Review Request 2.2.4

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Rei'sari
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Homemade Gifts
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: none
Skills Used: Cooking : Novice (5/250, 15 knowledges), Detection: Competent (26/250, 16 knowledges), Flying: Expert (76/250, 34 knowledges), Research: Unskilled (0/250, 2 knowledges), Woodworking: Novice (25/250, 4 knowledges)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledges

Research x 1
Woodworking: wooden beads can be simple, or have ornate designs carved into them
Woodworking: wooden beads can be painted for even more variety
Woodworking: flaws in a wooden bead can sometimes be hidden by carving a design into the bead, or painting it
Woodworking: when making wooden beads, it is better to drill the holes before the wood dries out
Woodworking: wooden beads that don't have holes can be wrapped with wire and used in most things that beads with holes can be used for

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Possibly slight (5) for helping the kids at Luna's Dream Orphanage make gifts for the refugees
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
 ! Message from: Pig Boy
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Rei'sari was formerly Ari'sora, but after getting a fresh start in life and a new appearance from Vega, she changed her name to Rei'sari.
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Victor Amielle
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Embla, Part 2
City/Area: Melrath
Notes/Warnings: Victor becomes a citizen of Melrath. Part 2 of 3.
Skills Used: Competent Discipline (30x/25k), Competent Meditation (30x/15k), Competent Detection (26x/19k), Competent Etiquette (26x/29k), Novice Writing (25x/8k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection x1
Discipline x3
Meditation x1
Politics: The process of becoming a citizen of Melrath

Loot: Citizenship of Melrath.
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

 ! Message from: Pig Boy
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Appearance

Due to one of his Awakenings, Victor's eyes glow with a soft silver light.

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Victor owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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N/A
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Rakvald Tentacle
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Craw's First Swim
City/Area: Waters of Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: raw eating a fish, eating a pig alive.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Rakvald

Code: Select all

[*]Swimming: x 4
[*]Becoming: Mer Trait:  Amphibious Water-Breathing.
[*]Becoming: Mer Trait:  Deep water pressure resistance.
Loot: no
Injuries/Overstepping: reviewer's discretion
Renown: no
Skillplay
Becoming: Expert
Hunting: Novice
Swimming: Novice
Butchery: Novice
Graft: Master
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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Kasoria
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: II. A Pig in Muck
City/Area: Commercial Circle, Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Bad Language and a metric butt-ton of gore in this one...
Skills Used:
Blades (Master), Shortbow (Master), Abrogation (Master), Tactics (Master), Endurance (Master), Stealth (Master), Intimidation (Master), Transmutation (Expert), Strength (Expert)

Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge:
Abrogation - Shield (Master): Casting at a Distance, to Cut Off an Escape Route
Abrogation - Shield (Master): Casting Without Words, Just a Thought
Abrogation - Shackle (Master): Crushing a Victim by Rapidly Shrinking the "Chains"
Ranged (Shortbow): An Arrow in the Throat is a (relatively) Quiet Kill
Tactics: Hobbling Your Enemies Before the Fight Even Begins (sometimes quite literally)
Transmutation - Shapecraft: Restoring the Shaped Surface


Injuries/Overstepping: Mild Overstepping
Renown: Oh yeah... :twisted:
Magic Experience?: Yes

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Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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Woe
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4


Thread Name: This is the Way the World Ends
City/Area: Northern Wastes
Notes/Warnings: Suicide attempt, mature themes, suicidal ideation, nihilism.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Woe

Endurance x 4
Meditation x 2
Skillplay
Psychology: GM
Meditation: Expert
Endurance: Competent
Resistance: Competent
Fieldcraft: Untrained
Discipline: Expert
Deception: Competent
Loot/Losses: none
Injuries/Overstepping: He's freezing in the snow, but I plan to have him rescued.
Renown: Yes if you see something worth awarding!
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: none
Magic Experience?: No

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Darius Baer Bottom
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Supercalifragilisticpolyhedraldiceous
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: None.
Skills Used: Design (Novice), Mathematics (Novice), Woodworking (Competent).

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Design: How to number a die that has no uppermost face.
Gambling: Loaded dice can be exposed in salty water.
Gambling: How to read a die that has no uppermost face.
Woodworking: Pockets of air may mean a piece of wood is not fit for purpose.
Woodworking: How to make a tetrahedron. [1d4]
Woodworking: How to make a cube. [1d6]

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience?: No
 ! Message from: Pig Boy
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word count: 109
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Elisabeth Black
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Journeys
City/Area:Stormlands/Caervalle Town/ Stardust Arch
Notes/Warnings: This is a solo thread that will be continued in a collab with Vega.
Skills Used:
Tactics (Novice - 0/250)
Intelligence (Novice - 0/250)
Leaderships (Novice - 5/250)
Combat (Competent - 26/100)
Deception (Novice - 0/250)
Detection (Novice - 0/250)
Discipline (Novice - 7/250)
Endurance (Novice - 0/250)
Investigation (Novice - 5/250)
Linguistics (Novice - 21/250)
Pyschology (Novice - 0/250)

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:

Tactics – Get as much information as possible before acting
Tactics – Separate attackers to deal with them one-on-one
Intelligence – How to get out of wrist ropes
Intelligence – Familiarity with the area between Caervalle Town & Stardust Arch
Leadership – Taking charge, sending vulnerable people out of harm's way
Combat – Bludgeoning – Rocks work in a pinch!

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nasty headache
Renown: Reviewer's Choice - She did send the child back to the city...and he'll most likely tell someone.
Collaboration:(Yes/No) No
Magic Experience?: (Yes/No) No
 ! Message from: Pig Boy
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Woe
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4


Thread Name: Letters, From the Grave, With Love
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Suicidal Ideation, references to terminal illness.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Woe
Writing: x 2
Deception: x 4
Skillplay
Writing: Novice
Rhetoric: Competent
Politics: Competent
Deception: Competent
Loot/Losses: -1 Tier 3 flat in the Carnelian Prism in Viden. - 1 Fleaface NPC and -1 Tier 7 Etzos house in the Citadel.
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Yes if you see something worth awarding!
Wealth Points: Job thread (kinda odd to use this one but w/e)
Collaboration: none
Magic Experience?: No


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Devin
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Ball
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned thread. My part's only 1.200+ words. I won't make a habit of submitting threads that are that short, I promise!
Skills Used: None. This is a non-lucid dream.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: .
Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: yes
Magic Experience?: no
 ! Message from: Pig Boy
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Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

Items

Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

Potions

N/A
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Balthazar Black
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Ash-Be Gone
City/Area: Faldrass Resort
Notes/Warnings: Helping people deal with the volcano fallout. Lots of dead bodies. Slavery referenced.
Balthazar Skills Used: Attunement (Master), Rupturing (Master), Defiance (Master), Unarmed Combat (Master), Strength (Competent), Endurance (Competent), Socialization (Competent), Discipline (Expert), Mediation, (Expert), Detection (Competent), Leadership (Competent), Politics (Untrained), Intelligence (Master)
Ari'sora Skills Used: Detection: Competent (26/250, 16 knowledges), Discipline: Competent (26/250, 30 knowledges), Endurance: Competent (26/250, 31 knowledges), Flying: Expert (76/250, 34 knowledges), Strength: Novice (25/250, 11 knowledges)

Requested Rewards:
Balthazar Knowledge: Politics - Being seen helping out is best
Intelligence - The Faldrass Resort used Slave labor prior to Arc 720
Intelligence x 3
Leadership x 4
Defiance (Dancing) - Manipulating a cloud of ash through a portal

Ari'sora Knowledge: Detection x 6
Discipline x 3
Strength x 1
Loot: No physical loot, but a lawman (Balthazar) now knows people have been breaking the law and means to follow up on it.
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable (Small to medium maybe?)
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: Yes (Any applicable magic)
 ! Message from: Pig Boy
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Mutations

  • Once Paradigm Is Removed: He glows faintly, his skin is warm and sometimes hot to the touch, and when he gets angry sparks literally fly off him. He's a the middle of a field of static electricity so every once in a while when you touch him, you get shocked. Fire leans towards Balthazar and droplets of water seem magnetically attracted to him. He has a series of cracks on his right pectoral that glow of soft emerald. His eyes and the cracks reaching down to his cheeks glow a dark blue. The etheric cracks spiderwebbing up his arms glow orange.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks in Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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