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Eight Reasons to Run Pt. 3 (Graded)

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There were few things as frustrating as not having his legs respond to his attempts to stand, let alone walk or run. Llyr, familiar with scaling buildings taller than some small mountains, sought anything that would bring him the control over his limbs he was used to. Not only for himself but for Hazel and his companion - regardless of the questionable mortality of Kiwi or not.

His roused Becomer spark provided the answer. He fed from the life force of the little buggers who’d caused the very overlaid muscle spasms that had set such desperation within the young mage. Their essence soaked through him, drawn into his spark, and refined into ether itself despite his disconnect from Emea. Transform, his spark suggested in every way it could. Transform and everything will be right again.

But transformation took time. It took too long for how bold the spiders had gotten. They sensed his vulnerability. His clothes vanished from sight while his body twisted, melted, and reformed. He’d heard Kiwi’s shout to hurry, and so… he had.

He underwent a transformation so quick that afterward, he barely understood what had happened. It’d hurt a great deal, almost more than his Transmutation initiation had, but his legs weren’t cramping, and his muscles weren’t seizing with venom anymore. He didn’t waste any more time with gasps of pain or lingering in his confusion as to what he’d just done.

His Becomer spark had gone dormant again, drained of the ether it had accumulated through the spiders’ life force. He wasn’t a he anymore either. Something in the transformation jarred his mind enough that his perception was no longer a he at all…

…but a she.

Lucretia - unmutated with how the biqaj woman had appeared before she ever accepted a spark into her soul - grabbed the basket in refusal to lose the tinctures and herbs despite the loss of his entire outfit and dagger. She sprinted to the front doors. With a grunt, she pushed one of the heavy things open and went outside. She held the door and waited for Kiwi to follow before the pair slammed the doors shut behind them.

The three were back outside now. It’d greyed into midtrial, storm clouds thinning across the expanse above the city to allow for a hint of sun. A faint chill, however, had gathered in the air with an acute scent of rain on its way to Westguard.

Lucretia went to Hazel. Between her illness and the spiders, now that Lucretia was there, the girl sobbed loudly. She pointed at the naked woman and said, “Y-your clo-clothes… You’re...” It wasn’t the first time she’d seen the Becomer transform, but it was the first time he hadn’t had anything nearby to quickly throw on before she saw him.

“It’s okay,” assured the biqaj. She ran her hands over Hazel’s coat near where the spider ichor had gotten on. It felt warm still and she didn’t want it seeping through the fabric. She said, “We’re going to take this off and find you a new one. And me one as well.”

Hazel nodded, holding still. Lucretia removed the coat with some struggle then tossed it aside. The girl’s sobs subsided, before starting up again.

“Quiet,” said Lucretia with a glance toward Kiwi who was already unblinkingly staring towards the distance.

In a decent world, the three of them would have scrambled to find some clothes for Lucretia and hurried back to the estate. Hazel would have gotten a bath, given some tea with the mint herbs, and been tucked in bed to rest and recover. Lucretia - Llyr - would have talked with Kiwi about what had happened in the abandoned market building; about the flaying of life force and what it meant for the state of the Becomer’s magic. Llyr would have shown gratitude for the Abrogant’s use of a barrier, for coming back to rescue him, and a one-sided conversation would have ended in him holding Kiwi close with the glimmer of attachment for his doll-like Quacian mentor.

In a decent world.

“Who-who’s tha-” began Hazel before she descended into a fit of coughs. Wet and sticky, phlegm coated her lower lip. Lucretia raised a hand, unthinking, and patted Hazel’s back. The girl spat on the cobblestones between them, a lump of fleshy blood lying in a puddle of frothed spit. Hazel started to cry again, frightened by the sight of something like that departing her internal body.

“Breathe,” reminded the Becomer. The green-eyed woman looked at Kiwi and then past him, when she realized what Hazel had been saying. “We’re being watched.”

Not only by the various eyes that peeked past curtains from the windows in the surrounding buildings, but by a silhouetted individual who stood a great many paces away. So far away, whoever it was, all that could be discerned was that they were a hulking figure, and they were standing there… watching them.

“She’s sick.” It was a declaration. An accusation.

“Get away from her,” the voice continued, thick and heavy and low, more of a growl than anything else. “Now.”

Kiwi didn’t take a step, though he did glance back towards her, waiting to see what it was she would do.

Lucretia moved Hazel closer to her petite nude body. She frowned, then slowly stood. “Mind yourself,” she spoke plainly to the stranger.

The sky crackled with the threat of an uncanny storm. In the lighted heat, the figure held still in bundles of clothing. Layers upon layers of cloth and leathers and armor pieces, some bloodied, others clean as if they were swiped from the tailor’s workshop itself.

“Let’s go,” said Lucretia to Kiwi as she met his glance. Though exposed and drained of ether, dagger long dissolved from her unleashed transformation, she held her posture with confidence. Her heart raced, however, adrenaline pumped through her silver veins. Fear, she felt acutely, though she tried to ignore it enough so they could start walking.

The way to the estate was in the same direction as the figure, however. She looked to a nearby alley and inclined her head so as to communicate to Kiwi that they’d be going around rather than the direct path. With a nod, he wordlessly followed her unspoken directions, though at no point did he turn his back to the stranger.

“You deaf?” The man called again, voice rising threateningly, then said something in that same, foreign language she’d heard Kiwi speaking earlier that morning.

Though the Becomer tried to escort Hazel to the alley, the girl fell into a coughing fit to the point that she couldn’t walk. Wheezes strangled in her throat and another lump of bloody flesh that resembled a small organ landed on Lucretia’s bare foot. She stared at it, concern brimmed in her tear-lined eyes. Lucretia looked at Kiwi and asked, “What did he say?”

“He asked if you - or we - are deaf.” Kiwi blinked. “Again.”

She turned her attention swiftly back to Hazel. She ran a hand over the girl’s forehead, then whispered, “It’ll be okay, your body is trying to get rid of all that nasty gunk. That’s all. Just let it out.”

“Little bitch is gonna die,” the stranger continued, a cold sneer in his voice that continued to rise in volume, almost theatrical. “And if you don’t move the fuck away, you’re gonna join her.”

An undeniable sense that what had been said wasn’t mere warning, Lucretia turned and asked in a strained voice, “Is that a threat?”

“Deaf and stupid,” the stranger growled, followed by something slender that shot through the air between them. The layers of clothing had been swept aside to reveal a crossbow underneath. Swiftly traveling the distance, a bolt aimed for Kiwi’s torso.

Before either of them could move, there was the sharp sound of shattering glass as the bolt lodged itself into Kiwi’s stomach. The force of the blow knocked him off balance, and he tumbled to the ground, bright green eyes staring wide at nothing in particular as he fell.

Lucretia swore. Instinctively, she moved in front of Hazel and pushed the girl to go to the nearest large object – a pile of shattered wood, broken barrels and the like. She hissed, “Hide. I’ll find you.”

Though it seemed pointless as Hazel still coughed and choked on attempts to breathe. Why now? Why did the fit have to worsen? The biqaj looked at Kiwi who still remained on the ground, but couldn’t look for long. She heard the reloading of the crossbow as the weapon was drawn tight.

“Fuck off,” snapped the Becomer. What else could she do but shout? She had no weapons, she had no ether, she didn’t even have any clothes. She had nothing but a sick child succumbing to plague and a companion who’d already fallen. Lucretia went to the dreamwalker, grabbed hold of him around the shoulders and dragged him toward the nearest alley for cover. She glanced at the bolt in his stomach, then asked, “Kiwi? What should I do?”

“Let go of me,” he answered, brushing away her hands and hopping back up onto his feet. The second bolt whistled towards them, but this time it simply tore through the empty air, embedding itself in a decrepit barrel with a heavy thunk. Kiwi didn’t even look at it as he pulled a knife from his back pocket and… ran towards the stranger.

The stranger let out a string of curses as he fumbled with the crossbow. Each trill, Kiwi rushed in closer until the man decided to just drop the weapon altogether.

Meanwhile, Lucretia searched for anything of use. All she’d had was the basket of tinctures and herbs. She looked to the abandoned market and considered… if she flayed more spiders, she could reclaim her magic. It could take too long though. The Becomer glanced to see Hazel nestled, curled up behind the pile of splintered wood, with her face buried against her knees. At least she wasn’t coughing anymore.

Lucretia turned her attention back to the fight and tried to figure out whether to take Hazel and retreat to the estate or to help Kiwi. Though the bolt in his stomach hadn’t slowed the abrogant down, the heavy handed stranger had managed to knock Kiwi to the ground a second time. He was already pushing himself back up to his feet, but a swift kick to the man’s already injured stomach saw shards of dark glass clattering to the ground.

He wasn’t faring well.

The biqaj couldn’t simply watch, nor could she bring herself to run away. She felt an intense rush of adrenaline invigorate her senses. Her exposed skin prickled, as if to gather the latent heat gathered in the storm above. Her crystalline legs shimmered in a flash of lightning. The tattoo on her back winded and warped, as if desperate to find a way to recover ether for the power that could end the entire conflict within trills.

Lucretia sprinted towards the two men. She slid her petite body between them, just as the stranger’s fist came for Kiwi’s face. It landed, instead, on her shoulder. Knuckles thudded against the bone, her body bruising from the furious momentum behind what proved to be an immense amount of musculature that hid underneath the layers of piecemeal clothing.

She gave a wordless shout and pushed the assailant. It was no use. In the female totem, the Becomer was frail without the muscles cultivated through his arcs of climbing. Lucretia, though an adventurer with a pioneer’s heart, was a mere traveler and scholar in build. Her hands rested on the stranger’s chest. He didn’t budge a single inch from her shove.

The foe grabbed onto her wrists. He lifted her with ease, off the ground, then tossed her aside. His attention returned to Kiwi, as if he wanted to be certain to get rid of the abrogant first and wasn’t all that concerned with the naked woman who had crystalline-like legs.
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In a flash, the knife slashed through the man’s chest, cutting through the haphazard collection of clothing, drawing blood but not nearly enough. In return, the man’s fist smashed into Kiwi’s face. His skin immediately dissipated, leaving behind that smooth, dark glass. Smooth for a trill before a million fractures spread out across the surface like a spider’s web as the stranger’s knuckles connected.

Kiwi staggered backwards. The knife slipped from his hand and clattered to the cobbles. His fists rose, but he seemed disoriented, unable to tell where the other man was. He swung blindly, and the stranger avoided the strike with a sneer, following Kiwi’s attack with an uppercut to Kiwi’s punctured stomach.

He let out a gasp of surprise, pulling his hand away to reveal he’d been cut by the jagged shards of Kiwi’s strange, glass-like body. He sidestepped Kiwi’s next kick with ease, moved past Kiwi, then slammed his elbow deep into where the other man’s kidney should have been. There was another loud sound of splintering, similar to a frozen lake’s surface beneath too much weight, and Kiwi staggered forward - blank and fracture face unreadable.

Lucretia returned to her feet. She’d gotten dazed by the throw but shook her head and focused. While the men fought, she caught sight of the knife that lay on the ground. Her gaze flicked over the street. She moved forward, if only to distract, if only to take the brutal attention away from Kiwi. The woman picked up a rock, dislodged from the cobblestones, and she tossed it at the stranger.

It flew past as the stranger seemed to have realized it before it could land. From behind his hoods and scarves, a pair of gleaming eyes struck her with a wash of fear. There was no doubting that he was a killer, one who took pride in it, and for a moment whether by a trick of her mind or the flash of light across the sky or truly within his eyes, she saw the gold of her dead father’s irises. The color of the moments before the belt landed on skin.

The Becomer halted.

“You’re a stupid bitch, ain’t ya?” jeered the stranger. He turned his attention away from her and back toward the shattered visage of Kiwi.

“Stop,” she said weakly. She broke through her own fear and continued her path forward. Lucretia’s pace quickened. With a jump, she landed on the stranger’s back. He hadn’t expected that. She held on tight, arms wrapped around his neck and legs wrapped around the thick layers of cloaks and tunics. Lucretia pulled her slight weight backward, in an attempt to get enough space for Kiwi to retreat. The woman yanked at a wrapped scarf and tightened it to the point of strangulation. She shouted, “I said stop!”

Kiwi blindly swung towards the voices, but managed only to graze Lucretia’s own hand, splitting the skin with a stinging cut. The stranger used her brief surprise at the pain to stoop low, grasp her by the hair, and hurl her over his shoulder. She hit the ground with a breath-stealing thud that left her entire body tingling and gasping for air.

“That,” the man roared, a meaty hand grabbing Kiwi by the throat, “Is enough!” With his free hand, the man pummeled Kiwi’s “face”. The fractures deepened. The sickening sound of cracking glass filled the air. Before the man could deliver a third blow directly into the center of Kiwi’s head, the smaller man managed at last to cut deep enough into the man’s wrist in a blind slash that he released him.

Kiwi staggered backward. His shirt was cut and bloodied - though the blood was not his own. Instead, dark splinters of glass stuck out at odd angles, torn through his shirt and tinkling to the ground as he staggered in place.

Through the glinted drifts of stars in her vision, Lucretia managed to look over. Her lungs struggled to recover. She saw the blood, the dark obsidian-like glass, and both men seeming to take a moment from their respective injuries. Hearing rushed with the pounding echoes of her own pulse, she lifted to her elbows but no more than that. Nausea gripped her. She noticed that a portion of her calf had gotten widely cracked, the quartz-like layer of skin revealed in glints of refracted light.

The stranger had been correct. It was enough.

Her spark coaxed her. She knew how to, already… she just needed to, again. Lucretia tried to stand but failed. She managed to her knees, however, and crawled closer. Through constricted lungs, she forced words, “Enough. Yes. Wha-what is it you want?”

Perhaps, the biqaj considered in a fleeting moment of desperate hope, the stranger could be reasoned with. Perhaps she could negotiate a peaceful resolution despite the blood already shed and the visible damage to Kiwi. She begged, “Please…”

Whether due to his frantic attempts to suppress the heavy flow of blood from his wrist, or because he didn’t see her as a threat, Lucretia reached the unknown assailant’s side. She placed a light hand to his leg through the layers of fabric. The woman stood in a graceful motion. She offered her other hand and said in a soft voice, “Let me look, mister. I can fix it for you.”

He held out the wrist, with a torn rag of cloth stuck to the crimson blood, and he grunted with an obviously confused expression from what could be seen of his broad features. Lucretia glanced at Kiwi, her breath short. Her hands trembled. She picked off the cloth and wrapped it around tightly so to stop the blood flow for the stranger who’d wrought such damage to her companion. She stopped the makeshift bandage dressing, however, and took hold of his meaty hand.

Life force rose from his skin, absorbed into her palm, and she began to flay the man. It didn’t last, however, when he furiously shoved her away. Lucretia lost her connection, the attempt severed, and she stumbled aside.

“The fuck.”

Kiwi seemed as though he struggled to stand, and the man glanced between the pair of them for a trill before he stooped down, grabbed a nearby plank, and slammed it into Kiwi’s head. Black glass splintered. The dark, jagged edges caught the bluish light and seemed to reflect it with all the brilliance of a night sky’s starry expanse. Then Kiwi slumped to the ground and the stranger turned on Lucretia.

“You’re next, bitch.”

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This story is brilliant. I had to go back and read the previous parts of this thread. And I had to peek into the following parts too. To me, it’s one of the most enthralling and emotionally painful threads I’ve read in my time here. It wasn’t enough to only read the part review, I must have it all. This makes it feel hard to review the story in a way that does it full justice. It’s a tragical dark walk towards death, the mages bereft of the power they used to rely on, unable to defend themselves properly and unable to stop the plague from slowly killing Llyr’s child, and then the death of “kiwi”. Both of you write so well that it’s pure happiness to read it. This story had an enormous impact on this reviewer. The rewards are yours!

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Unarmed combat (Stylish Style): Strangulation via scarf.
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Unarmed Combat (Stylish Style): Deceptive surrender to get closer.
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