Review Request 2.1.1

[Nir'wei]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Beneath the Veil
City/Area: Emea (Dream)
Notes/Warnings: Lots of violence.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Nothing.
Loot: Nothing.
Injuries/Overstepping: Nothing.
Fame: Nothing.
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: No.

[Tristan Venora]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: [Oakleigh] Meeting Duke Tristan
City/Area: Oakleigh
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acting: Looking all important and official
Etiquette: Being polite even if a person doesn't interest you
Politics: Investing in cultural projects to make your subjects like you better
Persuasion: Trying to persuade somebody to work for you
Psychology: Feeling humbled all the time isn't good for your mental health

Aeodan: Scientist
Aeodan: Is conducting an expedition in Oakleigh
Aeodan: Is studying the Jourkadri
Aeodan: Likes Ayla
Aeodan: Would make a good babysitter
Anari Keant: Overseer of the project
Lionel: Works for Aeodan now
Jourkadri: Why they cut themselves
Jourkadri: Probably extinct
Jourkadri: Used to live in Oakleigh
Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Lots of positive fame, please! Tristan supported the expedition with 4.000 gn. He deserves some recognition for that. Besides, it will hopefully change the way his subjects view him - for the better!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Pash Raj'oriq]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Fool, You Don’t Know
City/Area: Earth Quarter, Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Innuendo, mature situations at the end but FTB. My warning? The thread is kind of experimental in layout and format, so I thought I should explain before you review it. On the left is the story from Pash’s perspective (it’s a memory thread), and on the right is details and background from Ari’nne’s perspective. In case you haven’t read my Initiation memory thread, Ari’nne is who initiated Pash into Empathy magic and this is the story of them meeting. Anyway, enjoy my self-indulgent memory thread and do make sure to listen to the song that inspired it while you do so.

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:

• Lute: Improvising as accompaniment
• Seduction: Just the right look
• Seduction: Playing the tourist
• Seduction: When in Rharne, do as the Rharneans do
• Persuasion: Innocence can be endearing
• Endurance: Always ready for an encore

Other Knowledge:

• Location: Rharne
• Location: Rharne: The Earth Quarter
• Location: Rharne: The Harpy Inn
• Rharne Holidays: Buskerfest
• NPC: Ari’nne: Violinist
• NPC: Ari’nne: Wants to play with you
• NPC: Ari’nne: Can drink you under the table
• NPC: Ari’nne: Can keep up with you in all things

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Positive, please? Playing a public performance in Rharne during Buskerfest? I leave it up to reviewer's discretion. *wink*
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: Not yet.

[Zip]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Doing it right
City/Area: (Where is this taken place in?) Emea
Notes/Warnings: (Any Notes or warnings? Violence?) There's some imagery o_o
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: N/A
Loot: o_o
Injuries/Overstepping: nu
Fame: nopes
Collaboration: nah
Magic EXP: I wish

[Nightshade Eld]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: May the Best Hunter Win
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Hunting, but not much past that

Night

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Field Craft: Identifying a Carowa
Field Craft: Identifying a Bronze Bear
Negotiation: Haggling for the actual price
Hunting: How to track an animal
Hunting: Uses of a hunting animal
Hunting: Identifying a scuffle between animals
Ranged Combat: Better arrows, better shots
Ranged Combat: The benefits and downfalls of an aerial attack

Loot: 40 master crafted arrows for 8gn
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Positive if there is any
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Nauta

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Leadership: Use people according to their personality
Animal Training: Use food to calm down an excited animal
Storytelling: The effectiveness of a big visual aid
Logistics: Size is a consideration to transportation
Hunting: High broken branches mean large animals
Cooking: Carowa are good eating but taste horrible
Mount: Fast dismount from a mount in motion
Climbing: Provides a good vantage point from above
Ranged: The difficulties of shooting while balancing on a branch

Loot: The animals
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Whatever positive you can find
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Kyin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: It Is, Like So Totally a Shopping Day!
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Mild language
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Loot: All the stuff I bought, and a lighter wallet.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: Nah

*This thread is just over 1,000 words so I am fine with less than 10 SP, but also there aren't any knowledges I really need from this, so perhaps that balances out the length, It is up to you.

[Faith Augustin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Nobody Understands Another's Sorrow
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Mature Themes - this is a thread about death, resurrection and then more death. A young mum dies, then a child. It's not cheery.

Requested Rewards:

Faith

Skill Knowledge:
Caregiving: Breaking the news of death
Caregiving: Helping people deal with grief
Cosmetology: Preparation of the dead
Cosmetology: Oils in hair
Psychology: Actions have unforeseen consequences.
Psychology: Dealing with the consequences of your own actions. Non-Skill Knowledge:
Zuuda Ability:Turn Back Death: Exhausting
Zuuda Ability: Turn Back Death: Can not be repeated that Cycle

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Well, she's volunteering her time and brought someone back from the dead so yes please?

Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No.

[Faith Augustin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Lost in Translation
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope!

Requested Rewards:
Socialization: Meeting and greeting new people
Socialization: Talking to strangers
Sociology: Tunawa customs are very different
Sociology: Considering cultural norms in food



Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Offers to pay for Baya to go back to Desnind (Good deed?)

Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.

[Pash Raj'oriq]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: All ashore that’s going ashore
City/Area: Ne’Haer
Notes/Warnings: Barfight. Stitches. Magical confessions. Feelings. Nope.
Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge: (8+4=12)

• Unarmed Combat: Footwork while intoxicated
• Unarmed Combat: Inebriated accuracy
• Endurance: Coping with pain through conversation
• Endurance: Stitches hurt
• Endurance: Keeping it real when the adrenaline fades
• Discipline: Keeping your voice down while in pain
• Medicine: Milkthistle is a numbing agent
• Medicine: Stitches for a knife wound
• Psychology: The truth isn’t always an easy listen
• Psychology: Unexpected common ground
• Rhetoric: Sharing secrets
• Seduction: Not so subtle stolen glances

Other Knowledges:

• [NPC] Torim: Knows Cassandra’s Secret
• Cassandra: Object of Torim’s Interest
• Cassandra: Healer in the Order of the Adunih
• Cassandra: Knows You’re a Mage, too.
• Cassandra: Vja’at, Transmuter

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: A decent gash across his torso, stitched up, and probably a handsome scar later.
Fame: Doesn’t matter.
Collaboration: Yes, with Cassandra.

Magic EXP: Nah, too drunk for magic.

PS Restyled the box code for this to go with the new white background since links are now black. Feel free to steal and restyle. Ahem.

[Arlo Creede]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Dinner for Three
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None.

Requested Rewards:

Vega

Skill Knowledge:
Negotiation: Managing two difficult males.
Negotiation: Keeping clear boundaries.

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Nope

Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.

Arlo

Skill Knowledge:
Cooking: Venison Sausage
Cooking: Sweet cabbage slaw
Cooking: Stuffed red peppers
Cooking: Pear with candied pecans
Negotiation: Dealing with difficult women and their parents
Negotiation: Saying it how it is
Storytelling: A little exaggeration goes a long way.
Storytelling: Using your skill to distract another
Storytelling: Ensure that you have a captive audience

Loot: Nope

Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Good deed for Vega's father (cooking him a meal?)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.