasion x2
Animal Husbandry x3

Loot: +1 Chestnut Mare Horse (Bette)
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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Kasoria
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

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Thread Name: Books
City/Area: Storm's Edge, Stormlands
Notes/Warnings: Some foul language... I know, shocking, right?

First of a three-part grinder. Episode one: reading! Episode two... stay tuned!

Skills Used:
Discipline (Master), Research (Novice), Detection (Master)

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Research x3, Transmutation x2, Discipline x1

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Shadow Slayer: Likely the Result of Transmutation Rituals
Storm's Edge, Early Ashan 720: Fortified Yet Still Menaced
Storm's Edge, Early Ashan 720: Safe to the Point that Kasoria is No Longer Needed


Magic Experience?: No
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Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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Llyr Llywelyn
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

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Thread Name: 2.3 Orientation
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Cold cycle solo, part of a series. Attunement.

Skills Used: Attunement (Comp), Detection (Master), Meditation (Master), Discipline (Master).

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Attunement: Note: Ambition.
Attunement: Note: Youth.
Attunement: Dousing: Using a note to find a known person.
Attunement: Dousing: Important to pick the right note.
Attunement: Dousing: Some notes are too common to use for navigation.
Meditation: Clearing the mind of thoughts.

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes - Attunement.
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Clavam
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

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Thread Name: Midnight Forge
City/Area: Etzos Forbidden Post
Notes/Warnings: Not really, maybe foul language and foul mannered/foul thoughts of Clavam.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Clavam

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[*]Logistics:  Making sure materials are available to the craftsman.
[*]Logistics:  Everyday running of a forge.
[*]Smithing:  Pounding out a socket in a spearhead.
[*]Smithing:  Water and suet are needed for the quenches.
[*]Smithing:  Keeping a forge clean is important.
[*]Smithing:  Sweeping up iron dust and other debris from the floor of a forge.
Skillplay
Logistics: Untrained
Smithing: Untrained
Strength: Untrained
Fieldcraft: Novice (water from a well)
Endurance: Novice
Discipline: Novice

Loot: + 3 poor quality iron javelin heads.
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no


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Balthazar Black
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Suffer The Children: Schrodinger's Cabin Boy
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Violence. Balthazar uses his renown reward to find Anton, not a magical ability.
Skills Used: Discipline (Competent), Blades (Untrained), Unarmed Combat (Expert), Detection (Novice), Running (Untrained), Defiance (Master), Attunement (Expert), Tactics (Untrained), Meditation (Expert), Investigation (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Meditation x 1
Defiance (Embrace) - Melding into the earth,
Blades (Short Sword) x 2
Attunement (Omnivision): Projecting your senses through hollow ground
Tactics: Prevent them from drawing their sword

Loot: Anton Callipo is saved!
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: Probably, but I'll leave it up to you. Balthazar freed the writer of a newspaper and walked around town with glowing eyes.
Wealth Points: +3, One from wealth thread, Two from renown bonus. This would be the wealth thread for the season.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes, Defiance and Attunement
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Mutations

  • Once Paradigm Is Removed: He glows faintly, his skin is warm and sometimes hot to the touch, and when he gets angry sparks literally fly off him. He's a the middle of a field of static electricity so every once in a while when you touch him, you get shocked. Fire leans towards Balthazar and droplets of water seem magnetically attracted to him. He has a series of cracks on his right pectoral that glow of soft emerald. His eyes and the cracks reaching down to his cheeks glow a dark blue. The etheric cracks spiderwebbing up his arms glow orange.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks in Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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