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Zelferan
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Review Request 2.1.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Slave No More
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Some lesser violence, slavery. Some major liberties are taken with Zelferan's skill set, but that's mostly because the setting itself is Emea.

Zelferan


Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skills-
Endurance: Resisting attacks
Negotiation: Holding an Auction
Negotiation: Replacing a promised item with a different item of equal value
Persuasion: Offering a way out of a bad situation
Strength: Carrying someone over the shoulder
Strength: Not budging

Other-
PC: Noth
Noth: "Prince of Eternal Mercies"
Noth: A new rival? Enemy?
Noth: A petulant, naive child

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Noth


Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Unarmed: Kicking in the Back
Intimidation: Running a Blade Along Skin

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Yrmellyn Cole
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Review Request 2.1.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: To Water Street Marketplace
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: One NPC dies a quick and merciful death. Yanahalqah wants to submit an own request later (for rewards...)
Requested Rewards:

YRMELLYN

Skill knowledge:20
8 (first three posts)+ 12 (one each for 12 more posts)=20 skill knowledge in total

Acting: When in a combat situation it’s important to act fearless and focused
Acting: To act confident and fearless in a dangerous environment
Acting: To act seductively in order conceal that you are getting a weapon ready to use
Acting: To display a knife in order to act dangerous and deter potential attackers
Acting: To act seriously “adult” when the situations demands it

Attunement: To use attunement to improve the aiming of a pistol crossbow
Attunement: To use attunement to gauge people in a group
Attunement: To detect the spark of another mage
Attunement: The effects of mild overstepping
Attunement: To stop in time and not overuse attunement

Blades, knife: The basic stance and leg movements in combat
Blades, knife: How to use torso and arms in combination with the basic combat stance
Blades, knife: How to hold the knife in the right hand, close to the stomach
Blades, knife: How to use the left hand to push the enemy’s knife hand away
Blades, knife: A neck hit works best for a quick kill

Tactics: To make people drop a goal by promising a bigger profit for something else
Tactics: To concoct a scam in order to escape from a dangerous situation
Tactics: To distract people by making them sing along
Tactics: To hide and convey secret messages via song lyrics
Tactics: To speak up the value of something before making a business offer

Other knowledge

Location, Rynmere: Blacksmith Arms
Location, Rynmere: Water Street Marketplace
Location, Rynmere: Granny Anne’s Antiquarian Bookshop in Water Street
Location, Rynmere: The Barracks
Location, Rynmere: The secret tunnel between Blacksmith Arms and Water Street

PC, Saeri LaChasse (Yanahalqah): Fascinating blue appearance
PC, Saeri LaChasse (Yanahalqah): A person Yrmellyn wants to paint a portrait of
PC, Saeri LaChasse (Yanahalqah): Has impressive combat skills
PC, Saeri LaChasse (Yanahalqah): A taciturn personality
PC, Saeri LaChasse (Yanahalqah): Surprisingly interested in books

NPC, Rudi: A young boy
NPC, Rudi: A whistleblower in Water Street Marketplace
NPC, Rudi: Art loving kid in a place where art is hard to come by
NPC, Rudi: Smart enough to understand and follow instructions by song lyrics
NPC, Rudi: Offered to become your apprentice after saving you when you were in distress

NPC, Granny Anne: The owner of Granny Anne’s Antiquarian Bookshop
NPC, Granny Anne: A disheveled looking woman of uncertain age
NPC, Granny Anne: Partly dressed in worn out scholar clothes
NPC, Granny Anne: Aggressive, sly, smelling alcohol and seeming a bit crazy
NPC, Granny Anne: Shrewd and greedy shopkeeper who rips people off

NPC, Baldy: Big bald and mean Water Street thug with a good singing voice
NPC, Ratface: Relatively smarter Water Street thug, thus a gang leader
NPC, Knuckles: Simple common thug kind of Water Street thug
NPC, Slacky: Innocent and mentally deficient Water Street thug
NPC, Harelip: Tragic empathy mage Water Street Thug, delivered from by life Yrmellyn
NPC, Harelip: Could weaken enemies by making them freeze in terror temporarily

NPC, Rufus Hemlock : Owner of Blacksmith Arms in Rynmere
NPC, Rufus Hemlock : Owing Hemlock a piece of tavern art to incease his profit

Book, “The Forgotten Secrets of Alchemy”: By Anne Brandon, “Former honorary professor at the University of Rynmere”
Book, “The Forgotten Secrets of Alchemy”: Hard to immediately understand
Book, “The Basics of Alchemy for The Adventurous Beginner”: Unknown author
Book, “The Basics of Alchemy for The Adventurous Beginner”: Easy basics schoolbook
Book, “Mixed Alchemy and Alchemic Blends”: By A. Marlon
Book, “Mixed Alchemy and Alchemic Blends”: Workbook. A collection of experiments.

Loot:

One Pistol Crossbow, -7gn 5sn

Two bought books - 7gn
• “The Basics of Alchemy for The Adventurous Beginner” by Unknown author
• “Mixed Alchemy and Alchemic Blends”: By A. Marlon

Bribe received: One huge book in bad shape, named “The Forgotten Secrets of Alchemy” written by one Anne Brandon, according to the cover a “Former honorary professor at the University of Rynmere” given to Yrmellyn as payment for taking they boy Rudi as her apprentice.

Injuries/Overstepping: Hangover kind of feeling caused by attunement.
Fame: I don't think so
Collaboration: Yes, with Yanahalqah
Magic EXP: Yes, for Yrmellyn (attunement)
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Patrick
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Review Request 2.1.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Men of Night
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Suggested Themes
Requested Rewards: Nothing in Particular
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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Theo Nji'Ryn
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Review Request 2.1.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Following Madam LeFleur
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Mature Themes

Requested Rewards:
Zana
Skill Knowledge:
Caregiving: Oils enhance a massage.
Caregiving: Prevention is better than cure.
Detection: Spotting tell tale signs of desire
Detection: Watching where someone looks.
Etiquette: When to remain quiet.
Tarouz: Clothed in Finery: Works on clothes only
Tarouz: Clothed in Finery: Doesn't hold up to close scrutiny


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Nope

Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.
Theo
Skill Knowledge:
Alchemy: Akin to chemistry
Cooking: Fried bread and bacon
Cooking: The ten trill rule of dropping food
Detection: Noting when someone recognizes you
Etiquette: Dealing with a potential client
Intelligence: Asking questions to determine the limits of an ability
Negotiation: Ensuring that you get the best deal
Negotiation: Making it look like they get the best deal

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame:
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.
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Review Request 2.1.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Leg of Deer
City/Area: Etzos Countryside
Notes/Warnings: For once, no.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Noth
Deception: Lying About Changing
Deception: Using Closeness to Mask Lies
Deception: Promising Things You Don't Mean

Nightshade

Doesn't want anything. :)

Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope.
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nope.

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As a note: Noth is a Grandmaster in Intimidation. That means that he's at least as scary as the Count from Sesame Street. Beware.

"The tyrant confuses those he can't convince, corrupts those he can't confuse, and crushes those he can't corrupt." - Anonymous
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Thread Name: Tio's Magical Shiny Marbles
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Minor violence against fish.
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Alchemy: Making Siren Marbles
Alchemy: Siren Light comes from luminescent patches
Alchemy: Applying Siren Light to Glass
Alchemy: Glass Bases
Alchemy: Using Sponges in Alchemy
Alchemy: Let things wait for a while
Alchemy: Using only relevant fish parts
Throwing: Throwing Harpoons


Loot: Bag of Siren Marbles
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: to waterstreet market
City/Area: Andaris -- Waterstreet
Notes/Warnings: Even when I get 19 knowledges, it's still too few
Requested Rewards:
  1. Linguistics: Practice makes perfect
  2. Linguistics: working around a limited vocabulary
  3. Linguistics: understanding less fluent speakers
  4. Intelligence: Scouting a location for later reference
  5. Intelligence: reading between the lines
  6. Intelligence: Child Spies as informants
  7. Acting: acting like your other persona
  8. Acting: feigning confidence
  9. Intimidation: wearing your weapon openly
  10. Blades: Dagger: How to move during dagger combat
  11. Blades: Dagger: where to stab to (permanently) incapacitate opponents
  12. Detection: searching for the fastest route through a market
  13. Deception: Spinning a false, though believable story
  14. Deception: Good lies have some truth in them
  15. Negotiation: brokering a deal
  16. Rhetoric: leading a conversation
  17. Unarmed Combat: Elbow to the ribs
  18. Unarmed: How to defend against daggers
  19. Leadership: Giving your teammates instructions
  • Andaris: Waterstreet
  • Waterstreet: Grannie Anne's bookshop
  • Andaris: Secret tunnel between Waterstreet and the Blacksmith's arms
  • Andaris: The Barracks
  • Yrmellyn Cole: Painter fallen on hard times
  • Yrmellyn Cole: Does not shut up
  • Yrmellyn Cole: Childhood
  • Yrmellyn Cole: Wants to make alchemical paint
  • Yrmellyn Cole: Has now a new apprentice
  • Yrmellyn Cole: Owes Saeri a painting
  • Yrmellyn Cole: Likes to use seduction during negotiations
Fame: I would assume positive
Collaboration: Naturally
Magic EXP: nope)
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Review Request 2.1.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: His Guidance
City/Area: Etzos Countryside
Notes/Warnings: Violent monster attack.
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Stealth: Staying Near the Edge of a Fight Keeps you Hidden
Stealth: Staying Away from Firelight
Ranged: Firing On a Target to Distract it

Loot: Reviewer's Discretion.

Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes. Mal was taking part in this thread with me, but eventually it fell into disuse, and I finally decided to just go ahead and submit it as it is with a minor tweak at the end to bring it to a close. That means it does end rather sharply, and for that I apologize, but I simply couldn't think of anything else to do with it.
Magic EXP: N/A


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As a note: Noth is a Grandmaster in Intimidation. That means that he's at least as scary as the Count from Sesame Street. Beware.

"The tyrant confuses those he can't convince, corrupts those he can't confuse, and crushes those he can't corrupt." - Anonymous
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Thread Name: I Killed A Dolphin Once
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Girl-on-pony violence. A set of testicles just barely saved by dream logic.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Psychology: Playing The Patient
Deception: Downplaying Your Role in Animal Abuse
Unarmed Combat: Head Stomps
Intimidation: Using Ironic Echos As a Prelude to Murder

PC - Aeon
Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Only my dignity
Fame: Reviewer's discretion -_-
Collaboration: Yes. Aeon hasn't been on in a month, just clearing up an old thread.
Magic EXP: No
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Aeodan
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Thread Name: Meeting Duke Tristan
City/Area: Oakleigh
Notes/Warnings: Nerdy excitement
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Etiquette: Knowing what to call nobility
Etiquette: Being polite in the presence of nobility
Persuasion: Using logic to persuade someone to do what you want
Rhetoric: Using dramatic pauses and phrases to enhance your point

Ayla Venora: Tristan's daughter
Tristan Venora: Duke of Oakleigh
Tristan Venora: Has a daughter
Tristan Venora: Excited about the Jourkadri

Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: No?
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No

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