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Kasoria
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: II. Bows
City/Area: Storm's Edge, Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Wee bit of bad language
Skills Used:
Ranged Weapon: Bow (Competent), Endurance (Master)

Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge:
Ranged Weapon: Bow x5, Endurance x1


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Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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Yeva
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Review Request


Thread Name: Tea for Three
City/Area: Scalvoris Town, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: A cute thread where Yeva revisits some of the Orphan's at Luna's Dream and gives a bit of medical attention to one of the children.
Skills Used: Medicine (Expert), Caretaking (Novice), Acting (Novice), Persuasion (Novice), Socialization (Novice), Detection (Novice), Disguise (Novice)

Requested Rewards: 10xp
Knowledge
Caretaking
Show Patience with Excitable Children
Indulge Their Fantasies in Active Play
Spread Out Attention Evenly Across Multiple Parties
How to Soothe a Child Crying Because of Pain
Give Reassurance Often with Distressed Children

Detection
How to Detect the Age of a Wound
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Minor, if applicable please!
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Kisaik Glory
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Cats in the Crate-l
City/Area: Muddy Bloody Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: Rat gets chomped, kitties being sold. idk what else. Kisaik has a domestic spat with his own cat. Also Mastemyr has said they will submit for knowledges once the thread is reviewed.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Kisaik

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[*]Acrobatics: Knowing when to leap in defense, and when to stay the hell out of dodge.
[*]Animal Training:  A cat is independant and isn't bought.
[*]Animal Training:  Cats are territorial.
[*]Animal Husbandry:  Rats are a fine snack for cats.
[*]Etiquette:  You must respect a cat's agency.
[*]Mount:  Riding a cat while it's chasing a rat.
[*]Persuasion:  Convincing the strange catman to sell some cats.
[*]Persuasion:  Trying to make peace between a kitten and a full grown cat.
Skillplay
Animal Training: Novice
Animal Husbandry: Novice
Etiquette: Expert
Mount: Competent
Persuasion: Untrained

Loot: no
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: no


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