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Kalortah
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: I want to be where the people are
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Strange dream. Kalortah turns into a literal chicken at the end.
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Skills Used: Lucid Dream
Flying (competent); Unarmed Combat: Untrained ; Detection: Novice
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Knowledge:

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[*]Detection: looking for advantages in a fight
[*]Flying: can be used as a weapon as well as a means of getting places
[*]Unarmed Combat (Brawling): landing on someone from above is an effective technique
[*]Unarmed Combat (Brawling): using one's wings as a weapon will stir up any dirt and debris the wind made by the effort reaches
[*]Unarmed Combat (Brawling): blinding an opponent temporarily by getting dirt in their eyes
[*]Unarmed Combat (Brawling): being caught off guard is a bad thing
[*]Unarmed Combat (Brawling): always press your advantage when the opportunity arises
[*]Unarmed Combat (Brawling): a solid blow to the crotch is very effective against a man
[*]Unarmed Combat (Brawling): a flying spin kick can be an effective technique
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
KalortahPlayer2
Skills Used:
None because non-lucid dreaming
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:

None because non-lucid dreaming.

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

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Yrmellyn Cole
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested


Thread Name: The Dim Source of Dreams Pt.2
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: None. Lucid dream. Yrmellyn explores the dreamwalking ability named Governing. (In the end, Yrmellyn is not using magic but flees from Emea when she fears to lose control of the attunement spark.)
Requested Rewards:


Yrmellyn

Skills Used: Dreamwalking (26, Lucid dreaming, Walking, Governing), Expert Meditation (76/22) Expert Psychology (76/63) Competent Discipline (26/22)

Skill Knowledge
Meditation x2 (Creating a mental picture of an existing object by meditating on it)
Psychology: x2 (Replacing one mental picture with a desired new mental picture)
Discipline x2 (Withstanding the temptation to let the spark of magic loose in Emea)

Non Skill Knowledge:
Dreamwalking: Your governing in Emea reminds about the creation of art
Dreamwalking: Governing of an entire object instead of changing a single factor
The unnerving feeling that the attunement spark is about to ... advance

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Llyr Llywelyn
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: It's ether here... or there
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: n/a

Faith
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
None.

Loot: None.

Llyr
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Research x 5
Etiquette x 3

Loot: Permission to Use Eclipse Portals to Rharne/Scalvoris.


Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: If Applicable (they met in a public place and Faith is famous, and Llyr is... uh... very noticeable, so... maybe 5-10?).
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

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Llyr Llywelyn
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: 50 Words for Snow
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned.

Llyr
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Investigation: Where am I?
Transmutation: Shapecraft: Shaping Glacial Ice.
Mount (Equine): Put a foot in the stirrup before mounting.
Mount (Equine): Sharing a saddle.
Mount (Equine): Saddling the animal.
Mount (Equine): Leaping off a saddle quickly.
Mount (Equine): The difference between a bit, lead, and bridle.
Mount (Equine): Riding a horse requires a level of trust between the animal and the rider.
Mount (Equine): Letting your horse get familiar with you can build trust.
Mount (Equine): Getting up on the saddle of the horse.

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

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Ichabod Hyde
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

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Thread Name: In the Ruins
City/Area: Rhakros
Notes/Warnings: Cold Cycle 719.
Skills Used: Resistance (Novice 15), Tactics (Novice 15), Intimidation (Unranked), Detection (Unranked), Climbing (Unranked)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Climbing x4
Intimidation x1
Detection x1

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: Vhalar 719 Job Thread

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Yanahalqah
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name:A relaxing morning jog - part 2
City/Area: Ezos
Notes/Warnings: Memory. Mentions of urinating! Ça alors!
Skills used
Running (n), endurance (c), intimidation (n/a), tactics (GM), deception (e), discipline (c), detection (c)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

-Running: (A relaxing morning jog 2) x5
-Intimidation: Telling people you dislike them

Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: idk
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Yanahalqah
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name:A relaxing morning jog -part 3
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Memory. Poop.
Skills used
deception (e), discipline (c), detection (c), investigation (e), field craft (n)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

-Field craft: (A relaxing morning jog 3) x4
-Detection: (A relaxing morning jog 3) x2

Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: idk
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name:A relaxing morning jog - part 4
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Memory. Lions? Tigers? Bears? Oh my!
Skills used
Running (n), discipline (c), detection (c), intelligence (n), investigation (e), etiquette (n/a), field craft (n)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

-Intelligence: Lip reading
-Intelligence: Relaying information
-Intelligence: Sharing suspicions
-Intelligence: Describing something in detail
-Intelligence:Informing your superiors
-Detection: (A relaxing morning jog 4) x1

Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: idk
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Chance In Hell
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Violence
Skills Used: Varlum: Intimidation (Competent), Leadership (Novice)
Nir'wei: Unarmed Combat (Competent), Animal Training (Master)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Nir'wei: None
Varlum: Leadership x2, Intimidation x4
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

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Oram Mednix
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Catch the rainbow! Skin the Rainbow
City/Area: Scalvoris/Surrounding Waters & Landmarks
Skills used: Hunting, Trap Making
Notes/Warnings: Animal cruelty. Also, I completely re-purposed the thread after I wrote the title and description, so please ignore them.

Requested Rewards: All rewards for Oram Mednix. +10 xp

Knowledge:

[Hunting] Foxes like to raid henhouses. Who knew?
[Hunting] Foxes also like to follow boundaries, such as walls and fences.

[Trap Making] How to set a typical metal leg trap.
[Trap Making] How to make a hay set for trapping fox.

[Fieldcraft] Walking in snowshoes is tricky, if you aren’t used to it.
[Endurance] Walking in snowshoes is tiring, if you aren’t used to it.

[Non-skill] Groom Peavers is a jerk, but he knows his fox-hunting.


Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: +5
Wealth Points: (how many and for what?) None, this will be my wealth thread for Cylus.
Link to this season’s wealth thread: This will be the wealth thread for Cylus 720. Appropriate submission to follow.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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