Let Me Axe You A Question

7th of Ymiden 721

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Timestamp: 7th of Ymiden, Arc 721

As ever, Prae started with a bar of iron. 


It was long, far too long for what Prae was making today. He'd been making tools and supplies for Haven whenever he had a spare moment, and today he was planning on making an axe. Nothing too large, just a few small hatchets he hoped would come in handy as the settlement grew. 


Luckily, Prae had a small hatchet of his own, a part of his survival kit that he often used for woodcutting. So he was able to get a rough idea of how much an axe should weigh. It wasn't exact—his hatchet was made for ithecals, but it was also rather small, so he figured that more or less canceled out. He could make a reasonable human sized axe, surely. Hefting the iron, Prae guessed the bar could make about four axes—which was quite a lot more than Prae had expected based purely on size. Then again, the axe was a good bit thinner than the bar, so it only made sense that it would look bigger but weigh less.

Marking off about a quarter of the bar, Prae threw it into the fire to heat, before laying out the tools he would need. Once the metal was white hot, he pulled it off the heat, set it on the anvil, and reached for his hot cut chisel. This was just a chisel with a very broad edge, which he set against the marking he'd made earlier. Double checking that the chisel was in the right place, Prae held it steady, and brought his hammer down on the top. 


The first strike was always hardest. Once you got that one right, there would be a divot in the metal that the chisel could lodge in, but the very first one ran the risk of the chisel slipping. At best, you'd end up with a mark in the wrong place—at worst you'd end up getting burned. Fortunately, Prae managed to avoid that this time. His cut was at a slight angle, instead of the perfect horizontal cut he'd been hoping for, but it would get him more or less the same amount of metal, so he was satisfied. 


Now that he had the very first strike out of the way, the rest was easy. All he had to do was set the chisel in place, and start to hammer down. Every so often, when the metal grew cool and the chisel grew less effective, Prae would throw the iron back into the fire, and wait for it to heat up. As it did, he idly considered using defiance, and caressing his anvil with fire to keep the metal on top as hot as it needed to be. The problem was, that seemed a bit like a risk—even with the deference the elements showed him, hot metal would still hurt something fierce. 


Well, he decided, that was an experiment for another time. With his hammer and his chisel, he slowly created a deeper and deeper groove in the metal, until he was maybe a third of the way through. Then, he flipped the bar, and started again from the other side. Prae wasn't quite sure why it was better to cut from both sides—but that was what he'd been taught to do, and he wasn't confident enough in himself to experiment with doing it any other way. 


It didn't take too long for Prae to chisel his way through the bar of metal—it was a bar that was relatively long and thin, instead of one of the more chunky bars that they had. Alternating sides, he soon had the metal pinched off until it was only connected by the very center. And at that point, Prae was able to simply bend the metal until it snapped off, leaving Prae with a small rectangular block of metal just the right size for an axe. 


Heating up the metal, Prae carefully hammered down the pinched off edge, wanting the surface to be more or less smooth before he began forging out the body of the axe. He knew he wouldn't be able to get it perfectly smooth, though, which is why he chose to use the pinched off edge as the cutting edge of his axe—it was going to have go to through a lot of shaping anyways, so having it start of a little ragged wouldn't hurt it any. 


Comparing the bar to his own hatchet, he marked off roughly where the eye of the axe would be, where the wood handle would pass through. Then, he went and fetched the eye drifts, to get a more accurate measurement. Selecting one that looked appropriate, and laid it against the metal, double checking that the markings he'd made were centered properly.


Then, Prae padded over to the store room to find a piece of wood to serve as the handle. He wasn't very experienced with woodcarving just yet, so he wanted a piece of wood that already was more or less the right size and shape. Luckily, they had plenty of material around the place, and Prae was able to find a piece that looked about right. He was still going to have to whittle it down into shape, though. Later. 

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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Setting his uncarved handle aside, Prae took up a punch of the right size, and set it on the markings he'd made. Raising his hammer, Prae held the punch steady, and started to hammer down onto it. As with the hot cut tool, he was very careful with his hammer blows until he had a divot he could really dig the punch into. Then, he started hammering in earnest. Once he was perhaps a clawtip deep, he flipped the metal, and started punching it from the other side as well, careful to keep the two holes lined up. Every few hammer strikes, he'd alternate sides, aiming to have the two growing divots meet in the middle. When they did, he found them slightly off center from each other, but not so much so that the drifts wouldn't level them out, so he let them be. 


With his hole punched, Prae reached for his drifts, and carefully inserted the smallest one into the hole. Then, holding it upright so it wouldn't bend sideways, he started hammering down on the flared head of the drift, aiming to push it most of the way through the metal. Once he had one done, he'd set the metal back into the fire, pull out the next size drift, and then do it all over again, flipping over the metal to make it easier to hammer through. As he started on the largest size drift, Prae started to lay the metal on its side, and start hammering the part of the metal hugging the drift as well. He wanted the hole to be as snug as it could be, and shaped as close to the actual drift as he could.

Soon, he had a bar of metal with a perfectly—well, at least decently shaped hole in it, and was now ready to start hammering out the blade. 


He started with a cross peen hammer, where the striking edge was a long, blunt wedge. This would allow him to start spreading the metal from the center of what would become the axe blade. It was easier to control that way, rather than trying to spread metal from the outside in. It would also prevent the metal from folding in on itself, or so he'd been told, though he had no experience with that himself. 


This was hard, repetitive work, but Prae found he didn't mind it. Something about the ache of muscles performing the same actions over and over again was very satisfying to him—it felt simple and straightforwards, in a way that little else in his life was. He'd place the metal in the fire, pull it out, hammer at the metal while alternating sides, and then rinse and repeat. He took his time, avoiding the edges as he spread the metal out. 


Once he had the metal fanned out somewhat, and the slightest divot had formed in the center, he flipped the tool in his hand, and started hammering with the flat end instead. This had the effect of leveling the metal out, instead of spreading it wider, flattening out that divot and cleaning up the surface so Prae had a better idea of what the end result would look like. 


This should be wide enough, Prae decided. The axe edge was a little broader than the hatchet he already had, which was just fine as far as Prae was concerned, given that this was to be a human sized tool. All that was left to do was to fit the handle.


The handle was easy, as Prae had hoped it would be. His piece of wood was the right size already, and just needed to be shaped and sanded. A hammer and chisel took care of the first part—wood, unlike metal, ran along a grain, and that made it much easier to remove material along that grain. Then, a drawing knife ran along the corners rounded them down so the handle would be easy to hold with human hands. Finally, a sanding block got rid of any residual lumps and splinters, until the handle was smooth to the touch, and ready to be fitted. 

A tight fitting and a few hammer blows later, Prae had an axe that was, dare he say it, passable. It wasn't the best axe he'd ever seen, but not bad for a second attempt—the less said about his first, the better. It would help in Haven, at the very least, and really, that was all that mattered.
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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Player Name: Praetorum

Points awarded: 10 xp
Magic xp: none

Knowledge:

Smithing x3
Woodworking x3

Renown: 0
Loot: An average quality iron axe
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Wealth Points: none

Skill Review: All Skills used appropriately to PC's level
Notes: Praetorum certainly has a meticulous process when it comes to smithing. I enjoyed the detail you went into, with the various types of tools and terminology. It all combined to create a very believable sequence of crafting an axe. I also enjoyed the punny title.

Although I tend to have trouble following such minute details, in a sequence of them, you did a good job of maintaining my attention as a reader throughout this piece.

I thought Praetorum's musings about potentially using defiance were very interesting. I almost hoped he would try that experiment here, but there's always time to try new things later. That said, I'd really love to have a defiance smith on the site. It sounds like great fun, especially if you combine it with ensorcelling.

If you have any questions, comments, or concerns regarding this review, feel free to PM. Enjoy your rewards!
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