Review Requests 2.2.6

[Oram Mednix]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Retiarii and other hard to pronounce warriors
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Mild violence. Old movie references. Decided to do a thread in conjunction with the Combat Festival in which some visiting martial artists from Korlasir exhibit some historical gladiatorial fighting styles.
Skills Used: Detection (Master), Athletics (Expert), Tactics (Competent), Linguistics (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Whips & Flails x 1
Blades x 1
Polearms x 1
Shield x 1
Tactics x 1
[Linguistics] Atvian is one of the most commonly spoken languages in the Eternal Empire.

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: None.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience?: No.

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[Tristan Venora]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Adamantite and Tienite
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: The ingots were a gift from Kirei. Pig Boy modnoted a description of Tristan's new weapon; I incorporated that discription into the last post. I only requested 5 knowledges on purpose.
Skills Used: GM Etiquette (250x/91k), GM Alchemy (250x/92k), Master Socialization (151x/133k), Expert Detection (77x/38k), Expert Discipline (76x/25k), Competent Ranged (26x/11k)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Combat (Ranged): Pistol crossbows can be cocked without external devices
Detection: Traces of ether trailing through someone’s goggles
Ensorcelling: Welldust needs to be added to the molten metal
Ensorcelling: Enables you to transfer supernatural powers to natural objects
Etiquette: Don’t just touch things in a shop

Loot:
- A tienite pistol crossbow of masterwork+ quality
- 30 adamantite bolts

Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: Tristan provided the ingots; for that reason he shouldn't have to spend any WP.
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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[Oram Mednix]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Everything’s coming up snowses
City/Area: (just outside) Scalvoris Town.
Notes/Warnings: This is a conclusion of a story of Oram’s participation in the Winter Festival started here.
Skills Used: Business Management, Socialization (both Competent). Hunting (GM), Athletics (Expert), Discipline, Detection, Fieldcraft (all Master).

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:

[Business Management] A good trade benefits both parties.
[Caregiving] Recognizing when somebody is uncomfortably cold.
[Fieldcraft] Ice cleats.
[Hunting] (Fishing) Make sure your fishing hole is the right size.
[Logistics] Organizing and supervising festival events can take a lot of manpower, especially if the activities are potentially dangerous.
[Swimming] Ice swimming is dangerous, even for swimmers in good health.

Loot: A pair of strap-on ice cleats.
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Reviewer’s Discretion
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience?: No.

[Dandelion]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Darn
City/Area: Rharne, Eureka
Notes/Warnings:

Skills used: Needlecraft (nov), Fieldcraft (mast), Socialisation (comp), Detection (comp), Animal Husbandry (comp), Woodworking (comp), Discipline (comp)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Needlecraft: turning a hem
Needlecraft: tacking stitches
Needlecraft: darning a hole
Logistics: rationing out scarce supplies
Socialisation: paying attention to a lesson
Cooking: venison stew


Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Reviewer's discretion
Collaboration: No
Magic: No

[Zana]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: ~~~~A Stitch in Time~~~~~~~
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned thread.

Zana

Skills Used: Seduction (GM) Deception (Master) Investigation (Novice) Intelligence (Novice)

Knowledge:
Seduction x 4
Intelligence x 2
Investigation x 2

Renown: If applicable, yes please!!!

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

[Zana]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: ~~~~Hail, I Bid You Welcome~~~~~~~
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned thread.

Zana

Skills Used: Seduction (GM) Deception (Master) Investigation (Novice) Intelligence (Novice)

Knowledge:
Deception x 5
Intelligence x 3

Renown: If applicable, yes please!!!

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

[Devin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Great Smooglenuff Bonfire, Part 1
City/Area: Faldrass/Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Calendar event. Aidan is a Personal NPC. Mrs. Adams and Marvin are Smooglenuff Manor NPCs.
Skills Used: GM Cosmetology (250x/88k), GM Socialization (250x/143k), Expert Logistics (76x/25k), Expert Leadership (76x/32k), Expert Cooking (76x/65k), Novice Writing (20x/19k), 0 Art

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Art: An extremely crude drawing of a bonfire
Cosmetology: A pirate and dragon inspired look
Leadership: It’s a good idea to thank your employees with more than just words sometimes
Logistics: Organizing a Cylus Dusk celebration
Logistics: A noticeboard makes organizing things easier
Socialization: It’s easier to persuade people if you offer to help

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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[Balthazar Black]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Welcome to the Jungle
City/Area: Scalvoris, Scaloth Jungle
Notes/Warnings: Balthazar has been approved to have his paradigm removed. This thread is the second of a few to explore the task he was given by Vri following Vri's wedding. In this thread Balthazar takes the supplies he bought from the Spirit of Adventure and the crew Robin helped assemble into the Scaloth under the guide of Gaul Jundland. This thread follows them entering the Scaloth and their first day of hiking along water to get where they intended to be. There will be more threads to explore the further difficulty getting through the jungle and back. This is a requested resubmit of a thread that was previously submit for review which needed alterations.
Balthazar Skills Used: Defiance (Master), Investigation (GM), Detection (GM), Meditation (Master), Discipline (Master), Athletics (Expert), Endurance (Expert), Logistics (Expert), Socialization (Master), Fieldcraft (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Fieldcraft - Hang supplies from trees to protect them
Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: Either -1 WP now for Gaul Jundland's services or I will deduct it at the end of the series.
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience?: None.

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[Clavam]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: While the Hounds are Away, the Sheep will Stray
City/Area: Etzos Forbidden Post/Spit
Notes/Warnings: Language, not much else.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Clavam

Intelligence: x 2
Leadership: Gauging the mood among your party.
Leadership: Considering the background and proclivities of your party, to better understand how to lead them.
Stealth: x 2

Skillplay

Novice: Intelligence, Leadership, Stealth
Competent: Tactics.

Loot: His own dossier from Bassett's Office.
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

[Elisabeth Black]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Cylus Checklist
City/Area: Haven/Faldrass
Notes/Warnings: All npcs are approved and listed here and here. The update to Munny Farm has been approved, just not added to locations yet. This is Elisabeth's Zi'da 721 Wealth Thread.

Skills Used:
Leadership - Grandmaster
Socialization - Grandmaster
Logistics - Expert
Gardening - Competent
Discipline - Master
Teaching - Competent

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Leadership x 2
Logistics x 2
Gardening x 1
Teaching x 1

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion

Collaboration: No