• Graded • Molly

It all started with a simple "Did you have sexual relations with my brother before he disappeared?"

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“Molly.”

“Miss O’Connor-”

“No.”

“Finn told me your name was Fiona-”

“Try again.”

“Ma'am?”

“Do I look ancient to you?”

“N-no, O-officer O’Connor-”

“Yup, done with this guessing game nonsense. It's Zipper. Just Zipper. I’ve been told that this whole ‘talking’ thing is new to you, but try to keep up, no?”

“Okay.”

“Okay what.”

“Okay, Zipper.”

“Fast learner. How old are you, Molly?”

“Thirteen.”

“Lucky bitch. You won’t be here long - they kick those your age out by arc’s end. Do you know why you’re sitting on these poorly maintained set of steps leading up to a very poorly maintained excuse of an orphanage being questioned by a Blackjack?”

“I have no clue.”

“I'm going to pretend your answer was "Of course, my best friend Finn.' That’s right, it's about Finn. My dearly departed brother.”

“He’s not dead.”

“How would you know that?”

“You already took my letter.”

“Your obscenely detailed letter detailing the adventures of that little idiot in his ill-advised romp through a place called… Uthaldria. A fabled land where giants wage their war against unimaginable winged beasts called Albions forged from flesh and shards, where these same giants worship their god Thetros in a temple that reached the skies, or so his letter to you would have you believe. Did you know the letter he gave me had only two lines to it? Dear sister, ‘I am in the Temple of Thetros in Uthaldria. I'm well and safe, you do not need to worry about me.’ Two lines. That’s all I got.”

“I’m starting to see why.”

“What’s that?”

“I d-don’t know. He was missing for weeks and then I got the letter.”

“Do you know what I think, Molly?”

“No.”

“I think this is an elaborate ruse by an attention-seeking little fucknut possessed of the low cunning needed to execute and perpetuate this farce for an extended period of time, but not the wisdom to say ‘hey no, this is quite stupid’. I think my brother has not left this city and is simply on another one of his extended jaunts through the Underground, misusing MY tunnels in and out of the orphana- has he shown you the tunnels yet?”

“No.”

“Liar. But I’m digressing. You know what else I think? I think that you’re either a fellow dupe or a loyal accomplice. I think you know where he is. I think this huge letter he 'mailed' to you is an extended taunt towards me."

"Or maybe he just doesn't like you all that much."

"I'm his sister. Like's got nothing to do with it."

"I haven't seen you till today, 'sister'."

"Careful, Molly, wouldn't want to use up that newfound tongue all at once."

"I want him back. I don't know where he is or where he's gone, but he's been gone for all of a season and it only took you now to start noticing! He told me you were mean, inattentive, and a horrible sister, and I thought that there was no way you could be as bad as he said! But hey, maybe he's not as much of a liar as you think he is. I am worried sick and all you do is come up here half a season later and accuse me of some con, you miserable hag! So go on! Hit me!"

"..."

"He said you always hit him! You mean, miserable, old-"

"May I sit?"

"Huh?"

"Didn't stutter. May I sit?"

"I don't-"

"May I lay my immaculate bum on this dirt-tainted step, Lady Molly?"

"S-sure? It's a free city."

"Thank you."

...

"Zipper, you've been sitting quiet for a few bits. C-can I go?"

"Tell me about Finn."

"What about Finn?"

"Anything, everything. I don't care. Just keep talking. Just, uh, just go through an trial in his life."

"A-are you okay?"

"No. Give me a trial."

“I think what Finn does or does not do in any given day of his life is none of your concern or business.”

“You sure you were a mute?”

“Very sure, not that you were there with your brother to see it.”

“Cute. Real cute about the guilt here.”

“And nothing cute about you-”

“Is this a pent-up sass thing? Arcs of non-response all making up for lost time by boiling all into the world?”

“Again: none of your business-”

“My brother may be gone. He could be a corpse in some stray mutant’s den. He could be lying crippled in the debris from the storm. He could be lying face-down in a ditch of dirt.”

“Y-you’re horrible!”

“No. Just an optimist. A pessimist would have placed him on a slave caravan to Athart.”

“No, you’re horrible. You’ve given up on- Ow!”

“You’re adorable, Molly, but there are lines. You can call me a bitch, you can say I’m a horrible sister, you can make all the mention of my absentism. But don’t you ever dare fuckin’ insinuate that I’ve given up because i said some mean, wah-wah words about a little shitstain, you soundless little pre-ovulating, hipless beanpole fuckstick. Are we clear? Are we crystal absolutely fuckin' clear on this?”

"Let go of me!"

"I believe you made an earlier request for me to, your words, hit you. Sorry for the delayed delivery."

“...”

“I can’t hear you. Say aye aye, captain.”

“Yes-”

“Aye. Aye. Captain.”

“You don’t get to - Stop! Stop! Bloody stop, you bitch! Aye Aye!”

“Captain.”

“Captain! Bloody Captain!”

“This bloody Captain still wants her story. Will you please oblige her?”


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“So my brother spends most of his days outside the orphanage walls.”

“Somethin’ like that.”

“Or yes or no will do.”

“And you’ve never once accompanied him through the tunnels?”

“Not once.”

“Do you know what your tell is, Molly? Your mouth moves when you lie.”

“It’s all the truth I know.”

“Uh huh.”

“I swear to all the dead gods, Zipper.”

“Molly, I’m trying to backtrack. I’m trying to - I don’t even know where he goes to, I don’t even know what he likes, I don’t even know what he does. Barnelby’s about as much help as a eunuch with half a dick. So i need you to help me a little here.”

“But you said he’s dead.”

“Probably.”

“And you’re still going to search.”

“Don’t got much of a choice, do I? I’m sentimental.”

“I’ve never accompanied him out beyond the walls before, but if I did-”

“But if you did, which nobody is insinuating you have.”

“-I would say we went to a pet shop once. He said you didn’t like pets.”

“He phrased it that way?”

“He mumbled something about a river dolphin.”

“Don’t digress.”

“He had a similar reaction when I asked. Guess you guys are siblings in some ways.”

“Moving on.”

“Right, right! We would go to the pet shop and help the old lady clean out the cages. We would feed the animals and the lady would give us a bit of nel. She offered us a pigeon once, but Finn seemed reluctant.”

“Old May’s? North Bazaar?”

“Yeah, how you know?”

“I used to fleece her when she was on my patrol route.”

“...How are you even human? I’m telling you this is all your bad karma coming down on Finn.”

“If you believe the world works on that equation, you should just throw yourself off the orphanage balcony now. The disappointment in store for you is just fuckin’ sad.”

“I don’t really want to talk to you anymore. Poor Old May… I’m gonna go.”

“Do you or do you not want Finn back?”

“...”

“Figures. Anyone he meets up with?”

“I don’t think I should tell you-”

“She said, building up the courage to do so anyway.”

“-But he’s got a few really weird people he’ll sometimes talk about. Shady types, mentioned a bird man once.”

“A bird man? Avriel?”

“Yeah, I think.”

“Do you know how little that narrows it down? This whole city is inexplicably crawling with bird people!”

“Don’t shout at me! That’s all I know!”

“I doubt it is. Think, Molly, think.”

“No it is, uh, no, there was this one time.”

“Lots of one time’s.”

“Shut up!”

“You better have something to say, Molly.”

“It was about half a season ago. Finn started making excuses saying he had somewhere to be. He came back tired nearly every other night. I followed him once and he was going to the Tower.”

“You’re, um, pardon me: full of crap.”

“No, it’s true! I talked to him about it and he got really, really angry, and then he… I thought he left because of that at first.”

“The Tower of Ministers.”

“The Tower of Ministers.”

“If this is some juvenile prank-”

“It’s not. I swear it on my mom.”

“You’re in an orphanage. That oath means nothin-”

“You really are the worst. No wonder he hates you.”


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“I’m going to make you a deal, Molly.”

“If this is another veiled threat, save it. I’m going back inside.”

“Not a threat - just a precaution. If -if- Finn comes back, I want you to keep track of him for m-”

“Not a snitch.”

“Nor am I asking you to be. Do you give a shit about him?”

“Y-yeah. Yeah, I guess.”

“Do you trust him with the ability not to get in trouble?”

“We both know-”

“Yes or no.”

“It’s not so simple-”

“Y or N, cunt.”

“NO!”

“Then you’re no snitch. You’re a friend. I’m not asking you to tell me every single complaint or whining ‘my sister is a meanie’ crap he has to say about me. I’m not asking you to send me a fuckin’ pigeon everytime he so much as sneezes. All I’m asking is that if, and if, he goes in a direction that screams ‘I’m a monumental idiot bent on unintentional suicide’, that I get a warning.”

“Still sounds like a snitch.”

“I might have lost him. Maybe, but if I get a 2nd chance, I will not lose him again, and you are going to help me. Do you want this to happen again, Molly?”

“N-no.”

“Then shake on it.”

“...”

“My hand don’t bite.”

“...”

“Wasn’t so hard, was it?”

“Zipper?”

“What.”

“Please find him.”

“... Yeah. Yeah. All I’ve been doing.”

“... Zipper, why are you back? I saw you turn the corner.”

“Just something that needs to be asked: Did you have sexual relations with my brother before he disappeared?”



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I might have skimmed a little, but only the action parts where there was something going on outside of the camera's focus and—what? Nevermind. I read this entire conversation. It literally is everything you're good at condensed into just dialogue. Amazing. Don't do it again. Or at least, not often. Just kidding. It was actually pretty fun. Part of me feels weird giving you skills for this ... and yet ... yeah. You did something. Yep. Something illustrated entirely through two people talking.

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Skill Knowledge:
Detection: Detecting a bald-faced lie
Intelligence: Recruitment - Targeting a contact based on close proximity to Intelligence
Intimidation: Bullying 101
Intimidation: Belittling tactics
Intimidation: Hurling a list of escalating accusations
Intimidation: Veiled threats

Other Knowledge:
Immortal: Thetros
Uthaldria: Location - Temple of Thetros
NPC - Molly
Albion: Winged beast of the Gauthrel plains
Albion: Beast of flesh and shards
Molly: Best friends with Finn
Molly: Absolutely did not have sex with Finn
Molly: Was mute until recently due to the death of her family
Molly: A spy for Finn’s own good
Molly: Your personal bell on Finn’s cat collar
Finn: In contact with a mysterious bird person
Finn: Has been visiting the Tower of Ministers
Thetros: Patron Immortal of the Lotharro
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