• Mature • I Saw Bodies By The River

The shallow bay Egilrun is situated upon is used, these trials, for crafts and crafting. From boatmakers to weaponsmiths, glassblowers to metalworkers, the sound of hammers and saws can be heard almost every break of the trial, with crews working in shifts to produce the beautiful craftsmanship which they might, one trial, become famous for.

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I Saw Bodies By The River


98 Vhalar 721
Vhalar was growing colder each trial that passed and soon Zi'da would blanket the island in an even more permeating chill. Every arc around the hundredth trial of the Vhalar, the weather took a steep turn for the cold and banished all hope of being warm again. It made it harder for most people to work, but not Balthazar. Between his mutations and his Fire Forged status, he was not bothered by the cold at all. Snow melted quickly against his warm skin. He wore lighter layers than those around him because he didn't need the restriction and he didn't like feeling hot. Black pants, black boots, black shirt, and an orange cloak. He had his hood pulled up over his head to conceal himself from prying eyes and the Land Troopers had built a perimeter to keep civilians out. His kind, mages, were not welcome openly in Egilrun but it was where the bodies had been found. He kept his hood up the whole time to avoid being recognized and even considered wearing a different face, but he was there on official business so he didn't.

Two children had been out playing with wooden sticks near the docks and they'd strayed a little too far from their parents in search of adventure. They'd been having the time of their lives playing pirates until they happened across a few boxes in the river. Thinking they'd found treasure they opened the boxes... and within the trial the Elements had amassed to investigate the bodies found inside. Balthazar was called, despite the opinions on mages in Egilrun, because he'd proven several times now that he could find evidence better than most others. His involvement was supposed to be brief, but as the three Flame Troopers stood over the opened boxes down by the river he knew it would be anything but.

He'd investigated murders before but it had almost always been a crime of passion. The killers had some extenuating circumstance that lead to them burring the blade in another... but this- this was too clean. Too planned. Too... perfect. The bodies had been cut into pieces so they would fit in the boxes and there were at least three boxes. Cutting them up stopped Balthazar from using his Final Moment ability to witness the death and gather clues from it. Even if reassembled, Balthazar could feel and see the deaths were too old for the ability. The boxes had been used to move the bodies from where they originally fell, further disabling the investigative aid Vri's mark normally gave him.

A crow perched on a nearby building cawed at Balthazar, drawing his attention for a moment before it flew down and landed beside one of the boxes. Fuego had a name but Balthazar had not yet really acquainted himself with the spirt of Death that followed him at all times now. He was aware of the creature and what it could do, but he did not think to employ it until it had cawed at him. "Very good, Crow." Balthazar whispered before the crow hopped closer to the box. "Show me." The winged creature took to the sky a moment later and began circling around while it waited for Balthazar and the other Elements to be ready to move.

"The diri," he did not know if it was accurate to call the spirit of Death a diri, but it was how he perceived the creature, "will lead us to where it happened. We can look for more clues there. Reinheart, could you take the bodies to the local Hall for a better autopsy? Jenkins, I'd like you to follow the diri with me." Balthazar's tone implied it was a suggestion and the other two didn't argue. Reinheart wasn't particularly happy about having to move the bodies but he had Land Troopers to help him with it.

Balthazar pulled his hood over his head just a little more as he and Jenkins, the other Flame Trooper working with him on that trial, passed through the Land Trooper perimeter and into the Egilrun streets. He could feel eyes on him. Angry eyes. He'd already experienced how uncooperative they could and would be towards him but he was there to do his job. The spirit flew in a relatively straight but slow path along the water towards the docks. Jenkins and Balthazar kept up on foot and when they reached the docks the spirit flew further out over the water. Not towards another island, not circling to indicate it had happened at the docks, it flew out further into the Hollow Sea and Balthazar recognized where the trail would lead them.

"The killer takes his victims out into the sea, kills them, and dumps their bodies. Three washed up here but there are probably more." Balthazar explained to Jenkins.

"We should send word to the other islands to be on the lookout for boxes matching the same description as the ones we found." Jenkins suggested.

"And we should request they put more Elements on the docks. Whoever is doing this has access to the water- probably a boat."

"That doesn't narrow down suspects in Scalvoris."

"Maybe not, but it would still be remiss not to be on the lookout."
Last edited by Balthazar Black on Mon Dec 27, 2021 11:22 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 894

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  • Once Paradigm Is Removed: He glows faintly, his skin is warm and sometimes hot to the touch, and when he gets angry sparks literally fly off him. He's a the middle of a field of static electricity so every once in a while when you touch him, you get shocked. Fire leans towards Balthazar and droplets of water seem magnetically attracted to him. He has a series of cracks on his right pectoral that glow of soft emerald. His eyes and the cracks reaching down to his cheeks glow a dark blue. The etheric cracks spiderwebbing up his arms glow orange.

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  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks in Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Re: I Saw Bodies By The River


98 Vhalar 721
Balthazar was back on an Element ship out of Egilrun with the three boxes of remains before the end of the trial. The other troopers lingered to question the locals but the distrust of mages in the village ran too deep for Balthazar to be any help in that part of the investigation. Instead he became the courier for the dead. It never became less unnerving to sit only a few feet away from the remains of victims but Balthazar tried to meditate to keep his mind clear. He painted a picture of the crime in his head with the knowledge he had of what had transpired in hopes that he might be able to stop it from happening again.

He imagined himself in a void again, sitting as he was sitting on the boat. The void shook gently but it was really just the motion of the sea that Balthazar couldn't entirely banish from his mind. The void became Egilrun's dock where Crow had lead the Flame Troopers. Balthazar envisioned himself standing at the edge of the dock and looking out into the sea but the picture didn't become clearer. He didn't have enough information to predict what this killer would do next, he only knew that the bodies were well disposed of before they washed up.

He opened his eyes and let out a small sigh as his gaze shifted back to the boxes on the ship. "I will find whoever did this. I promise."

He tried to meditate again to mixed results and when he reached the docks in Scalvoris Town, he and a few other Elements who'd been on the ship took the boxes to the Element Hall's morgue. In the following breaks the bodies were more clearly identified as people who had been reported missing at various times over the last two seasons. They weren't locals but they'd passed through publicly enough and made enough of an impression that it was notable when they were gone. Hearing that made Balthazar wonder just how many dead there were in the sea who no one would ever have reported missing. Regardless it helped Balthazar deduce a little of the way the killer sized up their targets.

It seemed they were dealing with someone intelligent. Perhaps even someone with knowledge of how Vri's and other marks that would aid and investigation worked. Someone who had access to the waterways of Scalvoris but apparently not someone who knew which ways the water flowed. They targeted people who they thought would not be missed but didn't do enough background research before making a kill to ensure a missing person report wouldn't be filed. Maybe the killer was impulsive? Maybe they had a routine they didn't want to break that relied on time? Maybe, just maybe, it was a strange ritualistic form of sacrifice? It was hard to tell without knowing more.

By the end of the trial on roughly the hundredth of Vhalar, the paperwork was done but the killer was still on the loose and they had no clues to work off of. It wouldn't be the end. Balthazar wouldn't let it... but he didn't know where to go from there. Maybe he could look for other missing persons reports... maybe he could look around the docks for suspicious figures, but he wasn't sure. All he knew was it was not over.
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  • Once Paradigm Is Removed: He glows faintly, his skin is warm and sometimes hot to the touch, and when he gets angry sparks literally fly off him. He's a the middle of a field of static electricity so every once in a while when you touch him, you get shocked. Fire leans towards Balthazar and droplets of water seem magnetically attracted to him. He has a series of cracks on his right pectoral that glow of soft emerald. His eyes and the cracks reaching down to his cheeks glow a dark blue. The etheric cracks spiderwebbing up his arms glow orange.

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  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks in Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Notes: Ooo a murder mystery. I like the observation that Balthazar made to his colleague, that the fact that the person doing the murdering may have had a boat doesn't exactly narrow down the suspects. Cuz everyone has a boat or raft, pretty much :D

Good writing.

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