Review Request 2.1.3

[Velaine Krome]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Leap of Faith
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Defiance: Have Faith in the Elements
Defiance: Letting the Water Embrace You
Defiance: The Spark is Inside You
Defiance: Air is the Element of Freedom
Defiance: Sensing Air Currents
Discipline: Drown and Don’t Panic

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Elrik Brannan: Overly Concerned
Elrik Brannan: Has Water as Kin Element
Elrik Brannan: Initiated You Into Defiance

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: Yes, please!

[Virikai Talius]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Breaker of Hearts
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Minor violence and threats
Requested Rewards:

Maebella

Skill Knowledge (14):
Discipline: Calm Responses
Discipline: Holding Back Tears
Discipline: Knowing When to Surrender
Endurance: Abdominal Pain
Endurance: Better than a Slut
Endurance: Public Humiliation
Endurance: Standing Up to Threats
Etiquette: Foul Language is Not Necessary
Medicine: Symptoms of Abdominal Injury
Politics: The Importance of Dignity
Politics: The Importance of a Reputation
Rhetoric: Half-Truths
Rhetoric: Pleading with Another
Rhetoric: Speaking Your Mind

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Psychology: ‘Diamond Dust’
Self: Multiple Suitors
Virikai: Amused by My Situation?
Virikai: Experienced Medical Student
Virikai: Dangerous?
Virikai: Values Me
(NPC) Caesia: Attacked Me
(NPC) Caesia: Likes Jevan
(NPC) Jevan: Interested in Me

Virikai

Skill Knowledge (14):
Discipline: Holding Back Anger
Intimidation: Physical Control
Intimidation: Use of Expression
Intimidation: Use of Force
Intimidation: Use of Pain
Intimidation: Use of Threats
Intimidation: Use of Tone
Leadership: Tone of Authority
Leadership: Use of Imperatives
Medicine: Managing Abdominal Injury
Politics: The Importance of a Reputation
Rhetoric: Manipulation and Gaslighting
Rhetoric: Use of Sarcasm
Seduction: Putting Your Partner First

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Maebella: Attacked
Maebella: Reputation: ‘Frigid Bitch’
Maebella: Reputation: ‘Lordling’s Slut’
Maebella: Has Other Suitors
Psychology: ‘Diamond Dust’
Viden: Culture of Courtships
Viden: Culture of the Lower Classes

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Injury for Mae
Fame: Negative for Mae, Positive for Kai?
Collaboration: Yep
Magic EXP: No

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[Lei'lira]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: [Warrick] Living the Dream
City/Area: Warrick, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Nothing especially graphic, but horses are bred in thread.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)

Skill Knowledge

Animal Husbandry: Horse; the average gestation period is 320-362 trials, but most mares give birth within 330-345 trials; on average, a pregnant mare begins showing 180 trials into her pregnancy
Animal Husbandry: Horse; a mare's cycle runs 18-23 trials with her showing signs of being in heat for 3-7 trials, 5 being average
Animal Husbandry: Horse; the signs that a mare is close to foaling
Animal Husbandry: Horse; foal heat is the term for a mare's first heat after giving birth; it occurs 6-12 trials after a mare gives birth, and successfully breeding her during this time is the only absolute chance of getting a foal from her each arc
Animal Husbandry: Horse; mares due to foal should be separated from other horses both for the benefit of the mare and the safety of the soon to be birthed foal. In addition, separation allows the mare to be closely monitored for any problems that may occur while giving birth
Mount: Horse; a pregnant mare shouldn't be ridden past 180-240 trials into its pregnancy, and shouldn't be ridden again until its foal is at least 90 trials old

Non Skill Knowledge

Horses: mares are very devoted mothers; the best way to have a happy, contented mare and a calm, confidant foal is to leave mother and foal together uninterrupted
Horses: stallions can sire up to 200 foals per arc
Horses: only about one in 10,000 horses have twins, and even fewer survive birth

Lei'lira: hates the thought of Eri being a slave

Eri: hates being reminded that she is a slave
Eri: hates being pitied

Saikuru: is not poisonous, but misusing this plant can lead to dangerous pregnancies
Saikuru: a single dose made from one part of the plant (flowers, or leaves, or roots, etc.) used on a female, will guarantee that they will become pregnant, even if an animal is not in heat, or if a woman has given birth recently
Saikuru: using more than one part of the plant will make the drug more potent, and may cause multiple births, especially in animals who are prone to them, or people who have twins in their family; this will also cause animals that birth litters (like cats and dogs) to bear litters on the larger side of average for their species.
Saikuru: using the entire plant will ensure multiple births; horses will bear twin foals, women will give birth to twins or triplets with a small chance of quadruplets or quintuplets, and so on
Saikuru: works on both people, and animals



Loot: hopefully five foals that will be born in Zi'da 717
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Fame: none
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

Maebella!

[Gangui]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Tales of Misfortune
City/Area: Foster's Landing
Notes/Warnings: This thread contains a lot of terrible things in it, including murder, coercion, extreme right wing Etzori rhetoric, etc.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Finn
Skill:
Blades (Dagger): Cutting a bandit’s throat
Endurance: Sleeping on a thin mattress of straw.
Endurance: Taking a beating in silence.
Unarmed Combat: Full body tackle.
Unarmed Combat: Wildly kicking and punching.
Running: Fleeing from a skirmish.
Discipline: Silently obeying Gangui’s orders.
Strength: Carrying crates until your arms are sore.
Strength: Carrying buckets full of dirt.
Philosophy: Inoculated people are unconscious of their Immortal Worship.
Discipline: Hard work is rewarding.

Non-Skill
Gangui: Barbarous
Gangui: Wielder of Liberty
Gangui: A competent fighter
Gangui: Has your back.
Gangui: One hand giveth, one hand taketh.

Gangui
Skill:
Blades (Bastard Sword): Three-Step Bound Attack
Blades (Bastard Sword): Disarm by severing limbs.
Blades (Bastard Sword): The sweet spot where you can hit them, but they can’t hit you.
Blades (Bastard Sword): Parrying Maces
Blades (Bastard Sword): Smashing through a skull
Blades (Bastard Sword): Anti-Blunt Technique
Blades (Bastard Sword): Charging Strikes
Blades (Bastard Sword): Taking on three enemies at once
Blades (Bastard Sword): Sword Discipline.
Blades (Bastard Sword): Sweeping Strikes
Strength: Hard Work

Non-skill:
Finn: Bastard from Etzos
Finn: Problem child with a strong will
Finn: Has a lot of undiscovered potential
Finn: Headed down the path of a true Etzori.


Loot: Whatever reviewer deems fit. I'd like for Finn to receive some nel.
Injuries/Overstepping: Minor bruises etc, but not necissary since this was an old thread we barely finishe.
Fame: Positive for Gangui for taking on an orphan temporarily to instill hard work values. Positive for Finn for maintaining discipline. Positive for both for killing bandits.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Gangui]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Side Work
City/Area: Foster's Landing
Notes/Warnings: Talk of conspiracy and strong anti immortal rhetoric
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Gangui
Rhetoric: Using a single number to represent so much more
Negotiation: A solid threatening statement
Negotiation: Can't be bought.
Rhetoric: Hell or high-water
Rhetoric: Fearing only fear itself.
Business Management: Entering a deal without clearly defined terms.

NPC: Raimeus Madeus
Raimeus Madeus: Foreign Lord and Treasure Hunter

Loot: Chalice, but thats a story item and won't be in his possession long.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Positive for taking a job on good principles and not pure financial reasons
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Limbo]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Daddy in Training /viewtopic.php?f=263&t=10349
City/Area: Middlecleft, Etzos
Notes/Warnings: I marked it as mature. Its pretty mild until the third post, where Kovic swallows a whip and regurgitates it. Its nothing too foul, but if you've got the mind of a child, then don't read it.
Requested Rewards:

Whip: Overhead Flick
Whip: Proper grip and leverage
Whip: Proper timing
Whip: Cracking a bullwhip
Mortal Born Ability (Perfect Organism): Regurgitating Objects
Stealth: Swallowing one's weapon

Fame: Negative. Some guy is going to be out spreading rumours that Paplo wants to whip the children.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Patrick]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Finder's Keepers
City/Area: Foster's Landing
Notes/Warnings: Vividly suspenseful thread
Requested Rewards:

My boy Gangui:
Skill

• Tactics: Distracting Opponents
• Tactics: Rupture: Blinking
• Tactics: Being cautious.
• Blades (Bastard Sword): First Strike
• Blades (Bastard Sword): Confusion Spin Move
• Blades (Bastard Sword): Changing stances in motion
• Acrobatics: Wiggling out of grapple
• Acrobatics: Dodging Blink-moves
• Acrobatics: Jumping from prone into a battle stance
• Strength: Running in Armor
• Strength: Fighting off a Tackle

Generic

• Patrick: Known to Gangui as a lone asshole thief of no name who stole the chalice
• Raimeus: Made a sore deal with Gangui
• Tresah: Ruined everything

Patrick
Skill

• Tactics: Diversionary Excursions
• Field Craft: Bringing Essential Tools For the Job
• Tactics: Using Signal Fires For Heists
• Climbing: Using Tree Branches for Support
• Acrobatics: Catching Limbs When You Fall
• Sneak: Hiding Within Grass Thickets
• Sneak: Surprising Unsuspecting Targets
• Unarmed: Brawling: The Chokehold
• Unarmed: Brawling: Elbows Can Break An Armlock
• Rupturing: Blinking Behind Enemies
• Rupturing: Using Momentum For Better Impact
• Rupturing: Blinking Out of Dire Situations

Generic

• Raimues: Is Cold and Manipulative
• Crowley: Knows How Raimeus Thinks
• Tresah: Watching the Chalice
• Raimeus: Is Using Outside Forces For Personal Gain
• Raimeus: Determined To Outsmart You
• Gangui: The Leader of Sons of Justice
• Faction: The Sons of Justice
• Gangui: Credible With An Absurd Mustache
• Gangui: Is Insanely Idealistic
• Gangui: Stands Against Immortals Apparently
• Gangui: Good With A Bastard Sword
• Gangui: Fights With Honor Passionately
• Recipe: Setting Up A Fiery Cocktail
• Heist: Getting Cold Feet
• Heist Complete: Getting Cold Feet

Loot: Plus one crystal chalice for Patrick, minus from Gangui!
Injuries/Overstepping:
Patrick- A few bruises, and just a nick over his stomach area.
Fame: Up to you
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes

[Tio Silver]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Stalemate
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Sword Fighting
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Balancing on ship railings
Blades: Cutlass - Matching skill with strength
Blades: Cutlass - Swordfighting while balancing
Blades: Cutlass - Attacking all-out
Blades: Cutlass - How to riposte
Blades: Cutlass - It's a pain dueling ambidextrous people

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: -10 Taboo? I'm not sure, what seems appropriate for leading a pirate crew?
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Ellen'wyn]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Wolfgang, Part I
City/Area: Etzos' Frontier
Notes/Warnings: Job thread. The slightly detailed, gruesome-ish death of a deer.
Requested Rewards:

Ellen'wyn

Skill Knowledges: 6 total
Flying: Minor adjustments to feathers alter flight path
Flying: Circling back around
Hunting: Flying provides a distinct advantage
Hunting: Chasing down your prey
Hunting: Cutting the throat for a clean kill
Ranged (Shortbow): The impact of flying on aiming and shooting

Loot: 1 deer carcass
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Grader's choice
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Zip]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Connection
City/Area: Etzos - outlying cities
Notes/Warnings: ftb-ish
Requested Rewards:
Robin
Detection: Pieceing together the clues to find an answer
Detection: Understanding when to get serious
Detection: Sensing anxiety
Discipline: Holding back verbal retaliation
Discipline: Holding back the elements
Discipline: Quashing old hurts
Discipline: Banishing the specter of Hans
Intimidation: Pressing a social advantage

Zipper
Attunement: Frequency - Robin
Carpentry: Carving a little doll
Carpentry: Relief carving
Carpentry: Transmutation is its own carving knife
Carpentry: Using Corrosion to work away at wood
Carpentry: Using Sculpting to undo an error
Carpentry: Whittling
Carpentry: Wood carving
Robin: Has a divine necklace from Karem
Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes for Zip