Thread Review
What a lovely, peaceful threa... just kidding. Kasoria has some great patience to deal with the boredom of a ship-in-wait and then the mockery of the pirates thinking he's a simpleton. Violence was well-executed, though it's a shame that Rorom wasn't able to get involved more... but I suppose he'll get the bounty anyway. I don't know whether Rorom's lucky or not to have brought Kasoria along for the job, but either way, he's gotten to see a different sort of fight than what he's used to.
This thread should probably be attributed/tagged as Mature.
Great job and enjoy your rewards!
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Total Word Count: 8,997 words.
Review Request Link: viewtopic.php?f=242&t=16103&p=114746#p114759This thread should probably be attributed/tagged as Mature.
Great job and enjoy your rewards!
PM me if you have any questions, issues or concerns.
Total Word Count: 8,997 words.
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