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Patrick
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Thread Name: Mixology 101: Flavor is Everything
City/Area: Rharne, Memory Thread
Notes/Warnings: Potent Tartness
Requested Rewards:
  • Mixology: The Art of Combining Drinks
  • Mixology: Remembering Your Alcohol Names
  • Mixology: Flavor is, Essentially, Important
  • Mixology: Mixing Drinks With A Flagon
  • Mixology: Mixture for "Shimmering Appiden"
  • Endurance: Working in a Busy Locale
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Renown: You decide
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Patrick on Sat Jun 09, 2018 7:43 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 68
"Freedom is everything."


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Patrick
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Thread Name: Being The Bartener Isn't So Bad
City/Area: Rharne, Memory Thread
Notes/Warnings: Very lewd language
Requested Rewards:
  • Mixology: Considering The Important of Flavor
  • Mixology: Handling Unusual Requests
  • Mixology: Measuring Out Amounts of Alcohol
  • Mixology: Mixture For The "Salty Loin" Drink
  • Mixology: The Idea of A "Thunderstorm" Mixed Drink
  • Endurance: 'Managing' The Bar During Rush Time
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Renown: You decide
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Patrick on Sat Jun 09, 2018 7:43 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 76
"Freedom is everything."


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Virikai Talius
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Thread Name: What happens if I do this...
City/Area: Viden Academy, Viden
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
  • Discipline: Doing as Told by Superiors
    Linguistics: Phonology
    Linguistics: Phonetics
    Linguistics: Syntax and Morphology
    Linguistics: Semantics
    Linguistics: Pragmatics
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
word count: 50
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Thread Name: Love Letter
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Vulgarities. But you knew that.
Requested Rewards:
Dreamwalking: Lucid Dreaming: Can be triggered by 'willing' yourself into it as you drift to sleep
Dreamwalking: Lucid Dreaming: A night spent Lucid Dreaming is a night of rest unused and squandered

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
Last edited by Zip on Fri Jun 08, 2018 1:26 pm, edited 3 times in total. word count: 62
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Nightshade Eld
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Thread Name: Abuse Is Never Love
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Hints at abuse but none ever happens.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Investigation: The existence of tact
Persuasion: Convincing someone that abuse isn't a form of love
Persuasion: Convincing someone to get out of a toxic situation
Stealth: Following at a distance
Stealth: Conveniently going the same way as someone else
Stealth: Waiting to walk in

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Maybe? She convinces someone to leave their abuser
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: Ew
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Last edited by Nightshade Eld on Sat Jun 09, 2018 1:27 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 91
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Caius Gawyne
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Thread Name: You Can't Rely
City/Area: The Devil's Advocate, Viden
Notes/Warnings: Nah.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (6)
• Discipline: Ignoring desires for companionship
• Intelligence: Reviewing the notes of your network
• Intelligence: Trusting the observations of others
• Investigation: Following unlikely leads
• Investigation: Taking the time to study multiple accounts of the same event
• Resistance: Lukewarm ale goes down easier than it should

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: Ew. Never.
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Last edited by Caius Gawyne on Tue Jun 12, 2018 2:34 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 83
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Oberan
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Thread Name: Pirate City
Notes/Warnings: nope
Requested Rewards:
none
Collaboration: nope
Magic EXP: Certainly not
word count: 18
Just because I shouldn't doesn't mean I won't.


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Jonathan Burr
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Thread Name: Sex Toy or Deadly Weapon?
Notes/Warnings: Jon learns to use a whip. Much less sexy than implied.
Requested Rewards:

Whips -Bullwhip: Learning the basic crack maneuver.
Whips - Bullwhip: One has to build momentum in order for the weapon to be effective.
Whips - Bullwhip: Basic X maneuver for defense or driving back an enemy.
Whips - Bullwhip: Snaring an opponent by the foot
Whips - Bullwhip: Learning a basic forward snap
Discipline: Thinking through an attack

Collaboration: nope
Magic EXP: No
word count: 83
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Jonathan Burr
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Thread Name: Again, With Feeling!
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:

Aberration: Thievery
Aberration: Thievery robs the subject of its will to perform actions.
Aberration: Thievery enables the user to force their will on other people.
Aberration: Conjunctions allow for the manipulation of those trapped in them.
Deception: Faking friendliness
Deception: Keeping up an act.

Collaboration: nope
Magic EXP: Yes
word count: 60
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Lei'lira
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Thread Name: [Warrick] Good Deeds are Well Rewarded
City/Area: Rynmere, Warrick
Notes/Warnings: A mod should be the one to grade this, please. I am using it to earn a medium renown reward (+1 GN to wages). The reward will start being counted from my Cylus 718 job thread forward since that is when the renown system changed. Here is the approval for this. Other warnings include a scene (not graphic) where sheep are bred, and mentions of a disgusting disease.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)

Skill Knowledge

Animal Husbandry; Sheep: Crutching a sheep is when the wool from around the tail and between the rear legs of a sheep is sheared off. It can also mean removing the wool from the head of a sheep, which is also called wigging. And it can also refer to removing wool from the bottom of male sheep. The latter is also known as mulesing. It is done because it makes breeding sheep easier.

Medicine: Myiasis, or flystrike is when flies lay their eggs in open wounds, or urine soaked fur; the eggs hatch, and the larvae eat their way into the afflicted animal or person. It is fatal if left untreated. Treatment involves cutting the maggots out of the body, and can often be fatal as well. Crutching is an effective preventive measure.

Mount; Horse: riding double with young children who are too young to ride by themselves can be difficult as the children grow
Mount; Horse: some horses took a deep breath while being saddled in order to prevent it from being tightened properly
Mount; Horse: double checking riding gear to make sure it is on correctly before riding is very important
Mount; Horse: a loose saddle can be dangerous

Non Skill Knowledge

Teirue: thinks she's a big girl now
Teirue: wants to learn how to ride by herself

Work comes before play on a farm. Always.


Loot: Lambs would be nice. I will leave the number born up to the grader, but Lei'lira has 20 ewes, and twins are common in sheep births. Triplets are fairly common as well, but not as much as twins. The lambs would be born in Zi'da 717.
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Possibly slight for volunteering at Meadow Farms, and for giving some people good deals.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
word count: 394
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