Review Request 2.2.0

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Re: Review Request 2.2.0

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Thread Name: Guard Duty
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: mentions sex

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Seduction: A dose of reality to break the spell
Persuasion: Asking someone to tell the truth
Persuasion: Convincing someone not to throw their life away
Persuasion: Stop crying, there’s still hope
Tactics: Planning an escape
Tactics: Find the weakest link


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: up to u
Wealth Points: N/A

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Kisaik Glory
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Re: Review Request 2.2.0

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Thread Name: Spirited away on a ray of moonlight
City/Area: Yaralon and the Spines
Notes/Warnings: Egg napping and other tiny adventures
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Animal Husbandry: Egg napping in order to raise them oneself.
Etiquette: Addressing a stranger.
Mount (Avian) Riding in a eagle's talons.
Mount (Feline): Dismounting quickly
Strength: Lifting a rock with your bare arms.
Strength: Leverage can improve your efforts to move things.

Loot: one fertilized harpy eagle egg, and one unfertilized egg.
Injuries/Overstepping: Maybe some armor scratches.
Renown: Rescued a pair of harpy eagle eggs as well as a young tunawa.
Wealth Points: City wage applied for.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Llyr Llywelyn
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Re: Review Request 2.2.0

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Thread Name: II. Basic Defense One
City/Area: Quacia, The Gleam
Notes/Warnings: none.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Blades (Dagger): How to swing a dagger
Blades (Dagger): Blade is an Extension of the Body
Blades (Dagger): Aggressive Offense.
Blades (Dagger): Practice, Practice, Practice!
Unarmed Combat: A good fighting stance helps evenly distribute weight and maintain balance
Unarmed Combat: Repetition creates needed muscle memory

Non-Skill:
(NPC) Devin: An excellent sparring partner.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Wald Lowca
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Re: Review Request 2.2.0

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Thread Name: (Prison) Chains and broken souls
City/Area: Viden Prison
Notes/Warnings: Vomiting and drugs
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Sybil

Medicine: Application of smelling salts
Medicine: The lingering effects of sedatives on the body
Psychology: The lingering effects of sedatives on the mind
Psychology: Diagnosis: Agoraphobia
Psychology: Lack of water decreases cognitive function
Psychology: Lack of food decreases cognitive function
Psychology: Psychotic breaks are likely, when forced to face endless triggers
Psychology: Drugs that stimulate the mind can result in violent results
Psychology: Prisons make for poor recovery for the mentally ill
Discipline: Suppressing the urge to argue to the wrong person
Rhetoric: Appealing to logic
Rhetoric: Backing an argument with emotions
Rhetoric: Denouncing one's morals

Wald

Hunting: Drugs wont let you see prey or predators
Hunting: Your nose can detect chemical defenses of animals
Hunting: Gas creatures morph and change
Hunting: Gas creatures have pet rats
Hunting: recognizing a rat skeletal
Detection: Seeing inconsistencies
Negotiation: Use your words
Endurance: Purging poisons
Resistance: Resisting sedatives
Endurance: Resisting sedatives
Strength: moving heavy metal
Meditation: Helps you talk when scared
Butchery: recognizing a rat skeletal

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: (if you want?)
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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Sybil Malach
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Re: Review Request 2.2.0

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Thread Name: [Devil's Advocate] of Dragons and Men
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Alcohol, Tavern violence
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Sybil
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Tulias
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Loot: N/a
Injuries/Overstepping: N/a
Renown: N/a
Wealth Points: N/a
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Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: N/a
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 342
"No mass graves."

-Vri 720, scolding Sybil for disposing of necromancers.

NPCs: Karlsson, Margaret
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Alistair
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Re: Review Request 2.2.0

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Thread Name: Mythos in Mynea
City/Area: Quacia, Helice
Notes/Warnings: Nu
Requested Rewards:

Alistair
Knowledge:
Hone: The Lucis Bond
Hone: The Lucis Bond: Requires time and concentration
Hone: The Lucis Bond: Very ethereally taxing
Politics: Learning the religion of those you wish to conquer
Politics: Taking on a politically advantageous archetype
Politics: Using positive rumors to one's advantage

Hélice: Mythology
Hélice: Arsinos
Hélice: Pyrrha
Hélice: The Arsinalis

Loot: Nu
Injuries/Overstepping: Nu
Renown: +5 for 'blessing' a priestess of Pyrrha
Wealth Points: Nu

Collaboration: Nu
Magic Experience?: Yes, for Hone. Alistair learned a new ability.
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 106
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Kasoria
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Re: Review Request 2.2.0

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Thread Name: Blood, Water, and Light
City/Area: Volta, Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language and Violence

More of a set up piece for the real payoff, which'll be in the next and last story. Hope you enjoy it, anyway, and thanks!

Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Rolling Across the Floor (and away from trouble)
Acrobatics: Ducking Under a High Kick
Deception: Holding Back Your Skills So You Can Observe Those of Your Opponents
Detection: Recognizing a Foreign Accent
Discipline: Swallowing Your Beliefs to Accomplish an Objective
Endurance: Take a Beating, Keep on Tickin'


Non-Skill Knowledge:
Culture: The first morning of Ashan in Rharne is called "The New Dawn"
NPC Captain Senter: Marks the New Dawn with a Celebration
NPC Captain Senter: Owner and Captain of The Lucky Lady


Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Badly bruised face, bruised right leg, maybe missing a tooth?
Renown: Not quite yet...
Wealth Points: Nah
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 161

Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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Re: Review Request 2.2.0

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Thread Name: Fool's Duel
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings:

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Blades (Greatsword): They’re heavy
Blades (Greatsword): Grip it with both hands
Blades (Greatsword): Pick a length based on your size
Blades (Greatsword): Don’t let it drag while you walk
Socialization: Asking some questions
Socialization: Helping out the victim

Yaralon: Duel of the Spear

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: up to u
Wealth Points: N/A

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Reviewed by Strange
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Re: Review Request 2.2.0

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Thread Name: The Coverup
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings:

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Deception: Covering up a lie
Deception: Misleading an investigator
Deception: Trying to keep a story straight
Deception: Lying is a lot harder than it sounds
Meditation: Lying takes a mental toll
Hunting: Following footprints

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: up to u
Wealth Points: N/A

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 71
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Mastemyr
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Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Fur de Rads
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: Violence, the death of a lot of rats.
Knowledge:
Hunting: Identifying a Rat's Nest
Hunting: Take Advantage of Prey Psychology
Hunting: Hunt with a Pride
Hunting: Don't Spare the Young
Stealth: Use Your Surroundings for Cover
Fauna: Yaralon Rats
Yaralon Culture: Merchant Kings/Queens
Yaralon Culture: Unarmed Combat is Sexy
Loot: Rat meat.
Injuries/Overstepping: A few bites that will need to get treated by a medic.
Renown: Yes. +10 (Completing a job for a city figurehead, transforming as a mortalborn before a witness.)
Wealth Points: 12 WP (Wealth Thread Tier 5 - Cylus 719)
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Fur de Rads (Cylus 719)
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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