Alex Holford

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Alex Holford
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Alex Holford

Alex Holford

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Name: Alex Holford

Gender: Male

Race: Mortalborn

Date of Birth: Ymiden 12th, 701

Marks: None

Factions Joined: None

Languages Spoken: Fluent =Common Broken = Yari


Appearance

Alex Holford's face is not truly there, as his immortal blood has disfigured him. Though if you reach out and touch where his face would be, you will feel a nose, eyes, and a mouth. All of it is there, though the visual placement of these features is obscured. His body is tall and lanky, 6'6 170 lbs his skin in places pitch black, others pale. A true abomination of nature.
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Alex Holford
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Personality



Pushed farther and farther from normal society, Alex slowly went into the dark side of the civilized world. He is distrusting of new people, as most every person he meets recoil in either fear or disgust. He enjoys moving just out of sight of the law, to manipulate people from the background.

Likes


His Parents, as they loved him enough to give him life

Money, as it is hard to gather when you are unable to work properly

Solitude, as it is the only time he does not have to look at someone's disgusted face

Dislikes


Nobility, he sees them as lazy

Crowds, people tend to find Alex's face repulsing

Mortals, he sees them as undeserving of power

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History



Alex was born due to his mother being tricked, though he was originally unwanted, his mother held him close soon after his birth. Though, even as a child his face would be distorted to those who observed it, this caused the midwife to nearly pass out. As she saw a large insectoid head emerge from the woman giving birth. Though she kept strong, as the child was finally born, brought to the mother. The mother was not immune to the effects of this, as when she looked upon the face of her new child. It was the man who tricked her, it was beautiful and terrifying. Perhaps that is why she did not throw the child away, since her fear was the man that took away her beauty. That may be why, or maybe her instincts took over at that time.

Over the arcs, Alex and his mother were pushed aside from the city's eye. Cast into the slums of Yaralon, near where the Goblins lay, in the very shack in which he was conceived in. Times were hard for the small child, as the only person that could stand his face was his mother. Though she looked like an old crone, she was young, having the child at a very tender age. Though as all things in Alex's life tend to do, something happened to make his life worst.

When Alex was 12 arcs old, he came home to see his mother crying. He had not known why when he entered the home. It seemed like it was because her hunger was getting to her, as she was begging and doing unspeakable things for food. Though the acts were rare, and begging was much harder. Alex gave his mother a hug, it was out of love for the one person who loved him. During the hug, his mother's heart changed, it disturbed the young boy. She grabbed hold of a kitchen knife, and ran outside of the shack. Jumping onto a nearby man, as she stabbed wildly at him. Alex watched in horror, as the only person that loved him was then cut down. A swordsman was near enough by to save the man from his mother's strange bout of anger. Alex rushed to his mother, crying as the two men both recoiled at the sight of the child. Tears dropped from what ever visage they saw, along with the sobbing of a small child. There were deep burn marks on his mother's arms, in the place Alex had hugged her.

Alex was alone now, over the next six arcs he had to fend for himself. Begging did not work for food, as every person recoiled at the sight of the child. Only leaving him crying and hungry for another day. Soon he began to sneak around the city, going into windows just for a piece of bread. Just trying to live for another day, one more day is all he scrapped by for. He would be caught several times, and the one man who could stand his sight would scold him as he was left in a prison cell. The guard captain seemed to be able to at least look at the boy, it is unknown what he saw but he could at least stomach it.

As the boy slowly turned into a man, he became better at taking what he needed. He still lived in the small shack, soon he would need to do the run... Though did he want to stay in this city? No one seemed to like him here.

For now, he has stowed away on a ship heading away from the city. Maybe another land would accept him, any of the sailors that ventured and saw him would give rumors of a monster below deck.
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Alex Holford
Posts: 30
Joined: Mon Aug 26, 2019 9:04 am
Race: Mixed Race
Renown: 30
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Wealth Tier: Tier 1

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Skills & Knowledges



Skills
Skill Total Points Proficiency
Deception - FT (11)
  1. (SP) Deception:Using a false persona
  2. Deception: It's not a lie, if you believe it. (PB)
  3. Deception: Using a fake voice
  4. Deception: Hiding your true face
  5. Deception: Do not bring up your wrong doing
  6. Deception: Hiding your true body
  7. Deception: Making things look disconnected
  8. Deception: Using sounds to distract someone
  9. Deception: Using objects to distract someone
  10. Deception: Speak with athority
  11. Deception: Keep pressure on the target
(30/100) Competent
Stealth (6)
  1. (SP) Stealth:Hiding your face
  2. Stealth: Stay out of sight, if you don't want to get noticed. (PB)
  3. Stealth: watch your back
  4. Stealth: hide in the trash
  5. Stealth: You need to hide better
  6. Stealth: Do not get caught
(15/250) Novice
Intimidation (7)
  1. (SP) Intimidation: Using someone's fear
  2. Intimidation: Take off your hood and show people what they fear. (PB)
  3. Intimidation: Maybe using your ablities would be intimidating
  4. Intimidation: Try not to scare the wait staff
  5. Intimidation: Fear is a primal
  6. Intimidation: Corner someone
  7. Intimidation: Restraint can be used to your advantage
(15/250) Novice
Persuasion (4)
  1. (SP) Persuasion: Use of a familiar voice
  2. Persuasion: act worried for another person
  3. Persuasion: Talk things over
  4. Persuasion: Barter is on the table
(10/250) Novice
Combat Blades (Dagger) (1)
  1. (SP) Combat Blades (Dagger): 3rd and 4th rib
(10/250) Novice
Discipline (0)
(15/250) Novice
Endurnace (1)
  1. Endurance: Kicked in the sack
0/250Novice

Non-Skill
(SP) Immortal: Aelig
(SP) Layout: Yaralon
(SP) Immortal: Syroa
(SP) Location: Yaralon
(SP) Laws: Yaralon
(SP) Customs & Festivals: Yaralon
(SP) Location: Yaralon Prison
(SP) Immortal: Lisirra
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Alex Holford
Posts: 30
Joined: Mon Aug 26, 2019 9:04 am
Race: Mixed Race
Renown: 30
Character Sheet
Point Bank Thread
Wealth Tier: Tier 1

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Skill Point Ledger



Here is where you record all the skill points you receive (Startup XP, CS Approval Rewards and, of course, Thread Reviews!) and all the points you spend on your skills. Again, below is an example which you can edit.
ledger
Thread or Skill Name Points Adjustment Running Total
Starter XP +50 50
Decetion, Stealth, Intimidation, Persuasion, Combat Blades +10 -50 0
Deception +5 (PB)
Stealth + 5(PB)
Intimidation +5 (PB)
00
Suprised Guest+1515
Discipline-150
Flowing Black, +15 Deception00
Total 0/95
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Alex Holford
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Race: Mixed Race
Renown: 30
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Mortalborn
Domains; Madness, Hatred, Corruption
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False Faced: (Madness)
Alex's face is nothing but an illusion, though it changes for whomever looks upon it. Changing to what the person truly fears, weather that be a physical being or mental. Gazing upon his face will put you face to face with what is truly terrifying to the observer. If one over comes their fear of the visage that is upon his face, then they will see a black void, similar to his father's. Though if one were to reach out and touch the illusion, they would feel a normal face underneath the power. Even if the great jaws of a dragon were seen, his face would still only be physically human.

This ability is effected by Discipline or Meditation of the viewer (The Higher)
effect tiers
0 : Visceral reaction to the sight, will cause shock for a moment. The person will likely run away from the source of the fear.
Novice : Visible reaction to the sight, Will cause a physical response. The person will want to run away from the source of the fear.
Competent : Slight Visible reaction, May cause a verbal response The person will get a fight or flight response, similar to a jump scare.
Expert : Little reaction, Will still cause a mental response but still see the horror
Master : No reaction, Will see the black void that covers his face.

As all these effects are IC RP effects, there is flexibility to the effects. As long as it fits with the effect list. You will not be allowed to ignore the effects, unless capstones or marks are involved.
Burn of Hatred: (Hatred)
If Alex touches another's flesh for a prolong period of time, a burn would appear on their skin. With a bit of contact, the effects of the burn will last a break. If multiple people are burned, the time is spread between them, based on the first one burned. The burn will cause a undying hatred to consume the inflected's heart. The person will have a compulsion to attack or threaten those around them, if their resistance is to low, they will attempt to out right murder those around them. The ire of the burned does not go against Alex, though he can not control the actions the burned take.

This ability is effected by Discipline or Meditation of the burned (The Lower)
effect tiers
0 : Will seek out someone to attack
Novice : Will attack people they see
Competent : Will verbally assault someone into attacking
Expert : Will Yell at someone, though attacking is rare (Dissipation of the effect with concentration down to half duration)
Master : Passive aggressive at worst (Dissipation of the effect with concentration down to a quarter duration)
Duration
Starts to effect at 15 trills - quarter a break duration
Every 15 trills of contact increases the duration by another quarter break.
this time is so he can just brush up on someone, but he can't really shake someone's hand when it comes to social interactions.
Voice of Derangement: (Corruption)
Alex's voice takes the form of the person the hearer trusts. Allowing Alex to convince people to do actions they would otherwise be opposed to with , by giving an advantage to persuasion (Can increase 2 tiers if low stats are used for defense). Taking the voice of someone's mother in order to tell them to take the keys for a cell. Using the voice of the mayor to tell the guard to pardon someone for a crime. Though the voice is an exact match, he would need to stay out of sight, as his False Face would destroy his corruption. Laying in the shadows is key to this ability for Alex. The voice is only changed when it enters someone's ear, if somehow recorded, it will only be Alex's voice. This means a group of people will hear different voices, this can cause a realization of the Illusion.

This ability is effected by Psychology and Discipline of the target. (as the ability only works out of sight the higher is used between the two)

Alex gains an increase in Persuasion when out of view of the target.

If Alex is in view during the use of this ability the interaction will have no or negative effects.
effect tiers
0-Competent= 2 tiers
Expert-Master=1 tier
GM= May have the option to ignore the effects completely.

PC's may ask OOC if they have any questions, as their reaction to the voice my differ depending on morals and personal abilities. This ability is to encourage players to do something they normally would not do, or give the push needed to do something.
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Alex Holford
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Joined: Mon Aug 26, 2019 9:04 am
Race: Mixed Race
Renown: 30
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Wealth Tier: Tier 1

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Possessions



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A masterwork, steel skinning knife (PB)
Dagger (basic)
Leather armor (average) (Covers full body and large hood)
3 sets of clothing (basic)
Housing


Small one room shack in the poorest parts of the city of Yaralon. Words painted on the house belittling the person who lives inside.
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Alex Holford
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Joined: Mon Aug 26, 2019 9:04 am
Race: Mixed Race
Renown: 30
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Wealth Tier: Tier 1

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Wealth Ledger



Here, you keep a track of your Character's Wealth Tier and the spending of Wealth Points. Information here!
Current Wealth Tier:
Item Adjustment Total WP
Starting Package Tier 3 (26 WP) 26
When you need to put another row in there, just put this code in below the last /tr] and before the /table]

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[tr]
[td] Link to thread / Item [/td]
     [td] Adjustment [/td]
          [td] Total  [/td]
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Joined: Mon Aug 26, 2019 9:04 am
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Renown: 30
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Renown Ledger



The person who approves your CS will award you "Starter Renown".

Useful Information : The Renown System Guide: here
Item/ Thread Renown Total
Starting Renown 30 (PB) 30
Surprise Guest1040
When you gain more renown, just add the following to the table above, after the last /tr] and before the /table].

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[td]Link to thread where renown is gained [/td]
    [td] Amount Rec'd [/td]
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