The Good Old Times (Brent)

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The Good Old Times
1st Ymiden 720

Yrmellyn and Brent had each been sleeping and dreaming sound and safe non-lucid dreams until their sleeping minds went lucid in a surreal and unknown place. They had been asleep and had no idea how or why they had they had arrived, except (maybe) for vague memories of non-lucid dreams.

They had found themselves in a room with many doors, some of them with more or less informative signs. This room, which the letter called The Crossroad Room, had no windows. There were portraits on the walls and a desk in the centre, full of tools for writing, painting, drawing, notes and even fragments of maps.
According to an unsigned letter they had found on the cluttered desk, they were in “Quirkholme Quagmire”.

The author of that letter claimed to have woken up in this place multiple times and had to work hard at getting out. Everything with that letter was mysterious. Even the date, (13th Solarius of Orbit 111) was surreal and had nothing to do with the timekeeping they knew in Idalos. Was this helpful information about how to cope with this unexpected dreamscape? Or was it the deluded scribblings of a madman? Or was it something else? They had been too overwhelmed by the situation to take time to speculate. Instead, they would learn by doing!

The letter had advised them to stick together at all cost, make sketches and take notes as they progressed. They could also look for notes the author of the letter might have dropped while they had been wandering around in ...Quirkholme? They had mentioned a plethora of rooms but the blueprint map Brent had found was not complete.

After discussion they (or, more accurate, Yrmellyn) had decided that they would take their chances with a door which had first been named “The Easy Road”, then changed the name to “The Road to the Land of Happiness”. As soon as they had stepped through it the door had shut behind them with a bang. They had found themselves in a very old place, with walls of stone, dark right inside the door, but illuminated on the other side of an archway. Passing through the archway, the scent of bread had made Brent speculate that they might (might) have found The Kitchen. Other sounds, also identified by Brent, had made him speculate that they might (might) also have found The Bedroom.

Was it so? To be continued ...


Yrmellyn agreed with Brent that they ought to continue forward. Following the passage, it felt like they were going downhill, While Brent studied the blueprint and made sketches and notes she made drawings and notes of her own. All those things she had picked from that desk in the crossroad room and stuffed into a backpack came in so handy now! Unlike Brent, who seemed focused on trying to assess distances and identify their position on the map, she made a drawing of the corridor. It might be good to have a picture of it. As a painter she knew how easy it was to forget how things really looked once they were out of sight. Memory could be fickle. So, she took the time to outline the passage such as she viewed it.

Soon, a dark shadow framed the page in her notebook. Dotted thin perspective lines continued through the arch further down the corridor and met somewhere in the light beyond it. Content with the drawing so far, she added more detail to the stone walls, getting clearer the closer to the archway she drew them. She didn’t draw every stone, only some of them. The surfaces of the stones were smooth and they were of equal size. She concluded that they seemed cut by master stonemasons (she wrote a note about that).

Then she scribbled a hasty summary of on the next page, on the left side of the notebook: “A picture of the passage behind the door named The Road to the land of happiness. The atmosphere is old. Walls of grey stone lines the passage. It looks like it slopes downhill, but not steeply so. The air is cool and a bit damp. It might mean that we are on a basement floor somewhere under the ground. If there is any real ground here ... it is named Quirkholme Quagmire.

They were done with drawing and writing. When Brent took lead, Yrmellyn was happy to let him walk first. Who could know what lurked behind in the light at the other side of the arch!

The answer was: more doors! These doors were simpler than the doors in the Crossroad room had been and they had no signs with names on. Yet. Yrmellyn waited a bit in the hope that the doors would provide clues but they didn’t. The only information consisted of the delicious smell of fresh bread from a door that was ajar. Looking over Brent’s should she saw him add that door to his map and write the word kitchen.

“You can be right, Brent. It might be the kitchen, judging from the smell.”

She could also hear some creaking sounds and delighted laughter, not sure from where? From the same room, or was it from an adjacent room, behind one of the closed doors? As she had once upon a time been a professional courtesan she knew that laugh. Those bad old time had ended long ago when Maruiz Arbin had initiated her to magic and art.

Fourteen arcs had passed since then. Yrmellyn was older now, in her mid thirties, ageing some would say, and they would be right. The physical signs of if were still mild but she knew they were there. Thin lines at the corners of her eyes for instance. But, if somebody would have a closer look at her eyes they might not notice the lines due to being too surprised by the puzzle pattern the attunement magic had painted on her irises. That was her witchmark, only visible at a short range. Few commented on it as they had no idea what it was. But, on rare occasions, when somebody asked about it, Yrmellyn used to shrug and say that she had been born that way. That was true, she felt, as it had manifested at the initiation, her birth as a mage.

“A kitchen.” She peeked in through the opening of the door. It really seemed like a kitchen. People were running around with trays of food. A small mountain of fresh bread lay on top of a big table. It looked appetizing and she felt that they had taken the right door. She saw house-maids wearing clean white aprons over floral dresses and valets in varied and colourful livery. There were kitchen aides in drab attire and a few people who seemed to direct and oversee the work. The latter was dressed in elegant black clothes.

“So much food! It seems like they are cooking for a big banquet. Do you think they can offer us a breakfast of a good dinner or something in there? By the way, I wonder what time of the trial it is.”

They had been noticed! One of the black-clad overseers was on their way toward them. He was tall and thin, his dark hair slicked back from the brow, his prominent nose straight and proud. Outside of Emea, Yrmellyn would have used attunement magic to investigate the place and its inhabitants in advance. Without it (as it was dangerous to use it in dreams) she felt lost.

“Brent, they have seen us! Shall we step in? Or would it be better to close this door, run and hide? ”

If Brent would say yes, they would both enter the room.
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A kitchen indeed. Brent was a little surprised by the commotion of people going in and out of it with trays. For some reason he thought he was exploring an empty castle with Lady Yrmellyn. Peeking in only made his mouth water even more. But they were in a dreamscape. Was it okay to eat the food?

By now Brent had forgotten about the room with the creaky bed and was watching as piles of food were taken back and forth within the busy kitchen.

“A banquet! If we’re careful, we might be able to grab a stray bun!” Brent said excitedly.

However, when the overseer glanced sternly over at them Brent clammed up. “Hello, er, um, Sir. We were just… The lady here was telling me about a window, no a pillar that needed fixing. There’s um, a crack. A few cracks. Some on the pillar and some on the wall. If we could just step inside and she could show me…?”

Brent awkwardly held up the mess of papers he was carrying as if that were proof for his reason to be there. There was a long silence from the butler and then he made a crude gesture towards the kitchen.

“Won’t be long, promise!” Brent called over his shoulder as he pushed his way into the kitchen, with a beckoning gesture to Yrmellyn.

Inside it felt even busier and Brent tried to stay calm and look like he was in place. Oddly though, it only took a moment to notice a couple of pillars with vertical cracks in them. The pillars seemed to be made of stone and Brent pulled out a blank piece of paper to sketch how the cracks looked compared to the pillars. As the aspiring builder contemplated about how the crack might have formed and how it could be fixed, one of the servers came by with two buns.

“Buns on the house?”

Brent was momentarily distracted by the form fitting dress and the done up face of the server. With a nervous glance at Yrmellyn, he silently picked up one of the buns and took a bite. After chewing a bit, he felt something funny. Puzzled, he realized that there was something in his bread. Carefully, he took it out of his mouth and realized it was a tightly folded piece of paper. Opening it up, he realized it was some sort of poem.

With another glance at Lady Yrmellyn, he read it aloud.

“Easy come, easy go
Why not just move with the flow?
Roll the dice, succumb to your vice
And maybe you will find something nice
But if you’re boring and aloof, go to the roof
And there, they say, you’ll find the proof”

It almost sounded like a riddle or instructions to some place new. Yet the mention of the word ‘vice’ seemed to make sense. Delicious food, beautiful women… No wonder it was called the ‘Land of Happiness’.

“What do you think Lady Yrmellyn? Is there any strange message is yours? Should we believe it? I’m starting to get suspicious of all these nice things.”

When he looked back at the cracked pillar, it no longer seemed cracked and instead had filling of polished gold. Greed, gluttony… Someone in the back called out that the next round of drinks was on the house. Brent was not so sure about rolling dice with these odds.

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Phew. It had only been a butler!

She entered without any comments. Repairing pillars? Brent seemed to be a man with many talents. And, there really was some pillars to repair too. She left that to Brent. Yrmellyn was of course not going to take part in the repairs. Instead she drew several sketches of the kitchen and the people there. She also wrote some notes.

To Yrmellyn’s surprise, Brent had found a poem in a bun.

“It seems devious ...” She spoke in a low voice.

She looked at the man. He seemed to not see how sly the poem was. If they weren’t going to stay down here and succumb to “vice” they would be called “boring and aloof”? So? During her lifetime Yrmellyn had seen many a smart and double-edged phrasing pass by. Her insight in manipulative language had now increased by yet another example. Messages like that poem were often concocted by people she used to avoid.

Based on that sad experience of human psychology, she made a conclusion.

“It seems like the poem is attempting to make us stay away from the roof. But, now we know. There’s more tiers. Didn’t that letter in the crossroad room mention an attic?” She thought a bit. “I suspect that there’s upstairs and downstairs in this place. Right now we seem to be downstairs, where the servants work.”

The butler came back. He inspected the pillars and nodded in approval. Then he pulled out a very small coin and handed it to Brent, assuring him that it was a valuable reward for a job well done. To Yrmellyn it seemed like they were glorifying a low payment, but maybe Brent would find the coin useful. He didn’t seem to be rich.

“You may leave through the kitchen door.” The butler pointed at a door to the left of the room. It was a plain and narrow door and there was no sign on it.

Yrmellyn shook her head. “They are waiting for us upstairs. My servant here, Brent, calls me Lady Yrmellyn, as you may have heard. Brent is always ready to repair things and I’m happy to let him earn a few coins on it as an extra job. I don’t want to pay him too much myself. So, we went here. But, we really must be on our way now ... we’ll take the stairs over there! Come, Brent! ”

She pointed at a broad staircase to the right of the room. Without further ado she began walking towards it. She assumed that Brent would know his own best and come with her. They ought to stick together.

As Brent had said he was a craftsman there to do repairs and called Yrmellyn “lady”. It had been possible for her to dupe the butler. (At least for now.) No doubt the banquet everybody were working so hard at wasn’t for the servants downstairs. The party was upstairs.

Acting like a “lady” she of course didn’t look over her shoulder to find out if “her servant” Brent was following. She took it for granted! Well, she didn't, but she had to act like she did. Brent might do something else if he found that better.
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Brent nodded at the lady’s assessment of the poem. It was strangely informative but trying to dissuade at the same time. With half a bun left, he set it down on a counter, no longer so interested in eating it. “Yes, you’re right. That letter did mention an attic or something. Maybe there are more clues there.”

When the butler returned, Brent hesitantly held out his hand to accept the ‘payment’. It wasn’t as though he had really done anything. The dream had strangely filled in the crack in the pillar. He was surprised when Lady Yrmellyn contested the instruction of the butler. It was clear that she had something else in mind. Maybe she thought that the plain looking stairs lead downstairs rather than upstairs? She seemed to be a little more knowledgeable on the castle layout than he was.

With a silent nod, Brent followed after her. The stairs to the right widened as they went up and soon the drab railings turned to polished ornate ones. Looping back in on itself, they climbed even higher until they reached a large double door that opened up to a huge hall. Candles flickered on the lush tables of the banquet hall and torches lined the walls in decorated sconces. But more importantly, the hall was full of richly garbed people.

Brent swallowed nervously. Between the homely servers and the finely dressed diners, he felt horribly out of place. Where did the spirits keep this attic?? As much as the cartographer wanted to sketch the beautiful room, there was no where for him to do it, and his eyes were peeled looking for some sort of exit.

At the far back corner, he spotted an odd looking stone archway. It was small, but there were also some tight circular stairs as if it might lead up a tower of sorts.

“This way!” Brent whispered and pointed to the rounded arch. “No time for food. That might be our way up!”

Brent attempted to weave his way through the busy banquet hall, although his jostling caused many upset faces and even a few harsh words. It didn’t matter though. If they were able to get to the attic, they might be able to get to the bottom of this. Or the top, rather. This was truly a strange dream and maybe there would be a proper explanation up there.

There was an angry shout and Brent scurried up the spiral stone stairs. Round and round and round. He was starting to get dizzy as he took the tight steps up the slender tower. “Lady Yrmellyn?” He called behind him, hoping he hadn’t lost her through the banquet hall.

Panting heavily he stopped on one of the steps to catch his breath. The tower was thin, but it had tiny little windows to provide some light. So far, they were the only windows he’d really seen in this castle. However, despite trying to peek through, they were clouded up with dust and dirt. The steps were interesting in their construction. They were more like slices of pie all joined to the center column that held them all together. He was able to climb faster when he stayed close to the middle, so long as he got enough grip on his shoes on the thin sliver of stair.

Continuing up, Brent eventually reached a landing of sorts. The steps ended and the stone floor was circular. However, up above he saw a trap door and a rope. Even though he could probably reach the rope, he wasn’t sure if he’d be able to climb up to the ceiling to get inside.

“Lady Yrmellyn? I think we might have found the attic. I can’t get up there myself, but maybe I could lift you or you could step on my knee or hands.”

If she was still close behind and was interested in the proposition, he would do whatever it took to get her up the last way to the attic.

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The staircase became wider and rails became glossier the higher up they came. Inside a large double door Yrmellyn saw the party she had expected to find. She stopped to have a look at it.

“I’ve been at many parties Brent, but you know, anybody can wear beautiful clothes. I never judge people by their clothing.”

Musicians she couldn’t see began playing music she had never heard before. Yrmellyn began turning around in an unknown dance like enthralled. The skirt of her violet dream dress billowed around her. She was sinking into the party atmosphere and it felt like she would soon become one of the guests in the hall.

And there ... wasn’t that Mariuz waving at her to step in? She saw the face of her long time dead mentor, after all those years...

Come to me...

“This way!” Brent whispered

Brent’s voice tore her out of the trance-like feeling. Surprised, she felt like something had almost pulled into another kind of dream. Staring into the room she couldn’t see Mariuz anywhere. A shaky feeling went through her and her heart was beating too fast. She drew a deep breath, straightened up and looked at Brent. He didn't seem to have noticed anything.

Brent pointed to a rounded arch. Yrmellyn looked at it and saw the first steps of what looked like a circular stairway. It seemed like the only way forward. She didn’t want to join the party anymore but she didn’t believe in returning downstairs either.

“No time for food. That might be our way up!” Brent seemed to not have succumbed to the party atmosphere in the least. Yrmellyn felt happy to have him as her companion in this peculiar place.

“You are right Brent. I don’t want to dance their dances or eat their food."

Brent was already on his way. She wasn't sure if he would hear what more she had to say but in a low voice she tried to tell him.

"You see...for a moment I felt like I was about to forget myself and drift away. The mirage of a dead man I once knew waved at me. When you spoke to me I felt like I woke up and gained control over myself again.”

She followed in Brent’s wake trough the banquet hall, walking behind him now. Brent was not being particularly polite. He pushed people to the side if they didn’t move out of his way fast enough. The ones he jostled met it with upset faces and harsh words. But, Yrmellyn was happy to have it that way. She wanted to leave the banquet hall as fast as possible!

In her eagerness to keep up with her companion she cared even less than him about who she happened to bump into. Besides, Yrmellyn took it for granted that Brent had cleared the way and she would be fine. But, alas...people were moving closer to each other again. She ran straight into a young man with pointed biqaj ears. His attire was flamboyant and elegant. It was brocade and lace, leather and velvet in a mix that against all odds avoided looking gaudy. Long wavy dark hair framed his handsome face. But, his eyes shifted color when Yrmellyn made him spill his sparkling drink. They went from light golden amber to blazing red. He shouted out in anger. Before Yrmellyn had time to react he grabbed her upper arm right over her elbow and swore at her. Harsh words followed.

“My shirt! You have ruined it! Do you know what this kind of lace costs? I will make you pay for this!”

Yrmellyn saw her companion Brent scurry up the spiral stairs. He wasn't checking if she was following. Well! Some companion, that rainbow dripping cartographer! She felt less pleased with him now when he had disappeared out of sight and she would have to cope on her own.

For a moment she considered kicking the pointy-eared man on the shins. She wore a pair of heavy war-boots under her lovely violet dress. The pain might make him let go of her. Then again it could also make a bad situation worse. It seemed best to not cause a scene. Instead she would try to calm the biqaj down. She would fall back on...seduction.

Needless to say that Yrmellyn was more than a little bit rusty! Her life as a courtesan had ended fourteen arcs ago. She had signed a contract with Mariuz Arbin and begun her new life as a mage and painter. After this, she hadn’t seduced anybody again, not even Ha’zel, her life partner nowadays. Circumstances had made them a couple. There had not been any elaborate seduction by any of them.

Yrmellyn had to ransack her memory in search of seductive tricks to use on the angry biqaj. Most of it was memories from her upper teens to age twenty. It made her cringe now when she was thirty-four. Oh my! Ridiculous! But, necessity knew no law.

She shaped her mouth to a surprised “o” and ran her free hand over the biqaj’s chest caressing the lace. “Your beautiful shirt! The lace! How can I ever...“

Even as she did this she felt that she was acting like an amateur. In her younger days it had been enough to look beautiful. It didn't feel like mere appearance would suffice now, but she had no idea what to do next. In lack of better ideas she caressed the lace some more, pretending to attempt to clean it.

The red in the biqaj’s eyes paled from blazing red to a softer rose color. It seemed less menacing now but it was by no means an appeasing sight. But, it was useful, she supposed, that her antagonist had telltale eyes. She couldn’t know what the colors meant of course, but red had seemed to mean red hot anger.

But rose? Lingering annoyment? Or something else?

Yrmellyn, let her hand continue in under the lapel of the biqaj’s fashionable jacket. She tried to make it seem like she did it to further investigate the damage done. She ran her fingertips over the silky fabric in there. “Let me ...” (she managed to lift her captured arm a bit and began ruffling the lace with it) ..."fluff it up!"

It actually looked like it must have been a colorless drink because she couldn’t see a single stain on the lace. She kept fussing over it nonetheless. In passing by she pushed the biqaj’s wavy hair back over his shoulder. She “happened” to brush her fingertips against his neck but pretended to not notice.

“There’s no visible stain. But, I can see that it’s not a small thing to get your attired soaked. I apologize for my servant’s bad behaviour. I tried to chase after him and make him shape up, but alas...“ (She looked into the biqaj's eyes). "I should have paid more attention to you. If you will tell me your name I will arrange the payment,"

The biqaj leaned closer. "Sea Lord Rinaldo Sel'kirk at your service. And you are..."

At this point, they heard a shout from somewhere in the staircase. It was Brent.

“Lady Yrmellyn?”

Yrmellyn gave the flamboyant biqaj an apologetic smile. She followed his example and leaned a bit closer. “My servant is calling for help. He is notorious for getting in trouble but he always recalls to use my title. I give him that. But, I guess he feels scared of losing his job now...again. I would never fire him though. I use to let him work off the cost of his gaffes. It’s important to make servants work off their debts. Don’t you agree?”

"It's a tactic I often apply myself." Rinaldo smiled at her. His eyes were going silvery. He let go of her arm. Yrmellyn took a quick step back and avoided his attempt to put his hand under her chin.

” Oh dear! I must go there and save Brent. This is insufferable! ”

She span around and ran toward the circular stairs. Unfortunately, her new biqaj friend called out to her: “Lady Yrmellyn! I will come with you and help you out! “

She couldn’t afford to stop and tell the biqaj to leave. The warning in the mystic letter plagued her. Brent and she must stick together. But, now they had almost parted ways. There was no time to lose!

She arrived at the landing, a circular stone floor where Brent stood gawking at a trap door and a rope.

“Brent...” was all Yrmellyn managed. She felt dizzy and had been running so fast that she wasn’t able to speak at once.

“Lady Yrmellyn? I think we might have found the attic. I can’t get up there myself, but maybe I could lift you or you could step on my knee or hands.”

“What...” Again, her laboured breathing didn’t allow for saying more. She made a new attempt. “Brent, what the... what are you ...”

A few more more moments of laboured breathing passed and a new arrival was a fact. The flamboyant biqaj joined them on the landing. He put his arm around Yrmellyn’s shoulders and his voice was stern as he turned to Brent. “The lady is not alone! If anybody is going to climb up that rope and crawl through that trap door it’s you! Start climbing or I will keelhaul you! ”

With this the biqaj drew an elegant decoration rapier Yrmellyn hadn’t noticed before. It was short and looked more like a piece of jewellery than a weapon. But, it was still a rapier. His eyes went black as he pointed it at Brent and nodded toward the rope “Move!”

Yrmellyn was able to speak again. “Lord Rinaldo, this isn’t necessary ... I can deal with Brent myself. “

“It has not seemed so, Lady Yrmellyn. This man is taking advantage of your kind heart. But, no worries, I will deal with him for you."

Now, a new voice joined the conversation. It came from above. "Help! Help! If you can hear me, please help me! I have sat in this trap for I don't know how long time! Help! Let me out!"

The voice was neither very light or very dark. It could belong to any gender of any race she knew about.

However...

Emea is a bizarre dimension and anything can happen.A well known drum was beating. Yrmellyn's Emean companion Bizette appeared to snatch her away from it all. As usual the small being was drumming. "Come on Yrmellyn. This place is a quagmire. But, I'm going to escort you back home now."

"Wait, Bizette, I need to know, what do you mean, I ..." Yrmellyn tried to object. It was in vain. Her companion was set on pulling her out of this place.

So, as Bizette kept drumming, Yrmellyn began to feel like the lucidity was fading from her. It irked her that she had to leave Brent to his fate. Then again, maybe he had left her first, by running up the stairs alone. The letter in the crossroad room had warned them and told them that they woul fail if they didn't stick together ... That could be the reason for why she was drifting away from the dream like a leaf in strong wind. No matter how hard she was trying to keep her eyes open and her mind awake, she was falling asleep. Bizette spririted her away. Soon she wasn't aware of what more might have happened or what Brent might have experienced after her departure from the foreign dreamscape. All dreams dissolved and when she woke up in her bed in Volta she was left with nothing more than memories. She was glad to be back in Volta and reality! But, she wondered what had happened to the unfortunate Brent Forrester after she had been spirited away. She hoped he had survived!
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Drawing: Shadowing
Drawing: Using dotted perspective lines
Drawing: Highlighting selected details
Linguistics: Using the language to add atmosphere to a drawing
Linguistics: Manipulative language can be disguised as a cookie rhyme
Investigation: The smell of food indicates a kitchen nearby
Seduction: Using basic cheap tricks from your past
Acting: Acting to make a people believe that you are a lady

Brent, the rainbow mystery man

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Brent

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Magic: None
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Knowledges
Deception: Putting on a false persona as to why you're allowed to be somewhere
Engineering: Assessing vertical cracks in pillars
Investigation: Trying to make sense of a rhyming riddle
Running: Pushing through a crowded space
Design (Architecture): Spiral staircases designed with steps in the shape of pie slices
Endurance: Running up a flight of stairs

Loot: None

Injuries: None

Renown: None


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This was such a creative use of Emea—between the entrancing ball and Brent initially wondering if it was safe to eat the food here, I was getting a fae court sort of vibe, which was really interesting.

I also like how you’ve made this exploration thread feel almost heist-like, with the two of them trying to con their way through the place. Overall, this was a really fun, atmospheric sort of thread.

Yrmellyn, enjoy your rewards and feel free to contact me if you have any issues or questions. Brent, if you return and want rewards for this thread, just reach out, and I’ll hook you up with the good stuff (points).


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