Review Requests 2.2.5

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: A Trial to Remember...
City/Area: Haven/Faldrass
Notes/Warnings: All notes were seen by the Element guards and sent via Echo Scrolls to Kura
Skills Used:
Logistics - Novice
Writing - Novice
Discipline - Expert
Stealth - Novice
Field craft - Novice
Persuasion - Expert
Strength - Expert

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Stealth - Managing to remain unseen in a small settlement
Strength - Hauling all the items for a surprise picnic to the location
Logistics - Organizing a birthtrial surprise with help of others
Fieldcraft - Making a campfire
Writing - Crafting meaningful notes
Persuasion - Getting others to agree to help you with your surprise

Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)

Renown: (how much and for what?) 5 (For organizing with the help of the settlement as she did enlist a few people to assist her)

Collaboration: No


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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: ~~Ignorance & Confidence~~
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings:

Vega

Skills Used:
Caregiving (Novice)
Hunting (Master)
Detection (Master)
Discipline (Master)
Fieldcraft (GM)
Psychology (Expert)
Medicine (Competent)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Caregiving: Carrying an injured individual in a sling.
Hunting: Following a familiar trail becomes easier the more you do it.
Hunting: Note how far from existing items tracks are.
Hunting: Be aware of ways in which tracks might be obscured, even familiar ones.
Medicine: Bandaging wounds must be tight
Medicine: Blood loss can be slow or fast



Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion.
Wealth Points: Nope
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: Thinking Outside the (Sand)box
City/Area: Faldrass/Haven
Notes/Warnings: Nope

Skills Used:
Combat:Unarmed - Competent
Strength - Expert
Endurance - Expert
Discipline - Expert
Detection - Master
Mediation – Competent

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Combat: Unarmed - Not snapping leg back after strike invites opportunity to grab
Combat: Unarmed - Make sure toes bent upwards when striking w/ ball of foot
Combat: Unarmed - Eyes should never leave target, even if body is turning away
Combat: Unarmed - Striking with top of foot increases chance of injury due to location
Combat: Unarmed - Side kicks allow smaller bodies to produce more power
Meditation: Using meditation in concert with combat can be used for a variety of purposes


Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion

Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: Men who Stare at Goat Mutants, Part 1
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Legendary Mount acquisition. Devin's Legendary Mount was approved here. According to this post by Pig Boy Legendary Mounts have excellent training and condition. Since the story is noticeably longer than 3.000 words, I decided to split it.
Skills Used: GM Medicine (250x/77k), GM Deception (106x/90k), Expert Detection (76x/49k), Competent Animal Training (26x/12k), Competent Etiquette (26x/42k), Novice Animal Husbandry (5x/14k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Animal Training: Giving an animal food to make it like you
Animal Training: Using reins to lead an animal
Animal Training: Cooing to let an animal know you mean no harm
Animal Training: Giving food if an animal stops following you
Deception: Saying you are a human even though you aren’t one
Etiquette: Don’t just ride an animal that doesn’t belong to you!

Loot: Not yet!
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Probably not yet.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

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Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: Men who Stare at Goat Mutants, Part 2
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Legendary Mount acquisition, part 2. Devin's Legendary Mount was approved here. According to this post by Pig Boy Legendary Mounts have excellent training and condition. I decided to spend 1 WP on the accessories that Devin puts on his new mount at the end of the thread as the former owner wanted to keep the saddle and the halter.
Skills Used: Master Persuasion (155x/74k), Expert Acrobatics (76x/28k), Expert Acting (76x/43k), Expert Detection (76x/49k), Competent Etiquette (26x/42k), Novice Mount (Land) (20x/5k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Juggling two potatoes
Detection: It’s a male animal!
Mount (Land): Saddling your mount
Mount (Land): Climbing into the saddle
Mount (Land): Squeezing your mount with your legs in order to make it move forward
Mount (Land): Dismounting

Loot: 1 Legendary Mount
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: 10? Devin gets a Legendary Mount and attracts a lot of attention.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

Items

Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

Potions

N/A
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Careless Whispers
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Weirdness, torture, abuse, references to prostitution (No sex implied or otherwise.).
Requested Rewards:
Woe
Knowledge:

Hone: Rune of Night: A newly discovered rune that can rob the victim of sight.
Meditation: x 2
Psychology: x 1
Torture: x 2

Loot/Losses: Knowledge of a new rune, Rune of Night for Woe's grimoire.
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion.
Renown: No witnesses
Skillplay
Novice: Nothing Used.
Competent: Detection, Endurance, Strength, Writing.
Expert: Hone, Meditation, Empathy, Torture, Discipline,
Master: Nothing Used.
GM: Psychology.
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: none
Magic Experience?: Yes Hone.

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: Sweet Home III
City/Area: Scalvoris (Darbyton)
Notes/Warnings: none
Skills Used: Mount (Untrained), Socialization (Novice), Animal Husbandry (Novice), Discipline (Novice), Animal Training (Novice), Psychology (Novice), Caregiving (Untrained)
Requested Rewards
  1. Animal Husbandry: Calming an animal with petting
  2. Animal Training: If you feel nervous the animals can sense it
  3. Discipline: Putting aside your emotions for the sake of getting things done
  4. Mount: Scalvwings are still horses in temperament
  5. Caregiving: How to wrap bandages
  6. Psychology: Empathizing a loss and anger at circumstances
Loot: Scalvwing (Borrowed)
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: -
Wealth Points:
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: Shadow Lost
City/Area: Rharne (Rharne)
Notes/Warnings: none
Skills Used: Socialization (UT), Negotiation (UT), Detection (UT), Endurance (Novice), Psychology (UT), Navigation (UT), Intimidation (UT)
Requested Rewards
  1. Detection: Straining your ears for signs of life
  2. Negations: Putting everything on the table to ease tensions
  3. Psychology: Fear is a powerful thing
  4. Navigation: Noting landmarks
  5. Intimidation: A smile can be frightening too
  6. Intimidation: Using eye contact to assert oneself
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: -
Wealth Points:
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: New Recruit
City/Area: Rharne (Rharne)
Notes/Warnings: none
Skills Used: Socialization (UT), Psychology (UT), Navigation (UT), Intimidation (UT)
Requested Rewards
Not claiming knowledges for this one, it was a bit too hard to.
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: -
Wealth Points:
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: A Change in Circumstances
City/Area: Orm'del Sea
Notes/Warnings: none
Skills Used: Detection; Unskilled (0/250 exp, 0 knowledges), Discipline; Novice (10/250 exp, 0 knowledges), Endurance; Novice (10/250 exp, 0 knowledges), Etiquette; Novice (10/250 exp, 0 knowledges), Strength: Unskilled (0/250 exp, 0 knowledges)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Skill Knowledges


Discipline: focusing on a task while being distracted by someone talking
Discipline: continuing to work in the face of pain
Endurance: distractions from pain help you to ignore it
Endurance: the pain of aching muscles
Strength: carrying a bucket full of water
Strength: scrubbing hard takes strength
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: an old injury in her right is acting up due to spending several breaks on her hands and knees scrubbing the deck; the fierce ache will subside in several breaks if she does not stress it further
Renown: none
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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