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As one approaches the City of Nashaki, trains of caravans lead through the sprawling outskirts to the numerous open city gates. The largest gate is on the west side and leads past the fortified walls into an octagon of eight districts. Each district features unique markets and is maintained by one of the eight Towers that rule Nashaki. In the city, heavily guarded, is the prized oasis that supports the Nashaki people to flourish in such an unforgiving land.
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69 Ashan, 718 ‣ Nashaki
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Saza wiped the back of his bony hand across his forehead. Slick with a light coating of sweat, his hair had begun to stick to his face, and frizzed beyond control everywhere else. He’d unbuttoned the rest of his shirt so the dark fabric hung loose over his shoulders, but there wasn’t much else he could do, to save himself from the heat.

Not when it wasn’t just the heat itself that exhausted his already-tired body. It would’ve been cruel to leave Hyde out there in the middle of the street… and though the little shop he’d pulled him into wasn’t that much of an improvement, it was at least a little cooler inside. Saza would’ve taken him to another inn if he could’ve, and he even would’ve paid for his room just to get him out of the street and into someplace safer, but it’d been hard enough for the lanky youth just to get him into the nearby shop. He definitely couldn’t pick him up and carry him to some inn.

He’d left the unconscious man near the door, propped with his back against the cool stone wall. Saza didn’t figure it was the most comfortable spot to sleep in, but what were his other options? He wasn’t about to set him on the front counter, or ask the store owner to let him rest in the back room. He’d already been kind enough to let him bring Hyde inside, when Saza knew that a passed-out drunk on the floor wasn’t what most customers were really looking for.

The rucksack was left at Hyde’s side, and he’d even set the older man’s arm over it, just in case any wandering customers saw it and decided it was an easy target.

Saza pulled a few coins from the depths of his pockets. With only the slightest of frowns (as he was trying not to look quite as displeased as he felt), he handed the nel across the counter and dropped it into the shopkeep’s hand. It was the same guy he’d seen in the tavern a few nights before, and as he’d expected, he seemed the kind sort.

“Thanks,” said the man, and he pushed the little roll of bandages across the surface towards Saza. The biqaj breathed out a silent sigh and took them.

“Yep,” he glanced back towards the door, and though there were several tall, wooden aisles between them, his scarlet gaze landed on Hyde. He looked alright enough… all things considered. Saza turned back to the shopkeep and said, “I’ll try to clear out of here soon. Thanks, Mister…?”

The shopkeep pocketed the coins and then held out his hand.

“Kouri,” he offered, “but just call me Leo.”

Saza shook his hand and nodded, “Leo. Got it. Thanks, Leo.”

A small smile, and then the frizzy-haired biqaj was walking away from the counter, bandages in hand. He passed the only other customer in the shop – an older woman with a rather severe face – and found his way back to Hyde. Once he’d made it back to him, Saza knelt down beside him and reached for his injured hand.

There were still just a few little glass fragments stuck into it. He scrunched his nose in disapproval of the sight. It wouldn’t do any good to bandage it up while they were still in there, though… Saza wiped a hand across his forehead again, and this time, a faint red mark was left behind, as a bit of Hyde’s drying blood had stained his fingers.

“Damn it,” grumbled the youth, and he sat down properly in some attempt to get more comfortable beside the human, still inspecting his injured hand.
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Hyde didn't dream. But he did remember. Memories flitted about in surreal recollection while he remained unconscious. His internal body tried to work through all the alcohol he'd poisoned his blood with. He wasn't aware of the move from street to shop, but his body appreciated the slight change of temperature.

The older man didn't wake when his injured hand got attended to. Not right away, anyhow. His other hand tapped around. When he felt the rucksack, he grumbled then coughed. The cough turned into a choked hack. He drew his injured hand away - because he needed to move - he turned to his hands and knees, then he retched watery liquor-bile onto his belongings.

Hyde's vision swam while he stared down at the mess. The edges were dappled and black, and his head hurt. His hand hurt too, he realized. And his shoulder... and back... and... he groaned, "Where..."

He sat back to where he'd been, dazed. His frown darkened when he saw the biqaj knelt beside him. For a moment, he felt confused about that too until he said in a low, hoarse voice, "Kalba?"

His bleary gaze drifted to the bile-soiled rucksack. He grimaced, then glanced around their surroundings. Hyde looked at the youth again, and noticed the marks of blood and the bandages and... he raised his injured hand which felt like it was on fire for how much all the various cuts had gotten irritated in the past several bits.

"Y' dun gotta..." he slurred, while he picked out one of the glass shards himself. Another dizzy spin of the room overcame him, though, and he resisted the nauseous wave while he leaned forward to rest against his own knees. Hidden behind his forearm, he curled up in a defeated posture... but he held out his injured hand in obvious request for the biqaj to look at it. He muttered, "...duilich."

Hyde didn't know why the biqaj insisted on helping him so much, but he wasn't about to scorn the assistance. As much as it was pointless in the end, he wouldn't refuse. In his drunken state, now the opposite of indifferent and able to ignore everything, he sought to distract himself. Muffled behind his arm, he asked, "...y' wan' somethin'?"
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Saza didn’t notice that Hyde’s other hand was moving, at first. He was too busy with the injured one and concentrated on not hurting it more, that he couldn’t afford to split his attention. He used his thumb to wipe away a bit of the old blood, so that he could at least get a better look at some of the cuts…

...but Hyde turned and pulled the hand away. The blond raised his brows in surprise as the apparently-no-longer-sleeping man turned to his rucksack, and he scooted back just a bit. Hyde vomited the liquid contents of his stomach (Saza wondered if he’d even eaten anything, since that morning a few trials ago. He certainly hadn’t had much, but he also hadn’t been drinking as much as Hyde) before he twisted to sit back against the wall. Saza’s shocked expression had shifted into one less obvious; he wasn’t sure whether to feel more concerned or disgusted with the drunkard before him.

It wasn’t his first time trying to care for someone while they were so terribly intoxicated, though. Saza steeled himself with a deep breath when Hyde’s caramel-colored gaze turned to him – his own remained a deep, dark red – and he raised a brow in question when he noted the other man’s frown. He could only hope that the older didn’t take some sort of offense to all of this. He only wanted to help; that wasn’t so weird, was it?

“Kalba?”

He nodded. Hyde remembered his name this time, so that was a good sign. Saza scooted a little farther back again to give the other man some space. He held the bandages to the side and watched him lean back and pick at his own hand – Saza wanted to stop him, but he figured it wasn’t his place. If he’d prefer to do it himself, then… that was his choice. His very drunk, wrong choice, but his, all the same. He only hummed in dismissal of the slurred words.

Hyde leaned forward next, resting his head against his knees, and the biqaj only stared at him, colorful irises swirling with shades of orange and gold and blue. He didn’t know what the human said then – he couldn’t say that he’d ever heard the word before – but the injured hand was extended towards him again, and that was all he needed.

“Thanks,” the youth gave in response, “I’ll try to be gentle.”

Saza scooted closer again, and sat with his legs criss-crossed so that he could set Hyde’s hand on his knee. He kept the human’s hand stable with one of his own holding the inside of his wrist, while his other tended to the bits of broken glass that’d embedded themselves in the skin.

He did his best to be gentle, but he really didn’t know how to extract them. Was he supposed to do it quickly? Slowly? Was he supposed to wiggle them out, or pull them straight? Saza tried just about everything, and whenever something seemed to go smoother than the rest, he kept to it. He didn’t glance up when he heard Hyde’s muffled voice.

“Yeah,” he replied immediately, “stay still.”

If there had been any depth to the question, any other meaning beyond the man asking him what he needed from him in that exact moment, the biqaj didn’t seem to notice. He kept working, orange eyes tinted red as he stared intently down at the hand. His fingers tugged free another little shard, and he set it on his opposing knee with the others. The removal of the glass caused more than one of the little cuts to begin bleeding again, but Saza didn’t worry about them much; he pressed his thumb against them until they slowed down, and he carried on.

It wasn’t long before all of the glass (that he could see, at least) had been removed, and Saza began to wrap the bandages around the poor wounded hand. It killed him to spend more coin on someone else, but he couldn’t just let the guy walk around with his hand like that. What if it got infected? He wouldn’t have been able to forgive himself, if he heard about something like that and knew that he could’ve done something to help prevent it.

Saza tucked the end of the bandaging back into the wrappings, and he ran his bony fingers over the hand to make sure it wasn’t all about to fall off. Finally he lifted his eyes back to Hyde’s face (or, where he assumed his face was, behind the arm and knees), and with the bandaged hand still held between his own, he asked, “does that feel okay? Not too loose?”
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Gentle? If there was a rare thing for Hyde, it was the thought that he needed someone to be gentle with him. The promise wasn't so astounding, but that the biqaj seemed to be sincere. He couldn't say he didn't appreciate it, not while he fought back the nausea and sickness that churned his overheated, sunburnt body. His throat felt raw. His mouth, dry. His tongue, sour.

He grimaced while the younger seemed to pull and prod and wiggle the shattered shards of the liquor glass inside the flesh of his palm and along his fingers. The expression hid behind his curled up posture, face shadowed by his arm.

Stay still. He could do that. Or he could try. If there had been any depth to the question, even Hyde couldn't remember it. His drunken mind already flitted in distraction to the pain he felt and the suppression of any more vomit that felt like it wanted to escape.

He managed to swallow it down, though. Hyde went for a different angle of his body and he leaned against the wall again. The back of his head tapped against the wall and he gazed up at the ceiling in slow, intoxicated blinks. His fingers twitched while Saza finished with the last of the glass. While the youth collected the bandages, Hyde curled his hand into a fist, then stretched it out again. The blood dappled along the cuts, but no more than little droplets.

Hyde turned his gaze down and over to look at the biqaj. He swallowed another wave of nausea and ignored how things wobbled. The lights seemed all off, in his vision, the warm golds of a lantern blurred the edges of everything. Was Saza's skin tan? Or was it dusky? Bronze, maybe? He wondered if the youth was as hot as he felt, or if he was used to the heat of Nashaki.

While the bandages wrapped around his hand, he appreciated the distraction while he watched Saza attend to the injury with such sincere concentration. The gentle touch that stroked the secured bandages calmed the sickness inside of Hyde. He wondered whether biqajs could change more than just their eye color, but that the rest was so subtle that humans didn't notice. Because he couldn't quite decide if those were brunet or blond curls that frizzed in the hazy frame of the lantern's glow. Hyde wondered, though, and he squinted as if that would help him figure it out.

So, when Saza lifted his eyes with assumption that he would see Hyde in the posture where he'd began, it must have come as a surprise when instead Hyde stared right at him.

"Feels okay," he confirmed. His fingers flexed, trying the bandages, and he nodded. He said, "Thank you."

Hyde looked at the bandages next. He lifted his hand away. He tested it in a few different ways, then added in a rumbled voice, "Are yeh... a healer?"

He almost looked as if he were to say more, but grimaced instead. His good hand went over his mouth. This time, he couldn't keep the wave down. Hyde turned and retched the last of the acidic contents from his abused stomach. His vision swam again, but once he'd finished... at least he felt...

"Better."

Hyde moved to stand, then. Bandaged hand against the wall, he pseudo-climbed his way back to his feet and took a rest once he'd managed. He glanced around. A shop? Why were they in a shop? He tried to hold his balance and not stumble, while he went to pick up his soiled rucksack. If he just took it outside and rolled it in some sand, it'd be clean enough.
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69 Ashan, 718 ‣ Nashaki
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Hyde was looking straight at him. It shouldn’t have surprised him, but the sudden meeting of a caramel-brown gaze forced a warmer shift in Saza’s blue. He stared back without falter, and inquired as to the state of his bandaged hand, but he couldn’t help but wonder just how long the human had been staring at him before he’d noticed. Not long, he figured. Hyde hadn’t really shown much interest in looking at anything that wouldn’t get him more drunk than he already was.

Pouted lips were curved into a small smile with Hyde’s confirmation that the wrappings were alright. He wouldn’t have been surprised if they weren’t… it had been a long time since he’d patched anyone up, but it was nice to know that he wasn’t entirely incompetent with some bandages. Hyde flexed his fingers and nodded, and Saza replied, “you’re welcome.”

The hand was pulled away from his own. Saza scooted away, and after pushing the frizzy curls away from his red-smudged forehead, he leaned back on his hands. Hyde seemed to be doing better than before… and there was less danger of anything truly terrible happening to his hand, but the biqaj worried even still. Hyde wasn’t his problem to worry about, but he couldn’t help it. Golden eyes freckled with the lightest of pinks, Saza observed the older human as he tested his hand.

“Are yeh… a healer?”

“No, I…” his accented voice softened into a brief silence as Hyde busied himself with… ridding his poor stomach of yet more liquid vomit. Rather than let it get him down, though, Hyde merely said better. Saza felt a faint grimace twist his tanned features, but he continued regardless, “uh, I’m a soldier.”

He pushed himself up at the same time as Hyde, though he managed to get to his feet far faster than the hindered human. Saza dipped his head to the older woman that passed them by on her way out the door… and she glared at them both before making her departure. He couldn’t really blame her. She probably hadn’t been expecting to walk in and listen to a foreigner throwing up into his own rucksack.

“Hey, Hyde,” the tall biqaj glanced back to his strange, drunken companion, and noticed his precarious balance as he leaned down to grab his things. Saza set a hand against his arm to help steady him, but didn’t help otherwise, as he figured the man was probably capable of grabbing his bag. “We should get out of here, I don’t want to piss this guy off. Are you looking for somewhere else to stay? I could help you find a room; I know just about everywhere around here.”

Saza stepped towards the door, careful not to jostle the other man, and he reached to open it with his free hand.

“Or… work, if you’re feeling up to it.”

Not that he thought Hyde should strain himself further, but he seemed the determined sort.
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If he wasn't so busy with retching out his guts, maybe he might have responded more to the knowledge that Saza was a soldier. Maybe he might have said Oh, really? A soldier? Y' don't seem like one. or something like: Ah, seen many battles? or even: Then what are you doing here, helping a drunk? Shouldn't you be kickin' me out of the city yerself?

Any number of things could have been said. Instead, Hyde rubbed at his lips to clean them off and said nothing at all. He didn't pay any attention to the woman in the shop, but his name spoken caught his attention and he made a small grunt of a noise in acknowledgment that he heard.

A hand set against his arm, Hyde glanced once at it but then used the additional stability to pick up his rucksack. He grunted again, just once in acknowledgment - or even, agreement - to the idea of leaving.

Still not sure why the youth wanted to help, he wasn't about to scorn the assistance. Instead, he made his way to the door and focused on righting his steps while he crossed the threshold.

"Room," he answered with a quick gesture of his hand. "Yeh."

He needed nel, but Hyde knew he needed to sleep off the liquor first. There'd be no job that he could perform without making a mess of it. Even in his inebriated state, he kept that much awareness. Not that he'd be much more useful in the hangover to come... but he would get there when he got there. For now, he just wanted to get somewhere he could lay down again.

If it was a safe room, which he felt like it would be, then all the better. Though he didn't have a lot to go from, that Saza had bandaged his hand earned a certain trust... also, that they'd already shared a night together. And that Saza had known his name. If Saza wanted to rob him, it would have been easy before he'd vomited over his belongings.

"Y'..." he coughed some, and swallowed down a resurgence of nausea. He waited a few trills, until he felt okay again, then looked at the biqaj and asked, "Y' got any water?"
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If there was one good thing about Hyde’s blackout, it was that it had at least made him a little more receptive to the younger man’s help. Saza figured it had something to do with the purging of his stomach as well, though the last time the strange human had sobered up he had not exactly been pleasant. He held to the man’s arm while he gathered his rucksack and went to the door, and then he held it open for him to pass through.

Saza threw a glance back into the shop and waved to the man behind the counter, and then let the door swing slowly shut behind them. He let go of Hyde’s arm as soon as the man looked steady (enough), and gave a slow nod indicative of the consideration behind his dark blue irises. A room… a room… he could find him a room. Not at the tavern they’d come from – though he planned, already, on going back and fixing that severed connection, either for Hyde’s sake or for his own peace of mind – but there were plenty of other taverns and inns in the meantime.

(How hard would it be to fix a table? That would probably do the trick, right? It would just take… a few nails, or… whatever it was that people built tables with. He was sure he could do it.)

“Alright, a room then,” he looked from one side of the street to the other, irises warming to match the golden glow of the lantern lights. “There’s a place… just a few streets from here. Near the Tower of Stone. Shouldn’t take too long to get there.”

It wasn’t an inn he was quite as familiar with, but it would do. Saza pushed his sleeves up above his elbows and then crossed his arms, and made to start in that direction. He was mindful of the man beside him, and of the dreadful cough that followed him, but the request for water slowed his steps again. “Oh, water… not… on me.”

It would have been rather convenient, but the biqaj carried nothing with him. No bags, no books, no bandages, no water. The frizzy-haired youth clicked his tongue and glanced back at the shop they’d just exited, then said, “I bet this guy has some – wait here? And uh, try not to fall.”

Saza brushed a hand against Hyde’s arm again as he turned back around. It was but a brief touch, idle and habitual, and then the youth was retracing their steps back to the shop’s front door. He stepped back into the slightly-cooler air of the shop, greeted Leo with another polite wave and a smile…

...and within a few short bits, the golden-eyed biqaj reemerged, a clay cup of water in hand and a few less nel in his pocket. “Here,” Saza found his way back to the human, wherever he’d settled, and held the cup out in offering. “It isn’t much, but just get them to fill it up again at the inn. Just a few turns up ahead and we’ll be there.”
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Hyde didn't have it in him to bother with suspicion for how Kalba held the door for him, and how he seemed to be more than willing to help him along, and... the Etzori allowed himself to relax some. He flexed his fingers with the bandages, though he knew they were good already. He just... wanted to feel them. His inebriation hadn't faded much, though his sickness had taken priority over most other interests or instincts. He still didn't feel great. Better, but not great.

What would help... he hummed in acknowledgment where the soldier-boy thought to go. He would follow, until he couldn't. He coughed, asked for water, but by the time that Kalba mentioned that he didn't have it... Hyde's thoughts drifted to other things. A frown furrowed his brow when told to wait (and not fall).

Hyde stepped backward until he felt the building behind him. While he moved to find the stabilizing position, he glanced at the spot on his arm where he'd felt the brush of a touch. His drunken gaze fixed on the spot. Where had his coat gone? Or his shirt for that matter... By the time he looked up, the youth had vanished into thin air!

He looked down the other street, and watched a stray dog. The canine sniffed along the dusty roads. Hyde watched, and lost track of time while he leaned against the building and slid down to sit instead. It wasn't a fall, though. Just a slow descent.

When Kalba returned, Hyde had drifted asleep within the few short bits. The dog had crossed over to sniff at the rucksack. Both dog and man roused, however, when the golden-eyed biqaj spoke up. First, dog who sprinted off to keep a wary distance. Then, man who opened his eyes to wonder why his hand was wet with slobber... and looked up to see a clay cup in offer.

Hyde smiled up at Kalba, his eyes tired in the frame of the dark-smudged paint, and he accepted the water to drink all of it in one-go. After he finished the long swallow, he got back to his feet with a bit of renewed energy and said in a low murmur, "That wasn't gin."
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Hyde:

Knowledge:
Resistance x2
Detection x3
Endurance x4

Loot: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: -
Renown: 5. Saza and you attracted attention!
Magic XP: -
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.

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Saza:

Knowledge:
Caregiving x4
Etiquette x3
Linguistics: Common Sign: x2

Loot: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: -
Renown: 5. Hyde and you attracted attention!
Magic XP: -
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.

Points: 15

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Comments: I’m glad that Saza managed to drag Hyde into the little shop – and that the shop owner was so accommodating. A passed-out drunk on the floor is definitely not good for business!

Hyde’s being drunk was described in quite some detail. You write him so well in that regard!

Saza’s reaction to Hyde’s vomiting was relatable. I wouldn’t have known if I should feel concerned or disgusted either, had I been in his place!

It seems as if his being concerned won out though, judging by how he took care of him.

I liked the ending where Saza gave Hyde a cup of water and Hyde stated that it wasn’t gin.

That made me chuckle a little!

I look forward to reading the next thread from the two of you.

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