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Varthakh
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Review Request 2.1.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: goose
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: (Any Notes or warnings? Violence?)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: No
Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Varthakh on Tue Sep 05, 2017 8:07 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 31
Whenever one finds oneself inclined to bitterness, it is a sign of emotional failure.
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Doran
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Twisting the Truth
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:

For Doran:

Knowledge:
Appraisal: Appraising a weapon
Deception: Hiding who you are
Detection: A face in the crowd
Interrogation: Finding out where somebody's allegiance lies
Investigation: Investigating people's opinion of you
Persuasion: Mentioning a reward in order to ensure somebody's loyalty
Storytelling: What really happened in Oscillus

Nauta: Aukari
Nauta: Thinks Faldrun's a bastard
Nauta: Thinks you are brave
Nauta: Is connected to Syroa somehow
Nauta: A potential ally?
Nightshade: One of Xiur's people
Xiur: Might be waiting outside of Etzos

For Nauta:

Knowledge:
Appraisal: Consumables has to be something people actually want to use
Alchemy: Still-moka: Mutagen made of stillborns
Intimidation: Confirm the truth by testing on the statement's source
Stealth: Approach from the back
Interrogation: Use innuendos no one else understands
Negotiation: Hint a better conflicting offer
Tactics: Use the carelessness of your enemies
Stealth: The crowds is the best concealment in the city
Blades: A stab in the back is just as effective as any other

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 193

Mutations

N/A

Blessings

N/A

Worn Items

Ring of Reversal
Ring of Immunity
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Victor Amielle
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Thread Name: A Picnic with the Dead
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: I paid 4 gn for a bottle of Ashan's Twilight and another 5 gn for the pastries. Let me know if that's enough!
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: Details of a Person's Appearance
Etiquette: Offering your Guest Food and Drink
Research: Keeping a Research Journal
Research: Asking Questions to find out more about your Research Topic
Sociology: The Importance of Rituals around Death
Sociology: Notions of Community
Sociology: Cultural Relevance of Death Rituals
Sociology: Community Grief has many Layers

Faith: Not a Native of Scalvoris
Faith: Worships Famula, Vri and Moske
Faith: Engaged to a Physcist and Chemist
Faith: You share a Birth Trial with her Fiancé
Faith: An Asssociate Professor of Medicine
Immortal: Famula: The Immortal of Souls, Servitude, Resurection and Blood
Immortal: Famula: How she decides which Souls move on to the Afterlife and which Souls stay
Scalvoris Event: Soul Light Night
Loot: A journal (gift from Faith)
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Give a Gift: +2 (pastries)
Collaboration: Yes, with Faith
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 182

Appearance

Due to one of his Awakenings, Victor's eyes glow with a soft silver light.

Items

Victor owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

Potions

N/A
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Alistair
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Daudra Dura III
City/Area: Fields of Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: Heavy violence, general insanity
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
There's a lot that happened here, but... eh. I'm lazy.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Burnt lower legs for several trials
Fame: +1 General Good Deed, Protecting Finn - +1 General Good Deed, Escorting Finn to complete his mission - +2
Devotion: +10 Ralaith
+2 Teach someone to survive
+3 Share wisdom with a loved one
+4 Dedicate an upcoming battle to a lost love in the name of Ralaith
+1 Pray to Ralaith

Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 100
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Tio Silver
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Thread Name: Alchemy; It's a Blast
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Alchemy: Requires chemistry to be good at
Alchemy: Requires maths to be good at
Alchemy: Patience is key
Alchemy: Alchemy tends to be flammable
Alchemy: Making foul smelling smoke
Alchemy: Refine your reagents
Alchemy: Make use of layers
Alchemy: Primer Reagents
Alchemy: Consider opposing effects
Chemistry: Helps to support Alchemy


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Tio Silver on Thu Sep 07, 2017 12:14 pm, edited 2 times in total. word count: 80
Fast Facts
Noticeable quirks your character can see when threading with Tio.

Floats

Tio floats in the air, usually just a foot off the ground.

Explodeibur

Tio wears a scary looking gauntlet on his right hand that is clearly magical. It creates explosions.

Mercury

Tio has a masked alter ego who leads The Court of Miracles.

Enchanting Voice

Tio's voice has hypnotic properties.
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Nauta F'mos Geey
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Clothes Maketh Man
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: CHILD LABOUR! Lmao.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Chemistry: Golden Salamander resin fireproofs
  • Sewing: Working with velvet
  • Appraisal: Something important and valuable would not be in just any store
  • Fieldcraft: Some plants are hard to find in some seasons
  • Mining: Fernstones are only from Scalvoris
  • Disguise: Using Fernstones to mask Aukari body heat
Loot: As listed.
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Fame: -
Collaboration: -
Magic EXP: -
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Last edited by Nauta F'mos Geey on Thu Sep 07, 2017 3:29 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 72
But I don't want to cure cancer. I want to turn people into dinosaurs.
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Foreign Tongue
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Nope. Just a cute memory thread.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledge-
Linguistics: How to move your tongue
Linguistics: When to or when not to roll R's
Linguistics: Comparing Common to Rakahi
Linguistics: Why you should be fluent in many languages
Linguistics: Homonyms
Discipline: The patience to stick out the learning process

Other Knowledge-
Mother: Insistent you learn many languages
Mother: Honestly wants what's best for you
Mother: Biqaj form is named Valerie
Father: Isn't very good with Rakahi
Father: A good reason to learn common
Father: Biqaj form is named Orik

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Aqihlih on Thu Sep 07, 2017 9:26 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 118
Rakahi ~ ~ ~ Common ~ ~ ~ Ulehi
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Kyin
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Thread Name: Salt in the Wound
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Coarse language
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
-Discipline: Supressing Insanity
-Deception: Seeming Interested
-Strength: Pretentious Lady Bowling
-Smithing: Creating a Deadbolt
-Smithing: Hole-punching
-Negotiation: Sometimes Gifts are Mean-spirited
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: (Yes/No)
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Last edited by Kyin on Thu Sep 07, 2017 6:06 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 54
Furthermore, I am of the opinion that Carthage should be destroyed!
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Pash Raj'oriq
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Thread Name: Making a Point, Part 1
City/Area: Beach near Ne’Haer
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge (6 for 1p solo):
Blades (Tamo Dagger): Hammer Grip
Blades (Tamo Dagger): Ice Pick Grip
Blades (Tamo Dagger): Six Angles of Attack
Blades (Tamo Dagger): Footwork: Triangles
Endurance: Pushing through the cold with exercise
Strength: Using your core

Other Knowledge:
[NPC] Yarik: Strict but mischievous
[NPC] Yarik: Can probably kill with a stick
[NPC] Torim: Strong but cocky
[NPC] Torim: Overconfidence is his downfall

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Sore, achy, and some bruises for a few trials, but nothing majorly inhibitive.
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: No.
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Last edited by Pash Raj'oriq on Thu Sep 07, 2017 3:39 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 112
Rakahi | Rakahi Pidgin | Common | Xanthean

Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Review Request 2.1.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Mutcha vs Kaige
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Mild violence, nothing awful.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes

Nauta
Knowledge:
Cooking: Coffee, an acquired taste
Psychology: Only strong people dare to fight guards
Defiance: Earth constructs are solid enough to take a hit
Surgery: Loud noises can throw a person off balance
Discipline: No one is going to rush into a suicide attack
Ranged: Too many arrows can hit people who aren't targets
Defiance: Stone pillars can form fast enough to launch people
Surgery: Leave the internal damage to the professionals

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: +1 for Good Deed (Helping the Mage)

Noth
Knowledge:
Ranged: Legshots Reduce Mobility
Ranged: Legshots Bleed Profusely
Discipline: Reacting under Pressure
Discipline: Situation Triage
Leadership: Giving Orders Rapidly
Detection: Guards Only Mill to Arrest Someone Secretly or By Surprise

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewers Discretion (Did a good deed by stopping a fight via arrow, but also kept very hidden throughout)

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Last edited by Noth on Sat Sep 09, 2017 1:28 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 168
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As a note: Noth is a Grandmaster in Intimidation. That means that he's at least as scary as the Count from Sesame Street. Beware.

"The tyrant confuses those he can't convince, corrupts those he can't confuse, and crushes those he can't corrupt." - Anonymous
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