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Tio Silver
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Review Request 2.1.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Taboo Strikes V
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Acting: Playing an angry boss
Deception: Impersonation and employer
Pickpocketing: Lifting a key from a pocket
Pickpocketing: Make sure nobody's watching
Pickpocketing: Easier on drunk people
Transformer's Toolbox: Mimicking a man's face
Transformer's Toolbox: Mimicking voices is hard
Transformer's Toolbox: Assuming a nondescript appearance


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: -2 (Breaking the law)
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Tio Silver on Thu Sep 07, 2017 7:39 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 80
Fast Facts
Noticeable quirks your character can see when threading with Tio.

Floats

Tio floats in the air, usually just a foot off the ground.

Explodeibur

Tio wears a scary looking gauntlet on his right hand that is clearly magical. It creates explosions.

Mercury

Tio has a masked alter ego who leads The Court of Miracles.

Enchanting Voice

Tio's voice has hypnotic properties.
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Neronin
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: On Dead Wings
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Necromantic violence, suggestive abuse themes
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: Resisting the Urge to submit to magic
Necromancy: Link: Used to steal
Necromancy: Siphon
Necromancy: Use Siphon to heal wounds
Endurance: Use fury to resist the pain of a punch

Loot: EDIT: the scarf and tunic please haha.
Injuries/Overstepping: some bruises and cuts on face if not fully healed by Siphon
Fame: Reviewer Discretion
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Seige
City/Area: Etzos, farmland
Notes/Warnings: undead skeleton stuff, nothing major
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Necromancy: Requires a supply of bodies
Stealth: Graverobbing at night to mask operation
Intimidation: Threatening death on innocents

PC: Lecia

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Perhaps minor
Fame: Reviewer Discretion
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes

Lecia has been inactive since March.
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Kyin
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Red Leather, Yellow Leather
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Little bit of bad language
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Leather Working: Blacking
Leather Working: Tacking
Discipline: Waiting For an Opportunity (To get a mentally handicapped woodworker fired.)
Negotiation: Firing Some People Makes the Boss Happy (and therefore more likely to give you what you want)
Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Kyin on Fri Sep 08, 2017 11:28 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 69
Furthermore, I am of the opinion that Carthage should be destroyed!
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Let the Sands Take Them
City/Area: Hotlands
Notes/Warnings: There is a quick skirmish between Imperial troops and desert nomads, but Nahh.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Animal Training (Falconry): Command to Return to Base
  • Endurance: Wounds Come in Threes
  • Fieldcraft: Knowing When Surroundings Won't Even Support a Desert Clan
  • Leadership: Facing Down Another Leader to Earn Their Respect
  • Leadership: Stepping up to offer Sanctuary
  • Logistics: Knowing What Material to Take, and What to Leave
Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Reviewer discretion
Collaboration: Yes, technically - Started out as Kira solo, then became a thread for her to join Eddrick's faction, so it became collaborative. Then she vanished on us, and Eddrick had to finish it.
Magic EXP: Kira did some defiance, but she's been gone for 4 months. :(
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: A fine time for a wine vine
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None

Requested Rewards:
Faith
Skill Knowledge:
Agriculture: Growing grapes vs trees
Agriculture: Planning land use
Business Management: Ensure that you understand all the workings of your business
Business Management: Consider the long term gain.
Vinting: Wine to grape ratio
Vinting: Storing techniques


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Nope

Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.
Padraig
Skill Knowledge:
Logistics: Lists of equipment for testing.
Logistics: Testing to ensure maximum quality
Vinting: Product from grapes, rather than tree fruit.
Vinting: Grape type impacts taste of the final wine.
Vinting: Wood used in caskets impacts flavor.
Vinting: Storing wine in a cool, dark place
Vinting: Keep it laying horizontally
Vinting: Yield per acre


Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame:
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.
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Neronin
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Come, What's Due
City/Area: Dreamscape (Neronin's)
Notes/Warnings: Only some violence
Requested Rewards:
Faith
Knowledge:
Neronin: Necromancer
Neronin: Killed his parents

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Neronin
Knowledge: None
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Navyri
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Review Request 2.1.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Taking From the Treasury
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Just a petty theft thread. Really pretty simple, but maybe a little rushed?
Requested Rewards: 10/15
Knowledge:
Endurance: The Challenge of Added Weight
Unarmed Combat: The Element of Surprise
Unarmed Combat: Shoving Your Opponent
Wings of Steel (Tarouz): Deflecting Arrows
Wings of Steel (Tarouz): Drains Your Stamina
Wings of Steel (Tarouz): Fantastic Armor
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Location: Scalvoris
Scalvoris: Glass Temple
Glass Temple: Very Serious About Troublemakers

Loot: Some gold (amount up to reviewer), & a book. I was hoping the book could have some general information on the immortals.
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Yes. Negative, please.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Navyri on Sun Sep 10, 2017 8:16 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 113
"At last. It has been too long since I have walked the face of this world. Too long have I been locked there, awaiting my champion to release me. My champion... This is you, daughter of Audrae. You have, whether knowingly or not, released me from my self imprisonment, and are here to fulfill the destiny I have seen written in the tapestry of nature. You, daughter of Audrae's daughter, will be my foothold in this world." - Belaera to The Nightingale, after the 600 arc imprisonment
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Seam and Sinew
City/Area: Etzos, Noth's Cavern
Notes/Warnings: Gross decay necro stuff!
Requested Rewards:
Necromancy: Stitchborn
Necromancy: Pestilent
Research: Documenting an experiment
Writing: Using a quill with one hand while casting with the other
Writing: Keeping notes away from blood!

Loot: One gross dog-snake undead thing (no well so we should be using it up soon after this thread 2-4 trials)
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah im a mastah
Fame: No thank you
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: The One On The Right
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: This is part one - the next part will be a few hours later.

Requested Rewards:
Padraig
Skill Knowledge:
Baking: More of a science than an art
Baking: Cakes require precise measurements
Baking: Can be messy
Caregiving: Making up for missed birthdays
Deception: Hiding surprises
Seduction: Romantic sentiments can be spoken in the strangest phrases


Loot: Financials all dealt with at end of thread and taken from ledger
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Gift x 15 (Wooden box, Birthday Cake, Shoes, Tiara, Brush, Pony, 7 x books, 2 x fabrics) + Good deed (decorating the house, organising the celebration)

Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.
Faith
Skill Knowledge:
Psychology: Emotions can, and do, overwhelm
Sociology: Customs for birthday traditions

Loot: +1 Wooden Box, +1 Pair of Muck Boots, +1 Tiara, +1 Brush, +1 Pony, + 7 x books, + 2 x fabrics
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.
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