[Telka] Saoire's Heroes: The Spirit Table

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Re: [Telka] Saoire's Heroes: The Spirit Table



Fourth Course...


Balthazar had become a bit lost during the conversation, receding into his mind. It was something Elisabeth had seen many a time, and the only cure was allowing him to come out of it naturally – if the situation allowed for that. Gently, she slipped her hand against his leg, waiting for him to come around again.

Daia’s answer to her question was interesting. Had she known that the Sparrow and Warden were the same person? It was possible – lots had happened during the events. Regardless, the confirmation and clarity were needed.
Elisabeth listened as the Immortal outlined what was left behind, and the young mage knew then that she needed to talk to Balthazar, and then Jacien. A job offer was waiting for her, and while she had plenty to do with Haven, she couldn’t ignore her larger responsibility to Kura and Scalvoris either.

Glancing at Balthazar, who seemed to have returned to them, Elisabeth gave him a smile, reaching over and squeezing his hand gently. Before she did anything though, she needed to talk to the man she loved.

Smiling as Oram and Osric answered her table question, she again thought about how much she enjoyed the company of the two and made a quick decision. “If either of you are ever on Faldrass, or wish to visit, please know you would be welcome in Haven as guests. You and whomever else you’d like to bring. It’s situated on the beach and quite lovely.”

Glancing at Daia, she gave her a smile as well. “And of course, Lady Daia, you are always welcome to stop in. It would be an honor to host you.”



Between Courses...


Saoire spoke, and Kura and Oram were honored. Rising, she clapped loudly for both. Both had contributed in significant ways, and she was happy to show her appreciation, especially for Oram, who was sitting at her table. She sent a smile across the table for the hunter but said nothing for she preferred those types of things be done personally and not in a room full of people.

Before she had the chance though, Osric seemingly took offense at something Daia had said about Oram. Elisabeth rose again, laying a hand on Osric’s arm gently as Oram attempted to haul the man back into his seat. “The simplest things are often the most powerful. Your brother understands that, and because of that, now, we all do.” Nodding to Oram, she retook her seat as the others did, curious to see if there would be any other excitement for the remainder of the evening.


Last Course...


Their last courses arrived, and Elisabeth was running out of room for all the delicious food. She tended not to eat a lot to begin with, but something about the food of the feast made one want to keep going. Her dessert -a gorgeous plate of beignets and berries, lightly dusted with powdered sugar and accompanied by a small bowl of whipped cream – left her groaning, knowing her stomach didn’t have much more room but it looked far too tempting to resist.

Xiur arrived, prompting Elisabeth to sit up in her chair a bit. He was one of two Immortals that had graciously offered to bless her with their mark after the Forging, and her eyes instinctively glanced down to the small dot on the back of her hand, smiling.

His question was a good one, and her answer was one Balthazar probably could have guessed. “Nighttime. When the world is quiet. Sometimes I wake in the middle of the night and just sit, appreciating what I have in life. During the daytime, something things are just too hectic, and I think that people need to stop every now and then and just be in the moment.” The young mage loved her sleep, but she also knew to stay balanced, thought and appreciate had to be invested in the moments that mattered.

He offered to answer a question, and she quickly considered if she had one to ask him. In truth, her mind was whirling, but something did come to mind. “Lord Xiur, if I may be so bold to as a favor? I am eternally grateful to all the Immortals that were involved, yourself included. Lord U’frek and Lady Moeske were part of my personal path during these events, and both offered council and assistance to me. I have not been able to thank them, and wish to ask you to pass along the message? I don’t wish them to think me ungrateful. If you, or they, ever need anything that I can help with, I would be happy to do so."

Suddenly, a thought popped into her mind, something she never thought she would have the chance to learn. "Oh! I just thought of something." A smile slipped across her lips as she folded her hands in her lap, gazing across the table at Xiur. "Do you happen to know my actual birthtrial? The trial in Vhalar that I was found outside Viden was the trial that was eventually adopted for such, but I've always been curious." Maybe, perhaps, Xiur could help her reclaim a piece of her unknown past.

There were no more group questions to be had, but Qylios had her own honoring to do, and this time, it was Hart, and Elisabeth immediately rose, smiling and clapping. She had many things to say to and about the man, but they would wait for another time.


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Saoire smiled to those assembled. There was one more person to honor, and she was very happy because it was right to do so.

"Throughout these events, there was one whose impact was felt keenly by many. Her actions and deeds were a start, many arc ago, and what happened then touched many of the people that we honor here tonight. From the shores of Faldrass, where visions of her and said events were seen, to the Heart of Scalvoris, where her ability with children was channeled, woven into the grand story that was able to be masterfully created, she may not have been physically with us, but Vega Creede’s spirit and determination were with all of us, and now, a gift.”
Turning to Vega, Saoire held out a small glittering orb to Vega. The fairies within the room descended upon Saiore, Vega and the orb. As Vega placed her hands on the orb, she would feel an energy surge through her. It was gentle, as though music was flowing within, notes playing within her mind. The fairies began to glow, and the whole room suddenly heard the beautiful melody.

"“We thank you, Vega Creede – Song Forged!"

And finally, as Vega returned to her seat, the feast in Saoire's realm was done. The last of the food was eaten and, as the waiting staff cleared away the plates, Saoire spoke for the final time. "I'd like to give my personal thanks," the Immortal said "to the waiters and the chefs and all those who made this evening so very wonderful. Thank you" She led the room in the last round of applause for the night.

Then, with music playing and fairies fluttering, Saoire looked around at them - each one of them. "I hope that your evening has been filled with happiness and that you carry some of that with you, into the future. It is a brighter future we all step to, because of the actions of those we've celebrated today and I thank you for sharing the evening with us." Then, she gestured. "Please, feel free to stay and mingle if you choose. For those who are returning home, you just need to go out to the turtle bay, and you'll be sent back. Those who are staying the night, I hope you are comfortable."

Then, she bowed her head and bade them farewell.

The Spirit Table


Daia, who was at another table, heard Osric's words and she looked over. "Forgive me, Osric, that is not what I meant or mean," she said and she was genuinely concerned that his brother should know that. "Oram's actions are all the more extraordinary, he is all the more to be respected and admired because he is an ordinary man - without magic to back him up, without the powers of an Immortal parent to enhance him - and what he did is extraordinary. I meant no offence, I assure you." She smiled at the outraged brother and hoped that dealt with his concerns.

Meanwhile, Balthazar's question caused Xiur to smile. "Well," he said, "It's interesting you should ask that. I asked another table what they thought it should be - the new constellation which I will make to celebrate this event. It will be this," and Xiur held out his hand. Above it floated a constellation of stars ~ a spinning wheel, with the symbol of the Forged in the center hub. Each spoke was made from broken chains and the wheel slowly rotated. "A star for each of the people involved. I think this is my favourite," he said, in response to Balth's other part of his question.

Orams question caused a smile and Xiur nodded. "Cassion tells me that every good story has a grain of truth in it, at the very least. That one has a few grains, yes." He chuckled slightly. "Cassion hates stories being hidden from him, he has to find them out. "

As for Elisabeth's question, Xiur nodded. "Of course, I will be happy to pass that along," he said, approving of the good grace and manners Elisabeth showed. As for her birth trial? He looked at her and frowned slightly, shaking his head. "I don't know, I'm afraid," he said. Then, though, he smiled. "But I know that you were born under the stars, I can see that much."

And, finally, the evening came to an end. Xiur bade them good night with a low bow and a wide smile and either their rooms or their journeys home was all which lay before them.
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The Review



Elisabeth

Overview

It was a real pleasure to moderate this thread and it was great to see Elisabeth in this kind of situation. I think what I enjoyed most about your writing was how she was so careful to pay attention to everyone at the table, to always be concerned for others. She's a very complex individual and it was fascinating to see her in this role where she - and her actions - are being celebrated. It feels like she's really coming into her own this season and her part in the Forging was just a wonderful journey to be part of - even though it wasn't comfortable for her at times! You write really well and you convey a woman who is both strong and vulnerable, complex and single-minded with a real grace. Enjoy your rewards!

Points

XP: 20
Renown: 30

Loot


  • 1 Masterwork Outfit as you've described.
  • 1 Crystal Sculpture from your little boxes. While not magical, there is something very lovely about these and they just have a bit of a 'feel good' about them.
  • Chainstone : The chainstone is granted to the Death Forged. For her sacrifice during the forging she is granted this item which may be activated only twice a cycle. Upon activation, the chainstone glows brightly and glowing energy shimmers around Elisabeth forming a protective outer layer, rather like armour. It protects her against mental attacks, such as possession or empathy for one break. It would take an extremely powerful ghost or a revealed mage to penetrate this armour, and even then the effect is significantly reduced.
  • Forged of Scalvoris! – For your bravery, ingenuity, and determination you are awarded a crystal turtle: ~ Each crystal turtle allows you to have a home. Twice a cycle it will transform into a turtle-shell shelter (shellter). Up to four adults can comfortable shelter in the Shellter. No matter what the weather is, the Shellter is warm and comfortable and dry.
  • Culinary Master! – For describing two or more courses of dinner! – Health Pack! Two times a season, this small box will produce enough emergency rations for up to four people for one trial. This will appear in the form of nutrition bars and clean water. The rations can be split further but this will lower the effectiveness of the rations.
  • Group Synergy! – For asking two or more group questions! – Saoire’s Sweets - A small box of your favorite chocolates / candies (10 total). You find yourself unable to eat more than 1 on any trial. But each one provides the following to whoever eats it for the next 6 hours: "Saoire's domain of Gifts is not merely one of physical goods, but of the happiness and joy that comes with both giving and receiving a well-meant gift. This ability allows the Blessed to give both themselves and anyone they're with a feeling of joy and good cheer, banishing negative feelings like sorrow, anger, and fear."
  • Oh, Memories! – For those that accepted and drank the vial, you have the memories (but not the emotions) of the events of the forging from all angles (Ishallr, Sweetwine and Scaltoth)
  • A spare vial - should you wish it.
  • Perfect Attendance: For not missing a round you are awarded 2 Golden Tickets. Also, word of your interaction with all these Immortals spreads and you get sent gifts and donations to the value of 5WP. Please adjust your Wealth Ledger.
  • NPC trinkets – Please accept these humble offerings from Saoire for your NPCs, with our thanks for being part of this wonderfully uplifting thread! All gifts as described by you in this thread are now the property of the NPCs.
  • Deathforged Bonus: For stepping forward and accepting the role of "Death Forged", Elisabeth has taken on an aspect of balance of Scalvoris. Now able to tap in to the past of the island, she can relive the memories of anyone who lived for a substantial amount of time on Scalvoris, so long as she already knows the person she wants to see the memories of and the day she wants to see.
  • Joy Scroll – For those that accepted a scroll from the Immortals, allowing them to connect with Vega/Arlo.

Knowledge

Caregiving x 3
Cosmetology x 3
Detection x 5
Etiquette x 7
Socialisation x 7


Oram

Overview

I really enjoyed this thread and Oram's contributions to it. I love how you write him and, I have to say that you portrayed a sibling relationship so well. The way you write your NPCs could easily be used as an example to show best practice for someone who is struggling to do so. Oram is a fantastically written pc who has a real depth to him. I am always impressed by your writing, and this thread was no exception! I especially loved how he thought through whether to take the scroll or not - your portrayal of his thoughts and feelings regarding Joy have been intriguing and just a pleasure to read. I hope you enjoy your well-earned rewards!

Points

XP: 20
Renown: 30

Loot


  • 1 Masterwork Outfit as you've described.
  • Crystal Sculpture from your little boxes. While not magical, there is something very lovely about these and they just have a bit of a 'feel good' about them.
  • Mednix's Book of Useful Things: That's what the title of this book is. However, it's not actually very useful as a book. There aren't words in it, there's just pictures - each page has a single picture on it. Once a day, Oram may flick through the book and choose one of the pages- then he reaches in and takes whatever the item there is. The items portrayed are useful, non-magical things which could be very helpful in an emergency. One page may have a toolbox, for example, another might have a tent, or yet another might be a medical kit. It's not earth-shattering, but it's incredibly useful.
  • Forged of Scalvoris! – For your bravery, ingenuity, and determination! Crystal turtles ~ Each crystal turtle allows you to have a home. Twice a cycle it will transform into a turtle-shell shelter (shellter). Up to four adults can comfortable shelter in the Shellter. No matter what the weather is, the Shellter is warm and comfortable and dry.
  • Culinary Master: For describing two or more courses of dinner! – Health Pack! Two times a season, this small box will produce enough emergency rations for up to four people for one trial. This will appear in the form of nutrition bars and clean water. The rations can be split further but this will lower the effectiveness of the rations.
  • Group Synergy! – For asking two or more group questions! – Saoire’s Sweets - A small box of your favorite chocolates / candies (10 total). You find yourself unable to eat more than 1 on any trial. But each one provides the following to whoever eats it for the next 6 hours: "Saoire's domain of Gifts is not merely one of physical goods, but of the happiness and joy that comes with both giving and receiving a well-meant gift. This ability allows the Blessed to give both themselves and anyone they're with a feeling of joy and good cheer, banishing negative feelings like sorrow, anger, and fear."
  • 2 x memory vials. Since Oram did not drink his vial, he may take it with him and is given a spare.
  • Perfect Attendance: For not missing a round you are awarded 2 Golden Tickets. Also, word of your interaction with all these Immortals spreads and you get sent gifts and donations to the value of 5WP. Please adjust your Wealth Ledger.
  • NPC trinkets – Please accept these humble offerings from Saoire for your NPCs, with our thanks for being part of this wonderfully uplifting thread! All gifts as described by you in this thread are now the property of the NPCs.
  • Joy Scroll – For those that accepted a scroll from the Immortals, allowing them to connect with Vega/Arlo.

Knowledge

Caregiving x 2
Cosmetology x 1
Detection x 7
Discipline x 3
Etiquette x 5
Socialisation x 7


Balthazar

Overview

It was great seeing Balthazar in this situation, where he's in a formal place and he's there as someone else's guest - and you wrote him really well. He came across as someone who was considering things deeply, really analysing and considering the words of those around him. His questions and insights were great and he really shone as an individual here. I particularly liked the way he dealt with the vial - that was really well-written and showed his immediate response which he tempered because of the situation he was in. Excellent writing! Enjoy your well-earned rewards!

Points

XP: 20
Renown: 30

Loot


  • 1 Masterwork Outfit as you've described.
  • 1 Crystal Sculpture from your little boxes. While not magical, there is something very lovely about these and they just have a bit of a 'feel good' about them.
  • Culinary Master! – For describing two or more courses of dinner! – Health Pack! Two times a season, this small box will produce enough emergency rations for up to four people for one trial. This will appear in the form of nutrition bars and clean water. The rations can be split further but this will lower the effectiveness of the rations.
  • Group Synergy! – For asking two or more group questions! – Saoire’s Sweets - A small box of your favorite chocolates / candies (10 total). You find yourself unable to eat more than 1 on any trial. But each one provides the following to whoever eats it for the next 6 hours: "Saoire's domain of Gifts is not merely one of physical goods, but of the happiness and joy that comes with both giving and receiving a well-meant gift. This ability allows the Blessed to give both themselves and anyone they're with a feeling of joy and good cheer, banishing negative feelings like sorrow, anger, and fear."
  • Oh, Memories! – For those that accepted and drank the vial, you have the memories (but not the emotions) of the events of the forging from all angles (Ishallr, Sweetwine and Scaltoth)
  • NPC trinkets – Please accept these humble offerings from Saoire for your NPCs, with our thanks for being part of this wonderfully uplifting thread! All gifts as described by you in this thread are now the property of the NPCs.
  • Joy Scroll – For those that accepted a scroll from the Immortals, allowing them to connect with Vega/Arlo.

Knowledge

Detection x 7
Discipline x 3
Etiquette x 4
Socialisation x 6


Kori'än

Overview

It's a shame that you didn't complete this thread, as Kori's input was interesting and his questions well-considered. He certainly gave the table a lot to think about! The posts you did were really well written and I hope that we see you back on the site when RL calms down a bit!

Points

XP: 15
Renown: 15

Loot


  • 1 Masterwork Outfit as you've described.
  • 1 Crystal Sculpture from your little boxes. While not magical, there is something very lovely about these and they just have a bit of a 'feel good' about them.
  • Oh, Memories! – For those that accepted and drank the vial, you have the memories (but not the emotions) of the events of the forging from all angles (Ishallr, Sweetwine and Scaltoth)
  • Culinary Master! – For describing two or more courses of dinner! – Health Pack! Two times a season, this small box will produce enough emergency rations for up to four people for one trial. This will appear in the form of nutrition bars and clean water. The rations can be split further but this will lower the effectiveness of the rations.
  • Group Synergy! – For asking two or more group questions! – Saoire’s Sweets - A small box of your favorite chocolates / candies (10 total). You find yourself unable to eat more than 1 on any trial. But each one provides the following to whoever eats it for the next 6 hours: "Saoire's domain of Gifts is not merely one of physical goods, but of the happiness and joy that comes with both giving and receiving a well-meant gift. This ability allows the Blessed to give both themselves and anyone they're with a feeling of joy and good cheer, banishing negative feelings like sorrow, anger, and fear."

Knowledge

Etiquette x 5
Socialisation x 5

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