[Approved] Korik

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Korik
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Posts: 102
Joined: Sat Jan 28, 2017 4:53 am
Race: Ithecal
Profession: Defender
Renown: 30
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Wealth Tier: Tier 5

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Korik

Korik Stahlmark
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Name: Korik Stahlmark

Race: Lotharro, bred

Date of Birth: Vhalar 38th, Arc 695

Marks: None

Factions Joined: None

Languages Spoken: Fluent- Common, Broken- Haltunga


Appearance

Korik is handsome man with a strong, well defined jawline, high cheekbones and taunting grin. The sharp canine's make his smile appear more intimidating. He has dark brown hair that varies in length during the seasons, when the sun shines high in the sky his hair is kept short and during the colder times his hair reaches his shoulders. His deep and dark indigo eyes shine brightly with purpose and determination. He stands tall at six foot six inches and looks nearly identical to his twin brother, matching him in muscles mass and strength. He has scars across his body from sparring with his brother and defending his home from the monsters. Across his right pectoral muscle, a mark designed as a shield with two axes crossed behind it was displayed proudly.
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Korik
Approved Character
Posts: 102
Joined: Sat Jan 28, 2017 4:53 am
Race: Ithecal
Profession: Defender
Renown: 30
Character Sheet
Wealth Tier: Tier 5

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Re: Korik


Korik is the embodiment of outgoing, he actively seeks the attention and approval of others. His personality tends to rival his brothers. While his brother is one to keep people at a safe distance, Korik is quick to embrace and celebrate with another. Often leading his friends and family in dances of battle and celebration. Following the path of the Defender, he enjoys a challenge and standing up for what he believes in. Not one to back down from a fight, he takes pride in standing next to his brother and defending the rest of his people. Those outside his race see him as loud and boisterous, though the members of his race view him as nothing more than one of their own. Korik has a need for approval and acceptance, while his parents raised him with love along side of his brother. Korik has always felt a greater need for approval. He constantly seeks challenges and find a way out of his fathers shadow.
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Korik
Approved Character
Posts: 102
Joined: Sat Jan 28, 2017 4:53 am
Race: Ithecal
Profession: Defender
Renown: 30
Character Sheet
Wealth Tier: Tier 5

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Re: Korik


Korik was born to Gwenael and Taelin of Clan Stahlmark of Uthaldria as the youngest of a pair of identical twin sons by a few minutes. It was up until the age of five when he and his brother had to follow their own paths. Drawn by the ways of combat, he joined the path of the defender. The idea of using his giant ax to protect the people of Ulthaldria brought pride to him and honor. Not unlike his brother, Korik enjoyed the feeling of battle against the monsters of the fields. Though the training of the Defenders was harsh, Korik took pride in the suffering. He knew that once he was done, he would be an ever greater man than before. As he trained Korik's abilities in combat, both unarmed and with a broad ax, so did his love for showing off. The once quiet kid grew into a towering man of determination and pride.

Korik spent a lot of his youth with his twin brother, being with him when he had been inducted into the magic of Defiance by Halvdan Firespeaker. Korik had experienced little fear as he was growing up, but in the moment of his brothers path until magic, he experienced a great fear in losing his brother. As the twins grew up in Uthaldria, Korik's love for celebration grew. At the age of ten his mother taught him how to dance. Korik enjoyed the movement that flowed with the beat of the music much like battle itself.

He spent the other half of his childhood training in unarmed combat with his father and with his mentor Tardain Starindar. Between the bruises he earned from sparring with his father and the scars from his mentor, Korik felt that he had grown into his own. One day of training with his mentor they were attacked by a large Fen Lokk. The two fought side by side until they had finished the beast off. Returning to the city

Korik had learned of Halvdan's death from his brother when he had returned from a hunt. Seeing his brother hobble into town with a limp, Korik had moved to help him quickly. Shortly after Kaelrik had explained to him what happened, his brother informed him and their parents that he wished to travel away from Uthaldria. Without a second thought, Korik told his brother that he would travel with him. He believed that it would be a way for him to grow as a man and escape the shadow of his father.

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Korik
Approved Character
Posts: 102
Joined: Sat Jan 28, 2017 4:53 am
Race: Ithecal
Profession: Defender
Renown: 30
Character Sheet
Wealth Tier: Tier 5

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Re: Korik


Skills
Skill Total Points Proficiency
Axes: Broad Axe (30/250) Competent
Endurance (30/250) Competent
Strength - FT (40/100) Competent
Intimidation (20/250) Novice
Investigation (5/2500 Novice
Unarmed Combat: Grappling (13/250) Novice
Dancing (11/250) Novice
Knowledges

Combat

Unarmed Combat: Pulverizing a target to secure a kill (IN)
Unarmed Combat: Pushing with your weight
Grappling: Taking an opponent to the ground
Axes: Advantage of an over head strike.
Axes: Not being thrown off by weight
Axes: Side swings, more speed less power
Axes: Advantage of a two handed grip
Axes: Broadax: Using a broadax defensively
Axes: Broadax: How to wield a broadax to shield another
Axes: Broadax: Intimidation can augment a broadax's effectiveness
Axes: Broadax: Typically not used in city areas
Shields: Bracing for a hit
Shields: Deflecting hits

Non-Combat

Intimidation: Stand tall and look scary
Intimidation: A weapon makes a great aid
Intimidation: A loud voice gathers attention
Intimidation: Stand tall and don’t back down
Intimidation: Scaring off with the Maggot connoisseur
Intimidation: Scaring off the Maggot connoisseur's bodyguard
Intimidation: Knowing when to reel it back
Intimidation:Size matters
Intimidation: Threaten with violence
Intimidation: Honest threats get you farther
Intimidation: Attempting to make an anonymous person identify themselves
Intimidation: Tone of voice is extremely important
Intimidation: Knowing the difference between firmness, and aggression
Dancing: Moving the hips
Dancing: Rhythmic, Like Battle (IN)
Hunting: Taking down prey with a partner
Hunting: Tall grass provides stealth
Stealth: Moving slowly to prevent chainmail noise.
Investigation: Conversations in a bar can turn into a lead
Investigation: Specialists make good contacts for a lead
Investigation: Aiding people can lead to rewards
Investigation: Mages hold many secrets
Investigation: Following a lead from a source
Investigation: A trade for information
Investigation: Completing a task for information
Strength: Easily carrying heavy buckets
Strength: Carrying Sybil to an inn.
Strength: Wielding strength to fuel Intimidation
Strength: Effectively wielding a broadax
Strength: Carrying a cask in one arm
Strength: Moving a person with ease
Strength: Massages can make muscles stronger
Strength: Good rest is important for strength
Strength: Using errands as strength exercises
Endurance: Shrugging of a crossbow bolt to the shoulder
Endurance: A rush of adrenaline to deal with the cold
Endurance: Carrying Sybil a long distance
Endurance: Lugging a broadax around Viden
Endurance: Walking long distances with a barrel
Endurance: Proper kinesthetics for one armed lifting
Endurance: Distractions can make strain bearable
Endurance: Adjusting is important to keep energy up
Endurance: Not trying to do too much too quickly
Seduction: Subtle hints and flirting, a good starting point
Seduction: Teasing with muscle mass
Seduction: Telling stories can lead to affection
Seduction: A firm hand in the right place
Detection: Trusting your instincts
Detection: Feeling eyes on your back
Detection: Listening to the sound around you
Detection: Trust more than your eyes
Detection: Sensing disturbances in a crowd

Magic

Domain: Defiance (IN)

People/Creatures

Kaelrik: Mage (IN)
Beast: Fen Lokk (IN)
Zarik: A Mage of Quacia
Zarik: Secret holder
Zarik: One of three. A triplet

Other

Quacia: Home of Slavers
Quacia: Shanty, filled with the poor
Eastern Gauthrel: Home to many beasts
Uthaldria: Clan Stahlmark (IN)
Kriger: Path of the Defender (IN)
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Korik
Approved Character
Posts: 102
Joined: Sat Jan 28, 2017 4:53 am
Race: Ithecal
Profession: Defender
Renown: 30
Character Sheet
Wealth Tier: Tier 5

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Re: Korik



Here is where you record all the skill points you receive (Startup XP, CS Approval Rewards and, of course, Thread Reviews!) and all the points you spend on your skills. Again, below is an example which you can edit.

Thread or Skill Name Points Adjustment Running Total
Starter XP +50 50
Axes: Broad Axe -10 40
Unarmed Combat: Grappling -10 30
Dancing -5 25
Intimidation -10 15
Strength -15 0
Endurance - RB -25 0
Dancing [IN] +3 0
Unarmed Combat: Grappling [IN] +3 0
Axes: Broad Axe +3 0
Memory: The Hunt +15 5 Endurance, 5 Strength, 5 Axes: Broad Axe
A trail run cold +15 5 Ax: Broad ax, 10 Intimidation
Slavers in Shanty +15 7 Ax:Broad Ax, 5 Strength, 3 Dancing
Of wretched machinations +15 10 Strength, 5 Investigation
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Korik
Approved Character
Posts: 102
Joined: Sat Jan 28, 2017 4:53 am
Race: Ithecal
Profession: Defender
Renown: 30
Character Sheet
Wealth Tier: Tier 5

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Re: Korik


  • 2 Outfits made of leather. Dyed black. (Shirt, pants, undergarments, boots.)
  • 2 Outfits made of fur. (Shirt, Pants undergarments, boots.)
  • 20 trials' worth of food. (Average quality)
  • Basic Quality Chainmail armor
  • Basic quality Wooden shield with a metal edge
  • Broad Axe
  • Short sword
Housing

400sqft shack in Quacia.
Last edited by Korik on Thu Apr 04, 2019 11:20 pm, edited 2 times in total. word count: 50
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Korik
Approved Character
Posts: 102
Joined: Sat Jan 28, 2017 4:53 am
Race: Ithecal
Profession: Defender
Renown: 30
Character Sheet
Wealth Tier: Tier 5

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Re: Korik



Current Wealth Tier:
Item Adjustment Total WP
Starting Package Tier 5 (66 WP) 66
word count: 16
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Korik
Approved Character
Posts: 102
Joined: Sat Jan 28, 2017 4:53 am
Race: Ithecal
Profession: Defender
Renown: 30
Character Sheet
Wealth Tier: Tier 5

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Re: Korik



Memory:
Stand up Korik. 10th of Vhalar, 710
Passion, Pride and Freedom Kaelrik and Korik. 1st Ashen, 714
The Plunge Gennadiya and Korik, 30 Trial of Zi’da, Era 716

Current:

Heretics, Sinners, & Slavers Oh My! Dosen and Korik, Cylus 9th, 718
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Korik
Approved Character
Posts: 102
Joined: Sat Jan 28, 2017 4:53 am
Race: Ithecal
Profession: Defender
Renown: 30
Character Sheet
Wealth Tier: Tier 5

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Re: Korik



Memory: The Hunt Kaelrik and Korik, 14th Vhalar, 712
Memory: A trail run cold Sybil and Korik, Ashan 50th, 717
Slavers in Shanty Zarik and Korik, Morning, 42 Ashan, Arc 719
[Devil's Advocate] Of wretched machinations Sybil and Korik. Ashan 51st, 717
Last edited by Korik on Tue May 14, 2019 5:30 pm, edited 3 times in total. word count: 46
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Korik
Approved Character
Posts: 102
Joined: Sat Jan 28, 2017 4:53 am
Race: Ithecal
Profession: Defender
Renown: 30
Character Sheet
Wealth Tier: Tier 5

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Re: Korik


Item/ Thread Renown Total
Starting Renown +20 20
A trail run cold +10 30
Slavers in Shanty +5 35
Of wretched machinations +10 45
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