Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Kyreen
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: That was then
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Study thread
Requested Rewards:
Skill knowledge
Deception: making one action look like another
Detection: spotting when someone can't back up a claim
Politics: Tyrants get pulled down - eventually
Politics: Tyrants are just bullies with more power
Psychology: Bullies always go for the weakest link
Psychology: standing up to bullies


Non-skill knowledge
History: Look at the big picture, not the small details
History: Not as useless as some think
History: comparisons between past and present shed new light on current events
History: knowing the past helps avoid repeats

Renown: This is Kyreen's final step to getting her Letter qualification in History
Collaboration: No
Magic: No
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: Blind as a Bat
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
knowledge:

Hone: Using enhanced smell to find food
Hone: It’s not about penmanship, it’s about understanding the magic
Discipline: Coming to terms with your disability
Navigation: Making your way around a city blindly
Endurance: Stubbing a toe
Meditation: Processing magnified senses

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Using existing magic in a new way

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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: Old Lady Strikes Again
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
knowledge:

Intimidation: Point fingers
Intimidation: Stand tall
Intimidation: Seem confident
Intimidation: Take up as much space as possible
Intimidation: Block someone’s path
Deception: Use self-referencing words to sound more truthful

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Head pain? maybe a few days
Renown: Yes, 5-10 duel
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: no

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Aetu
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: Maniacal Laughter
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
knowledge:

Intimidation: Maniacal Laughter
Intimidation: Adding malicious tone to your voice
Intimidation: Think of causing pain to be more realistic
Intimidation: Tilting backwards during an evil laugh to add flavor
Medicine: General skeletal structure

Leading the Blind: People are oddly receptive to my suggestions on where to look

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: hoarse throat few days?
Renown: maybe 5 for being that crazy girl laughing maniacally
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: no

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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: Athart's Got Talent
City/Area: Athart
Notes/Warnings: My amateurish attempts at lyrics.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Discipline: Maintaining composure in the face of a lesser being's insolence.
Drumming: Maintaining tempo
Singing: Vocalizing without words.
Singing: Setting the mood with vocal tone
Singing: Improvising lyrics to the audience.
Singing: Maintaining non-verbal melody


Loot: Tip on where to start his Bard Career.
Injuries/Overstepping: Injured pride.
Renown: 10 for performing in front of a large crowd.
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Heal
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: -
Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Nope
Magic Experience?: Nope
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: Harvest Dawn
City/Area: Beacon, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Job thread
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledges

Agriculture: how to tell if corn is ripe
Agriculture: how to harvest corn
Agriculture: types of corn; sweet, dent, flint, flour, and waxy
Agriculture: how to tell if wheat is ripe
Agriculture: how to harvest wheat
Gardening: types of gardens

Non Skill Knowledges

Immortal: Qylios
Qylios: Immortal of Bonds, Leadership, Light, and Courage

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Possibly slight (5) for being one of the farmers seen walking to the fields during the festival.
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Rewards Requested
Thread Name:Elements on Ice
City/Area: Scalv
Notes/Warnings: Light violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Endurance: Contending with the cold on Ishallar
Leadership: Telling a subordinate to stop complaining
Leadership: Keeping a new recruit calm
Navigation: Keeping your bearings in snow
Socialization: Explaining magic to a stranger
Stealth: Hiding sources of light that could expose you
Stealth: Allow the quietest member of the team to take point
Stealth: Communicating silently with your team

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: 5 For doing an Element's Mission if you think it's appropriate
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?:No
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

This thread is now closed. PLEASE CONTINUE TO REVIEW FROM HERE UNTIL THIS THREAD IS COMPLETED

New thread is here

ALSO PLEASE NOTE: New wealth system = new review request - players must be using this. It is in the new thread. Thanks so much for all you do!
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