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Nightshade Eld
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Thread Name: Learning Curve
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Teaching: Encouragement
Teaching: What students to yell at and what ones not to
Shield Combat: Blocking basic attacks
Shield Combat: Forcing a foe backwards
Strength: The effort to move a very large shield
Strength: Pushing backwards a young man

NPC: Zion
Zion: Starter Blade Student
Zion: Very weak

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Maybe a tiny amount for teaching a kid and acting friendly towards him
Collaboration: N/A
Magic EXP: N/A
Last edited by Nightshade Eld on Wed Aug 01, 2018 4:15 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 92
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Max
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Thread Name: Intruder Alert
City/Area: Slags Deep, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Language. Violence.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Diving Roll
Thrown Weapon (Dagger): Quick Transition Throw
Thrown Weapon (Dagger): Throwing Through a Portal
Thrown Weapon (Dagger): Hitting a Target in the Back
Thrown Weapon (Dagger): Hitting a Target in the Middle
Thrown Weapon (Dagger): Throwing from a Sitting Position

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruising
Renown: Probably slight for threatening listeners in Slags Deep.
Collaboration: Nah
Magic EXP: Negative
word count: 79
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Thread Name: The worst henchmen
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Not really
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Acrobatics: using people as stepping stones
  • Acrobatics: evading attacks from two different directions
  • Unarmed Combat (Agudo): Little damage at once, lot of damage over time
  • Unarmed Combat (Agudo): Striking elbows to numb them
  • Unarmed Combat (Agudo): Intercepting kicks with a knee to the thigh
  • Stealth: Breaking line of sight
Injuries/Overstepping: bruising
Renown: doubtful
Collaboration: no
word count: 73
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Hikaru
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Thread Name: More Pay More Responsibilities
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Business Management: Target your product to a specific market
Business Management: Written contracts aid clarity
Business Management: Considering roles and responsibilities
Business Management: Purchasing by weight and amount.
Jewelry Crafting: Chain Necklaces
Discipline: Not showing your annoyance

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: (No)
Magic EXP: (No
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Thread Name: Bone Collector
City/Area: Almund, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Caregiving: Covering someone suffering from cold chills
Caregiving: Pouring a cup of water to combat coughing fits
Discipline: Ignoring Unnecessary Distractions
Meditation: Regulating Breathing
Meditation: Clearing the Mind
Strength: Lifting with the Knees, not the back

Non-Skill Knowledge
Location: The Bones
Efah: Bone Reader
Efah: She's dying
Loot: +1 bone shard: tip of a rib, about the length of a thumbnail, covered in carved runes (reviewer's discretion on what they might mean since I didn't specify in-thread)
-1 GN for Reading
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Reviewer Discretion
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Mute on Sat Aug 11, 2018 11:29 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 118
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Thread Name: Hate It Til You Love It
City/Area: Hall Of Rule and Reprimand
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language

Just your typical three-post grinder slash flashback to Kasoria when he was young and innocent and... well, one of the two. Enjoy!

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Endurance: Ignoring Sweat in Your Eyes
Endurance: Fighting In Hot, Humid, Energy-Sapping Weather
Endurance: Don't Think, Don't Question, Just MOVE
Endurance: Developing Callused Knuckles
Endurance: Completing Clap Pushups in Zi'Da
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): X Block


Non-Skill Knowledge:
Blackguard Exercise Instructors: Crude, Brutal, and Proud Of Their Students
Blackguard Cadet Academy: Ruthless and Lengthy, But Creates The Best City Guardsmen


Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Not really applicable
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Kasoria on Thu Aug 09, 2018 3:44 pm, edited 2 times in total. word count: 127

Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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Thread Name: Dark Harvest
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Djinn left staff and the site, so I don't really know how to wrap this up without him. I guess Nav just wakes up?
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: N/A Just 15 XP
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
word count: 59
"At last. It has been too long since I have walked the face of this world. Too long have I been locked there, awaiting my champion to release me. My champion... This is you, daughter of Audrae. You have, whether knowingly or not, released me from my self imprisonment, and are here to fulfill the destiny I have seen written in the tapestry of nature. You, daughter of Audrae's daughter, will be my foothold in this world." - Belaera to The Nightingale, after the 600 arc imprisonment
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Thread Name: Run, Brannie, Run!
City/Area: Endor
Notes/Warnings: Memory
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Running: Running blindly
  • Acrobatics: Falling off an incline
  • Endurance: Keep running while tired
  • Endurance: keep moving while hurt
  • Stealth: Using the sound of streaming water to conceal the noise you make
  • Stealth: Wading through a river washes your scent away
Injuries/Overstepping: Probably scars, idk
Renown: nah
Collaboration: No
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word count: 65
Just because I shouldn't doesn't mean I won't.


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Mute
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Thread Name: Deliveries
City/Area: Almund
Notes/Warnings: A job thread, so probably not the most engaging
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Endurance: Regulating Breathing while Active
Etiquette: Handling Packages with Care
Etiquette: Waiting Patiently like a Messenger ought to
Logistics: Planning a Delivery Route
Navigation: Utilizing Street Signs
Running: Taking Longer Strides

Non-Skill Knowledge
Location: The Scalvoris Sapphire Inn
Location: Port Diablo
Location: The Merchant's Guild in Almund
Ceressa Reyes: Beautiful in Blue
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: reviewer's discretion
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Mute on Sat Aug 11, 2018 11:30 pm, edited 2 times in total. word count: 95
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Thread Name: Resizing Woes
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Business Management: 80/20 Rule
Business Management: Delegating
Business Management: Identify Time Wasters
Mathematics: Percentages
Jewelry Crafting: Resizing Rings
Jewelry Crafting: 22 Carat Gold

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: (No)
Magic EXP: (No)
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Last edited by Hikaru on Sat Aug 11, 2018 9:18 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 52
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