[Western Gauthrel][Job Thread] A pup's first kill

Fridgar is given a simple task by the Jegers

The Gauthrel Plains reach from the coasts of western Idalos to the very edge of Ne'haer before meeting the forests surrounding Hiladrith. The Fields of Gauthrel can be a dangerous place, one that is home to the most deadliest of creatures. It holds many secrets in the history of the land and may offer rewards to those who choose to journey out into the wild plains. It is best not to wander out alone in these fields. Even caravans have been known to go missing.

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Five trials. Five trials they had been on the road, passing through grasslands, forests and now the swamp. How many times had they been attacked by wild animals on their way here? More than average, though the hunter that supervised him claimed there to be far less than normal. It was Ymiden and they were headed to the most humid areas of Gauthrel; the swamps and bogs. Most creatures had migrated to the colder lands, or so the supervisor had claimed. He was one of the dire, fit to command a pack, though he was without for the time being, recently promoted.

He was a nice enough guy, named Halden, reborn. Halden stood roughly four inches below Fridgar, taller than the average Lothar, but not the tallest. His build was well defined, though not excessively bulky like Fridgar. He packed what he needed, no more no less. He was proportionate with his body thickness, in a way. His brown hair had been matted and tied into dreadlocks of all shapes and sizes, though all of a similar length. They were natural dreads, not forced or tied manually. They fit his facial features, somewhat resembling a tribesman. A stiff upper lip followed him through every conversation, never did he smile or laugh when Fridgar attempted humour, although, he was awfully enthusiastic about driving his daggers into the beasts that they fought.

Fridgar was expected to wield a real weapon to progress with the Jegers. His fists did not count. As such, he'd purchased a broad axe with nearly half of his remaining nel. The weapon he carried was heavy, even for him. No normal human could wield this weapon. The pole of the axe was six feet long, standing a good foot beneath him. The pole itself was oak, but had been bored through and filled with a reinforcing metal rod. It would have snapped in its own weight if not for the reinforcements, Fridgar was sure. The blade or head of the axe was somewhat square in appearance, curving at and angle only to continue straight as the blade narrowed at the bottom. The head was attached to the pole with two hinge-like holes that let the pole run through vertically, then bolted all the way through to ensure that the head didn't spin mid combat. In the head of the blade, a circular hole had been held with leather straps, tying it and holding it o the pole, this feature he believed was only aesthetic, but maybe it had some purpose?

They'd been travelling through the swampy bog for a good break. Fridgar's goal: find and kill a Grenwynn. The task had been appointed to him by a packmaster, Though Fridgar asked for a more challenging task, as the Grenwynn was described, all he had to do was not make eye contact and bludgeon it with his axe, it was a moderate level danger, ugly, malevolent creature. It had no use to him, being able to control another creature wasn't an interest that the Lotharro had.

"Hey, Halden," Fridgar spoke, trying to make conversation as they trudged through the marsh. "Shhh," Halden hushed him, earning a look of growing fury from the younger Lothar. "Don't fucking shush me, Halden," Fridgar barked, glaring at the other Lothar unimpressed. "Shhh!" Halden commanded once more, Fridgar saw red. "You want every monster know we here?" Halden whispered. Fridgar sighed, rolling his eyes. Attempting Haltunga, Fridgar spoke "Ga sed feradon landa..." meaning 'I just want make friend'. He was taking the piss, but Halden wouldn't recognise that. The male turned to him with a stern glare "Roc don galasha yun, barsa, col?" Now was Fridgar's time to translate.

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Roc don galasha yun, barsa, col; Fridgar recognised the simpler words, Roc - how, Yun - me, col - then. 'How don galsha me barsa then?'. Fridgar rolled the thought about in his head before ending up completely stumped, he had no idea what Halden had said. "Galsha?" Fridgar spoke with question, Halden would roll his eyes, fed up with trying to teach the language to some bred idiot. "Galsha, impress? Make sense?" the older Lothar explained, leaving Fridgar to think for a few trills as the trudging continued 'How don impress me, barsa, then?' the more he thought about it, the more barsa had sounded like basa, meaning 'you', though he couldn't be sure. Maybe it was an accent?

Assuming that barsa was a accent that the Lothar had developed, Fridgar ran the sentence over in his head. 'How don impress me, you, then?' It was almost complete, it sort of made sense, actually. Could don mean 'about'? How about impress me, you, then? it was weird to have the words mixed up in an unfamiliar order, but it made sense in haltunga. How about you impress me, then? The language liked to specify who they were talking to after their messaged had been said, it was a weird trait that he was slowly growing used to, but he'd recognised it in a few sentences and Kaiserion had confirmed it to be true. "Galsha basa?" Fridgar spoke, another question. The older male raised an eyebrow before shaking his head "Say like: Basa, Galsha. Yes," Halden confirmed, he was on the right track. "Basa, galsha," Fridgar nodded, a simple command: impress him. All he had to do was impress him to make friends?

"Westag," Fridgar spoke with a cocky grin; 'easy'. Once Halden looked to him, Fridgar utilised elemental manipulation Lightning to conjure a ball of electricity in his palm, running sheets of crackling lightning down his forearms before dissipating. Halden would look to him with raised eyebrows before narrowing his gaze. "Sohso..." He spoke bitterly, pretending not be impressed. he turned away from the younger Lothar, looking about the swamp. Sohso, a word he often heard when using magic. It either meant mage or show-off, as it was often used in the same tone. Scoffs and the like often followed this word.

"Sohso, show-off?" Fridgar asked, unsure. Halden shook his head, "Madjic user" he explained. Fridgar nodded, at least now he knew what it meant. They were more than likely jealous, seeing as how much the lotharen worshipped strength.

A sudden splash broke the surface of the water to their left, turning both their heads in unison. Nothing was there. Fridgar shrugged and took a step forward before Halden made a sharp noise in protest, halting the younger Lothar. Fridgar looked to him annoyed "What? What do you want?". Halden looked about, keeping low. He didn't buy it, not for a trill They were being hunted. Halden drew his daggers and widened his stance. Fridgar drew his axe and looked about the swampy waters, what was in there?

As he stood, ready to fight, he noticed Halden's dagger, made of a well-crafted purple metal, like Alistair's spear. Why did everyone have purple weapons? A disturbance in the water confirmed Halden's suspicion, there was something approaching. It had looked like a fin, perhaps scales? Forced to reveal itself in the shallower waters. "Solghannon!" Halden yelled, taking a few paces back and motioning for fridgar to join him. Fridgar recognised Solghannon as haltunga for 'crocodile', people had used the word when he acquired his king crocodile totem.

Ready to get in on a real fight, Fridgar clutched his axe and stepped up close to Halden. Meanwhile, a lanky, blue-skinned creature dropped from the trees behind them, rising to stand around five feet tall with its matted black hair drooping over its face.
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Fridgar ran to Halden's side, raising his axe in a clumsy stance as the waters rose to knee depth. In truth he had no idea what he was doing Just that he was meant to whack the thing he wanted defeated with the sharp part? 'Sounded easy enough. Halden took one look at Fridgar's stance and scoffed, adjusting the younger Lothar's back leg with his own. Fridgar looked down, taking note of the stance he had been assigned. It was like the one that he used while fighting unarmed, granting the most balance and manipulation of his weight. Once that was sorted, Halden adjusted his hold of the weapon to the best of his ability before the enormous crocodile leaped from the water. Reacting on pure reflex and strength, Fridgar swung his axe down at the beast. missing completely and smacking the swamp floor beneath the water with the flat of his blade.

Shit.

He'd swung too early, missing by inches. He'd overestimated the length of his axe. The crocodile leaped past Halden, who immediately rammed his daggers into the jugular of the beast with reflexes not far off Fridgar's. The beast made no sound as he took tit to the floor with surprising ease. "BARSA TU'OR!!" he roared in his native tongue, directly at Fridgar. He wasn't sure what he meant, he'd said it too fast. Halden was staring behind him, keeping his eyes low. Fridgar's eyes widened with fear as he turned, narrowly dodging the jab of a red spike attached to a blue arm. Holy shit.

The creature had aimed to impale him with a red spike of some sort, only just missing. Fridgar turned his gaze away from the creature, swinging his axe blindly. He hadn't seen one up close, but the description of the Grenwynn he'd been given fit the creature in front of him. he hit nothing with his axe as the creature weaved underneath the strike. Fridgar looked a glance to see the red shard of something driving straight for his gut. Instinctively, he led go of the axe pole to grip the blue appendage and halt the jab in its tracks. Using its other hand, the creature held its palm out to the solghannon and hissed. The beast would rise slowly before snapping violently at Halden's arm, missing completely as the older Lothar's superior reflexes sent him reeling.

The solghannon's eyes, they were a white-yellow, pale and disgusting looking, sort of like eggs. Evidently, the Grenwynn had taken control of the beast and was forcing it past the limits of a fatally injured member of its species. Did its control persist after death? Fridgar was about to find out, he let the axe pole in his arm drop until he gripped near the head before slamming the blade down on the Grenwynn's arm that he held, severing the appendage completely. A horrific shriek left the creature's spiked maw as it reeled, pouring deep blue/purple blood into the waters as it screeched continuously. The solghannon would twitch left to right as the controlling grasp on its mind tripped.

Halden looked surprised at the beast below him before driving his right dagger through the scalp of the croco while immobilised. Meanwhile, the Grenwynn tried to make its escape, bounding through the water before reaching dry land. It turned to hiss at the two before rushing off into the distance. Neither of the Lothar looked it in the eyes and instead gathered themselves.

Calming, Halden drew his knife from the still Solghannon and looked to Fridgar with a nod... a gesture? He pointed to Fridgar's paw, in which he held the severed arm of the Grenwynn. Fridgar looked to it, gathering his breath before nodding to Halden. Previous experiences had proven that crocodiles had a habit of coming back to life after they were presumed dead, Fridgar had to make sure. Without a word, Fridgar dug the hook of his axe into the back of the fallen beast's head with a hearty swing. With that in place, he tugged the beast across the surface of the water and lifted it onto the bank of the land that the Grenwynn had ran on. Halden helped, though was unsure of what Fridgar was doing.

He laid the beast flat on the path and took a step back, raising his axe overhead and taking his time to aim before swinging it with full ferocity and strength. The blade cut through the spinal column of the creature, parallel with its shoulders, though he'd aimed for its neck. He hadn't cut through the whole thing due to a slanted chop, but figured disabling it from access to the rest of its body was enough. "Wad shal kro vonda dus, Solghannon, lenkar" Fridgar attempted haltunga, I kill solghannon past, come back and attock, is what he'd said, to which the older Lothar shook his head. "Vunda," he corrected, "Vunda dus." Fridgar nodded, agreeing that he'd butchered that sentence.

"What now?" Fridgar asked, ripping the axe from the lifeless broken body of the massive crocodile. "Track, you," Halden instructed, though Fridgar knew what he meant. He wanted Fridgar to track the creature. "Syt?" Fridgar asked in haltunga, how? Halden shook his head in response and pointed to the marsh. When the younger Lothar looked, a visible trail of blue blood could be seen stretching into the distance. Fridgar smiled, throwing the severed arm to his instructor who caught it without flinching. The two headed into the marsh, pursuing the creature.
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The pair marched through the marsh, eyes up and alert. The creature they hunted was wounded, badly, leaving a trail of its blood that the two openly followed. All was quiet in the marsh, save for the chirping of insects and the odd avian call from the rotting trees above. The axe he wielded had proven to be useless, missing nearly every strike he threw with it. On the other hand, severing limbs had become much easier. Whereas he had to snap the bone and break the flesh with the broken bone before, all he had to do was give the Axe's weight a stern push and pop, a fresh amputation.

Fridgar sighed to himself, Halden caught wind of it and immediately spoke. "What wrong?" the older Lothar spoke with concern, had Fridgar seen something he hadn't? "Nothing," Fridgar uttered with distaste. "Why you *Uhuuuuu* then?" he mimicked an exaggerated version of Fridgar's sigh. Fridgar turned to halden with a glare that spoke 'shut the fuck up, I don't sound like that and you know it'; a very specific sort of glare. Halden rolled his eyes and shook his head. Whatever, he didn't care that much anyway.

"Axe von sadrag, Fridgar spoke in haltunga, Axe is shit. He didn't know what 'axe' was in haltunga, so used common. "Axe?" Halden asked with confusion, Fridgar held out his broad axe, showing what he meant. Halden would nod in understanding "Axe is 'norden' haltunga," he clarified. Fridgar took note, repeating himself "Norden von sadrag," to which, Halden shook his head. "Norden par sadrag, Fridgar von sadrag," Fridgar looked at the man bewildered. it didn't take a genius to figure out what he'd just said; Axe not shit, Fridgar is shit. The cheek of it all!

Halden made his approach, walking freely up to the Lothar, gripping his axe by the blade, smearing his palm in purple blood. "Axe is good, smith by Jeger. Fridgar bad, not know use," Simple enough, Fridgar needed to practice, learn how to use the weapon? "So just practice then?" he asked with a casual tongue. Halden stared at him, pondering a way around what Fridgar had just said before nodding "Ya, ya. Pragdish." Fridgar nodded, grinning slightly. This was true, if he practised at it every trial, he'd get good with an axe eventually, right?

He turned his head back to the trail, focused on finding this creature and finishing the task appointed to him. Only, the trail had vanished. Fridgar stopped, putting his hand out to stop Halden. "Traciau weg," Fridgar explained in haltunga: Tracks gone. Halden would gesture to Fridgar as if to say 'don't look at me, you do it'. Which was fair enough. Halden wasn't here to baby sit Fridgar, he was here in case of adversity, like with the Solghannon. Fridgar looked about the swamp, considering his next move. How did he get back on the trail? Where did he go? A thought struck, a good idea.

Fridgar walked over to Halden and presented his empty paw, asking for something. Halden would look at him questioningly, failing to understand. Fridgar would run his paws up the length of his forearm. He didn’t know what arm was in haltunga, so had to improvise. "Grenwynn," Fridgar specified, maybe now Halden would get it? recognition flashed in the older male's eyes, he then turned around and collected the severed Grenwynn arm from his satchel before handing it over to the younger Lothar. Curiosity gripped the Halden, what did Fridgar have in mind? Fridgar would put his nose to the arm, starting at the bloodied-cut-off part and sniffing the length of the flesh while activating Echo, a becoming ability that allowed him to take a physical ability from any of his totems temporarily.

He'd copied the sense of smell of a Redbear and taken the scent of the Grenwynn. All ursine, in his experience, had the strongest senses of smell of any other creature and the Redbear was no different. His lungs would fill with the scent of the Grenwynn before he removed the arm from his nostrils. Halden seemed on edge, Fridgar ignored it. Fridgar raised his nose and sniffed the surrounding two hundred miles in a single elongated inhale through his nose. He found it immediately, it was close... just a few feet away... Behind him.

Without hesitating, Fridgar span, throwing the head of his axe in a full swing. he shut his eyes in an effort not to make eye contact with the beast. His axe made contact, encountering some resistance before travelling all the way through. The sound of dropping would fill his ears, too familiar of a sound for Fridgar to not recognise it; a body dropping. After a trill or two, Fridgar opened his eyes. The decapitated head of the Grenwynn hit the marsh before him as he did so, it got stuck on impact, failing to bounce. Fridgar's eyes widened, struggling to believe it. He'd done it, killed the damned creature at last.

excited eyes turned back to look at Halden, though failed to make eye contact. His axe would lower as Fridgar shook. For the first time in the whole journey, Halden smiled. Fridgar couldn't contain himself anymore, he had to celebrate his victory very verbally. "Fuck yes!" The giant bellowed, "Did you see that Halden!? I just fucking decapitated that bitch without even looking!" Even if it were a lucky shot, it was bad ass as hell. "Oh my god! I can't wait to tell Alistair about this, I'm so fucking epic!" The excitable Lothar hooted.

Halden would nod "Calm, Vander grond fus sraga hogen," he spoke fluently in haltunga. The first word was an order for the Lothar to calm himself while the rest of the sentence was congratulating him on a job well done. "Pup had first kill now," he spoke after in common. Fridgar would reel his head back in surprise, his first kill? Umm, no. "Not first," Fridgar protested with a narrowed brow, "Fridgar killed before." Halden nodded in agreement "Yes, but first as Jeger," he smiled wider, "Trial of hunter is done," Halden approved with a nod. Fridgar’s eyebrows would raise, shocked. "You mean...?" Halden nodded, "One of my three...? Halden continued nodding, "And I'm closer to...?". "Hound, yes." Halden finished, growing impatient.

Fridgar collected the head of the fallen Grenwynn, gripping it by its black hair. With everything set, the pair made their way back to Hallen den Jeger with a smile on the younger's face.
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Fun thread! I enjoyed reading this and love the way that you write Fridgar. It's great to see his internal thought process, especially when it came to the axe. In terms of what you asked for in your review request ~ not only did this get reviewed ~ devotion is still a thing! I've given you both language-specific and linguistics knowledges, hope that's ok! I really enjoyed reviewing this thread, let me know if I've missed anything! Enjoy your rewards!!

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10 XP Points: Solo
Fame: +10 (monsters, step closer etc)
Devotion: Nope (but its a thing!)

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+ 1 head of a Grenwynn

Knowledge

Axes & Bludgeons: Broad Axe: Basic swing
Axes & Bludgeons: Broad Axe: Basic hold
Axes & Bludgeons: Broad Axe: Basic stance
Axes & Bludgeons: Broad Axe: Timing your swing
Detection: Spotting clues in your environment
Detection: Determining when you're being hunted
Hunting: Tracking crocodiles
Hunting: Using your environment
Hunting: Using blood to track
Hunting: Using scent to track
Language: Haltunga: Phrase "I want to make a friend"
Language: Haltunga: Translation of a native speaker
Language: Haltunga: "Impress"
Language: Haltunga: "User of magic"
Language: Haltunga: "Crocodile"
Language: Haltunga: "axe"
Linguistics: When translating, consider the small words first
Linguistics: Translation can be broken into stages
Linguistics: Placement of words is different cross-culturally
Linguistics: You can guess words by the context they are in
Persuasion: Impressing people is easy
NPC: Halden
NPC: Halden: Nice enough guy
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