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Robin Explores the Under

With the escalation of hostilities between Etzos and Rhakros, a series of small walled towns is being established as a network of early warnings and defenses against Rhakros' reprisals. Only the very bravest and most formidable of characters should risk themselves on the Witches' Wilds frontier.
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1st Vhalar 717
The earth was a solid. Robin knew this. He understood that he didn't sink through the ground because of the same magic that kept him from walking through a wall. He understood, even if he didn't know the rules, that there was something that kept a rock looking like a rock. He understood that, whatever it was called, was missing from the other three. They didn't have a shape, not naturally.

But.

Robin also knew his magic allowed him to work outside the rules. He defied them, because that is what defiance did.

He put himself against the earth, on his knees. Robin pushed against the sand and the dirt and the stone. There was some give -- he was able to imprint his hands on the ground, but there was more resistance than he'd expected. "You've let me in before, you can do it again," he whined, remembering the time he'd been swallowed whole. The earth rumbled, uncomfortable with the idea of changing. "Just once, that's it? I need to practice. I need to be able to rely on you."

Wrong choice of words.

The earth began to shake. Robin rolled his eyes because he was dealing with a child. "Obviously I trust you. It's me, I don't trust," the earth stilled, listening. Oh, it was stubborn, but he knew its tune. They shared pride and Robin could sing with honey like anything. "I need to know how to move. Sensing is different, too," he added, still pushing into the ground. The earth softened, breaking into something like sand. It poured around his hands, his knees, giving in to his weight. Robin smiled.

The ground rippled. The hair on the back of his neck stood straight.

He supposed going into anything would feel intimate.
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1st Vhalar 717
Robin moved in sand.

There was only darkness. He caught the whispers of metals, the high bright sounds of crystals, and the ever present stone and sand. It changed around him. He realized he couldn't breath.

A problem, but not immediate. There was time to explore.

He pushed ahead, the world around him foreign. Everything seemed to pull at him, each movement creating an empty space that demanded to be filled. He heard the up top. He heard the roots sprawling from the pine trees. He heard something picking and pecking at the ground, scratching and scratching and scratching. The up top weighed on his conscious. Robin felt every curve, every dip, up and down. Valleys and hills and empty spaces. He pressed forward, slow and steady and impatient.

The pink things in his chest struggled. The earth was worried. He moved like he was swimming. Up and up and up. Everything was black, but he knew which way towards the grass and sky.

He kicked his legs, pushing and pushing, his arms crawling against the shifting place.

The wind screamed in delight when he broke the surface. Gripping and grasping, he pulled his head through, mid-torso and below still buried in almost solid ground. He breathed, deep and excited, a breeze, curious, twirling around and wondering its questions. Robin realized if he didn't focus, if he wasn't trying, he slipped back into the earth's abyss. His legs and feet still kicked below.

He laid on his back, floating. It was almost like water, he thought.

The earth tugged at him. He sank back into the warmth and chorus of rock and jewels. It was strange, this time, and he supposed it would be every time after.

He watched as the world was eclipsed by the sound of the earth, the suns' light not strong enough to reach him in the under.
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1st Vhalar 717
He dreamed about this, once.

The suns still burned even when he couldn't see them.

His body adjusted because of his magic. Something inside him sparked, clicked. There was a certain instinct to this, he decided, moving instead of thinking.

He dreamed that he could live here, away from world of people. He dreamed he'd swam in the endless emptiness, alone in the song of earth. It creaked and echoed, and thinking down, he realized there was so much more. Hot was the first impression. Red and bubbly, like one of the more expensive wines Victor loved for them to steal. Dense pressure. The earth whispered to him. They were the same and it knew his curiosity. It always tried to answer him. Magma, he knew the word. Victor had tried to show him once, but the earth refused him. It was a secret it was reluctant to share with the up top.

It pulled him down, and Robin listened. There were other things here, a sticky blackness and old things. He heard them barely, voices tired from disuse.

The earth was louder here. It talked eagerly. There had been a village on the up top, over him now. It promised him. He could find the remains of it, broken buildings and bones. They hadn't listened to the stone song, not like Robin did. They hadn't heard the earth, crying for arcs. They plowed and demanded good soil and crops. They were selfish.

The metals and crystals shined like stars in the dark. They sang prettily. The promised him things because they knew how the up top craved them. They knew greed. The up top had taught them their worth. The earth shivered, jealous. They belonged here with it. They weren't things for the open surface or for people. It had birthed them. It had made them.
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1st Vhalar 717
The cracks were down and down and down.

Robin pressed them with his magic. The thing inside urging him to reach out. They were weak points, chinks in whatever armor held the earth still and quiet. The earth rippled in delight. It stretched and yawned, a burp of a tremor rising to the surface. They were small, the ones that climbed to the top. New, broken because of people. The earth pulled his attention down. There were larger ones, deeper ones. It could move more if he could reach them.

It was then Robin realized that the earth couldn't move without his magic. It wanted to move, to shift, but it was stuck. It siphoned what it could, greedy. There was a hunger that he hadn't noticed.

He gave.

He gave.

And he gave.

Robin was happy to; he saw him and the elements as the same. They had the same goals. His magic allowed them, both he and them, to be free from the rules. The earth, as kin, received the greatest boons from him -- and it gave him the most out of the four. They shared each other.

It craved for him to go deeper. They could move everything, together. Cities would fall and it -- they -- would be free. It promised him mountains and valleys and the jewel-bright red magma.

He couldn't breathe.

He didn't think; he moved because of necessity. The darkness blurred and rushed, as he thought up and up and up. He moved fast through the solid stone. He flew.

The suns shined even when he didn't see them. The world was golden and butter yellow. He couldn't hear, but he could see -- the trees and the flowers and the blue birds that pecked at the things that lived in the ground. A squirming pink thing, caught in a black beak, gone in a flash of feathers. The sky was clear and calm.
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1st Vhalar 717
He laid on the earth, now solid.

They were both exhausted and quiet. A breeze tip-toed around his sprawled body, the grass bending to its dance. There was a stream to the west. Robin could hear it, if he tried.

He thought about the hot magma. He thought about the cracks, the shallow ones and the ones hidden deeper. The earth had wrung him out like a sponge, his magic drip, drip, gone. Robin settled with a smile. Silence was rare in his life.

Silence was a gift.

The suns crept towards the horizon. They were slow. The skies darkened, coloring darker and darker. Blue, than deeper blue, than a smorgasbord of reds and yellows and oranges. Robin stayed in the purple of twilight. The stars were hints, blinking pieces of a promised night. The moon, a cheap imitation of the suns, tried.

He stood up, stretching. The earth eased under his feet. There was a warmth and a song and the silence was suddenly gone.

Robin walked back to the city, listening. The earth wanted him back. It promised him power. The wind trailed behind him, watching and curious. It whined, a sharp noise of fast and jealousy. It promised to show him higher and higher and higher. There wasn't water to promise him anything, but still he wondered. There was so much to see, to know.
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Probably one of the most beautiful descriptions of magic use I’ve read in a long, long time. If ever. This is a really lovely bit of Defiance exploration and I love the “mind” of earth and wind that you tie into it all and how Robin chooses to interact with it. Intimate, indeed.

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Overstepping:
Robin will feel somewhat dizzy and off-kilter for the rest of the trial as a result of light overstepping, as if walking on the earth now feels wrong after being under and in it.

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Defiance: Embrace
Defiance: Metal's Call
Defiance: Magma's Call
Defiance: Cracks in the Earth
Persuasion: Careful with your Words
Negotiation: Pressing the Conversation
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