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The Chancellor, Part 4

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Ymiden 23, Arc 720

"Smoke“,
the Mortalborn said the name without a hint of doubt and sat up in his bed, clutching the dagger as he did so. He recognized that voice, silken and sweet like honey, and perhaps a little on the deep side. It had been almost an arc since he had last seen the Yludih poisoner – he had accompanied her to the guards and watched as she had been taken away – but he remembered as clearly as if those events had taken place the trial before.

“How did you …?” he began, but stopped again abruptly. He had wanted to ask her how she had found him – he had been exceptionally careful when he had looked for her, he had even changed his appearance, using one of the abilities that Syroa’s blessing had afforded him - but then he realized what had happened. “The cat. There was a cat that was watching me when I talked to the addict. You were the cat, weren’t you?”

There had been a thin little cat sitting on a crate. Its fur had been orange, almost like the color of the hair of Smoke’s preferred form. He should have taken the fact that she might not always take a humanoid form into consideration. His lover, Llyr, had talked about turning into a cat once. It made sense that Yludih were capable of doing the same.

“You are such an observant man, professor”, Smoke replied with a hint of sarcasm, before her tone of voice abruptly grew more serious. “I’m here because I need your …”

“Not now”,
Doran interrupted her and snapped his fingers so that another set of wards that rendered the room sound-proof activated (the walls had been imbued with a combination of Wraithgrass and other reagents). A moment later, he tapped a spot on his nightstand in order to turn the alchemical light that hung from the ceiling and that was based on an invention that his former apprentice Sintih and he had made back in Rynmere on.

“Now we can talk without being overheard”, he informed her as he rose to his feet. “Someone might try to listen in on our conversation. I don’t want to take any chances.”

“Are you not worried that I’ll take advantage of whatever you’ve done and kill you?”
the Yludih asked and raised an eyebrow. She looked much worse than she had looked in the memory that he had seen in the Chancellor’s mind. There were dark circles under her eyes, her hair was unkempt, and she looked … she looked a bit sickly, he decided.

“If you had come to kill me, you would already have done so”, he replied somewhat dryly and shrugged his shoulders. “And not engaged me in conversation. So I don’t think that I’ll have anything to fear from you, at least not for the time being.”

He put a noticeable emphasis on the word fear. Even if she had come to kill him, he would not have been afraid, but merely cautious. He was one of the greatest swordsmen in this part of the world, and possessed superior strength. Few mortal beings posed a challenge these trials. An Yludih poisoner that had let herself get caught was definitely not among them.

“So, what is it that you want from me, Smoke?” he asked, put the dagger away, leaned against the wall and crossed his arms over his chest. “You said that we needed to talk. How did you escape from prison, by the way, if you don’t mind me asking?”


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“From the research facility, you mean?” Smoke asked. Upon noticing the (somewhat) confused look on his face, she laughed out loud. “Oh, you don’t know about the research facility, professor! They didn’t just take me to prison, they sent me to a research facility that his hidden in the heart of the Cold Mountains in order to be experimented on, as they do with all prisoners that have received a sentence like mine. When they realized what kind of skills I possessed they decided to use me for something else instead.”

Her tone of voice was confident, for the most part, and occasionally somewhat mocking and sarcastic, but every now and then the mask threatened to slip, and there was a momentary, haunted and pained look in her eyes. Something had shaken the Yludih to the core.

“And you are telling me that why?” he asked somewhat coolly. Doran had become kinder and more compassionate recently, and he regretted what he had done in Oscillus with all of his heart, but he didn’t care particularly about a criminal whose concoctions had landed countless innocents in the Infirmary, some on the brink of death.

“Because I need your help, and because I think that we have a common goal”, she replied. When he wanted to say something, she raised a hand, a sign that there was something else that she needed to say. “I don’t have anything to do with what happened to the Chancellor. Don’t act so surprised, professor. The news of the Chancellor being in a coma spread like wildfire, despite the Infirmary’s attempts to keep things under wraps. They wanted to use me, but it malfunctioned.”

“I have an idea what happened though. The Chancellor is not the only one that they want to get rid of”,
she claimed. Upon seeing the doubtful look on his face, she told him, “I’ll drink a truth serum if you want me to. You probably have one somewhere around here, being an alchemist, don’t you, professor? I’ll also swear an oath to Vhalar that I’m telling the truth and nothing but the truth, if I have to. There is something going on in Viden, and I want to prevent the worst. I’m willing to overlook the fact that I ended up in that place because of you”, she told him.

He nodded curtly before he informed her, “Follow me to my laboratory then. I’ll give you some of my truth serum, and then I’d like to hear what you have to say.”

“You did not really think that I’d just take your word for it, did you?”
he asked when she looked at him wide-eyed. “I’ve been lied to and deceived far too many times to be so trusting. Claiming that you would drink a truth serum is not enough to convince me.”
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Smoke hardly paid any attention to his laboratory, in spite of all the things that were on display there, from magical items to trophies of strange and dangerous creatures, which was another clear sign as to how exhausted she was. He did not exactly empathize with her, but he could not help but wonder what they had done to her in that research facility.

“Drink”, he told her and held the vial that was filled with the truth serum out to her. “And now tell me what you know about the Chancellor and why he is in a coma, why you think we have a common goal, and how you think we can prevent whatever is happening in Viden.”

“And tell me what malfunctioned”,
he added because that part of her story had confused him as well.

“The device”, she replied. “They implanted a device so that they would be able to control me, but it stopped working, long enough that I was able to remove it.” She abruptly rolled up one of her sleeves in order to show him a bloody bandage on her arm. “There were those strange thunderstorms a couple of trials ago, remember? I think something about them caused the device to momentarily deactivate.”

“I cut it out with a knife when I came to my senses again”,
she explained and shook her head when he wanted to come closer in order to take a look at the wound. “It …” she paused briefly, looking rather irritated before she informed him, glowering slightly (the truth serum seemed to be doing its job quite well, he decided), “It got infected.”

“There is a faction that has been operating in the shadows for arcs”,
she told him while he cleaned her wound, put ointment on it and rebandaged it (considering her potential importance, he did not want her to die from an infection) “They have finally decided to make their move. They have alchemists in their services, and Empaths, and they have devices that allow them to control people’s thoughts and actions. The Chancellor was only the first victim. Their ultimate target is Lady Yvithia herself. Personally, I don’t want to live in a city that is being ruled by them”, she admitted and shuddered.

“And neither do you, I think. You changed your ways, didn’t you? You aren’t the Hero of Oscillus anymore – or at least you claim that you have nothing in common with him anymore – you aren’t as good at hiding your past as you think. You are the most powerful man that I know. Together, we might have a chance. Besides, it wouldn’t surprise me, if they eventually decided to target you as well.”

The Mortalborn who had been listening quietly and treating her while she spoke, furrowed his brow fractionally and considered her words for a few moments before he nodded and decided, “Tell me what you think happened to the Chancellor. I will visit him, and if his condition improves, we will talk some more. You can stay in the salon in the meantime. You should be safe there, for the time being”, he informed her.

She had drunk a truth serum, and it was working, but the information that she had might still be incomplete or inaccurate; besides, the Chancellor likely didn’t have much time. He needed to save him first, before he could start to work on saving the rest of Viden.

He made his way back to the Infirmary in order to hopefully help the Chancellor just as the sun began to rise again – and then he abruptly woke up in the real world, with no memories of that strange dream that he had had, of an escaped criminal, a Chancellor in a coma and a criminal organization that wanted to take over Viden - and kill his Immortal aunt.

Soon, it would continue though.
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Comments: Another entertaining episode in the series. I just came on late to the series with the last episode, but this one looks much meatier than that one, for whatever reason, with a clear line of events that isn't interrupted for anything. I didn't know that truth serums worked on Yludih, but I suppose it being alchemical in nature makes it different from a purely chemical/poison type thing.

Once again Dream Doran impresses with his array of traps and gadgets that he has in the dreamland. I wonder if he could make these things in actual Idalos reality. Maybe he should do more dreaming for inspiration!

I can't wait to see the next installment in this series. I don't think it's cliche'd at all. If anything it reminds me vaguely of a nicely-made spy story. At least I haven't noticed any hooks that are too familiar in the story.

Great writing and enjoy the points.

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