Review Requests 2.2.6

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Dandelion
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Deer to Door Delivery
City/Area: Rharne, Stormlands/Eureka
Notes/Warnings:
Skills Used: Fieldcraft (mas), Animal Husbandry (comp), Cooking (comp), Logistics (nov), Endurance (comp), Mount (comp), Needlecraft (nov), Navigation (comp), Detection (comp)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Cooking: dicing meat
Cooking: chopping carrots
Cooking: chopping onions
Cooking: chopping burdock roots
Cooking: peeling burdock roots
Needlecraft: patching a sleeve

Non skill
Location: Eureka

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Thread Name: In Breachfang's Wake
City/Area: Havardr
Notes/Warnings: Butchery of an animal. Rorom made a totem of a sea wolf, but that doesn't mean he can transform. He'll have to wait until at least expert before he can transform into an animal as big as the sea wolf.
Skills Used:

Hunting: Master
Jewelcrafting: Novice (enhanced by Isolated calm from Sombran)
Meditation: Novice
Socialization: Novice
Becoming: Novice

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Becoming: Totem of a sea wolf: An amulet of bloodied sea wolf teeth and cord of hide.
Becoming: Sea wolf: A new inhabitant swimming in the mage's mind.
Becoming: Echo (Temporary): A sea wolf's killer instincts.
Becoming: Aquatic Family: Forms that run the gamut from small fish to large whales and, of course, sea wolves.
Meditation: Quiet and isolation is helpful toward the process of meditation.
Jewelcrafting: Drilling holes in the bone to fit cord through.

Loot: The sovereign substances of a sea wolf, and the totem dedication. Sea Wolf amulet (Basic+ quality). A cloak of sea wolf hide/fur (masterwork quality) He paid 2 wp for the cloak to be made.
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Yes please. If you see something award worthy.
Wealth Points: nah
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: Yes, Becoming. Dedication of a new totem is a significant event, and very intense process that can take a few days to complete.
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Seira Shiryu
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Helping Those in Need
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Seira made a donation in thread; it has already been deducted from her ledger.
Skills Used: Detection: Competent (26/250 exp, 11 knowledges), Endurance: Competent (26/250 exp, 14 knowledges), Ranged Combat: Novice (20/250 exp, 15 knowledges), Strength: Competent (26/250 exp, 15 knowledges)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Skill Knowledges

Ranged Combat: x 5
Endurance: x 1

Non Skill Knowledges

Location: The Thunder Den
Thunder Den: is a place you can go to practice fighting techniques
Thunder Den: offers lessons


Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: Sore muscles after lots of practice; nothing rest won't heal
Renown: Small (10) for making a sizable donation
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Florence Returns
City/Area: Faldrass/Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Devin knows how to use one-handed and two-handed blades! The NPCs are all Flavour NPCs and thus not very good with swords. This is a consequence from this review.
Skills Used: GM Athletics (250x/60k), GM Socialization (250x/143k), Expert Discipline (80x/60k), Expert Blades (80x/36k), Expert Endurance (76x/43k), Expert Leadership (76x/32k), Expert Acting (76x/43k), Competent Teaching (26x/28k), Competent Strength (27x/32k)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Athletics: Doing a headstand
Athletics: Doing a sideward roll
Blades: A diagonal cut
Blades: Two-handed swords allow you to attack with more force
Blades: A cut towards your opponent’s midsection
Teaching: Homework helps you remember what you learned

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

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Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Spectacular Spear Sparring
City/Area: Scalvoris, Proving Grounds
Notes/Warnings: Spear combat training. Balthazar is not claiming full knowledge for it.
Balthazar Skills Used: Rupturing (Master), Unarmed Combat (GM), Discipline (Master), Athletics (Expert), Tactics (Expert), Strength (Expert), Endurance (Expert), Polearm (Competent)
Oram Skills Used: Strength, Athletics, Combat (Polearms & Staves) (Expert); Tactics (Competent): Endurance, Discipline (Master)

Requested Rewards:
Balthazar Knowledge: Unarmed Combat - Using legs to block spear attacks
Polearms (Spear) - Lower grip extends the range
Polearms (Spear) - Mid grip is more versatile, but shortens range
Polearms (Spear) - Chops are hard for your opponent to predict
Polearms (Spear) - Basic spear parries
Polearms (Spear) - Basic chop and jab combo
Tactics - Use your opponents moves against them
Oram Knowledge: 1x Unarmed
2x Strength
1x Athletics
1x Endurance
1x Tactics
3x Combat Polearms & Staves
Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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Mutations

  • Once Paradigm Is Removed: He glows faintly, his skin is warm and sometimes hot to the touch, and when he gets angry sparks literally fly off him. He's a the middle of a field of static electricity so every once in a while when you touch him, you get shocked. Fire leans towards Balthazar and droplets of water seem magnetically attracted to him. He has a series of cracks on his right pectoral that glow of soft emerald. His eyes and the cracks reaching down to his cheeks glow a dark blue. The etheric cracks spiderwebbing up his arms glow orange.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks in Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Hits, Hooks, and Haymakers
City/Area: Scalvoris, The Decked Halls
Notes/Warnings: Long brawling thread. Balthazar and Woe undergo the joining process for the fight club in the Decked Halls. Neither are claiming full knowledge for it.
Balthazar Skills Used: Rupturing (Master), Unarmed Combat (GM), Discipline (Master), Athletics (Expert), Tactics (Expert), Strength (Expert), Endurance (Expert), Detection (Master)
Woe Skills Used: Deception (Master), Endurance (Expert), Detection (Expert), Discipline (Expert), Tactics (Expert), Combat: Unarmed (Expert).

Requested Rewards:
Balthazar Knowledge: Unarmed Combat - Basic throws
Woe Knowledge: Combat (Unarmed): Performing an arm bar on an opponent.
Tactics: Basic tag team tactics.
Loot: Nothing material, but now they are both members of the fight club.
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

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Mutations

  • Once Paradigm Is Removed: He glows faintly, his skin is warm and sometimes hot to the touch, and when he gets angry sparks literally fly off him. He's a the middle of a field of static electricity so every once in a while when you touch him, you get shocked. Fire leans towards Balthazar and droplets of water seem magnetically attracted to him. He has a series of cracks on his right pectoral that glow of soft emerald. His eyes and the cracks reaching down to his cheeks glow a dark blue. The etheric cracks spiderwebbing up his arms glow orange.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks in Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Stolen Moments, Saved Lives
City/Area: Scalvoris, Scalvoris Town, Element Hall
Notes/Warnings: Thread is marked as mature. It is the second in a series I am writing which follows Balthazar hunting the serial killer Riverboat John. It features Element NPCs Osmond and Hercule. Another body is found and the team follows a thin lead to see if they can get closer to the killer. Not claiming full knowledge for this one.
Skills Used: Investigation (GM), Intelligence (GM), Detection (Master), Discipline (Master), Meditation (Master), Socialization (Master), Bellinos (Adored)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Investigation - Circulate sketches of victims around town to find leads
Socialization - Convincing a witness to give away a memory
Loot: A lead!
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Mutations

  • Once Paradigm Is Removed: He glows faintly, his skin is warm and sometimes hot to the touch, and when he gets angry sparks literally fly off him. He's a the middle of a field of static electricity so every once in a while when you touch him, you get shocked. Fire leans towards Balthazar and droplets of water seem magnetically attracted to him. He has a series of cracks on his right pectoral that glow of soft emerald. His eyes and the cracks reaching down to his cheeks glow a dark blue. The etheric cracks spiderwebbing up his arms glow orange.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks in Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Dance of Degenerates
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Smarmy, not my best writing. Kind of long for a solo.
Requested Rewards:
Woe
Knowledge:

Dancing: x 3
Seduction: x 3

Loot/Losses: It's implied that he had sex with Lacrima (Fade to black), it's intended to result in a conception of a child, that will appear later.
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Dunno
Skillplay
Novice: All skills used were novice at the date of the thread. Dancing, Seduction, Discipline, Endurance, Resistance.
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: none
Magic Experience?: No
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Seira Shiryu
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Simple Pleasures
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: none
Skills Used: Detection: Competent (26/250, 11 knowledges), Logistics: Unskilled (0/250, 4 knowledges), Singing: Expert (51/100 (FT skill), 26 knowledges), Strength: Competent (26/250, 15 knowledges)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Skill Knowledges

Detection: x 2
Logistics: x 2
Strength: x 2
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: Aching muscles that will ease with rest
Renown: none
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Rakvald Tentacle
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Strangers Three
City/Area: Melrath (Memory)
Notes/Warnings: Ancestral memory thread. Rakvald used his ability, genetic memory to recall his precursor's adventure in Melrath.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Rakvald

Resistance: x 4
Socialization: x 2
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: I dunno
Skillplay
Novice: Resistance, Socialization.
Expert: Endurance
Wealth Points: ---
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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