Chores [Memory]

The surrounding lands of Rharne boast several towns and settlements that lie on the northern shores of the River Zynyx. This includes Mistral Village, Caervalle Town, Zynyx Market and Volta.

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Chores [Memory]

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Last edited by Hinata on Tue Dec 08, 2020 4:48 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 11
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Re: Chores [Memory]

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Hinata:

Knowledge:
Strength x2
Endurance x2
Discipline x2

Loot: -
Lost: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: -
Renown: 5. The boy was really happy that Hinata returned his sword, and the land owner appreciated the work that she did!
Magic XP: -
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
Points: 10
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Comments: Poor Hinata! I noticed that she’s only 13 in this thread, and she already has to work so hard. I like her attitude though. Even though her life hasn’t started great, she’s determined to become a great person one day. At least, the weather was nice when she had to do all those chores. That counts for something in my opinion!

The description of Hinata doing her chores and cleaning up the training area was quite detailed, and I like the scene where she returned the sword that she had found to its owner and told him that maybe he would grow up to be a hero. It was also nice of the land owner to let her use the training area after she had spent so much time cleaning it up.

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