Review Requests 2.1.6

[Max]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A New Edge
City/Area: Slags Deep, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Language
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Tactics: Well-rounded Fighters Are More Dangerous
Thrown Weapon (Dagger): Squaring to a Target
Thrown Weapon (Dagger): Put One Foot Forward
Thrown Weapon (Dagger): Raise the Weapon Behind Your Ear
Thrown Weapon (Dagger): Loosen Up Your Body
Thrown Weapon (Dagger): Throwing Upon An Exhale

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Neg.
Magic EXP: No.

[Zana]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Books are dull
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Study thread

Requested Rewards:

Zana

Knowledge:
Alchemy: Closely linked with chemistry
Alchemy: Reagents are very important
Alchemy: Deals with the essence of a thing
Alchemy: Applies the essence of one thing to another
Alchemy: Requires a number of steps / stages
Research: Find where the books are first

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: I don't believe so, no
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: N/A

[Max]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Something to Stick
City/Area: Slags Deep, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Violence. Disturbing images.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Stealth: Revealing Self at the Last Moment
Thrown Weapon (Dagger): Aiming for Center Mass
Thrown Weapon (Dagger): Try to Time the Spin
Thrown Weapon (Dagger): Don't Strike with the Handle
Thrown Weapon (Dagger): Throwing at a Stick-able Target
Thrown Weapon (Dagger): Focusing on a Single Target

Loot: Not really
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Maybe
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Nope.

[Nightshade Eld]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Hunt For Wealth
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: This thread needs reviewed by a moderator as it was agreed on that I could finish it for a mark ability here. If the moderator finds me to have earned it I'll get the next ability for Taithir, Serpentine Awareness. I originally started this thread with someone else but they haven't been on the site for a while so I finished it on my own, assuming it abandoned.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Iron Scales: Better than Enduring Scales
Noble's Shield: A substitute shield in a pinch
Noble's Shield: Recharges quickly
Second Wind: Last resort
Second Wind: Damaging after effects, highly faithing
Stealth: Steel goes clink

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: A lot of bruising and a cut that were all treated by a doctor
Renown: I'd say shutting down a branch of child slavers is worth a little bit, wouldn't you?
Collaboration: Originally...
Magic EXP: No

[Max]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Just the Tip
City/Area: Slags Deep, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Language. Gruesome image.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Resistance: Constant Presence of a Corpse
Thrown Weapon (Dagger): Only the Tip of the Dagger Sticks
Thrown Weapon (Dagger): Guide, Don't Hurl
Thrown Weapon (Dagger): Repeating the Proper Throwing Motion
Thrown Weapon (Dagger): Timing Rotation
Thrown Weapon (Dagger): Eliminating Full Rotation is an Option

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Zasalamir]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name:Swordsman's Strength Training
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Zasa is nude
Requested Rewards:

Discipline: Practice makes perfect
Strength: Tensing your muscles during exercise is a good method of isolating muscles for working out
Strength: Putting your strength into a movement
Strength: Tearing free of a grip
Strength: Holding your arms above your head and working for a length of time builds muscles
Strength: Repetition of movement to build muscles

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Soreness from training, Headaches from seeing father's phantom/Figment of Imagination
Renown: Idk, up to reviewer
Collaboration: (No)
Magic EXP: (No)

[Emerit]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Rumours for the faithful
City/Area: Scalvtown
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill

Navigation: Pick reference points for orientation
Deception: Hide discomfort behind a smile
Interrogation: Asking straight questions
Interrogation: No skirting around the issue might bear results
Detection: Body language speaks of feelings
Endurance: Fight off sleep for greater purpose

Non-skill

Story: Immortals' arrival
Story: Death of Daia and Leviana
People: Stan: Head Priest in the Glass Temple
Stan: Small but powerful
Stan: Shifty eyes that see into the soul
Stan: Mysterious little twig
Location: Scalvoris Town: The Glass Temple
Scalvoris Town: Mismatched streets equal labyrinth
Slavoris Town: Glass Temple: Fitted with inconspicous climbing structures for Stan
Slavoris Town: Glass Temple: Uncomfortable benches
Slavoris Town: Glass Temple: Mosaics of light

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Solving a rumour ST3! So I guess, maybe? ^^
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

Oberan

[Padraig]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: After Effects
City/Area: Sca;vpros
Notes/Warnings: None

Requested Rewards:

Faith

Knowledge:
Caregiving: Looking after someone you love is hard
Medicine: Bespoke menus to aid healing.
Bellinos: Memento: Useful to share a memory
Bellinos: Memento: Doesn't help the memory make sense
Bellinos: Memento: Can be disturbing in a detached way.
Sevrath: Calming Whispers: Useful with guided visualisation
Sevrath: Calming Whispers: Helps heal mental affliction
Sevrath: Calming Whispers: Aids restful sleep

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: N/A

Padraig

Knowledge:
Discipline: Trying to hold back terror is difficult
Discipline: Ensure that all emotions are held in check before sharing a memory
Discipline: Not being too forceful but saying no and meaning it
Discipline: Focusing your memory to put it in a bottle.
Endurance: Keeping going when your body is exhausted
Endurance: Mind over matter
Endurance: Mental assaults cause physical responses
Endurance: Sleep deprivation


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: I don't believe so, no
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A

Oberan

[Nightshade Eld]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Practice Makes Perfection
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Nope. Job Thread
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Drawing: Drawing while flying is even harder
Drawing: Using basic shapes
Drawing: Wind is the enemy
Drawing: Paper quality
Drawing: Drawing from observation is better than memory
Flying: Automated hovering

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic EXP: N/A

[Lei'lira]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Seeing the World through a Child's Eyes
City/Area: Scalvoris, Scalvoris Town, specifically Luna's Dream
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledge


Linguistics: the language of music is universal
Musical Instrument; Glass Flute: a beautiful instrument
Musical Instrument; Glass Flute: looks nothing like a flute
Musical Instrument; Glass Flute: sounds as beautiful as it looks
Musical Instrument; Glass Flute: in the hands of a skilled musician, they can echo the sound of rain, laughter or harmonize in beautiful melodies
Musical Instrument; Glass Flute: can only be bought in Egilrun, Scalvoris Town, Almund and Faldrass



Non Skill Knowledge


Language: Ku'aric
Ku'aric: a language written and spoken in Central Idalos
Ku'aric: poo poo head

Language: Pailtic
Pailtic: a language written and spoken in Central Idalos
Pailtic: stupid

NPC: Ei'ryl
Eiryl: an orphan living at Luna's Dream
Ei'ryl: a Sev'ryn
Ei'ryl: has an ose-bori named Sarasin
Ei'ryl: Ei'ryn's twin sister
Ei'ryl: has three younger sisters including her twin
Ei'ryl: loves beautiful things
Ei'ryl: longs to be able to create beauty of her own
Ei'ryl: skilled with the glass flute
Ei'ryl: a friendly child
Ei'ryl: protective of her sisters

NPC: Ei'ryn
Ei'ryn: an orphan living at Luna's Dream
Ei'ryn: a Sev'ryn
Ei'ryn: has an ose-bori named Hoshi
Ei'ryn: Ei'ryl's twin sister
Ei'ryn: has one older sister and two younger sisters including her twin
Ei'ryn: loves beautiful things
Ei'ryn: longs to be able to create beauty of her own
Ei'ryn: skilled at drawing
Ei'ryn: a timid, painfully shy child
Ei'ryn: "speaks" through her art

NPC: Sai'ryl
Sai'ryl: an orphan living at Luna's Dream
Sai'ryl: a Sev'ryn
Sai'ryl: her nickname is "Little Mother"
Sai'ryl: has two older sisters and one younger sister
Sai'ryl: loves stories
Sai'ryl: learns quickly but unless she is interested in what she is learning, she is unlikely to stay with it for long
Sai'ryl: her greatest joy is to make others happy
Sai'ryl: a sensitive child
Sai'ryl: eager to please the people she cares about


NPC: Tae'ryn
Tae'ryn: an orphan living at Luna's Dream
Tae'ryn: a Sev'ryn
Tae'ryn: is 5 arcs old
Tae'ryn: has three older sisters
Tae'ryn: loves stories
Tae'ryn: is shy around strangers
Tae'ryn: skilled with languages
Tae'ryn: knows Common, Xanthea, Pailtic, Scalveen, Cursive, and Ku'aric

NPC: Felicia Hounsworth
Felicia Hounsworth: runs Luna's Dream
Felicia Hounsworth: is very kind
Felicia Hounsworth: is well organized

NPC: Nats Bettes
Nats Bettes: teaches at Luna's Dream
Nats Bettes: the kids love her
Nats Bettes: a quiet woman who prefers her own company outside the classroom

Location: Almund
Location: Egilrun
Location: Faldrass


Location: Luna's Dream
Luna's Dream: an orphanage in Scalvoris Town
Luna's Dream: opened in Vhalar 717


Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: none
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No