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Sephira
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Up In The Air
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Sephira works with the Air Troops.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Etiquette: Getting on a first name basis with others
Endurance: Enduring the cold
Endurance: Climbing up the Menagerie stairs.
Mount: Riding on a flying mount
Strength: Climbing on and off an Enormowl
Intelligence: Scanning the skies for anomalies.


Non-Skill Knowledge
Location: The Menagerie
Location: Darbyton
Faction: The Darbyton Rangers
People: Elliot (Chief Ranger)

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Positive - Working with the Air Troops
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Lei'lira
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: [Warrick] Many Hands Make Light Work
City/Area: Warrick, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)

Skill Knowledge

Animal Husbandry: Horse; how to muck out a stall
Animal Husbandry: Horse; how to pick a horse's hooves
Animal Husbandry: Horse; the tools needed to properly groom a horse
Animal Husbandry: Horse; grooming is a good bonding experience for horse and rider; it's hard to know who enjoys it more
Animal Husbandry: Horse; daily exercise is important
Animal Training: Horse; begins by socializing foals and getting them used to people

Non Skill Knowledge

Lei'lira: worries about overworking her kids


Lei'luna: worries about Lei'lira


Teirue: wants to help


Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Fame: none
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Limbo
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: First Date /viewtopic.php?f=263&t=10270
City/Area: (MIddlecleft, Etzos
Notes/Warnings: It's implied they had sex, and there's mention of some foul words.
Requested Rewards:

Business Management: Having a plan.
Business Management: Never stand around, always profit.
Business Management: Importance of documents
Business Management Income vs Expenses
Business Management: Improvising to compensate for profit
Seduction: Straight to the point

Tatania: Will marry you
Tatania: Old, but bold
Tatania: Has a nice house
Tatania: Will share her house with you
Tatania: Smart, graceful, and admirable
Tatania: Insatiable, unfortunately
MIddlecleft: Everyone hates you
MIddlecleft: Speaks poorly of you

and anything else you might see. Take into account that this Tatania NPC will be made into a personal NPC. I need knowledges about her cz marriage

Loot: A bullwhip, which I had to pay for since rules.
Fame: Negative. Everyone in Middlecleft speaks bad of Paplo for no real reason, and leaving with Tatania is bound to spawn some more bad talk.
Collaboration: (No

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Vega
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Upward Mobility
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:

Vega

Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Balancing high up requires you to adjust according to the wind direction.
Acrobatics: Walking across a raised beam of wood
Carpentry: Telling a story with engraving
Carpentry: Plan out individual pieces, not the whole
Climbing: Always take the force of wind into account when climbing in exposed areas.
Strength: Using your upper body when swinging on a rope.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: No
Collaboration: No
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Nir'wei
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Profession: Councillor of Natural Affairs
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: The Return II.
City/Area: Desnind.
Notes/Warnings: None.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Investigation: Gather all the evidence possible.
Investigation: Unlikely sources can still bring important information.
Investigation: Don't rely too heavily on one source of evidence.
Investigation: Eavesdropping on conversations about yourself tells you what people don't want you to hear.
Investigation: Spirit animals make great eavesdroppers.
Detection: Picking out valuable information from skim-reading.
Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: None.
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: No.
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Neronin
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Bonemaker: Goliath
City/Area: Farmlands outside Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Undead violence, language

NOTH
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Ranged: Hitting Bigger Targets is Easier
Ranged: Be Careful Where you Shoot an Enemy.
Ranged: Fast Draw
Ranged: Fast Fire
Ranged: Critical Shots
Unarmed: Grabbing at Important Bits
Unarmed: Tearing Out a Well

PC: Marrow: Real name is Neronin

Loot: 1 small chest of loot
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Review discretion
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

NERONIN
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Rupture: Blinking to Dodge attacks
Rupture: Blinking to Taunt enemies
Necromancy: Hulk
Leadership: Focusing undead attacks
Leadership: Shouting orders in battle

Loot: 1 Imedyte well, Gavrel’s necromancy journal
Injuries/Overstepping: Some overstepping
Fame: Reviewer discretion
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes, for Rupturing please.
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Zip
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Ether Ship Down
City/Area: Etzos - outlying cities
Notes/Warnings: Don't know what your threshold for violence is but it's got some graphic violence. Guy's skull immolated and other stuff.
Requested Rewards:
Yana Knowledges
Endurance: Taking a hit to the face
Endurance: taking a kick to the shin
Intelligence: know what the other wants to use as leverage
Intelligence: dead people don’t talk
Interrogation: Small talk first to set them at ease
Unarmed combat: Vice Grip
Unarmed Combat: restraining a struggling individual
Unarmed Combat: Pinning someone against the wall
Quiome’s captors: had their ship and prisoners taken by pirates

Zipper knowledges
Endurance: A wound to the leg
Endurance: Passing into Overstepping
Endurance: Staving off the witchbrand
Endurance: Taking a knife in the back
Intelligence: Dead people don’t talk
Intimidation: A magical massacre
Intimidation: A summary execution via Ether Missile
Unarmed Combat: Eye gouging with an Ether Missile

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Zip will be glitching consistently for the next 2 trials, with on and off glitching for the next 5. She will suffer headaches for 3 trials, a brief fever. Also: a leg wound, a stab wound in the back.
Fame: Negative. It's a massacre. Lots of negative. Gimme. Yana too. Also: use of magic for Zip.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Normally yes but I'm all filled out on Trans.
word count: 232
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Sephira
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Earth, Wind, Fire, and Spacetime
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Sephira trains with Fire Troop NPC Keim'an
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Rupturing: Using the loud sound from portal creation as a distraction
Rupturing: Creating portals in the air to drop enemies from a height.
Bladed Combat (Saber): Blocking a heavy blow
Tactics: Improvising to outmaneuver an opponent
Acrobatics: Leaping in combat
Strength: Tackling a larger opponent

Non-Skill Knowledges
People (NPC): Keim'an Thojo

Loot: N/A

Injuries/Overstepping: Bruised knee, probably take a few trials to heal.
Fame: Probably n/a
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes
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Victor Amielle
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Gift of Knowledge
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Read the spoiler if you are wondering about the librarian's behaviour!
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Deception: If you aren't interested, pretend that you are busy
Research: Going to the library
Research: Books in a library are organized by subject
Research: The call number system
Research: It's important to consult several different sources
Research: Handle expensive books with care

Location: Scalvoris Public Library
NPC: Rose Lefleur: Head librarian of the Scalvoris Public Library
Scalvoris Event: The Gift of Knowledge

Loot: a vial of red ink
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Fame: -
Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: no
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Appearance

Due to one of his Awakenings, Victor's eyes glow with a soft silver light.

Items

Victor owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Virikai Talius
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Price of Knowledge
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge (6):
Negotiation: Knowing When to Fight or Concede
Politics: Control Through Force
Politics: Control Through Respect
Politics: Morality is an Emotional Response
Politics: Morality is a Subjective Construct
Politics: The Value of Secrets

Other Knowledge:
FRA: Must be Kept a Secret
Immortal: Yvithia
Race: Naer
Naer: Enemies of Viden and Eídisi
Verity Talius: Yvithia’s Champion
Xypha: Yvithia’s Blessing
Xypha: The Power to Control
Xypha: The Power to Read Minds
Yvithia: Immortal of Intelligence, Language and Communication

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Potentially Positive for stepping up into the world of politics?
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: None
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