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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Merciful
City/Area: Melrath
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Business Management: Pay a crier boy to spread the news about your business
Business Management: A business requires dedication to be successful
Business Management: Establish work hours
Business Management: Exploit the desperation of others
Empathy: Search multiple similar emotions to find a common source
Meditation: A calm mental process is needed to ease off using magic


Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: perhaps light
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: empathy for overstepping / knowledge gain
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Brent Forrester
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Inventory and Defence
City/Area: Alivilda, Melrath
Notes/Warnings: Plot concept was approved here. This is just Part 1, and it's Part 2 (building of the defence system) which will get interesting.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Leadership: Enacting a plan to help the local community
Cartography: Using information from locals for a more detailed map
Drawing: Starting a drawing with a preliminary sketch
Drawing: Symbols for coniferous trees and deciduous trees
Drawing: Stippling to shade an area
Tactics: Assessing a village's defence system

Loot: Average map of Alivilda including: family holds, key businesses, general landscape, and defensive features.
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a?
Renown: 5-10 (at your discretion), for initiating a plan to better protect the village of Alivilda and doing the preparation work.
Wealth Points: (how many and for what?) This will be counted as a Wealth Thread (and I think I apply for those points elsewhere).
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Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Soren Kvistson
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: All That Glitters is Bold
City/Area: Raelia, Melrath
Notes/Warnings: Nope

Navyri
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Negotiation: Lay Out Your Terms Clearly
Negotiation: Allow Unexpected Nudity
Detection: Explore Every Nook & Cranny
Tactics: Watch From Afar Before Making a Move
Tactics: You Cannot Remain Neutral Forever
Business Management: Joining a Partnership
Business Management: How to Read a Ledger
Cooking: Recipe - Augiery Omelet
Cooking: Choose Your Spices by Tasting Them
Resistance: Melrathi Mead for Breakfast

Loot: +1 Business Partnership with Soren Kvistson
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)


Soren Kvistion
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Business Management: Knowing when to outsource for help
Business Management: Partnership agreement with Navyri
Business Management: Making a deal with a devil
Business Management: Making an offering to entice someone to the negotiating table
Business Management: There's more to business than money
Business Management: Creating a new position for a discrete partner
Cooking: The taste of an Athartian omelet
Linguistics - Gravokian: The word for Death
Negotiation: Not showing discomfort at being naked during a meeting
Negotiation: Not rushing into business
Negotiation: Setting the mood with a comfortable atmosphere for negotiations

Loot: +1 Business Partnership with Navyri
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Cold Magic
City/Area: Melrath to start but Abra goes to Viden through a brand
Notes/Warnings: Abra has brand knowledge to get to Viden
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Empathy: The power of the connection depends on distance
Empathy: The connection can be maintained even when they look away
Empathy: A greater distance requires more ether
Empathy: Distance causes a delay
Meditation: Don’t let a change in scenery detract from your goals
Socialization: Ignoring someone’s questions only makes them more suspicious

Nonskill:
Frost well: Brittle
Frost well: Phase depends on the medium it is in. Liquid in air, Solid near objects
Frost well: Can be used to store ether

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's discretion.
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: empathy requested for pushing the range to the expert maximum and discovering new mechanics
 ! Message from: Werewere
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Kasoria
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: I. Far, Far Away
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Some Violence, nothing too... well, Kasoria-ish

Had this fragment in my head since I was a teenager. Thought I might as well make a tale out of it. Two more coming!

Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge:
Discipline: Knowing the Details Before Speaking
Leadership: Sharp, Concise Orders
Leadership: Leading From the Front
Stealth: Not Giving Away Your Approach with Dust Trails
Tactics: Shock Assault


Non-Skill Knowledge:
The Emea: Conjures Dreams Unimaginable to the Waking Mind
The Emea: Sometimes You're Just Along for the Ride
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Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Cleaning My City Part 1
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: Violence, drug overdose
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Unarmed Combat (Ustrina) - Kicking the back of the knees
Unarmed Combat (Ustrina) - Strikes to feel out your opponent
Unarmed Combat (Ustrina) - Leg choke when being mounted
Endurance - Being choked, and not in a fun way
Endurance - Whipped on the back
Strength - Pulling hands off your neck

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: If applicable
 ! Message from: Werewere
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Mutations

  • Once Paradigm Is Removed: He glows faintly, his skin is warm and sometimes hot to the touch, and when he gets angry sparks literally fly off him. He's a the middle of a field of static electricity so every once in a while when you touch him, you get shocked. Fire leans towards Balthazar and droplets of water seem magnetically attracted to him. He has a series of cracks on his right pectoral that glow of soft emerald. His eyes and the cracks reaching down to his cheeks glow a dark blue. The etheric cracks spiderwebbing up his arms glow orange.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks in Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Dealings with a Thief
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Business Management: Always look for more business partners
Business Management: Trusting your gut with money
Politics: Being Owed Favours Gives You Power
Grifter’s Eye: What’s mine cannot be easily stolen
Empathy: Use Embroidery to insert suggestions into emotions
Empathy: Use Embroidery to alter the perceived source of an emotion

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: Overstepping was not intended but is welcomed if it is necessary to gain exp
Renown: Stopped a children's quarrel and is talking with a thief about business things
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: empathy requested for discovering Embroidery and using it in three people
 ! Message from: Werewere
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Sybil Malach
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: • Mature • The Embrace of Slavering Quietus
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Interrogation, black market implications, criminal activity, implied drug use, and a non-described beatdown.

1/??? thread in trying to find Wald.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: Choosing not to pay attention
Detection: Using alcohol to dull one's perceptions
Leadership: Loyalty is fickle
Leadership: People are less likely to betray one they fear
Leadership: Disloyal subordinates must be dealt with
Leadership: Beating someone senseless is an alternative to execution or torture

Loot: N/a
Injuries/Overstepping: N/a
Renown: Too isolated to ask for renown.
Wealth Points: This is a Vhalar wealth thread.
- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed:
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
 ! Message from: Werewere
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"No mass graves."

-Vri 720, scolding Sybil for disposing of necromancers.

NPCs: Karlsson, Margaret
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Ascended Mantis
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Work/study thread. Might be boring.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Medicine: Making a splint
Medicine: How to tell if a bone is broken
Medicine: It's important to immobilize broken limbs
Research: Comparing different sources
Research: Skipping irrelevant information
Strength: Ripping a piece of cloth

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: 5, for helping the woman
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
 ! Message from: Werewere
Claimed
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Mutations

N/A

Blessings

N/A

Worn Items

Ring of Reversal
Ring of Immunity
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Ashling
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Hadelwiz Hazard

City/Area: Melrath, Raelia

Notes/Warnings: No

Requested Rewards:

Ashling


Knowledge:
Detection: Detecting the scent of Hadelwiz in a perfume
Detection: Detecting the truth after having been fooled by a trick
Detection: Detecting signs that a person is dishonest and not to be trusted
Detection: Detecting the colour shifts in the eyes of a biqaj
Endurance: Enduring bad sleep in a room at a boisterous tavern
Endurance: Enduring bad company in a tavern for the sake of a good cause
Investigation: Asking for hearsay in a tavern
Psychology: Manipulation by namedropping to create an impression of friendship and care
Psychology: Prejudiced ascribing all bad things to a specific group of people

Non-Skill
Raelia: The details about the serial murders in Raelia in Ymiden 719
Raelia: The Ox’s Bellow, the seedy side of the tavern
PC: Soren Kvistson, the owner of The Ox’s Bellow, doubling as bartender
PC: Soren Kvistson, a sales-oriented businessman
NPC: Helwig a dishonest attention-addicted biqaj trickster with crude humour
NPC: Adèle “the witch”, Helwig’s sharp-tongued wife
Melrathi Hadelwiz: Hadelwiz a high altitude plant growing on mountain grasslands.
Melrathi Hadelwiz: Craves direct sunlight and dry soil
Melrathi Hadelwiz: Not rare in mountain areas but tricky to cultivate in other places.
Melrathi Hadelwiz: A low plant with silvery-green foliage and white flowers.
Melrathi Hadelwiz: Can prevent infections and help against diarrhoea and bronchitis
Melrathi Hadelwiz: One important use is the treatment of infection in the tonsils.
Melrathi Hadelwiz: Is not toxic and has no bad side effects.

Renown:
For being the target of a joke, but playing along and joking back

Collaboration: Yes


Soren


Knowledge:
Business Management: Too much overtime leads to breaking even
Business Management: Giving free samples to lure out a purchase
Endurance: Working several long days and nights consecutively
Intelligence - Contact: Ashling, the ash skinned traditionalist Melrathi
Intelligence - Ashling: Has a soft spot for dogs
Mixology: Hadelwiz Mead
Mixology: Mix ingredients with beer during the initial pour
Socialization: Going along with a joke about someone
Storytelling: The Tale of Carolina and the Monster

Renown:For running a good business

Wealth Points: (how many and for what?)
+7 for Tier 5 Business, viewtopic.php?f=446&t=19889

Collaboration: Yes

 ! Message from: Werewere
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