A Bet to Fight For | Part I

Almund is a thriving township with a dark side. With houses made from the wooden bodies of decommissioned ships, there are many opportunities here, coupled with many dangers.

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A Bet to Fight For | Part I

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37th Trial of Ymiden, 720
Underground Fighting Arena

Isodol stood back as she watched the man’s fist connect with the other man’s face. It happened so quickly, if she were to have blinked, she wouldn’t have known why one man was lying face down on the ground. The crowd went wild, applauding like they were thunder itself. She didn’t join in. She had been making internal bets with herself on who she thought was going to win the fight, and she had lost. Being new still to the area, she didn’t know the local residents or their fighting techniques. She had thought she had made the right call, though: the man was built tough, with broad shoulders, an almost disturbingly muscular back, and a mean face. But yet, here he was, lying unconscious on the ground, his opponent pounding his fists together in triumph.

She blew out hot air, mentally scolding herself for being wrong, but thanking herself all the same for not actually betting on anyone until she was sure she knew what she was doing.

She pushed her way to the front of the crowd, so that she was almost touching the rope that sectioned off the boxing ring from the audience.

The referee started counting down from the middle of the ring. Three... two... one... Time had run out at the man was still lying prone on the ground, un-moving.

Isodol sighed and took her eyes off the match. An unusual thought entered her mind then, a thought she wouldn’t have normally found herself thinking what with always preferring to be on the outside of betting. But what if she were to be the one in the ring? What if she were to bet on herself to fight? Knowing almost nothing of brawling or unarmed combat, she wistfully shook the idea away. How silly. But still...

Suddenly a new match was being set up. On the left side of the ring stood a hulk of a man, his eyebrows set into a malevolent knit. His mouth formed a straight line of indifference as he mashed his gloved hands together in preparation. His opponent stood at the other side of the ring as per custom. He was significantly shorter but held the same muscle mass. He bestowed a smirk, like he knew something his adversary didn’t.

The referee, or whoever it was who mediated the fight, announced the two fighters. The burly one was named Zain and the smaller, smirking one was named Valmond. They both raised one of their gloved hands into the air during the moment when their named was being called out to the audience. Many more cheers erupted when Zain's name was called, and Isodol tried to ignore it.

She ran to the nearest score keeper, for it was they who usually kept tallies on who bet on whom. She put her name in for Valmond, hoping to the immortals that his smirk meant more than just arrogance. She threw down a hefty five coins, staking her claim that he was going to win the first round. Returning back to her original position amongst the crowd of onlookers, she waited for the match to begin.

The referee called to the sky: "ready, begin!" and the two men were off in a battle of unarmed combat. Zain threw a mediocre first punch; it didn't land very close to Valmond, and was easily blocked by said fighter. But Zain was not deterred. He continued to pound out blows, throwing left and right punches, all the while hoping one would hit. For the most part, Valmond did not acquire any welts. He remained unfazed and unharmed until the last two punches. He was unable to block those because of the speed at which they were thrown.

Isodol grimaced when they landed. One to the face and the other to the abdomen. But nary a thought of regret passed through her mind. She still held fast to her bet. And her prediction rang true for the majority of the match. That was until the end when Zain continued to pound Valmond, pummeling into a new day of the week.

Isodol scowled as Valmond fell to the ground, pinned underneath the weight of his opponent. The referee shouted numbers until the unholy number one was announced. She knew at that moment that she had lost out on five essential coins to fund her alcoholism.

Suddenly, Valmond stood, non longer pinned to the ground like a dog being disciplined. He interjected, "rematch", and thus both men returned to their respective corners and prepared for another session.

Isodol again rushed to the man to place her wager. For some odd reason, she was stubborn in her belief that Valmond, the underdog, would come out on top. Why else had he suggested a rematch? Perhaps he knew something no one else did, as denoted by his previous smirking. Perhaps he was just another arrogant, gullible boy with dreams of becoming the strongest man, the best fighter of the underground ring.

Regardless, Isodol put ten coins to Valmond's name. Why did she double her previous amount? She couldn't say. She could only say that there was a roiling in her stomach, like the fluids were riling for a success, and Isodol, never wavering from acknowledging a gut feeling, neglected to admonish the feeling, encouraging her instincts and acting on them in the form of her gamble.

Again, she returned to her rightful position amidst the throng of people. Avidly watching the fighters, she did. Slightly impatient, she was, but that didn't stop her from relishing in the positive anticipation she felt waiting for the next match to begin. It didn't take long to start either.

The referee announced the names of the competitors again, perhaps just in case anyone missed it last time, or perhaps because it was customary and in line with the rules of how underground fighting went. Whatever the reason, time ticked by rather quickly, and before Isodol knew it, both men were at it again.
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Re: A Bet to Fight For | Part I

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Valmond seemed to be a little more tentative, but in a way that was beneficial for him. He didn’t give in to his aggression like his opponent; he was scrutinizing every strike made against him, attentively determining the next move that would be made. He paid attention to his foot work, making sure he was never caught in a position to be put off balance. And always did he have his hands up in a defensive manner. Each punch and kick that was thrown his way, he side stepped or dodged in some way or another. He blocked the blows and even seemed to assume when and where the next one would attempt to land.

He was again on the defensive side of things, never lowering his guard for feel of being taken advantage of. This is how the first half of the match went. After a few long minutes, the tables began to turn significantly. Zain was growing tired and frustrated at his adversary’s lack of ammunition. Valmond gave a quick and almost unnoticeable smirk before readying himself for the offensive.

He blasted out two shots to Zain’s mid section before following with an unexpected shot to the face. While Zain was busy defending the blows to his stomach, he was unable to catch up with Valmond’s speed in blocking the one coming at his face.

The hit seemed brutal, but then again Isodol was never one to get into any extremely physical altercations. She relied more on card duels or even harsh verbal exchanges. But this attack seemed intense.

While Zain was reeling from the punch, Valmond didn’t cease to continue his onslaught. He rained down on the man with several more blows to every vulnerable body part. Zain was only able to block so many before Valmond landed the finishing uppercut.

Zain flew backwards several feet before collapsing on the ground. The referee started his count, as Zain didn’t move. Isodol could tell he wasn’t unconscious, but he was undoubtedly in enough pain to not continue.

Once the count reached one, Isodol joined in the hushed applause. Not many spectators had thought the underdog would win the match. Isodol smiled to herself, almost forgetting she had bet on the winner herself. She retreated back to the lackey who held the betting rallies. She procured ten coins, though she only made out with five having lost five during the first round.

She returned to the ring soon enough to see the referee holding Valmond’s arm in the air.

As he was exiting the ring, a towel thrown across his shoulder, Isodol approached him. He was perplexed at first by her sudden appearance, but not so much after Isodol began to introduce herself.

“It looked like you knew you were going to come out on top,” she said with a hint of a flirtatious grin.

He chuckled then. “I like to keep people on their toes.”

Wanting more from the conversation before admitting her proposal, she pressed for his secret. “How did you do it?”

He cocked his head to the side, his sweat infused strands of murky blond hair falling to the side of his face. “Do what, win the second round?”

Isodol nodded.

“The trick is to watch how they fight the first match, while making sure you can defend yourself so as not to get knocked out. Once I started to catch on to his fighting style, which was very repetitive mind you, I was able to predict what and when he’d attack.”

Isodol was floored. She hadn’t thought of something so clever, not that she ever had the need to, avoiding physical battles with people.

She nodded her head in understanding, ensuring she was listening with respect as to what he had to say. “You may have to teach me some moves some time,” she said.

Valmond smiled at that.

“So,” she continued, getting to the main reason she had started up a conversation with him. “I think you could use someone to your advantage.”

“How so?”

“I’m just spit balling here, but it might be wise to look into getting yourself a manager. That is, unless you already have one.”

Valmond’s smile grew. “That could be useful, yes. Who did you have in mind?”

It was Isodol’s turn to smile, her lips curving into an almost mischievous smirk.

“Me.”
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Re: A Bet to Fight For | Part I

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Isodol:

Knowledge:
Persuasion: Winning the Interest of a Fighter
Gambling: Betting on an Underground Combatant
Seduction: Attempting a Flirtatious Smile
Gambling: Losing but then Winning Back Your Loss
Appraisal: Finding Value in an Underdog
Gambling x1

First Time Attending an Underground Combat Arena
Valmond: An Underdog at Unarmed Combat
Valmond: Under New Management via Isodol
Judging a Book by its Cover Does Not Always Guarantee Success

Loot: -
Wealth: + 1 WP
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Renown: 5
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Skill Review: Appropriate to level.

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Comments: The date of your thread is incomplete. Please state which arc the thread takes place in!

With that being said, I found this thread fairly enjoyable. Your writing was detailed and easy to read, and Isodol thinking about betting herself to fight was an interesting idea. I was a bit disappointed that she didn’t pursue that further, to be honest. It would have been amusing!

The fight was well-written (I enjoyed the way you described the fighters and their actions, for example). I also liked that you had Isodol and Valmond talk at the end of the thread. His advice was good. I wonder what he’ll say to Isodol wanting to become his manager though …

You requested 5 WP for this thread. This was too much in my opinion, considering that your PC only has Novice Gambling and considering what happened in the thread. I changed it to 1 WP as that is more appropriate (1 WP is still a lot of money).

Enjoy your rewards!

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