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Doran
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: Alchemy 101: Letter Ceritification Part 2
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned thread. It's been two months, and Rickith didn't react when I contacted him, so I decided to post a review request.
Skills Used: GM Alchemy (250x/194k), Master Meditation (155x/72k), Master Discipline (151x/74k), Master Detection (151x/71k), Expert Teaching (79x/79k)

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Knowledge:-
Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: yes
Magic Experience?: -
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: The Dawn of a New Trial....
City/Area: Egilrun
Notes/Warnings: Introducing Renissance!

Skills Used:
Discipline - Novice
Meditation - Novice
Mount - Land - Novice
Animal Husbandry - Novice
Logistics - Novice
Psychology - Novice
Detection - Novice
Strength - Novice

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Mount - Land - Secure cinch snugly, double-check always
Mount - Land - Use horn
Strength - Saddles are heavy!
Strength - Pulling one's self up into a saddle
Meditation - Pull in calmness, push out tension
Psychology - One's ability to trust can be tainted by past experience

Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: I See Dead People
City/Area: Haven/Faldrass
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Balthazar
Skills Used
Disciplines (Expert)
Detection (Expert)
Leadership (GM)
Meditation (Expert)
Logistics (Expert)
Psychology (Expert)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
None Requested


Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown:
Reviewer's Discretion
Elisabeth
Skills Used
Discipline (Expert)
Detection (Master)
Meditation (Competent)
Logistics (Expert)
Psychology (Expert)
Stealth (Novice)
Tactics (Expert)
Investigation (Expert)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Stealth - Move lightly
Stealth - Hiding behind a door to surprise someone
Detection - Noting the movement of the bed when one leaves it
Detection - Noting when something is missing when it shouldn't be (dagger)
Detection - Listening to your environment to ascertain danger
Detection - Being half asleep negatively affects one's ability to detect
Tactics - Calling out in an unknown situation is not advisable
Investigation - Taking into account the timing of unusual events
Meditation - Meditative state with a cat in one's lap requires practice

Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown:
Reviewer's Discretion
Collaboration: Yes

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: Memories
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Birthing thread. Genna discovering more about her new ability.
Skills Used: Medicine (GM), Detection (Competent), Leadership (competent)

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Knowledge: Leadership - Having get together with those your in charge of.
Leadership - learning about those you lead from themselves.
Detection - Healer’s Sight can help determine babies position during birth.
Detection - Mother’s vitals can help in diagnosis.
Medicine - Babies skull bones not one solid pieces.
Medicine - how contractions move muscles for birthing
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: Tired
Renown: ?
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: Orange Sand and Rainbow Shells
City/Area: Scalvoris/Faldrass
Notes/Warnings: Crafting thread. Might be dull.
Skills Used: GM Alchemy (250x/194k), GM Chemistry (100x/117k), Master Meditation (155x/72k), Master Discipline (151x/74k), Master Detection (151x/71k), Competent Etiquette (26x/56k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Alchemy: Using Faldrass sand to make pots that are always warm
Alchemy: Contamination can cause side-effects
Alchemy: A metabolizer strengthens the effect
Alchemy: Adapting an alchemical recipe
Alchemy: Natural reagents tend to be less volatile than magical reagents
Meditation: Repetitive actions can have a meditative effect

Loot:
Pots and plates that are always warm for the settlers
2 polished Ignis Clam shells for Doran

Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: 5-10, for alchemificating pots and plates for the settlers of Hopetoun
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: Hurts
City/Area: Etzos, North Woods
Notes/Warnings: Based on the overstepping consequences and injury awarded by Doran in 'Guest 2'
Skills Used: Medicine, discipline, meditation: novice; endurance: competent; field craft: expert

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
-Medicine - First Aid: Staunch bleeding with pressure
-Medicine - First Aid: Clean wounds with fresh water
-Medicine - First Aid: Disinfecting wounds
-Medicine - First Aid: Stitching wounds closed
-Medicine - First Aid: Sterilize needle with fire
-Endurance: stitching your own wound closed

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: Up to reviewer
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: ~~~~ Rule #1: Don't Die~~~~~~~
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None. I have deliberately asked for less than maximum knowledge. This is a thread to introduce a group of temporary NPCs to Hopetoun from Saoire's School.

Vega

Knowledge:
Caregiving: Discussing feelings with someone can help them.
Caregiving: Looking at the positives of relationships.
Etiquette: Don't insult people's names. Even if they're a cat called Rover.

Skills Used:
Caregiving (Novice)
Etiquette (Novice and it shows)
Psychology (GM)

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: Yes please, if appropriate
Wealth Points: Nope
Collaboration: Nope
Magic Experience?: No

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: volcano forest
City/Area: not lucid dreamscape
Notes/Warnings: some bloody injuries but nothing super graphic
Skills Used:


Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:


Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: -
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Thread Name: Wuthering Winds (2)
City/Area: Rharne, Stormlands
Notes/Warnings: Part 2 of Dan sheltering from a bad storm
Skills Used: Fieldcraft (exp), Butchering (comp), Cooking (comp), Animal Husbandry (comp), Detection (comp), Caregiving (untrained)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge
Skill:
Butchering: gutting a rabbit
Butchering: skinning a rabbit
Butchering: dividing a rabbit at the joints
Butchering: older animals produce tougher meat
Butchering: a messy and smelly business
Caregiving: offering shelter in a storm

Nonskill
Raven, a shepherd
Fern, Raven's dog


Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: no
Renown: Reviewer's discretion
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: ~~~~ Rule #2: Don't Get Killed~~~~~~~
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None.

Vega

Knowledge:
Teaching: The best lesson is an individual one
Teaching: Teach from experience, where you can
Teaching: Consider that each student is different
Logistics: How to plan time between doing something and teaching something
Logistics: Arranging places for people to stay
Logistics: Preparing a schedule with some flexibility.

Skills Used:
Teaching (Competent)
Fieldcraft (GM)
Psychology (GM)
Logistics (Novice)

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: Yes please, if appropriate
Wealth Points: Nope
Collaboration: Nope
Magic Experience?: No
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