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51st of Ashan, 716
"Are you going to just sit there?"

"As to what?"

Two identical women sat on a bench outside the burning mirror shop, watching the tragedy unfold. Inside, their interest lay dying having just completed a gruesome battle. He suffered injuries that put him on the brink of death - a precipice if one would. The soldiers around them remained on the edge of their seats, waiting to see what would happen. No one entered the burning building, to afraid that it might collapse on them. ”Coming here was your idea. So what was it you had in mind?”

"We shall simply do what we do best, Pier. We shall judge him and provide a verdict for Vri. He stays or he goes. It is a simple matter."

The Immortal twins: Pier and Pre. Despite the brilliant fires that dazzled before their eyes, the eyes were still cold. The blue orbits pierced through the flames, catching the interaction between those inside. For the most part, they both focused on the man inside. They cared not for anyone else. Pier was standing alongside the bench, her long red dress plain cotton. Pre sat with her legs cross and her hands neatly folded in her lap. Her red dress was liquid satin, falling as a blood river down her thin legs. Both dresses, although made of different fabric, were high collared with long sleeves. It covered all but their hands and faces. Dark hair fell down their shoulders. Pier brushed a strand of hair out of her eyes as the wind picked up.

”It is time,” Pre purred, standing up. They moved quickly, faster than the mortal eye could comprehend. They slipped into the burning building, time on their side. It seemed to slow down as they moved. As Immortals, they were able to elevate themselves to a different plane, one beyond time and space if they felt it necessary. For now, they simply move and spoke faster than time itself, allowing themselves the opportunity to work as the mortal man bled out.

”Andráska Venora. Youngest child to Ebony and Kaleb if I recall. He recently started working in the King Cassander’s private guard. The Ouroboros I believe.”

”Well done. For once you have done your homework.”

”Shush. I have won more than lost, so who needs homework. However, I never find the win as satisfying as I imagined. You certainly need to work harder.”

”The scales are balanced. We win equally.”

Pier walked the room slowly, running a hand through the frozen flames. Pre knelt down next to Andráska, examining his injuries. He suffered compression to his chest, limiting his ability to breath. A severed artery in his wrist and possibly a mild concussion from the head trauma he sustained when impacting the wall earlier. There was a broken bone, but all could be fixed. That is, if he received medical attention and blood sooner rather than later. If much more time passed, they would be unable to stay Vri’s hand.

”Do you not see that the crimes he has committed on this day alone outweigh the benefits of keeping him alive? Sure, he has been good for most of his short life. He is noble, honorable, and kind. Yet, he is unpredictable. He ran towards a fight, not away from it. He has betrayed those that he has loved most. How is this a man worth keeping in the world?”

”Predictability is boring,” Pre stated, reaching down to touch his cheek. If he could see her, he might have mistaken her for someone else. ”You have also countered your argument. All this time he has done exactly as he should. He came to do justice by his sister by informing her of his service to the king. Is that not love, to want to be completely honest with one another?”

”He never told her. That point is null,” Pier shrugged. Pre stood up, moving away from Andráska. Pier took her place, to complete her own investigation. ”Intentions may have been good, but actions speak louder. He killed his sister Pre. He had abandoned her in the past, and now he has taken her life.”

”He killed a monster. He did not kill her maliciously. He believe he was saving her. His actions were flawless and pure. Had he known, had she not kept it from him, maybe he would have acted differently.”

”We are not here to judge her. She is already gone.”

”Then she cannot play a role in the judgement. He killed a monster, nothing more.”

Pre picked up the shield with the ruined Venoran rose. She ran her hand down the paint, her fingers sinking into the indentations created by the beast’s claws. ”You always seek punishment Pier. He has only done good in this world. You cannot argue that. He deserves to live and continue to do our work. He will seek justice for the weak and protect those that need it. He has already paid us respects.”

Pier ignored her this round, focusing on Andráska’s position. The man wanted to die. He was giving up. Maybe, their argument was not whether he lived or died, it was how he was to be punished. In Pier’s eyes, Pre was going to appear to win. Either way, Pier had already won. Andráska could pass into the afterlife as punishment, unable to continue living. Pier began to see a different perspective. Punishment through life. Eternal guilt and damnation brought on by self-loathing.

”How do you see this man Pre?”

”I see him as alive…”

”...and I see him as dead.”

They were at a crossroads. When weren’t they? Of course, Pier was playing a game now, ahead of Pre in many aspects. ”Why spare him now? He won’t live through the night? Without immediate help…”

”Again, a failed justification to allowing him to live. Rharne has the Thunder Priestesses. Ilaren has done well with her devoted. They have a healer group. They should already be on the way to help those in need. Her knights are already here. Give him a chance, and he will prove you wrong,” Pre smiled playfully, coming to set the shield next to him. Pier could be tempted with the opportunity to be proven right even when she wholeheartedly believed Andráska would live through the night and well into the next arc.

”Is that so. Dead is dead, Pre. He shouldn’t come back.”

”He’s not dead yet.”

Pier growled. It was a true statement. Pre chuckled, her laugh tinkling. Although he would probably be considered delusional, Andráska was most likely able to hear bits and pieces of their conversation.

”I concede. You win Pre. He may live. Vri will have to live with this judgement.”

”I knew you would see it my way Pier. Now call for the knights. I’ll do what I can here.”

Pier brought herself back into reality, moving towards the door. She beckoned for a knight to pay attention to her. ”There’s a man in here. He’s alive! He killed the beast! We need to help him!”

How degrading it was to have to help Pre help him. Losing an argument was one thing, but this was completely another. Then again, Pier only hoped that he would suffer in the long run. Meanwhile, Pre tore a strip from her silks, wrapping it tightly around his wrist to stop the bleeding.
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51st of Ashan, 717
He was floating in a room of black, waiting… For what? He didn’t know. There was nothing - a void of emptiness and… voices? They coiled around him, one warm like sunshine and the other as cool as the moon. Around and around they went, but the words were unclear. It sounded as if he was underwater, but listening was nearly impossible. Only a few words floated back and forth in his consciousness, and none of it made sense.

“...The scales are balanced…”

What? Something was… wrong. His body, tiring and failing had frozen - stuck in limbo and struggling. Inside his mind stirred, his spirit discontent and impatient to be let go. The voices still danced around him and he tried to stir - What was happening?

“...Is that not love…?”

“How do you see this man?...”

Andraska tried to claw his way to the surface, to pull himself from the darkness, towards a light - any light. He thought he saw it, and swam forward, his finger twitching.

“Dead is dead...”

A soft groan rumbled from deep within his lungs. He was most definitely still feeling the pain of life, and he could feel the darkness lighten slightly, two figures emerging.

“He’s not dead yet...

Green eyes began to fight behind closed lids, each ache lighting up his body like growing flames. The bone in his left arm was on imaginary fire; hot embers seared his ankle and seeped from his wounds like molten lava. Someone yelled for help and the silence shattered as time returned to its rightful pace. He gasped at a sudden stimulus, jerking and gritting his teeth from crying out and he awoke to the lingering nightmare.

He searched wildly around the room as boots thundered into the building, but he looked past the knights descending upon him. Smoke was filling around them, making it hard to think; to see. His mouth fell open, his once soft lips split and bruised, “B-b…”

His throat was raspy, as shredded as the room around them. A longing ache was pulled from his chest like a string, and he screamed as he was lifted by the shoulders and ankles to be pulled from his demise, “No!”

He fought with renewed strength, snarling like an animal when his eyes caught the glimpse of a woman with black hair and-

“Blue!” She was standing, alive and watching, his rose shield at her feet like a beacon. Rescuers moved around the aftermath, paying little attention to the female, “Let me go!” He screamed, coughing and writhing desperately like a child being held in place, his bad arm hanging at an odd angle, his other clawing at the hands that held him and reaching for the figure in the red dress, “I-I can’t leave her!” Why weren't they listening? “She’s alive!” He continued to fight until he was turned, his attention suddenly settling on a different sight - a broken doll lying among the glass and pools of black. Her hair was matted and dark, her skin ivory - someone dead. Not someone. Her.

Andraska’s fighting waned, and he stared fixated on his sister’s limp body, and his green eyes looked accusingly at the woman in the red dress, but another identical figure had joined her. He only caught a glimpse before smoke and knights obscured his view.

Out the front door he was dragged, laid hastily on the lawn, medics rushing over as the pair of knights started to hold him down, “He’s in shock,” the man barked, coughing remnants of smoke from his lungs, “He’s hallucinating, suffering from what looks like severe blood loss.”

His thoughts swirled, and he took in lungfuls of clean air, staring at the glittering stars above. Was she up there? Where did souls go when they died? He hadn’t realized how ragged his breathing sounded until he was away from the chaos of the burning gallery. He glimpsed a bottle being passed above him and then a searing pain as its contents were poured upon his wounds. One by one hands began to pull back and peel away his armor, and they asked him questions that he answered with a blank stare and then closed eyes. He was awake… for now… but he didn’t want to be. It was as if his body wouldn’t let him rest, and the attention being showered upon him was more cumbersome than welcoming. They were piecing him back together, figuring out which parts were broken and which still worked - he hated it.

His arms were freed first. His hands had been cut up but the light of the fires seemed to be enough light. Medics fussed with plucking out piece of glass, others pouring more alcohol on the wounds to clean them for easier view. Another was trying to remove his boot, and he screamed. He tried to kick and hit the healers, but soon a serum was being poured in his mouth and he refused to swallow. They held his nose and pressed a hand over his mouth, “Please!” one old woman with brown hair that had long since turned grey, “It’s for the pain! It will help you relax.”

But Andraska didn’t want peace, he wanted to suffer, and he glared, trying to twist away even when the pain faded and they unlatched the metal of his chest piece. When they pulled it away, it felt like they ripped out his heart with it - burnt fabric and a small patch of skin getting peeled away in unison. He looked down at the damage, feeling faint. His vision was beginning to fade again, the cold returning.

His abdomen - muscled and once flawless was bruised; battered - a bright red blotch resting above his heart. Not as bad as he had imagined (or was it?). No doubt it would scar... A terrible reminder of where he had stabbed the Sessfiend… his sister…

“Zvezdana…” he muttered, conscious finally plummeting into the never ending dark that would fail to give him solace. Instead, he greeted the first of many nightmares.

He had survived.
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The knights that came running into the burning building looked confused for a moment. Despite their gazes searching for Pier and bypassing Pre, they went unnoticed. Pier and Pre had illusioned themselves to the mortals. At least, all but Andráska. Although Pre stood with the shield held up loosely by her hand, it appeared to stand on its own to the knights, wedged between the floor boards. She watched him with a warm gaze, trying to comfort the crazed Rynmere knight. Even she could not keep up a facade that was not hers. She was not even trying. As the knights fought him to drag him out of the burning building, he came to realize that she was not her. She would never be her.

"Leave the body. It deserves to burn for what it did to our city," barked one of the older knights to a younger knight, preparing to pick her up. The man flinched and hesitated before following the struggling man.

"I do believe he thought you were her," Pier snickered, coming up on Pre's side as a thick beam crashed behind them, shattering some upright mirrors that had been cracked during the scuffle. Just as Pre was about to speak, a pair of hands reached out from behind them. A tall man with sleek, unkept black hair stepped over the beam. His hiding place had been destroyed revealing his presence. His cotton clothes were all black and he wiggled his toes in his sandals as the sweat pooled between his digits.

"I see my scales have been working hard this afternoon. What souls do you have for me."

"Just one."

"It should have been two."

Vri wrapped his lanky arms around the women, their red clothes a beautiful contract to his black. He slowly pushed them towards the entrance out into the street. There they could watch the knights undressing Andráska. Pier smiled, basking in the suffering of a soul she had lost. Vri watched, neutral in the whole situation. Pre frowned. Although she expected suffering early on, she began to wonder if this was the right thing to do. Surely his clean soul would spread love and happiness down the road. He would recover from slaying a foul beast.

"This is a victory for you, Pier, isn't it?"

"Do not spoil my fun. Pre has yet to register that I have won."

"I do not concede to you sister. Give him time. He will be greater than ever after this. The people will love him."

"I look forward to your concession sister."

Pre folded her arms, turning her head away. Vri gave them both a polite squeeze on their shoulders. The twins always bickered. They would never love another conditionally. Two halves to a whole. It is was made their job fun to watch. The old woman seemed to have succeeded in getting the injured knight to drink the potion. He was fading fast into the world in between living and dying. Sleep would be his hiding place.

The waking world would be his nightmare.
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He had been placed in a private room in the hospital wing of the Cathedral. As weak and torn up as he was, being placed among the sick would have become problematic. He had round-the-clock observation for three days. Some had begun to lose hope that he would wake. Others whispered that it would be better to put him out of his misery before he woke. Some were desperate to shake him awake to hear his tale. Pre lurked in the corner, once again hidden from the mortal world. She had stopped in now and then to check in on her prize. She had been curious of his ability to survive as well.

A plump healer waddled into the room with a washbasin in her arms. Steam curled up from the water. It was placed on a nearby table. Humming to herself, the healer dipped and squeezed white towels out before going about rubbing down Andráska's neck and shoulders. He was cool to the touch and had required both heat and cooling as he fought off abnormal temperatures.

She leaned over him, taking a good look at his face. He was a looker, that was for sure. A good shave and hair cut would do him good she suspected, but still handsome none-the-less. She placed her rear end on the bed, gently patting his forehead with the cooling towel.

"Won't you wake up from sweet Aunt Gretel? The girl's are taking bets on who will talk to you first. I want to win."

Pre only hoped the scales were in the woman's favor.
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Afloat in a never ending darkness, Andraska's soul cried and lamented, playing back each memory of his childhood in his dreams – the flashes of nostalgia one often saw before death, but eternal rest never came. He did not swim to the surface of consciousness, fluctuating forever between hot and cold as his body fought off infection and fever. He just... existed. No purpose. Only pain. Only guilt. For three days this continued until another voice spoke to him. He had ignored them all.

Leave me alone, he silently willed, feeling the weight of his body shift. With each word, he rose higher to the surface and his mind struggled, trying to dig deeper into the dark, to cling to it. He wasn't ready. 'Leave me alone.'.

Something cool was pressed to his face. The sensation tugged him harder to the surface, and each pat brought him higher. He tried to dig into sleep, to stay there forever, but he couldn't stop. He couldn't stop. He tried to cry out and then...

Andráska Venora's eyes shot open and pierced into the far wall. He blinked, once, twice, the light blinding until it settled. And then the pain came. Every part of his body seemed to ache and he had to clench his teeth. On the bed was a large woman, leaning away from his as she resoaked a rag and wrung out the excess water. He watched her, and when she turned, her eyes widened and she jolted slightly, laughing, “Oh, my! You're awake. Sorry, you gave me quite the fright! How are you feeling?”

The noble was silent, as if her words reminded him of his existence and a great sadness filled his eyes and shattered his handsome face. The memories. The fire.... He didn't want to speak, didn't know if he could. He just shook his head solemnly and pressed the back of his head deeper into the pillow. He wanted to ask if she was alive, if by some miracle she had survived to... But he remembered. He had watched his sister die. He had caused it.

His mouth was dry and when he spoke, he wondered if his voice sounded as much like jagged glass as he thought it did, “Everything hurts.... How... long?” He winced, stifling a cough and tried to sit up further. Gretel's hands quickly reached for him and he flinched away.

“Easy now! You're still very injured.”

He could tell as much and when he shifted, the blanket fell, revealing the bandages wrapped tightly around his torso and the sling that cradled his arm. Even his leg was throbbing and what wasn't decorated with ointment and wrappings was a dark bruise or thin cut. How had he survived? After everything... how? He remembered the beast... He remembered it melting and the delicate woman beneath...

“You've been unconscious for about three days now. People were starting to give up hope that'd you wake. Not many people can slay a Sessfiend single-handedly and live to tell the tale. You're a hero.”

A hero? Andraska's breathing began to pick up and he struggled to keep from panicking. He wanted to run, to move... To do anything, and his chest hurt more than just the burn that seared his muscle. His voice broke and he realized just how alive he was and how much he would continue to suffer, “No... ”

'I killed her. I killed her. I killed her.'

Gretel started to talk, but her words jumbled together and he spoke loudly, gasping, “I shouldn't be here.”

Gretel sensed his growing distress and tried to soothe him, but he looked wildly around the room. It was common for patients to get anxious after suffering traumatic events. If only she knew... He should have died.

The woman stood up quickly and brought a drink over to him and put it to his lips. Andráska tried to pull away, a flash of drowning making him tense before the liquid coated his tongue and he began to settle. Not a sedative to knock him out, but a medicinal drug to calm and lighten pain. He felt the buzz in his limbs lighten to a soft thrum and he quieted with a helpless expression of despair.

Gretel seemed concerned,but still relieved, and patted his face a few more times with the cool rag, “How about we get you cleaned up a bit and then I get you something to eat. I know there's plenty of people that want to talk to you. Would that make you feel better? Hmm?”

She wiped his face and carefully traveled down his arms. He stayed still, lost in his dark thoughts as she changed the dressing of his wrist and ankles. His eyes seemed distant, stuck in a nightmare that only he could see, each detail getting fuzzier after the death of... her.

Gretel set down his leg and was tossing the old bandages away when he looked to his bedside and saw the vase of flowers. Roses. Disinterested, his attention traveled down the stem and glass container to the table and finally.... to the strip of red cloth cast aside. And then he remembered... The two women...

He stared at it for a long time, ignoring the rest of Gretel's words and visualized the red dresses. Among the flames and blood, they had been looming... Why?
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"Oh, the girls are going to be so mad when I tell them that you woke up when I was tending you. Sister Gretel has won the pot against all odds!" Gretel seemed quite content with herself as she returned to the bed from wringing out the cloth she was using. The bowl of water was getting cloudy with dirt and old blood. At this time, she caught him staring at the bit of ribbon. This was peculiar to her. "We brought those in for you. Some of the younger girls had seen you with Novitiate Zvezdana. Rumor has it that you were siblings - or was it lovers? This old mind cannot remember. Anyways, she liked roses so we thought you might like them too."

Gretel did not realize that she was droning on and that he may be in and out of paying attention. Pre rolled her eyes from her position in the corner. This was getting boring. Was the woman ever going to leave? Well, it was about time she did. The Immortal stepped from her position, sneaking up behind Gretel. By now, she had released her illusion enough so that Andráska could see her. Gently she set her hands on Gretel's shoulders. The woman stopped mid-sentence in whatever story was babbling about now. Her eyes glazed over and appeared distant.

"Tell him that you are going to leave now. Go to the kitchen's and bring him something to eat."

"I have to go," Gretel started. Her voice was distant and controlled by the being behind her. She did not seem to realize what she was saying. "I will bring you food."

She stood up as if she were a robot. Her movements were stiff as she placed the rag into the wash basin, picked it up, and walked out the door. Pre kept her gaze on András as the door shut behind the plump woman. "She was boring me and taking to long. I wish to speak with you before I left you to your life. Pier will be here soon, and I do not want her to dig her claws into you."

Pier sat on the edge of the bed, folding her legs neatly. Her red silk dress moved like water over smooth rock. She placed one hand over her crossed knees, using the other to hold her leaning figure up towards him. "You may ask all your questions in a moment. You are alive because I won. Pier and I preside over souls in between worlds. You saved this city from that beast and you will continue to do great things. You still have so much left to do in this world."

So she thought. It would take some time for him to recover before he was of a sound mind to go and do great things. She brushed a strand of hair out of her eyes and behind her ear. "You have to continue fighting my knight. I need you to prove my point."
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Gretel's chatter had been enough to make Andráska tune her out, attention glazing over as his own thoughts crackled in his mind like a budding storm. He said nothing, but when the older woman said her name his head snapped back to face her. His nostrils flared, green eyes blazing with hidden fire, he stared at her intently. 'What did you just say?

In perfect timing, a splash of red materialized in the room, the familiar and yet foreign presence that had haunted his memories. She was like a shadow, whispering commands into the woman's ear, who went still and immediately stood to follow through. Gretel disappeared, muttering about food and the woman faced him now. He stared at her with a cold expression, meeting her eyes and listening as the door shut behind Gretel and the immortal finally began to speak, “She was boring me and taking too long. I wish to speak with you before I left you to your life. Pier will be here soon, and I do not want her to dig her claws into you."

Perhaps if he had not been so numb, he would have gawked, flirted, gave a charming line. Instead, he took a deep breath and exhaled. So, he was talking to the immortal Pre. He had to admit, he was surprised she was even real. Sure, he had prayed to the two sisters, but never had he heard even a whisper of a response. Did they know of his prayers? Was this some kind of cruel acknowledgment?

"You may ask all your questions in a moment. You are alive because I won. Pier and I preside over souls in between worlds. You saved this city from that beast and you will continue to do great things. You still have so much left to do in this world."

His jaw tightened, the muscles in his neck flexing. So, the sisters were playing a game with his life? Was that all this was to them? His eyes narrowed and his good hand curled into a fist as he remained silent, his battered body going as still as a statue.

Pre had gotten comfortable on the edge of the bed, elegant and yet casual, crossing her legs and watching him. Her last words echoed in his mind like a drum, "You have to continue fighting, my knight. I need you to prove my point."

His next words rumbled like thunder, his face giving little away and he leaned his head back against the bed frame, “Lucky me.”

He didn't plan to stay in this world long enough to be her pawn, nor did he want to. And as much as he wanted to curse her, Pier and Pre were the immortals of truth and lies. They held answers, which is exactly what he wanted.

“Is it my turn?”

The smile that he offered didn't reach his eyes, “Since you enjoy a bit of truth, here it is: I'm not meant for great things. I was meant to die.” Didn't she see she was betting on the underdog? The last born? The murderer? “I don't know why-” He was getting upset, anger turning his words sharper and he pinched his eyes closed, so frustrated. So helpless. He clenched his fist, focusing on his breathing. He refused to cry. Not now.

He needed to think. To reason. To use this to his benefit, before he completely drowned in sorrow, “I'll do what you want,” he whispered, swallowing and finally opening his eyes, “If you do me a favor.” Besides save your life? Ungrateful. Stubbornly, he corrected himself, "Another one."

He watched her with the broken face of a tactician, trying to predict her answer, but finding it near impossible. How did one predict a god? An immortal? “Zvezdana,” he almost choked on her name, but forced himself to keep going, “Where did her soul go?”

Was she damned? “I need to make sure she's at rest.” What did they do to her body? Were all the pieces still together? "All her life she's... she's been suffering. I was supposed to save her. If you can keep her soul from damnation... I need to know....” Green orbs burned with determination and heart break. Zvez might feel he fulfilled his promise, but trading in one pain for another was unacceptable.

“...Please.”
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Pre watched him as he tried to battle what she had presented to him. He was more interested in death than the gift that he had been given of life. This was curious to her. Why was he not happy to continue living here. This ungracious attitude was not something she was used to. When the scales tipped in her favor and spared an innocent soul, they normally groveled at her feet. They would praise her and ask what they could do for her. They were perfect disciples. Normally, they became model citizens and heroes. This one seemed to be heading down the wrong path. He was more interested in getting from her instead of giving. That kind of intention was not needed in the world in her opinion.

"Zvezdana? Was that th-"

"We do not make that decision; you do."

Pre jerked her head around to find Pier standing in the doorway. How long had her twin been there? Without letting Andráska, she scowled at the woman clothed in red wool. Of course she would come in at the most inappropriate time. With a confident smirk, Pre moved to stand at the end of the bed. She gripped the iron footboard, leaning over the bed towards him. "We control the scales. Right now, they are perfectly balanced for her. So, she is in between damnation and salvation. Since we cannot tip the scales either way, it is up to you to decide which way her soul goes. After all, we saved you, not her."

Pre moved her gaze back to András, her eyes glittering. Pier thought that this would work in her favor. Did she not understand that it meant he would be interested in living and doing good deeds to tip the scales to salvation? It meant that she had won. He would survive and he would be interested in doing so! "What did she mean to you, this woman?"

"You are stupid Pre. She meant nothing. He killed her. He hated her. If he had loved her, he would have saved her."

"Maybe he did not know."

"Always the hopeful. Finish up. We have other souls to judge." Pier hissed, standing up. She walked to the door. Just before she disappeared into the hallway, she looked back at Andráska. "Die, and both of you will be damned. Live, and you might still be able to save her."

To her, his soul would suffer more punishment if he lived. If she could trick him into thinking that this woman's soul was in the intermediate world, he might actually make it out of the hospital. At the rate that Pre had been going, Pier expected that he would have taken his own life if given the right opportunity. With incentive, he would be forced to suffer the perfect punishment.

"I will do what I can." Pre picked up his good hand, laying a soft kiss on his knuckles. It was the last statement that she offered before getting up and following her sister out of the room. A moment or two later, Gretel came back into the room. She had a tray of soup, soft bread, and water with her.

Pre caught up with Pier, slugging her a good one as the continued down the hallway. By now, they were out of ear shot of the room. Their conversation would go unheard by any mortal; especially Andráska.

"You lied."

"You did not tell him the truth."

Pre bit her life. That was a true statement. She could have told him that they did not control where her soul went. Neither did he. It was all Famula and Vri that determined where souls went after death. "He will want to live now."

Pier smiled and continued walking. "Yes, he will. For once, we are in agreement."
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Pre listened to him and began to speak when Pier walked through the door. Unlike her sister, Pier did not shatter the facade of invisibility, having been waiting on him. No, she was here for her other half and her dismissive attitude said as much. Her words were cold, but gave him the information he was looking for. “Really?” he muttered, the smallest spark of hope igniting within him. Could he still save her?

Back and forth the sisters went, arguing with the other and Pier's lack of compassion, how quickly she damned his intentions made him sit back up, pain shooting through his ribs and causing him to wince. He wanted to argue, to tell her that she was wrong. That Pre wasn't being hopeful. It was true. He loved his sister. He would never strive to hurt her.

"Die, and both of you will be damned. Live, and you might still be able to save her."

“Wait-”

Pier was already heading for the door and it was obvious which of the immortal twins took his side. Pre moved to the bed and took his hand, silencing his protest and brought his hand to her lips. She laid a gentle, promising kiss on his knuckles, and he looked up at her with pleading eyes.

“I'll do what I can.”

They answered no more questions, disappearing out the door before he could recover from watching their conversation. He had to live? What kind of great things was he supposed to do? Grasping at straws, he tried to piece together what that meant, frustrated he couldn't rush after them. But what good would that do? They could hide themselves. He stared at the door for a long moment, frowning and settled back down.

No matter how much he wanted to die... he wouldn't. He couldn't. Andráska's eyes flickered back to the roses at his bedside and then the scrap of dress that was still in his possession, “Then so will I.”

Their lie had worked.
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  • Knowledge:
    • Pier and Pre: Immortals of Judgement, Equality, Justice, Truth, and Lies
    • Pier and Pre: Vri's Scales
    • Pier: The Bitchy and Clever One
    • Pier: Antagonist
    • Pre: Protagonist
    • Pre: Has Direct Interest In You
    • Pre: The Hopeless Romantic
    • Vri: Immortal of Death, Sadness, Remembrance, and Love
    • Location: Lightning Cathedral
    • Gretel (NPC): A Thunder Priestess Healer
    • Zvezdana: Soul in Limbo; You Decide
    • Strength: Fighting Through Injury
    Loot: None
    Injuries: These injuries are imported from the previous thread.
    • Concussion - 7 Trials
      Fractured Ribs - 42 Trials
      Cuts From Glass - 12 Trials
      Broken Arm - 50 Trials
      Burns - 15 Trials
      Cut On Wrist - 18 Trials
      Achilles Tendon - 35 Trials
    Fame: +20 (Surviving the Beast)
    Devotion: +20 Pier and Pre (Interest from Pre, Immortal Meeting, Tasked by Pier and Pre)

    Quest: You have been tasked with the judgement of your sister's soul. Pier and Pre claim that her soul will neither ascend to the stars to be at peace or be placed in the fiery pits to forever suffer until you determine her fate. They say that you are required to live, perform great feats, and pass judgement for them on Zvezdana's soul. You are a survivor, but you are also an intelligent man. One day you might have to seek Pier and Pre once more, to determine if Zvezdana's soul is finally at rest for completion of your mission.

    Story: 5/5
    Collaboration: 5/5
    Structure: 5/5


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Comments: It was a great pleasure writing your salvation just as it was a pleasure writing Zvezdana's demise with you. You are a phenomenal writer and I look forward to seeing what will become of our broken knight.

If you feel I've missed anything or if you have questions about your review, please don't hesitate to send me a quick PM. Thank you!
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