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Smoke and Darkness, Part 3

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Vhalar 84, Arc 720

The son of Ziell had been dreaming of that world for more than a cycle now, of an alternate version of Viden that was being threatened by a faction that had been operating in the shadows for a long time before they had finally decided to make their first move. Smoke, an Yludih that he had actually known in the waking world, had revealed their plans to him.

The assassination attempt on Sheud Fahe, the Chancellor of the Academy of Viden had only been the beginning. Ultimately, they wanted to kill none other than Yvithia, his Immortal aunt, and make the city theirs. Doran had decided to save his home from the evil that threatened it.

Smoke, a former enemy of his, had become one of his closest allies. He had just travelled to Scalvoris in order to recruit Alannah Gray, a skilled cryptographer to their cause, when they made their next move. They did not content themselves with a simple assassination attempt anymore.

They had decided to up their game …


When the son of Ziell stepped out of Emea and back into Viden, holding the hand of Alannah, the woman that he had recruited to his cause, he found himself in a world that was filled with fire and the screams of the wounded and dying. A nightmare seemed to have descended upon his home during the short time that he had been away. The Halls of Ivy, the seat of the Videnese government, that were located right next to the Academy, were burning. The flames were several metres high, and the smoke was thick.

Alannah held his hand more tightly as she gazed upon the once beautiful structure in front of them, and then she turned to look at him. She had known that this here would be dangerous – Doran had told her everything that he knew before he had asked her if she would help him – but she had not had any idea that it would happen so soon, and so quickly.

She … whatever she had been thinking about, whatever she had been about to say to Doran, she forgot all about it as people with buckets full of water ran past them. “We … we …” she murmured. “We need to help those people”, she decided, just as a guard moved away from the Halls of Ivy, supporting an older gentleman whose face was covered with soot and who was limping noticeably. The man had left the building just in time.

While Alannah watched the inferno around them with a look of shock on her face, the Mortalborn called out to one of the helpers than ran past them, an Eidisi woman that stopped abruptly, somewhat annoyed at the interruption. “The Mathisi and the Delegates”, he wanted to know. “Are they alive? Do you know? Does anybody know?”

“Most of the members of the government seem to have escaped through the backdoor, from what I’ve heard”,
the Eidisi replied before she moved on. The Mortalborn allowed himself to breathe a small sigh of relief before his gaze fell on another survivor, a human woman that stumbled past him, holding her hand. She was, quite obviously, injured.

“Let me take a look”, he told her. “I’m a doctor”, he added upon noticing the confused and scared look on her face before he nodded at Alannah. The only truly safe place in Viden was his home where he had set up protective wards, but they couldn’t leave all those people to their suffering.

If he let someone that he could save die and hid just because it would be safer for him, they had already won. He would not be as cold and cruel as they were.


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The situation around the Halls of Ivy was chaotic, to say the least. Survivors screamed for help while the guards tried to extinguish the fire. Somewhere, someone shouted that they needed to find a Water Defier because the fire was so hard to extinguish through normal means while the first doctors and nurses from the Infirmary finally arrived.

Doran was glad to see his colleagues.

Once he had treated the hand of that first woman and bandaged it, he started to direct the survivors and the ones that were helping them to a square some distance away from the Halls of Ivy. It would be easier to take care of them if they were all in the same place. For the first time since he had arrived in Viden, almost three arcs prior, he was forced to use triage.

Within moments, he had to decide who needed critical attention and immediately had to be transported to the Infirmary, who couldn’t be saved anymore and who could wait and subsequently separate people into different groups. It … it was hard. There were few events that had the potential of shaking him anymore, after he had been alive for such a long time.

What had happened that trial, definitely had that kind of effect on him though.

Once upon a time, he had been more indifferent, but he could not close his eyes to the suffering of mortalkind anymore. He knew that he would not be able to save everybody, and that it would not be his fault - he was only one man - but he still wished that those people wouldn’t die, for death was the end of all hope, and these deaths were especially painful.

While Alannah who didn’t have a lot of medical experience tried to comfort those that just suffered a bit of a shock, he moved over to a young woman that was lying on the blanket on the ground. They had just carried her out of the building. Her body was one big wound. He could immediately tell that she would die, barring divine intervention, perhaps.

From everything that he knew she should already be dead, but her eyes were open for some reason, and filled with fear. When he knelt down on the ground next to her, she opened her mouth in order to say something, but no words came out. He took her hand into his and held it for a moment. There were other patients that needed him, but he could not just let her die alone.

Nobody should ever have to die alone, and scared. Everybody should at least have someone to hold their hand while they took their last breath, and a bit of comfort. He spoke to her, softly, until her chest stopped moving, until she finally closed her eyes, but there was no time to mourn. The helpers already brought another survivor over to him.
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Several breaks passed before all of the survivors had finally been taken care of, and the dead had finally been taken away in order to be identified and ultimately buried. The Mortalborn’s formerly pristine suit was covered with soot, and blood, and he felt deeply exhausted. For a moment, as he helped his fellow doctors as well as the nurses pack up their equipment, he wondered if there was any chance at stopping that madness, but he had to at least give it a try.

He would keep on fighting as long as there was a flicker of hope.

As Alannah and he finally made their way to his home in the Obsidian Prism, he started to pray, to Xiur, Ziell and Daia and all the Immortals who cared about mortalkind, not for himself, but for those that were suffering, and to Yvithia, in the hope that she would notice his prayer.

They were likely keeping an eye on her, but perhaps that would be a way to contact her.

As he turned around a corner, he suddenly noticed it, a blackened orb, lying on the ground, emitting smoke. Had they accidentally left it behind? Had things like that caused the madness? He had seen something similar once, but he struggled to remember where exactly he had seen it.

He picked it up – his mutations afforded him a certain resistance to heat – finding that it was warm, but not burning hot anymore and carefully wrapped it into a piece of cloth.

Perhaps, it would provide him with a clue, although the likelihood of that being the case would be small. People that were capable of striking without a warning and targeting the heart of Viden, were unlikely to be that careless and leave something that would help identify them behind.

There was something strange about the sky above him, he noticed, as he finally stood in front of the Obsidian and raised his head. Where there had only been blackness before – evening had finally arrived – the sky was filled with green and blue now, a strange phenomenon that didn’t normally occur around this time of the arc – or the trial which made him wonder what it meant …

It was just as he tried to solve the riddle, that he woke up and found himself in the waking world again. As he opened his eyes and turned his head towards the window, he could see that the sky in the real version of Viden was filled with thousands of blue and white lights. He admired them while the memory of that dream of fire and pain rapidly faded from his mind. The migration of the luna moths and the ice queen moths had finally begun.
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From the Viden calendar:

84th: As night falls and the city is covered in darkness the citizens of Viden try to find anywhere they can to watch the sky as the migration begins filling the sky with thousands of blue and white moths.
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Comments: Hmmm, Dream Doran should learn more about triad it seems. Although it was a nice gesture to stop by a woman with no hope of survival, there were possibly others who did have a chance who might've been saved by the time he spent at her side... Kidding aside, this was a nicely written story in the form of a dream thread.

I enjoyed the transition from the dream to waking, and the strangeness of the moths filling the sky of viden. That was a nice touch, using a weather event from the calendar to add to a thread.

I hope to see more in this series, Doran being a heroic figure is really fun to read about.

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