Review Rewards
Name: Clavam Points Awarded: 15
Magic Experience: Nope.
Knowledge: Combat: Polearm x 2
Discipline x 3
Endurance x 3
Shield: Blocking projectiles launched by mages.
Tactics: A slight adjustment in posture can change the opponent's offensive paradigm.
Renown: +10
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope.
Consequence: Not today.
Wealth Points: Nope.
Skill Review: All Skills used appropriate to level.
Notes: Ah Etzos! I do love reading anything written in this city and Clavam is an excellent PC in a unique situation- all things which went into making me enjoy this thread even more. From the opening where Clavam thought he was being executed, you established and maintained a great voice for the character in your writing. I thought it was amusing that Clavam kept trying to initiate conversations until he was brought to the hideout. The meeting with the Shieldarm could have gone better, but it seems like it also could have gone worse given that hanging was on the table so it was good to see Clavam get out of that. You did a good job of portraying and maintaining a consistent mood for all the other military personnel around the hideout Clavam was taken too. Oh! I also really like seeing how other people write pole arm combat so this was a great read, thank you!
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