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13 Ymiden 720
Balthazar was fast but in the dreamscape he did not have the advantages granted by his magic- namely his ability to sense motion near him. Prae’s fist struck Balthazar in the centre of his chest and the mage stumbled back a little before launching his own counter-strike. His fists lashed out in quick succession and then Balthazar pushed inwards to try and drive his elbow into Praetorum’s chest.

Balthazar was quick, and damn accurate; his elbow caught Prae right under the breastbone, and the ithecal was forced to stumble back as all the air was forced from his lungs. He’d have to remember that spot in the future; it felt like an excellent way to incapacitate someone. Still, Prae was not a shieldbearer for nothing—even as he retreated to catch his breath back, he twisted, his tail lashing out to try and cuff the side of Balthazar’s head.

Fortunately a tail was not all that different from a fist, though it was not as easy to predict… for most. Balthazar had sparred with Praetorum often enough to know that the Ithecal liked using his tail. He wasn’t expecting it, but when he saw the extra limb flying toward him, Balthazar brought his arm up to block it before attempting to grab the tail and pull Praetorum into another punch.

The downside of having an eight foot long tail, it turned out, was that there was eight feet of tail to grab. Even with the far half of it coiled tight, Balth was easily able to grab on, and pull the larger fighter to him. Praetorum, unused to having to brace against that pull—it was stunning how few people ever thought to do so in a fight—yelped in surprise as he stumbled directly into Balth’s fist.

“Oof.” He grunted.

”You know, most ithecal grow out of tail pulling by six arcs old.” But most ithecal did not have a tail like his; barely a moment after Balth’s punch connected, Prae’s tail curled, and wrapped itself around the arm the human had used to hold it, and pulled him upwards, trying to hoist the smaller man into the air.

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  • Once Paradigm Is Removed: He glows faintly, his skin is warm and sometimes hot to the touch, and when he gets angry sparks literally fly off him. He's a the middle of a field of static electricity so every once in a while when you touch him, you get shocked. Fire leans towards Balthazar and droplets of water seem magnetically attracted to him. He has a series of cracks on his right pectoral that glow of soft emerald. His eyes and the cracks reaching down to his cheeks glow a dark blue. The etheric cracks spiderwebbing up his arms glow orange.

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  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks in Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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And hoist the smaller man he did. If they’d been awake the tail curling around his arm would not have been an issue and being lifted into the air would not have been an issue- but they were not awake and Balthazar could not call on the elements to help him with this. Instead he began striking out with his feet in a quick rotating fashion as he tried to assault Prae’s center mass in search of freedom.

It was, in Prae’s opinion, pretty damn impressive that Balthazar could make such powerful blows without any sort of stability. Even dangling in the air from one arm, the human’s kicks struck true, catching Prae in the chest and ribs. Raising his arms, Prae managed to block one kick, only to discover that physics was not on his side here—blocking one kick to his chest meant that Balthazar was swung backwards, and that the next kick had the force of that swing behind it as well, making him step back reflexively, a move which had no effect when he was physically carrying his opponent. So instead, he twisted his hips and tail, trying to swing Balth towards one of the tables.

The white haired human collided with the table and a dull pain spread through his back. He groaned but only for a moment before his free hand clutched out and gripped one end of the table to prevent Praetorum from swinging him anywhere else. Then Balthazar shifted his body so his feet would be facing Praetorum and he went back to work with his feet.
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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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13 Ymiden 720
Tail grab against an athletic and acrobatic opponent: bad idea, Prae decided. Giving up on the tactic entirely, Prae uncoiled his tail from the human’s arm, and retreated slightly away from those powerful kicks, but not before one caught him once more in that spot under his ribs that knocked all the air out of him. By now the attacks Prae had been continuously taking were taking their toll, and he was breathing heavy, aches starting to catch up with him. “Think that’s enough for one night?” He asked, slightly winded.

Balthazar, gasping for air after having it knocked out of him, responded to Praetorum’s surrender with a small nod and and thumbs up. He rolled a little bit to the side and got onto his feet again, rubbing his abdomen where he’d been hit. “I think so, I’d rather not wake up with anything broken.” He said with a small laugh that caused him to wince.

Prae chuckled at that, then winced, feeling how the motion sent a fresh wave of aches through his core muscles. “Every time we do this, I wake up with new pains.” Glancing down at the sand on the floor, he saw that it only confirmed what he’d originally thought—that Balthazar was far more mobile that he was, with much steadier footwork. His own steps were sloppy in comparison, but comparing the steps to his memory of their fight, there were places where Prae could see exactly what he needed to improve on. Not just speed and steadiness, but also angle and positioning—it was good to be able to see such things so clearly.

“It should be dawn soon.” Prae said. “Well, if your travels bring you to Rharne, and I’m still there, come find me. We’ll have a drink together.”
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Mutations

  • Once Paradigm Is Removed: He glows faintly, his skin is warm and sometimes hot to the touch, and when he gets angry sparks literally fly off him. He's a the middle of a field of static electricity so every once in a while when you touch him, you get shocked. Fire leans towards Balthazar and droplets of water seem magnetically attracted to him. He has a series of cracks on his right pectoral that glow of soft emerald. His eyes and the cracks reaching down to his cheeks glow a dark blue. The etheric cracks spiderwebbing up his arms glow orange.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks in Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Balthazar
Name: Balthazar

Points awarded: 15

Knowledge:
Unarmed Combat x 3,
Strength x 4,
Tactics x 3,
Acrobatics x 2

Skill Review: All Skills used appropriate to level
Praetorum
Name: Praetorum

Points awarded: 15

Knowledge:

Strength: Battle Buddies [1/1]
Tactics: Battle Buddies [1/4]
Tactics: Battle Buddies [2/4]
Tactics: Battle Buddies [3/4]
Tactics: Battle Buddies [4/4]
Unarmed Combat: Battle Buddies [1/6]
Unarmed Combat: Battle Buddies [2/6]
Unarmed Combat: Battle Buddies [3/6]
Unarmed Combat: Battle Buddies [4/6]
Unarmed Combat: Battle Buddies [5/6]
Unarmed Combat: Battle Buddies [6/6]

Skill Review: All Skills used appropriate to level
Notes:

Both of you clearly understand the technical aspects of writing combat. It took me a second to figure out the format that this was written in but once I did, it flowed just fine. Combat writing is not for everyone but the way it was organized was clear and precise. I enjoyed learning more about both the character's fighting styles.

Great job! Oh, and fall less. =-)


If you have any questions, comments, or concerns regarding this review, feel free to PM. Enjoy your rewards!

Avalon

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