• Mature • 5. S E P E R A T E

[Pig Boy]

Laures

Experience: 15 no magic xp

Knowledge:

Detection x5
Investigation x3
Etiquette x2

Renown: none

Skill Usage: Appropriate to level

Loot/Losses: none

Injuries/Conditions: none

Consequences: none

Llyr

Experience: 15 no magic xp

Knowledge:

Flying x9
Detection x1

Renown: none

Skill Usage: Appropriate to level

Loot/Losses: none

Injuries/Conditions: none

Consequences: none

Comments: There was an interesting mix of alternating between lucidity and non-lucidity here, that I guess comes with all the advanced dreamwalking awareness. I haven't read too many nightmare threads myself, but this one was surely a frightening one in atmosphere and the suspense you both injected into it was palpable.

Lord Charon is an interesting persona for Llyr's non-lucid self. He took a real risk going non-lucid in the middle of a nightmare, but it appears that was the right decision, in order to find an escape.

Enyo was an interesting persona for Laures, and I would've liked to get to know them a bit better before he switched to Lucidity. Still, the writing was very good here and simple enough to follow for such a surreal thread.

The creature you thought up was truly terrifying as you described it, and it's crunching of a dreamer/construct. I shudder to think how a less experienced dreamer might contend with such an Emeyan.

Great writing and enjoy the points.

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