Peer Reviewed: Rewards!
Elyna
Points!:
Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/ 5
Knowledge:
Endurance: Muscle pain after flights
Cosmetology: Braiding your hair whilst wet leads to lovely curls
Cosmetology: Keeping your nails short for work, but attractive.
Seduction: Wearing your hair how he likes it
Psychology: Talking through a panic attack
Tactics: The need for consolidation
Tactics: The futility of brother killing brother to spite the father
Malcolm: Yoreth is sending his son (Vaughn) to him in pieces
Malcolm
Points!:
Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/ 5
Knowledge:
Intelligence: Considering the layout of the land.
Intelligence: Gathering intelligence from all available sources. Whether you want to or not.
Discipline: Reaching into an envelope can take all the discipline you have
Discipline: Asking for information you really don't want to hear.
Discipline: Maintaining some sort of control during a panic attack
Discipline: Living in the face of something unthinkable
Nathan Coats: Provided valuable intel on the Qe'dreki
Yoreth Blackwood: The Hangman.
Yoreth Blackwood: Known for being ruthless on the seas.
Yoreth Blackwood: All the stories said that he never gave mercy to the enemies of Rynmere.
Yoreth Blackwood: Elyna thinks he is capable of killing Vaughn
Loot:
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Overview:
General comments. Oh what an emotional thread! These two just don't get a break at all, do they? I'm so glad that at least they stayed together that night! Beautiful writing, as ever. Lovely.
Story Harrowing! I want to know what's happening now please! But a great story, compelling and intriguing. I was spellbound to see Malcolm being so very vulnerable and I loved the way that Elyna dealt with that. I'm so glad I got to review this thread!
Structure No problems all good!
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