Lonan

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Lonan
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Lonan

Lonan
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Name: Lonan

Race: Mixed Race (Avriel x Human)

Date of Birth: 7th Cylus, 695

Marks: Krorros

Factions Joined: None

Languages Spoken: Fluent = Common. Broken = Dehasin


Appearance

Raised as a combat slave for the entertainment of others, Lonan is littered with scars from fights and training. His body is chiselled for combat with a focus on agility and explosive power. Despite the good shape he is in due to the rigorous training he is put through, Lonan has sickly grey skin from his Avriel heritage, as well as the dark grey wings along his back. This gives him a sickly and dark look at all times, leaving many concerned with his well being and health. Placed on his right shoulder is a tattoo to show the world he is owned and is used for fighting, signature to the man that bought him. No matter what armour he is tasked with wearing in the arenas and rings, Lonan never has the tattoo covered and is never allowed to do so while fighting.

Most prominent of his scars are the lashes down his back, coating his body all over.
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Lonan
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Personality


Quiet and focused, Lonan has spent his life with one goal in mind - surviving. There are very few words that leave the man's mouth, often opting to remain mute in a conversation unless spoken to. While he has little need to be polite to anyone, as he is rarely exposed to people that aren't his opponents, his discipline is trained relentlessly to keep him determined and strong-minded. While the man has no care for freedom and sees no reason to try for it, there is a burning isolation in his mind. To distract himself, however, his mind turns to whoever his next opponent will be. Every day he isn't fighting he is readying himself and training.

Things Lonan likes


Victory.

Things Lonan dislikes


Defeat.
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History



Lonan was, since birth, a slave. Sold by his parents to earn enough money for their own personal gain. Raised into a small and harsh labour encampment on the outskirts of the Eternal Empire, he was immediately raised with a family intended to care for him. Until the age of eight the young boy was treated well, fed well and given a good life from a Biqaj couple. While firm, they were kind and caring, raising him on a good lifestyle. Plenty of food, lots of care and play. Yet the fate that awaited him was much colder than the one he was led to believe. He never had any real freedom and he knew of the slaves that worked, but until he was old enough his life was good.

Yet the man and woman he loved as family were only there to raise him to be a slave, as he learned when he was finally taken from them and set to work. Despite his kicking and screaming, the slavers took him anyway, shipping him away to the mines. Hundreds of miles away from the land he once knew, Lonan was set to work immediately. He was naturally strong and durable, hardworking and powerful with his movements. Swinging down the pickaxe with power. But the trait that really attracted the attention of some was his colder demeanour. Uncaring and unwavering, keeping quiet to himself as the trauma of losing all he loved for this rough treatment shattered his mind. There was little left inside of him to read. But the situation only grew darker for the man, as the lashings began.

They started gently on the boy. But to keep his work hard the men in charge beat and lashed him without mercy. Scars quickly began to cover his back, many of them. Arcs passed of the same treatment and yet the willpower of Lonan only hardened with his body, taking a stronger shape and becoming more durable to the blows he received and the long days he had to work with no reward. But with how hardened his body was becoming, potential buyers of the slaves had their eyes set on him. Regular buyers came by and would watch for long periods of time to see if he would falter. Yet the young boy's stamina remained unbreaking, working tirelessly for as long as they had him work. Every part of him ached and pained, but it was nothing compared to the focus he felt.

During one of the viewings they had, Lonan was aside with other boys who were being given food. It was plentiful but disgusting. All of the younger boys sat along a long bench every day, shoulder to shoulder, eating. Beside him, one of the newer boys spoke with another, each discussing their plans for escape quietly while nobody was around to watch them. Talking about how they could leave this place of torment. Before long, one of them had turned to Lonan to ask for his help, saying that they needed his strength and willpower for the fight. But the ten-year-old boy kept his gaze forward and took another bite of food before placing his meal down on to the table. "No" he replied simply with a glance to the others. As they pleaded more and more Lonan found himself feeling a glimmer of anger at their hope. "There is no escape. You'll get everyone killed."

At those words, one of the boys stood up in frustration and stood out of the bench. Lonan knew what might be coming. But he didn't have to take it from these kids, they were not his masters or owners. Sat on the end seat, Lonan brought himself to his feet. For a trill those around assumed a fight was about to break out. But quickly, it turned into more than that. Lonan reached down by his side to grab his working pickaxe and, without any hesitation, swung it. With a bulk of force the pick planted straight through the side of the other slave's skull, the crack of bones filling the air as all those around stood up and backed away. Hearing the screams of pain the slavers came over immediately, seeing Lonan with a blood-covered pickaxe and a boy on the ground with skin and bone shattered and blood pouring from their mouth. Immediately the pickaxe was taken from Lonan who was dragged away.

But one of the men that had been here to view the slaves stopped the slavers from dragging him. He offered a lump sum of money, enough to pay for a new slave to replace both Lonan and the boy he had injured as well as purchasing Lonan. After coming to the right deal, that same night Lonan had been purchased and was being transported away from the place he had been staying, avoiding his punishment for the damage he had done. As they rode in the back of a carriage the man asked Lonan why he had attacked the boy. "I wanted to" he replied simply, voice hollow as he looked up at the man who bore a wide grin at the words that were said.

Following it, the man trained him for combat for Arcs, before he begun fighting for entertainment in Scalvoris. When Slavery was later abolished by Faith, however, Lonan was kept under the radar. Secretly, he fights for entertainment till this day.

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Lonan
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Profession: Slave/Combatant
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Skills & Knowledges


Skills
Skill Total Points Proficiency
Axes and Bludgeons: Morningstar (1) (25/250) Novice
Discipline (2) (15/250) Novice
Endurance (6) (25/100) Novice
Mining (3/250) Unskilled
Strength (15/250) Novice
Unarmed Combat: Wolves Claw (2) (10 + 3/250) Novice

Knowledges

Axes and Bludgeons: Morningstar

  • Axes and Bludgeons: Pickaxe: Pickaxes are Fine Killing Tools [PR]

Discipline

  • Discipline: Not Breaking Even Under Extreme Pain [PR]
  • Discipline: Maintaining The Status Quo [PR]

Endurance

  • Endurance: Taking beatings
  • Endurance: Lashings
  • Endurance: Blows to the body
  • Endurance: Training for long periods of time
  • Endurance: Maintaining breathing
  • Endurance: Repetitive Work Builds Stamina [PR]

Meditation

  • Meditation: Mental Endurance is Just as Important as Physical Endurance [PR]

Mining

  • Mining: Basics of Mining Ore [PR]

Strength


Unarmed: Wolves Claw

  • Unarmed - Wolves Claw: Striking at the throat
  • Unarmed - Wolves Claw: Throwing a hard punch

Non-Skill

  • (SP) Location: Scalvoris
  • (SP) Laws: Scalvoris
  • (SP) Layout: Scalvoris
  • (SP) Immortal: Raskalarn
  • (SP) Blessings: Raskalarn
  • (SP) Craos' Rules
  • (SP) Craos' Slaves
  • (SP) Slavery: Combat Arenas

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Lonan
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Race: Mer
Profession: Slave/Combatant
Renown: 0
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Wealth Tier: Tier 1

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Skill Point Ledger


Thread or Skill Name Points Adjustment Running Total
Racial Bonus - Endurance 25 0
Slave's Bonus - Unarmed: Wolfs Claw 10 0
Starter XP +50 50
Axes and Bludgeons: Morningstar -25 25
Discipline -10 15
Strength -15 0
Krorros Bonus - Unarmed: Wolfs Claw +3 0
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Marks



Might of the Conqueror
A skill that is passive in nature, Might of the Conqueror provides the blessed with a small, but noticeable, boost to their strength and endurance, so that they might be able to more easily perform tasks they would otherwise struggle with.

Mortal Foe
The will of Raskalarn is one of the conqueror and equally strong individuals will stand in the way of such ambition. Mortal Foe allows the marked to identify a worthy opponent as their mortal foe, as someone who must be overcome at all costs. Once that foe is recognized, and only one may be active a time, a Marked will always be aware of when their mortal foe is near, or within the same city. They will always feel a tug toward that fated confrontation and when it occurs, fate intervenes in such a way as to separate the two for their duel. Once used, this ability cannot be again till Mortal Foe has been dismissed.

Krorros Skills I
The character is granted an extra three skill points which may be spent only on the following skills: Any Weapons Skill (Including Seige Weapons), Unarmed Combat, Discipline, or Leadership. Any skill points granted by this Mark can break the 250 (or 100 if fast track) point cap on skills. Within these skills, the points may be spent how the pc chooses.
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Lonan
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  • 1x Set of clothing from Wealth Tier 1
  • 1x Set of shoes from Wealth Tier 1
Housing

Housed in a small shack in Egilrun, Scalvoris, Lonan is kept in poor conditions as a slave under the radar. Little is done with him, his room small with only a bed. Because of his status as a slave and the secrecy of this, Lonan rarely leaves his room without his master and, when he does, he says little to nothing.
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