Danaokh - Revision history

TechGuy: /* The Motion Branch */

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‎The Motion Branch

TechGuy: /* The Motion Branch */

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‎The Motion Branch

TechGuy: /* The Life Branch */

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‎The Life Branch

TechGuy: /* The Transformation Power */

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‎The Transformation Power

TechGuy: /* The Transformation Power */

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‎The Transformation Power

TechGuy: /* Water Branch */

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‎Water Branch

TechGuy: /* Water Branch */

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‎Water Branch

TechGuy: /* Solitude Branch */

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‎Solitude Branch

TechGuy: /* Solitude Branch */

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‎Solitude Branch

TechGuy: /* Solitude Branch */

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‎Solitude Branch

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 | style="background-color:#34cdf9; color:#000000;" | Tier 5
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-| style="background-color:#34cdf9; color:#000000;" | A Moments of Permanence
+| style="background-color:#34cdf9; color:#000000;" | <span style="color:lightblue;weight: bold;">A Moments of Permanence</span>
 | style="background-color:#34cdf9; color:#000000;" | 125
-| style="background-color:#34cdf9; color:#000000;" | The ability to create "moments of permanence" - turning fleeting states into enduring conditions. Rather than simply freezing things in time, this power allows the Effigy Bearer to take temporary states and make them persist indefinitely. Make an illness permanent (this might effectively 'pause' a deadly disease in it's current progressive state, preventing death, or make a simple cough last forever), preserve food in its current fresh state forever, lock a memory in someone's mind so it is crystal clear forever, make someone feel happiness or sadness forever, etc.
+| style="background-color:#34cdf9; color:#000000;" | <span style="color:lightblue;weight: bold;">The ability to create "moments of permanence" - turning fleeting states into enduring conditions. Rather than simply freezing things in time, this power allows the Effigy Bearer to take temporary states and make them persist indefinitely. Make an illness permanent (this might effectively 'pause' a deadly disease in it's current progressive state, preventing death, or make a simple cough last forever), preserve food in its current fresh state forever, lock a memory in someone's mind so it is crystal clear forever, make someone feel happiness or sadness forever, etc.
 Limitations:
 * The anchored state must be physically possible in the first place (if a thing cannot float, it cannot be made to do so by pausing it mid fall) and is a 'state' not a complex series of events.
 * Requires direct physical contact to establish.
-* The Effigy Bearer can only lock one state into place per season.
+* The Effigy Bearer can only lock one state into place per season.</span>
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-| style="background-color:#34cdf9; color:#000000;" | Hypnotic Stare
+| style="background-color:#34cdf9; color:#000000;" | A Moments of Permanence
 | style="background-color:#34cdf9; color:#000000;" | 125
-| style="background-color:#34cdf9; color:#000000;" | The Dragonling with its serpentine eyes can cause anyone that looks into its eyes to become paralyzed for two bits.
+| style="background-color:#34cdf9; color:#000000;" | The ability to create "moments of permanence" - turning fleeting states into enduring conditions. Rather than simply freezing things in time, this power allows the Effigy Bearer to take temporary states and make them persist indefinitely. Make an illness permanent (this might effectively 'pause' a deadly disease in it's current progressive state, preventing death, or make a simple cough last forever), preserve food in its current fresh state forever, lock a memory in someone's mind so it is crystal clear forever, make someone feel happiness or sadness forever, etc.
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 | style="background-color:#34cdf9; color:#000000;" | Tier 5

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 It can be as large as an average bear, and as small as a mouse.
-The Child of Creation shares its experience and acts as a separate set of eyes and ears for the effigy-bearer, like any familiar.
+The Child of Creation shares its experience and acts as a separate set of eyes and ears for the effigy-bearer, like any familiar <span style="color:lightblue;weight: bold;">and it can also use Water Armory if this power is held by the Bearer</span>.
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 | style="background-color:#34ff34;" | Tier 2

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 * The Bearer can bring anyone back to life, if a piece of their body is presented to them. This ability can be invoked once an arc. They do this by shedding a single salty tear on the body part, which instantly regenerates them to the point life. They do not retain any memories of their time in any afterlife, however.
-* The Bearer can encircle any group of individuals with their massive serpentine body, and in that circle form a temporary bubble of their Personal Domain (that covered the Effigy Bearer also), able to apply all applicable powers to said small area (including Fortress of Solitude) until the Bearer breaked the circle.
+* <span style="color:lightblue;weight: bold;">The Bearer can encircle any group of individuals with their massive serpentine body, and in that circle form a temporary bubble of their Personal Domain (that covered the Effigy Bearer also), able to apply all applicable powers to said small area (including Fortress of Solitude) until the Bearer breaked the circle.</span>
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 | Form of Danaokh
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-|The apex of all the powers at the Bearers disposal, this power allows the Bearer to take on the form of the Indomitable tide herself. When this power is used, the Bearer becomes a dragon that is identical to Danaokh in appearance, but about a fifth as long and as wide. The only difference, is that they maintain the same face of their original form.  So a cadouri otter that becomes an Effigy-Bearer would look in all other ways like Danaokh, except with a otter head. Finally, 4 powers are also unique to this form and can be activated at will while the Bearer is transformed.
+|The apex of all the powers at the Bearers disposal, this power allows the Bearer to take on the form of the Indomitable tide herself. When this power is used, the Bearer becomes a dragon that is identical to Danaokh in appearance, but about a fifth as long and as wide. The only difference, is that they maintain the same face of their original form.  So a cadouri otter that becomes an Effigy-Bearer would look in all other ways like Danaokh, except with a otter head. Finally, 4 powers are also unique to this form and can be activated at will while the Bearer is transformed:
--The Bearer passively can quarter long-range travel in water.  This stacks with Fast Travel.  So they can travel at 1/8th time in water.
--All water that touches around 100 yards around the form of the Bearer, at any point of their body (which is quite a large area all told), answers the commands of the Bearer, as an ascended form of Elemental Manipulation.
+* The Bearer passively can quarter long-range travel in water. This stacks with Fast Travel. So they can travel at 1/8th time in water.
--The Bearer can bring anyone back to life, if a piece of their body is presented to them.  This ability can be invoked once an arc.  They do this by shedding a single salty tear on the body part, which instantly regenerates them to the point life.  They do not retain any memories of their time in any afterlife, however.
--The Bearer can encircle any group of individuals with their massive serpentine body, and in that circle nobody can disrupt the solitude of those within.
+* All water that touches around 100 yards around the form of the Bearer, at any point of their body (which is quite a large area all told), answers the commands of the Bearer, as an ascended form of Elemental Manipulation.
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 | style="background-color:#cb0000;" | Conjure Water
 | style="background-color:#cb0000;" | 25
-| style="background-color:#cb0000;" | The Effigy-Bearer can conjure an amount of water equal to a small lake, around 100 meters in diameter, and 25 feet at its deepest. <span style="color:lightblue;weight: bold;">Furthermore, if the Effigy Bearer has any of the following powers, while a being is immersed in these waters, a person can benefit from the effects of them: Breath of Sustenance, Fangs of Sustenance, Nourishing Venom, Accelerating Breath, Slow Breath as desired by the Bearer and the Bearer can apply their Ambient Alertness to anything within these water regardless of range (if they have this power).</span>
+| style="background-color:#cb0000;" | The Effigy-Bearer can conjure an amount of water equal to a small lake, around 100 meters in diameter, and 25 feet at its deepest. <span style="color:lightblue;weight: bold;">Furthermore, if the Effigy Bearer has any of the following powers, while a being is immersed in these waters, a person can benefit from the effects of them: Breath of Sustenance, Fangs of Sustenance, Nourishing Venom, Accelerating Breath, Slow Breath as desired by the Bearer and the Bearer can apply their Ambient Alertness to anything within these water regardless of range (if they have this power).
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 | style="background-color:#cb0000;" | Tier 1
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 | style="background-color:#cb0000;" | <span style="color:lightblue;weight: bold;">Water Denizen</span>
 | style="background-color:#cb0000;" | 25
-| style="background-color:#cb0000;" | <span style="color:lightblue;weight: bold;">As an embodiment of Danaokh, not only the source of creation itself but a denizen of the sea, this passiv e ability allows the Effigy Bearer to project enough of the great dragon's presence to earn the respect of anything that swims the seas. It might be awe, respect or fear, whether they want to worship, eat or run from the Bearer, but creatures of the sea will recognise the Bearer as 'one of them' on some level.
+| style="background-color:#cb0000;" | <span style="color:lightblue;weight: bold;">As an embodiment of Danaokh, not only the source of creation itself but a denizen of the sea, this passive ability allows the Effigy Bearer to project enough of the great dragon's presence to earn the respect of anything that swims the seas. It might be awe, respect or fear, whether they want to worship, eat or run from the Bearer, but creatures of the sea will recognise the Bearer as 'one of them' on some level.
 This is not to say the Bearer is someone to 'obey', however unless there is good reason for creatures not to do so, the Bearer is usually allowed to pass through the seas, interact with creatures and go about their business unchallenged, trusted by default and considered 'not food' by predators, etc. In a combat situation, whee a fish might usually just run, they still would, but where sharks might frenzy around blood, they would still aboid biting the Bearer.

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 | style="background-color:#ffc702;" | Comfort in Solitude
 | style="background-color:#ffc702;" | 100
-| style="background-color:#ffc702;" | The Effigy-Bearer can now summon any mundane physical 'thing' within their domain. Nothing generate within the domain can leve said domain, but while inside, it is is every possible way 'real'. The term "any mundane physical 'thing'" refers to the inability to create magical items etc. Anything from a table to a house, with simple or complex design can be created at the speed of thought.
+| style="background-color:#ffc702;" | The Effigy-Bearer can now summon any mundane physical 'thing' within their domain. Nothing generated within the domain can leave said domain, but while inside, it is in every possible way 'real'. The term "any mundane physical 'thing'" refers to the inability to create magical items etc. Anything from a table to a house, with simple or complex design can be created at the speed of thought.
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 | style="background-color:#ffc702;" | Tier 5
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 | style="background-color:#ffc702;" | Personal Ecosystem
 | style="background-color:#ffc702;" | 125
-| style="background-color:#ffc702;" | The Effigy Bearer's Personal Domain can now take on the environmental ecosystem of any known, natural ecosystem. Dense jungle, the ocean, a dessert, even a city. The sky will appear above them and the limits of the domain are now bound only be impassable and mysterious forces rather then simple physical walls, leaving an endless continued vista to enjoy (even if you cannot visit it). With this power comes an increase of domain size by a factor of 10. Further to this, powers from the Creation Sub-Branch are considered almost unlimited specifically within the Personal Domain (if you have them). This means the creatures can be created, wired and wonderful as they might be and with the only limitation being that nothing created within the Domain in this way can leave the domain (ever and for any reason) the wildlife of the domain can literally be born from the imagination of the Effigy Bearer.
+| style="background-color:#ffc702;" | The Effigy Bearer's Personal Domain can now take on the environmental ecosystem of any known (to the Effigy Bearer), natural ecosystem. Dense jungle, the ocean, a dessert, even a city. The sky will appear above them and the limits of the domain are now bound only by impassable and mysterious forces rather then simple physical walls, leaving an endless continued vista to enjoy (even if you cannot visit it). With this power comes an increase of domain size by a factor of 10. Further to this, powers from the Creation Sub-Branch are considered almost unlimited specifically within the Personal Domain (if you have them). This means that creatures can be created, wired and wonderful as they might be and with the only limitation being that nothing created within the Domain in this way can leave the domain ('''ever''' and '''for any reason''') the wildlife of the domain can literally be born from the imagination of the Effigy Bearer and will obey their every whim at all times.
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 | style="background-color:#ffc702;" | Tier 5
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 | style="background-color:#ffc702;" | Fortress of Solitude
 | style="background-color:#ffc702;" | 125
-| style="background-color:#ffc702;" | The Effigy Bearer's Personal Domain and everything within it is now optionally (at the Effigy Bearer's discretion) totally undetectable by any means. Noone and nothing (with the notable possible exception of the great beings of Idalos themselves, like Immortals and Dragons) can locate the domain or anything within it. Further to this, while inside the fortress, if the door to the outside world is closed, time can pass more slowly of quickly inside the domain than it does outside. Time can pass up to four times as fast (to 'fast forward' time outside) or half as fast (too slow time down outside) and affects everyone and everything inside the domain equally.
+| style="background-color:#ffc702;" | The Effigy Bearer's Personal Domain and everything within it is now optionally (at the Effigy Bearer's discretion) totally undetectable by any means. Noone and nothing (with the notable possible exception of the great beings of Idalos themselves, like Immortals and Dragons) can locate the domain or anything within it. Further to this, while inside the fortress, if the door to the outside world is closed, time can pass more slowly or quickly inside the domain than it does outside. Time can move a quarter as fast inside (relatively time moves four times as fast outside as inside) or twice as fast (time moving slower on the outside by about half) and affects everyone and everything inside the domain equally. To be clear, this affects the flow of time inside only, and the effect on the outside is only a consequence of relativity.
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 | style="background-color:#ffc702;" | The Effigy Bearer's Personal Domain now has object permanence. Between uses, anything left in the domain, will remain in said domain if left behind for future use. Thing taken into the domain, can be removed again at will.
 The Effigy Bearer is also able to create small, permanent pocket dimensions, attached to items or bags that can be used for storage. These specific, permanent pocket dimension can only be created once per cycle and work as per the Domain Bag for all rulings.
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 | style="background-color:#ffc702;" | Tier 2

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 The entrance can take any thematic form, (a floating portal, or replacing an open door or achaway) as long as it makes sense to do so, is always obviously something a bit odd on entry and will always exit to where it was entered from (though this location can change between uses as long as the Effigy Bearer is not inside).
-The domain is a simple stone room that is no larger than 3 meters cubed. When leaving the domain and closing the door, anything left inside the domain is ejected harlessly onto the floor around where the door was.
+The domain is a simple underwater cavern that is no larger than 3 meters cubed. When leaving the domain and closing the door, the Bearer is always completely dry and anything left inside the domain is ejected harmlessly onto the floor around where the door was.
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 | style="background-color:#ffc702;" | Tier 1
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 | style="background-color:#ffc702;" | Domain Permanence
 | style="background-color:#ffc702;" | 25
-| style="background-color:#ffc702;" | The Effigy Bearer's Personal Domain now has object permanence. Between uses, anything left in the domain, will remain in said domain if left behind for future use.
+| style="background-color:#ffc702;" | The Effigy Bearer's Personal Domain now has object permanence. Between uses, anything left in the domain, will remain in said domain if left behind for future use. Thing taken into the domain, can be removed again at will.
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 | style="background-color:#ffc702;" | Tier 2